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THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVE AND SUPPORT...
DEVIKA.
Part 138: A fun family moment
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Part 139: few words of love :
Part 140: words for tomorrow
part 141: those sweet moments.
part 142 : Dev's haunting mind
Part 143 : muwaaa
Part 144: dadaji's dream adn his dad's past.
Part145 : Dev, Ruhi and his radhika
Part 146 Dev/Ruhi and Surender
part 147: what's it dad?
part 148: my relief
part 149 Levhu's marriage
part 150 : Lechu's bidaai, and radev talk
part 151 : dev leaving to chandenpur
part 152: chandenpur
part 153: Ruhi's 1 st birthday
part 154: surender in chandenpur
part 155: Dev , Radhika & his dreams
part 156: Rui and her yukky milk
Part 157: the story continues..
Part 158: wings of imagination
part 159: love in the air.
part 160: ladder and a kissy scene..
Part 161: Mama has a baby in her tummy.
Part 162: um um um
Part 163: Ruhi.. the timejust fly away with her.
Part 164: the nature, wind, rain and the closeness...
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Part:138: A Family Moment...

Radhika was tapping on chudki's upper back to get that burp out, very patiently. Dev coming out from the shower wearing a white T and gray shorts , went near the mirror to comb his wet hair.

Looking into the mirror he asked: Radhika , do I need a hair cut?

Radhika just turned her head to look at him and said : um

Dev: did not get time to check all these, is there is any salon nearby

Radhika: I don't know, ask babuji

Dev: there should be one , otherwise how the men here are keeping their hair short, right?

Walking near his radhika he said: or there is another solution

Radhika: what?

Dev: you know how to trim it already, remember how well you were doing that when we were in U.S.

Radhika: so you still remember that

Dev: otherwise how much I was paying for it , on the top of that I need to pay tip too, otherwise that lady will look at me and ask "didn't you like my service?". Anyway now I don't have that concern at all; oneway I think here it is better , right?

Radhika controlled her smile, still tapping chudki's back

Dev: Radhika, how long will you do this? There won't be anything, you maybe hurting her by tapping on her back for this long.

As if agreeing with her papa's statement

Chudki: ha

Suddenly Dev; did you hear that, poor my princess, she couldn't talk na, so only she is tolerating all these.

Chudki: ha

Dev: see, she said yes

Radhika: ha, now for everything she will say Ha ha , and if you look at her face she may shrink her lower jaw too, but then within five minutes she will split this room into two.

Dev: Radhika, why you are simply blaming my little princess

Radhika: why should I blame her, you are going to see it today with your own eyes,. she is so stubburn, whatever she wish she needs to get that right away

Dev touching his baby's back: ha, why not, she is so little and see she has to cry loud to get her things done, poor my angel

Radhika: um, nice, to whom I am telling. Let me see how your angel is going to behave tonight

Dev: give her to me, I will only take care of her

Radhika was about to move her out, a big burp sound escaped from chudki's throat

Radhika: ha, nice, when she came to know it is her papa who is going to take her, suddenly she gave it up. if it is me, then she will be spitting everything out on my dress...So good.

Dev with a smile: you are unnecessarily blaming my little one, so only. Come beta, let mom do whatever she want, you come to me, Ican tell you a story, ok.

Chudki smiled as Dev took her in his arms, dev with the happiest smile: see

Getting up form the chair , Radhika: see, what? Now her stomach is full so only... and will be smiling like this for next half an hour, then sleep for another two hours and then gets up.

Dev: that's good

Radhika: ha that's good. So you take care of your princess tonight, and I am going to take rest , ok.

Dev: ok baba, you do whatever you want, I will take care of my little one, ok.

Dev put her down on the bed and propping his head with his left hand , he lay next to her, looking at her he started talking : hai my princess, did you miss papa...

Chudki cueed well looking at his eyes: mmuummm
Radhika listening to papa daughter talk, took a towel from the cupboard and went to freshen up. Before closing the door she looked at them one more time and found Dev giving his finger and chudki trying to hold onto it. She took her time to frshen up and change as she knew chudki will be fine out with Dev. She made a bun out of her long curly hair and two strands of it hanged down freely from both sides and each strand fallen in front of her ears.

She said to self: this is the best way, or all my hair will be in Chudki's hold only and then have to get dadai's scoldig for that too.

