Arshi FF: New start, Please? completed 6/5 - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update no don't let arnav die loved the update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE VERY EMOTIONALLY WRITTEN OMG DONT KILL HIM WONDER WAT THE SURPRISE IT CANT WAIT TO READ MORE THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...why did you stop here.
Please don't let anything happen to Arnav...it would kill anjali and khushi.
Loved how Khushi was trying to take care of Anjali just like her husband would
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Continue soon I liam waiting to.read more I hope he will not die ir maybe annals could donate her blood .. I hope then.both will be okay anyways it's was awesome so do continue and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here is part 34. enjoy!
and i've included a song. it will add to the story, so please listen while reading

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FUHB9uO6mgs&ob=av3n

Hearing the doctor utter those words ended the world for both Khushi and Anjali. Anjali, who had woken up with the knock on the door screamed. Khushi, who had walked up behind Aakash screamed as she fell to the ground. Nani and Mami became speechless as they heard the words leave the doctor's mouth. Payal whimpered, knowing that her brother-in-law was no more. Everybody stayed frozen to their spots, not moving, besides the two women who were crying hard. Aakash, hearing the cries of his sister and sister-in-law, bent down and picked his broken Bhabi up and carried her to a chair while she pushed and kicked, yelling Arnav's name over and over.
Aakash set Khushi down and turned around to see a young woman in white run to the older doctor.
"Doctor, we need you back in the Operating Room. Something happened with the patient." she said in a hurried voice. The doctor's face changed from sympathetic to shocked. Khushi and Anjali both looked up, still crying, surprised at what happened. Khushi knew something happened. Something good. She could feel it in her heart. They all saw the doctor and nurse run out of the room and into back into the OR.
"Aakash, what happened to our Chote? He is fine, right? He can't die." Anjali said, coming out of her emotional outburst, with tears still flowing freely down her face. Hope, shock and fear showed in her eyes.
"Di, I don't know. Everybody wait here while I go see what happened." he said as he saw Khushi get up and run towards the hall. Aakash ran after her, trying to stop her. She mad it out the door before he caught her.
"Aakash, let me go! I have to see him! Let me go." she yelled as she tried to free herself from his grasp
"Bhabi, stop it. I'll let you go, but you have to stop this. The doctors aren't going to let you in. we have to wait until they are done to see what happened. Either way, you shouldn't be this stressed out. Something will happen to you or the baby." he replied. When he felt her weaken he loosened his hold on her. He walked her over to the chair right across from the OR and waited for a nurse or a doctor to come out. He watched Nani, his parents, Di and his wife come out. Payal and Mami were holding Di as they walked out. Aakash jumped up and ran towards Anjali.
"Di! What are you doing?" he held the hand his mother left and both husband and wife helped Anjali to the seat next to Khushi. Khushi felt the presence of someone and turned her head to her left and saw Anjali. Khushi moved her hand and held the unsuspecting woman's hand. Anjali, who didn't notice Khushi hold her hand continued to worry.
They all waited quietly, hopefully, fearfully. Waited for someone to come out with some good news. Finally, the older doctor came back out and walked straight to the two women and Aaksh.
"Mr. Raizada, Mrs. Raizada, Ms. Razada," he looked at the two woman. "I'm actually very surprised at what happened. It truly is a miracle, but I'm happy to say that he made it. He is out of danger and we will be taking him upstairs shortly." he said. Khushi jumped out at hearing this. She gasped in relief and prayed.
"Devi Mayya, thank you. Thank you for saving my husband." she said out loud. Anjali looked up and finally, for the first time noticed Khushi since coming out of the room.
"Doctor, can his wife and sister see him?" Aakash asked him.
"Only one person should go in now. He should rest." the doctor replied, acknowledging that both women had to see him, but he couldn't risk the patient's health.
"Aakash, it's ok. Khushi is his wife. She should go in. I can wait." Anjali spoke up. Aakash nodded and helped Khushi into the room. They entered the room and he felt Khushi freeze. He helped her to Arnav's bedside and left the room, leaving the husband-wife pair alone.
Khushi held Arnav's hand and held it to her cheek, feeling the warmth of his skin against hers. She couldn't believe she had come so close to losing him. At the thought of never seeing him again, never falling asleep and waking up in his arms scared her. She started crying, her tears falling on the back of his hand.
"I'm sorry, Arnav. I love you. I love you so much. I almost died hearing that you didn't... I can't live without you. So why do you do these things? Do you think you are the only one who can't live without the other. I don't want to live if you are not with me. Life will have no meaning for me after you. Please wake up Arnav. Please, Arnav, look at me, move your fingers. Do something! Just show me you can hear me. Arnav, I love you so much." she begged and pleaded, as she continued to cry.
Arnav, who had woken up at Khushi's touch had tears forming in his eyes as he listened to his brokenhearted wife. He slowly opened his eyes as a tear slid down his cheek as he has Khushi holding his hand to her cheek as she continued to cry. He stared at her, not being able to do anything because he was overwhelmed with her beauty. He moved his fingers lightly in Khushi's hand. He heard her gasp and move his hand back. She looked at him in surprise and relief as she started crying again.
"Jaan, please don't cry. I'm sorry. I would never do anything to hurt you unknowingly. I love you so much." he said as he moved his other hand to her cheek to wipe away the tears, when he felt a sharp pain in his stomach causing him to sharp breath. Khushi moved her hand to grab his hand and held it in both of hers. Wanting to move his hand to her face and cup her cheek, he spread out his fingers, reaching for her. As if reading his mind, Khushi moved his hands to her cheek. Arnav wiped away the tears that kept falling down her face with his thumbs.
"I'm so so sorry, Khushi. I hurt you so much when I should have been protecting you. I love you so much, Khushi. Please forgive me." he said as he started crying.
Khushi shook her head as her tears continued to fall. "I forgave you a long time ago. Arnav, I love you. I should've told you about him. Instead of letting him live with you and Di." she said.
"Don't be, Khushi. Never, ever say sorry again. You don't have to be sorry for anything. I promise I will never blame you or hurt you wet again." he said as he moved his hands to behind her neck and brought her face closer until their lips were centimeters apart, and kissed her softly on the lips, sealing a promise to last a lifetime.

Ok, now I need a lot of comments. I went from 2-3 pages between updates, to one page between updates. What happened to all my readers that would comment? To all my silent readers tht i PM, please comment, or i will remove those ppl from my PM list. so, if you want to stay in my PM list, comment and like! thank you

Now, how was it? i told you there would be a nice surprise. I would never kill Arnav!
Now leave lots of comments!
Edited by afghangrl21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update! it was perfect!!
and yay, Arnav didn't die.. I sort of knew that you wouldn't kill Arnav.. 😊
I hope you won't end your FF here.. will u update soon?
thanks for the pm!

and YAY.. im first to comment!
Edited by boreddamsel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I knew Arnav could never die!!!!!
I melted at the end when they kissed!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Absolutely loved it!!!

OMG Arnav is not dead!!! 👏

Please continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update glad he is alive loved the update awesome update loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE IT WAS PERFECT
YAYY ARNAV DIDNT DIE
DONT END IT HERE
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE
THANKS FOR THE PM

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