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::Other FF:::

 
Click the link to read them Based on PKYEK about a vampires eternal LOVE for a human girl.

A TWISTED LOVE BOOK 2
 
My Sixth FF

My Seventh FF
 
My Eighth FF on ABHINA aka Abhay and Alina
 
My Short Story

Abhiya Group FF Written by Aysha, Tanzie, Shivani, Swati and Gauri
 
 
:::One Shot Guess Whose Back? Abhay:::
:::One Shot I'll bring U back:::
:::One Shot Dance Off:::
:::One Shot The Runaway Bride:::
:::One Shot Second Chance Sid and Mets:::
:::One Shot BODYGUARD:::
:::One Shot Abhay's Crossroads:::
:::One Shot Jeh Ki Haar:::
:::One Shot Messiah Complex:::
:::One Shot Confused.Com Ki Kitni Kahaniya:::
:::One Shot I Dare U::: (Based on events after Birdie's engagement)
:::One Shot Kiss upon Kiss:::(Based on the after part of Danchi's engagement)
:::One Shot Magic Potion:::
:::Funny One Shot:: Lightening Bolt:::
:::One Shot::Abhina::Mine To Have & To Hold:::
:::Funny One Shot::Abhay, Alina, Maithali::The One:::
:::One Shot::SidMetz::Lock Me In Your Love:::
:::Funny One Shot::WEDDING SEASON::AJEH N MALINA:::
:::VIvian VIshal SIdhanth AT One Shot::GROUPIES:::
:::One Shot Rise of the Phoenix:::After Abhay gets staked
:::One Shot LOVE BITES:::
:::One Shot ABHIYA:::BEING HUMAN:::

IS PYAR KOH KYA NAAM DOON? OS, FF & SS based on a business tycoon Arnav Singh Raizada and a small town girl Khushi Kumari Gupta
:::One Shot ::One Moment Can Last A Lifetime:::
:::One Shot ::Desi Cocktail Party All Night Long:::
:::Short Story ::Arnav & Khushi's Valentine Wedding:::
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:::Confused Boys! Boys! Boys! Girls! Girls! Girls!:::


Alina ne door se apne naya chehra aine main dekhkar khush ho raho thi. Meri new look bohot hot lagrahi hain. Kash Abhay jaise hot laeke mujhe miljaye. Kash mujhe Abhay miljaye lekin yeh duniya kitni behrahem hai payr ki mol na jaane. Alina gehri soch main main pargayi uski bhai Jeh ki ba re mein. Kash iska nakh main gussa na hotha aur Kash woh Abhay ka dewaana na hota toh Abhay aur meri line clear thi. Kiase confusing family main paida huwi woh sab ke sab namooni's hai. Acha huwa uska bhai Neel bhagwan ko pyare ho ga ye in paagol logo ki kinti toh kami huwi. Kabir aya Misha ke saath Cafe mein.
 