She came out from the washroom, and went and closed the door. Radhika was about to turn the light off

Dev: Raadhika, no , then I won't be able to see her face

Radhika: what ? no, I can turn the dim light on, or she won't sleep

Dev: its ok, I want to play with her.

Radhika: ok baba, you two do whatever you want ok. She turned the light back on and went to the other side of the bed and lay by turning to the other side

Dev: why are you turning to that side?

Radhika lifting her head up slightly and looking at them: this is papa princess time , right? I don't want to disturb, also I am very tired and let me sleep

Dev showed his eyes cornering at Radhika to Chudki as if asking her to look at her mom's attitude.

Radhika: I saw that

Dev: this is papa princess time right, then don't disurb us, ok

Radhika controlling her smile: and don't disturb me either.

Dev: ok beta, so ha, we were telling the boy's mother told him that if he loves that star then...

Radhika suddenly turning back: are you still with that story!!!!!!!

Dev: why you need to listen to us secretly...

Radhika sitting back: don't tell me Dev, are you telling her that same story

Dev: ha, she asked me to

Radhika: oh really

She looked at her little one and found her trying to take Dev's finger near her mouth, and Dev was slightly pushing back and then giving it up again into her hold.

Dev: see we two have so many things to say, ok... Then looking at the baby: ok beta, so whom all we met today, ha Birju mama, mami, right. What did Birju mama brought for you? Ha, ha .. and what did supriya mom told that you looks exactly like me.. did you hear that...

The talk went on and at one point Radhika noticed the silence.

She turned to check back and found Dev walking inside the room carrying his little one in his arms, looking at her face.

Radhika: is she sleeping?

Dev: ha you only told that she won't sleep , right? See she is sleeping so well in my arms under this bright light

Radhika just smiled.

Dev : Is she all set to bed?

Radhika: ha, I tied the nappy too, otherwise she gets up very quick , mom also told me it is ok to have it on at night.

Dev just smiled and then took few more steps back and forth and then slowly placed her inside the bassinet.

Dev: Radhika I need help, I am not comfortable, she may wake up

Radhika got up from the bed and readjusted the sheet inside the bassinet

Dev: see , it was not ready , so only I felt that unesiness.

Radhika just looked at him once and then took chudki from his arms and slowly placed her inside the bassinet, and then tapped on her shoulder for few more times, and signaled dev to turn off the bright light. She took few minutes , to make sure the baby is comfortable.

Making sure her baby is sleeping comfortably, she moved from there. She found the bed empty and then her eyes caught the sight of Dev who was standing near the open window looking into the darkness.

She walked slowly near to him; Dev was standing with his both arms folded at the chest level; reaching near , from standing behind -she slowly slide her arms around his tummy and went and held him very close.

Jerking slightly Dev unfolded his arms and touched her arms that is circling him, he called softly: Radhikaa

Radhika just tightened her arms around him and closing her eyes and getting more closer , she tried to feel him within her arms,

After how long, I am this close with him. When we met after the departure, I was carrying chudki in my womb, her growth was inside me was a milestone in our relationship. He never left me feel alone even when I came to chandenpur. I missed you so much that I just want to hold you in my arms and stand like this forever. she talked inside her, feeling him in her arms...

"Radhikaaa"

His repeated voice brought her back into reality and she said in trance: are you still worried about dadaji?

Dev with a comfortable smile: why?

Radhika: bas yuhi, looks like you are thinking something seriously...

Dev: and?

Radhika: first time you are away from dadaji na, so

Dev again with a smile: I already called and talked to mom, he had all his medications and he is already in bed. He is not alone, dad and mom is there na along with buva.

Radhika: then were you thinking about tomorrow?

Dev: tomorrow? what is tomorrow?

Radhika: um, we need to leave na, and

Dev losening his hands over her wrapped arms , tried to move within her hold, as if realizing his move, she losened her grip

With a smile he looked at her curious eyes

Radhika: what happened?

Dev: nothing, so you want to know what I was thinking, right?

Radhika: no actually I , simply,

Dev: don't worry about tomorrow, we will sort that out, still there is time, right? For now what matters is what I was thinking...

Radhika got little uneasy being so close to him especially looking at his lovely smile, and add to her raising heart beat he wrapped his arms around her waistline.

Slowly her eyes gazed down to his chest.

Dev realizing her change: so what you were asking?

Radhika didn't say anything

Dev with a smile: radhika tell me na

Radhika was unable to rasie her eyes up to meet his teasy gaze, his tone clearly depicted his tease tone seeing her with downcasted eyes. His silence made her heart to flutter, she knew exactly what might be going inside his mind, he is trying to read her face, her movement. She felt her cheeks burning. Unable to keep that distance , to give him that space to read her mind completely she hide her face in his chest.

Dev with a smile, held her tight too

Her thorat just made that movement: I missed you

Dev didn't say anything, but held her more tight in his arms.

But as he felt her warm tears, made him to losen his grip and tried to move his head back to see her face.

Radhika held him more tight

Dev: Radhika, let me see your eyes

Radhika just nodded her head in disagrement with a soft throat movement: muhum

Dev: please

Radhika trying to get in further: muhum

Dev: why?

Radhika: you will tease me

Dev: tease you for what?

Radhika: muhum

Dev: Radhika, let me see your face

And he forced his arms to move her shoulder backwards. She stood with downcasted eyes and holding onto his T tight with both arms on his sides, as she doesn't want to seperate from him any further.

Taking his one hand out, he slowly lifted her chin up, and found those trails.

Dev in his husky voice: look at me

Radhika: muhum

Dev: ek bar

Slowly she lifted her eyes to meet his loving gaze. She just stood there forgetting herself for a minute and jerked slightly as his lips neared her cheek, he kissed away those tears, and feeling her feverish skin , he slowly placed a peck near the lips, then slowly fused her lips within his.

Her hand just moved over his upper back, and then releasing herself , she rested her head again in his chest.

Holding her closer he said: ha, I was thinking about you two only. I miss you too Radhika and your tears told me how much you missed me, which is more than those words you just said to me. You don't know how much it meant to me, I realized it earlier in my life, I missed you so much and was ready to hold you in my arms, but that time you disappered into an unknown world. I got you back and now even one days distance is getting us more closer radhika, and you don't know how much I longed for it. Now you are my strength, the smile on your face let me move on, and I can see the expectation in your eyes telling me that you are waiting , just for me. I love you Radhika, I love you so much.

Radhika as if in trance: Let the darkness engulf me inside a cave, but if I can feel your arms around me, and if I can hear your heartbeat I can walk thru it without any fear. Now I am not scared of that lonely times, now I am not scared about your distance, because I know that soon I will be seeing your face in front of me, and I can hear your heartbeat no matter how far you are away from me.

The silence engulfed them few more minutes, they stood in each others hold and she felt his hands stroking over her upper back.

A soft sound of " uuu, uuu" broke their silence. Suddenly Radhika released her arms that was wrapped around him

Dev looked at her in question

Radhika's concerned eyes turned to look at their little one.

Dev tightened his forehead and tried to remind her: she is sleeping

But leaving him on that spot, she walked near to the bassinet, and found those widely open eyes , searching for her mom inside that light dark room and she heard :uuu uuu

Radhika softly: did you wake up already!!!!

Dev walked near

Radhika tried to take her out and she just fitted well in her arms , looking at her wide eyes which was trying to accomodate that darkness in : what happened baby, um, why did you wake up so early, um?

then in doubt: Is it papa?ha

Suddenly Dev: why papa?

Radhika: did you hear papa's voice, hu,... oh my angel, you want to talk to papa again, hu, ...you want to play more, hu, t...ell me, what you need?

She slowly placed chudki on the bed,

Dev: do you want me to turn the bright light on?

Radhika: no no, then she won't sleep at all. I think she got the habit from you. You were the one talking to her all night, right?

Dev: Radhika don't simply blame me, I was not even near her during night time

Radhika: not now, when she was inside my tummy, you were telling stories, and singing songs and what not. I am sure she might have heard your voice now and thought you are talking to her.

Dev: really

Radhika: um

Dev looking at her little one: sorry baba, what to do, your mamma was missing papa so much that, papa doesn't want to leave mamma from papa's hold. But when you are awake, there is no other choice , right? You are our angel, you come first.

Dev continued: ok baba, if it is because of me, then I should only take care of you ,right? come... today you are going to sleep with me, how much I longed to take you in my arms, and tonight you will be sleeping in my arms

Radhika: what?

Dev: kyum?