Misha koh aaj bohot nervous feel kar rahi thi Kabir ko leke. Aaj uski Kabira ki pehli date thi Alina ke saath aur woh chathi thi ke woh brushing her anxieties away-Kabir U are going to love Alina's new look.
Kabir ne Misha koh goor ke dekh raha tha. Kitni soni dikh rahi thi Misha lekin woh baar baar Alina ki naam kyun le rahi thi?-Misha hum dono saath main coffee toh pee rahe hain na?
Misha shrugged her shoulders apne ankhon se Kabir ki hich hicha hat dekh rahi thi-Main kuch samay tum dono ke saath behungi. Aur phir... Choro na Kabir enjoy karo. Alina ko special dosto ki zarrorat hain ur tumhe bhi. Main tumhe khush dekhna chathi hoon.
Kabir ne Misha ko dheere se dekha apne dimaag main usko imagine kar raha tha keh wai dono kitne cute dikhenge-Misha jab main tum hare saath hotha hu tho main bohot kush hotha hu.
Misha ne Kabir ko peet pe joke se mara-Main bhi tum haare saath bohot kush hu Kabir. Tum mere best friend ho. Alina is already here.
Dono Alina ke saath bet the hain. Alina thori bohot sharma rahi thi-Mujhe bohot bukh lag rahi thi toh maine kuch cakes order karli mere liye aur thora sa Mocha. Tum mind tho nahin...
Misha ne Alina ko samjhaya-Course not Alina. Tum dono baatein karo main zara jaake kuch peene ki intezaam karthi hoon. BTW Alina U are looking very cute hain na Kabir?
Kabir nodded looking confused. Yeh Misha baar baar Alina koh kyun beech main lathi hai?-U are looking beautiful Alina lekin tumhe kisi ke liye badal na nahin chahiye. Yeh sab sirf apne liye karoge tho teek hain.
Alina repsonded shyly-Haa main yeh apne liye kar rahi hu aur kis ke liye?
Misha ne jaa kar arder kiya aur payment dekhar woh dono ki saath bet gayi-Tho Alina tum kaise ho? I mean tumhare bhai ke marne ke baad?
Alina smiled-Fine. Thori miss karthi hoon but zindagi toh aage jaana hai na. BTW Tum dono ek saath bohot cute lag rahe ho.
Misha correceted-Oh no no no main aur Kabir...
Kabir butted in-Sach main tumhe lagtha hai ke hum dono ek doosre ke saath suit karthe hai?
Misha koh watt lagne wali thi. Kya plan karke ayi thi yahan aur kya ho rahi thi? Alina ne tho Kabir ko apne life partner dikh rahi this yeh larki sach much ki dheela hai-Tumhe galat...
Alina ne Misha ki mann ki baat sun li thi aur thay kar li thi ke woh Misha ki band baja de gi kyunki Kabir aur Alina khabi ek doosre ke liye ba ne nahin leking Misha keliye Kabir zaroor bana hai-Misha yeh joh meeting hai na main yaha ayi thi tum dono koh shukriya keh ne keliye.
Kabir ne Alina ek bariya muskurahat de di-Thank U deni ki koi zaroorat nahin Alina.
Alina countered-Zaroori hai Kabir kyunki main tum dono ke abaari hoon. Yaha ayi thi akeli na koi dost aur dushman saare lekin Kabir ne meri liye apne girlfriend se lara aur Misha ne mujhe apne behen ki saath pana diya. Ab meri dukh ki samay main his tum dono ne saath diya. (Hand over her friendship rings) Yeh tum dono keliye. Meri taraf se ek chti si tohfa.
Misha smiles-Its very me.
Alina smiled-I know. Ab mujhe jaana chahiye tum dono ki date koh main interfere nahin karna chathi.
Misha stumbled-Lekin maine yeh sab tum dono keliye ki thi.
Alina bounced-Aur main yeh tum dono keliye. Misha lagthi hai tumhe apne larke jaise style ne tumhaari dimaak par asar kar liya hai aur tum hare ankhon main patti badli hain tumne. Joh tumhare saamne hai tum us pyar ko nahin samaj payi. Aur is baat ko Kabir kabse mehsoos karli hai.
Misha saw Kabir ki ankhen waise nahin dekh raha tha jaise wich hafte pehle-Kabir dude tumhe mujhe heartattack deneki soch rakhdi kya?
Kabir was smiling again-Mishu tumhaari heart fail kabse ho chuki hain ke tumhe kuch apne baare main pata hi nahin.
Alina reiterated-Dekhliya tum ek doosre ki tarah hi ho Bye. Main aone liye larka khud doond sakthi hoon Mishu. Bye.
 
Pia ne Abhay ki peecha karte karte tak gayi thi aur ushi jungle main managl karne agayi jahaan se Abhay koh usne pehli baar mehsoos ki this uske doosre zindagi main Abhay ne Pia ko goor ke dekha aur lag gaya uske shaane baaton se Pia koh parishaan karna. Kitni hot lag rahi thi ke Abhay ki tandi badan main uska khoon gharam ho raha tha. Pia ki side effect kuch zyaada hi ho rahe the.
 
Abhay ne Pia ke kareeb aya aur uski ankhon main daal ke bhola-Tumhe aur kaam nahin kya sivay mere peecha karna. Kitni baar tumhe kahun ke mujhe akela chod doh?
Pia ne apne dimaag par zor lagaya-Dekho tum mere peeche peeche ate ho tab tumhe koi aitraaz nahin thi ab main tum haare peeche ayi toh tumhe bhura lag rahi hai. Tumhaare aur Jeh ki beech kya chal raha hai Abhay? Mujhe jaan na hai.
Abhay ko gussa aya-Jeh tumhaari boyfriend hai aur tum mujhse pooch rahi ho ke hum dono ke beech kya hai? Jao aur us Jeh ko poocho. Lagtha hai tumhe attention dena bhool gaya is liye tum mere peeche agaye ho. Tumhaari brain ko use karo warna woh sar jaayega.
Maine toh apne brain Jeh ko daan main dedi. Waise bhi usme kuch zyada kuch tha hi nahin aur Jeh apne domaag par zyaada hi istemal kartha hai.
Abhay ne ek smirk di Pia koh-Tabhi toh woh kuch zyaada hi teez bhaag raha tha apne dhasu dimaak ke saath aur har baat par mujhse haar jaatha hai.
Pia ne mooh thod jawab di-Tum Jeh se chid teh ho.
Abhay ne mara-Pia jaake airmail se ek naya bheja leh awo main Jeh ke dono brains ko fry karke kaa lonnga fava beans ke saath kyunki tumhe ek naya nheja ki zaroori hai. Na kuch soch ne ki layak ho har baat pe bigar jaathi ho aur mujhe paka te ho. Waise hi mera bheja hi kuch deela hogaya hain tumahaare saath bak bak kar.
Pia ko bhuri lagi-Tumhare paas dil nahin hai kya? Baat baat par apna attitude dikha te ho. Bechara Jeh ki bhai margaya hai kuch toh...
Abhay ne palta-Ha mere paas dil hi nahin kyunki maine usko tumhe joh dedi rent free tumhaare seene main darak tha hai aur tum maere peeche peeche usko mere mooh pe maar te ho. Tum itne confused kyun ho Pia? Chunno kisko chun na hain. Ya toh tum Jeh koh chahte ho ya phir tumhe mujhe pasand hai lekin main is kel main nahin parne wala. Tumne waise hi mera sar ko hila ke rak di hai. Tumhaare chakkar main main ktna confused hogaya. Joh bhi tumhaare saath kuch pal bitayega woh apne aap koh bhi bhool, jaayega.
Pia pointed her finger at Abhay-Mere bhoolne ke bimaari apne sar main mat lo bournvita piyo ge toh sab teekh ho jaagega.
Abhay laughed watching his new BFF walking towards him Abhay toh waise hi confused tha lekin ab uska reality hi badal gaya. Alina ab Alina nahin raha. Woh Pia ki double ban gaya-Lagtha hai mujhe chasma ki zaroori hai mere perfect vision main zaroori kuch kami hai ab ya phir kisi ne Alina koh uta ke doosre larki uski jage main agayi hai.
Pia beamed-Meri hi mehnat ki pal hai.
Abhay had to lean against a tree for support-Alina yeh tumhe kya hogaya hai?
Alina main himmat agayi-Maine aaj ek nekhi ka kaam ki hai. Kabir aur uska sacha pya koh mila ke. Misha ki saath woh khush hoga.
Pia now even more confused-Lekin Misha toh tumhe Kabir ki saath setting karaway thi toh Misha kaha se agayi hai beech main?
Alina squinted-Uff yeh contacts ktni irritating hai. Misha aur Kabir kitne slow hai toh unko maine ek lift dedi. Tumhaare khandaan ki saari ladkiyan kuch bohot zyada samajte hain lekin tumhare josh main hosh koh bet thi ho. Sab ke ke sab main koi patience naam ke cheez nahin.

Pia ab apne baare maein sochne lagthi hai. Yeh toh ponche huwi cheez hai. Kya samjha tha aur kya hogaya. Alina mujhse dus kadam aage hai. Ab mere Abhay ki saath bhalle bhalle nahin ho sakthi. Pia eyes Alina's eyes hovering all over her Abhay. Apne pow main kuladi maardi maine. Abhay ki nazaar Alina se hat thi hi nahin.