Radhika: no basinet is safe for her

Dev: more than me?

Radhika: but how?

Dev lay on his back and extended his right arm out and slowly placed chudki in that space, and held her closer. Chudki molded well inside that space and feeling the warmth in her papa's arms, she closed her eyes soon.

Radhika sat there watching her little one sleeping inside his arms

Dev with a smile: see magic

Radhika: now let me take her, I can,...

Dev interupted: Radhika, she is fine, don't disturb her now, you come now

Radhika just looked at him in question. He opened his left arm out and invited her to join him.

Radhika: how can we let her sleep like this, what if she roll over?

Dev: Radhika trust me, I am not going to move my arms, and she is safe , and don't worry I am not going to take that deep sleep, as I want you both to be near me, under my hold. Closer to my heart, and i want to feel it within.

Radhika slowly settled in his arm, resting her head over his shoulder. She was not feeling comfortable, she wanted to hold him more closer, she turned to his side, and then lifting her head up, she rested over his upper chest wrapping her arm around his broader chest, keeping her leg over his, and adjusted slightly to mold into that space.

Dev feeling her comfortably resting over him, murmered: ye hui na bath, yehi tho mere sapna tha.

The lighting bug which was giving that sprkling light inside, flew slightly high , near to the winodw and then flew away into that darkness and dispappered. The stars up in the high twinkled its eyes seeing the family sleeping. Dev with a smile tightened his arms around his Radhika, and she with a shy smile moved her lips near to his neck space and placed a warm kiss.

Dev murmered: not enough

Radhika tried to hide her shy smile again, but heard him saying: not enough, I want more,

Feeling teasy and knowing his limitations she tickled him on his side

Dev: ye ye, Radhika, no no, not that , I asked for more kiss, don't tickle me

Radhika taking advantage of the situation again tickled him

Dev: Radhikaa

Radhika coming near his ears: this is your punishment, for tickling me in the midst of everyone

Dev: For that, ! why you are blaming me, you were looking very beautiful in that green saree, and your skin was glowing , on the top these people were priasing you , and then then

Radhika: then what

Dev: then you only said to me right, wearing saree it easily exposes your tummy. Tell you frankly Radhika, you were looking so sexy from that side profile, how can I hold back, so only my hands did not listen to me. and also it was just once and you just jumped away from my side, right?

Loving his priase, she said: ok then , now my hands are telling me to do this

Again she tickled him

Dev: Radhikaa

His voice raised slightly that Chudki moved in his arms

Dev: see you are waking up her too

Radhika suddenly rested back in her position.

Few minutes passed by

"Radhikaaa"

she didn't move, hut heard his secret voice...

Dev: Radhika, I said not to tickle me, only that, but you can kiss me...

Radhika raised her head up and signaled him to look at Chudki and said: shhh, atleast let me sleep tonight comfortably, ok. Good night

Dev seeing her resting back, losing the hope : that's it

Radhika didn't say anything

Dev in his lowest voice: ok, let me see you tomorrow what will be your excuse then, you need to compensate for all these now

Radhika just smiled holding him tight and she counted his heartbeats as the time ticked away..

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Have a good day
Devika
:)
P.S: will PM with next update...
Edited by Devika. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on third thread Devika!! 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shankar-

congrats on third thread Devika!! 🥳

thanks buddy...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!! already on to the third thread--That is amazing--
I was so engrossed in reading the FF, that never realized how many pages had turned

A beautiful update with very cute Dev-Radhika-Chudki moments...
So Radhika is also missing her Devbabu----and Chudki knows how to keep her dad in toe..

I hope Radhika will hear the song of the night again and imagine the peacock dancing in the rain----for now, Dev seems to have become a "dreamer"
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved the update! Lots of cute Papa and his angels moments as well as Radev moments.
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beautifull story still reading the first one
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi! congratulations on third thread. wow! superb update. waiting for the next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Again a beautiful part ! really enjoyed your FF
Congrats for the Thread#3
Loved Radev talk and moments with little angel
so you have covered the whole part from only Radev moments 😳

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Daddy's little girl on his left arm and his little shy,blushing wife on his right arm...so sweet...heaven for him!! This little familly is simply amazing the way you described it...both his angels missed him,his voice or his touch...would be wonderful to see this kind of scene in cb too...

Beautiful part as usual! Congrats for the new thread!

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