Abhay; Alina ki tareef kartha hai-Tumhe toh main dekhar hairaan hoon Alina. Tum bohot hot lag rahi ho. Koi bhi larka tumhaare liye line pe kara ho jayega.
Alina smiles-Tum bhi Abhay?
Abhay eyes Pia-Main bhi. Lekin mere bhaare main toh tum sab jaante ho. Aur tumhaara bhai mujhe ek darinde se bhi behtar nafrat kartha hai.
Alina goes all koi-Lekin Pia toh bhai ki jaan hai toh tumhe haq hain kisi aur ki hone. Hum sab main ek darinda hai Abhay. Pia main bhi aur mujh main bhi. Bhai ki toh baat main nahin maanthi kyun ki woh thora pagal hogaya hai. Lagtha hai Pia ki assar kuch zyada hi hogaya hai. (To Pia) Pia tumko apne brain wapas lana chahiye tumhe bhai se bhi zyaada zaroori hai.
Pia ki andar hi andar gusse se laal ho rahi thi. Apna brain koh wapas lana hi paregi usko warna Jeh usko aur bhi nuksaan pohoon chayega-Toh tum Abhay ko chahti ho?
Alina sar hila thi hai-Woh meri sab se acha friend hain aur main uski muft ki bodiguardini ho jaise Abhay tumhaare bodyguard kartha hai free main. 
Pia to Alina lekin main Abhay koh chathi hoon.
Alina argues-Tumhaare paas maa hai, behen hai joh tum he pyaar karte hai, paisa hai, shohrat hai aur doston hai Lekin main Abhay.
Pia ne sochna hi band kar di kyunki uski bhaja fried this-Main wapas aa rahi hoon.
Abhay ne smirk ki saath bol dala-Kyun mere sasur koh leke arahe ho kya? Ab mera galthi gya hain?
Pia eyeballed Abhay-Main police ko lene nahin jaa rahi honn tum waise hi un sab koh choona laga ke unke band baaja baaja kar ab meri jaana  band karwa di. Saare police mujhe dekhte hi sao mile bhaagte hai.
Alina bohot impressed thi-Tum police koh bhagate ho main meri saari family se bhaagti rehti hoon.
Abhay na kaha style se-Aur main kisi se bhaag thi nahin sab mere peeche peeche bhaag te hai. Kiasa zamana agaya hai.
Pia ne Abhay koh rectify kiya-Tum mere peeche peeche bhaagte ho.
Alina ne kaha-Lekin woh majboori mein tumhe bachane aatha hai. Tumhaari life insurance ki policy zaroor update kar dena Pia future main tumhe usko use karna parega. 
Pia finished-Kahin mat jaana warna mujhe majboori main koi aur musibat doond ni paregi.

Abhay ne bolna hi band kardi dono ladkiya ki apas ki meethi churi joh dekhne koh mil raha tha aur larkiyan current maarte hai aur Abhay koh larkiyon ki maar nahin kana tha sirf unke chumban lene atthe he usko.

Pia gayi Jeh ke ghar apne bike par. Woh chilla chilla ke bhol rahi thi-Jeh! Jeh! Jeh!
Jeh has raha tha Pia koh dekh kar apna pyar ko dekh kar-Pia kya huwa.
Pia ne  maanga-Mujhe meri brain wapas chaiye. Usko return karne ki time agayi hain.
Jeh ab gehri soch main par gaya-Lekin daan di huwi cheez ko wapas nahin le jaate.
Pia ne Jeh koh dhamki di-Dete ho ya police ko lawu?
Jeh police se dar tha tha  un logo ne uski family ki watt laga di aur un Raichands ke naam main thana ke naam rakhdi. Raichands ke naam aur bhi mashoor hogaya.
Jeh ne Pia se dheere se bola-Main dethi hoon tumhe lekin mujhe e-bay se ek aur manwana parega kyunki tumhaare brain waise hi down market hogaya sara juice usse nikaal diya.
Pia ne has ko bhola-Koi baat nahin mere paas ek surgeon hai na woh uskoh teek kar dalega. Woh mera personal doctor hai. He is very good with his hands and his lips.
Jeh jal raha tha-Pia tum muhe like toh karte ho na?
Pia ne apne nazook hathon se Jeh ki chere pe haath dala-Jeh jab tum mujshe zyada smart ho jawoge thab hi main tumse ek achi dost ki tarah like kar sakthi hoon lekin mujhe Mummies ki boys nafrat hai joh apne maa ki isharo se chalte hai. Mujhe dekho main aur meri behen kisi ki nahin sunte kyunke humain apne brains use karna nahin aata. Joh chahe wahi karte hai. Mummy ki apron chod doh aur kisi achi si doctor se illaj karwalo. 
Jeh ab gusse main-Tum Abhay ki baare main bhol rahi ho na?
Pia smiles-Haan! Waise tum dono ki beech koi dostana ki chakkar toh nahin. Woh tumhaare peeche aur tum uske peeche. Abhay se door rehna kyun ki woh meri property hai.
Jeh aur bhi confused hogaya-Lekin tum toh meri ho.
Pia ne apne sir ko upar neech kiya aur dheere se bhola-Main bhi confused ho, tum bhi confused ho, Abhay bhi confused hai aur Alina bhi. Dehradun ki paani main zaroor kuch garbar hai.
Jeh ab is soch main parte parthe aur bhi confused hogaya-Main maa ke bina kuch nahin jaantha. Tumhe chod sakthi hoon, maa koh ab chod saktha hoon lekin Abhay koh kabhi nahin chod sakthi Pia. Woh mere jeene ki sahara hai Mere tamanna hai aur mera sab se bara dushman hai.
Pia ne apni brain wapas le li aur Jeh ko kaha-Hum sab ki love story main sabse confused tum ho. I feel sorry for U. Main Abhay koh tumhare paas bhej thi lekin mere paas itne love rivals hai main usse Sid ki number zaroor lelungi. Sirf woh hi tumhe apne attitude se aur wit se tumhe teekh kar saktha hain tabhi toh tumne uskie saare lines chori ki hai. Tumhaare sab se bhara pyar Abhay nahin Sid hai.

Abhay ne Alina koh pyar se thori advice di-Tumhe ab werewolves ki leader banna hai aur saare werewolves ki mardo koh sabak sikhana hai unko ladkiyon ki kapre pehna kar thab hi woh jaan jayenge kaise feel hotha hai jab kisi ki aatma wishwas toot thi hai. Apne jadoo seunko sikao ke tum unse kitne powerful ho aur phir dikhao ke pyaar kya hotha hai.
Alina ne Abhay ki haath pakar li-Abhay hum sab kis  kahani ke hain.
Pia ne akar bhola-Hum sab Pyar main paagal hai. Is Pyar Ki yeh Ek Kahaani ki confusion koh mitane keliye maine apna brain wapas laya hoon aur tumhara dill tumhe wapas deh thi hoon so tum sirf meri banke raho.
Alina ki kahani wahi pe khatam-Great ab meri courage kaha se lao.
Kabir aur Misha dono ek doosre ke haath pakar ke jaate hain jungle ki raaste main aur sun lete hain Alina ki story. Tumhe raat koh sab koh dara na hain. Jeh ko darawoh woh bhoot se kam nahin. Uske veins deke hai hulk ki tarah hai. tab hi tumhaara courage tumhe milega.
Abhay ne idea di Alina Koh-Alina tum Jeh koh power chaate marna woh sahi raaste pe ajayega. Apne behen ki haaton maar nahin kayi hai usne lekin joh bhi karo usko mere kareeb mat aane dena main uske dewaangi se dartha ho. Wo aur mera bhai ek doosre ke best freinds zaroor the agle janam main.
Misha ne dekha ke Alina koh Abhay se crushing kar rahi thi. Bekaar se bechari pyaar ki sooli pe char gayi-Pia hum sab ko ek saath kaam karna chahiye thab hi toh hum kahin aage bar sakthe hain.
Alina ne apne toote huwe dil ko Abhay ki khatir dafna diya lekin sab ki confusion mitne ko bhi na mita.

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Edited by matwamango - 2011-09-10T11:11:11Z
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Posted: 2011-09-07T14:21:09Z
do pm me waiting for it
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Posted: 2011-09-07T14:41:24Z
Aha! Another OS from ya...
Will wait eagerly...
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Posted: 2011-09-07T14:47:41Z
luved ur title its hilarious  :)
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Waiting
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