~*Dreamgirl~* FF* COMPLETE.. * THANK YOU*** - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
Your talent is your gift and we are the beneficiaries of that talent...
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Congrats devika for your excellent journey. Your talent is amazing and every FF I am enjoying. Please update the next episode.
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congrats devika di.
YOU are really brilliant ,writting such beautifull story with such words ,imaginations and made us to imagine also.
thanks for being with us.We always wait for ur update .
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CONGRATZZZ Devika for your accomplishments.
Well deserved. 🤡
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Devika you have proved your skills through your writtings ...You have made me to think lot of things through your story and your characters whom you made in this FF all will be living in my mind as this Dg is being very closer to my heart... Your talent is given by God so use that as much as you can...
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Part 165: Radev Love, the five elements, and the beautiful chandenpur...

The happy times filled around in Bhatt's haweli. Chandenpur has grown its own way keeping the greenery around, growing more and more fresh and new vegetables and fruits, and the cheese factory became a successful venture along with Ruhi's dream to have a chocolate factory, which her dadaji promised her for her 6th birthday as a gift. Surender became more involved with chandenpur business which gave him more pleasure than making foreign tours that kept him away from his own family. Slowly slowly the need of the community increased that they opened a new clinic, but soon it added rooms to it, giving more opportunities for the youngsters to find an earning. Surender declared the date for handling the key of his Delhi business building to Mr. Patel who happened to be the best partner in all its growth.

Slowly the Bhatt family moved together in that big haweli, which went few modifications to accommodate the needs. Radhika got busy with the business around. But it was dadaji's keen intention to keep the greenery around , the nature around just like that, which Dev gave his word, and that drawn a big line between business and his love. Surender joined the morning walk along with his daaji and Dev.. thru the tarred road to muddy path , along the side of the river bank.

The ladies enjoyed their evening walk together, with sharing the smile around. Ruhi lifted up her both arms to get down from the horsy which she is comfortable to ride around by herself now a days, and Surender happily held her in his arms, while Hriday patted on black beauty's back, Mohan held Rishi over his shoulder and repeated his proudly showing Hriday growing up, "look at your Bro dear, see how strong he is".

Hriday declared it that he doesn't want to ride on any other, when he do, he wants to sit on this black beauty. Balaji, Rema, Pranav, Padmaja, and Vikrom came to visit chandenpur. They enjoyed their two day trip, and Vikrom happily munched on those brownies Radhika made for him. They laughed saying "he is grown this big, but still love the brownies as usual". Suchi replied: certain things in life, we hold on to it without our knowledge…won't leave the mind of a person, it may go in deep sleep, but comes to surface when the situation comes, and then let that person grow however old, he love to chew those handmade candies, or the guavas, or just enjoy smelling those white petals, we think we changed a lot inside, but it is the response to the outer world…, inside, the person is still the same, who may not see the passing greenery, but when he close his eyes it comes back to him unknowingly and he feels the coolness of it then in his mind.

Next day morning Dev was looking for Radhika around to pass the message that Rema deedi and Padmaja loved the chocolate that they took from the factory, and about their safe return back in U.S.

"she went along with RUhi" Suchi replied

"where", Dev asked

""today I heard RUhi asking her to show the magic and Radhika agreed and both went out " Sushma replied

"where is Hriday?' Dev

"he went along with his nanaji" Suchi replied

"oh" after a pause he said : mom I will be right back, ok

"ok beta"

Dev went out. He was thinking "magic" what is magic?", he looked around, he walked on the muddy path to the river bank, then to the green meadow to the woods, where the dear got disappeared.

Dev smiled remebering meeting Radhika on one of those branches, reading her book, then throwing that book down, asking him to climb up, and as he stretched over , she said "the magic of nature" Dev 's eyes gone wide seeing the little one inside. But then the flapping sound of the mother bird, caught their attention, and they climbed down quick, grabbing the camera in his hand he ran along with Radhika.

A she walked out he saw the new ferns, he plucked one and stamped on his forearm and it made its design over with its shining white powder, he looked around for the kids to ask her to do more, he could easily see his Radhika sitting in the middle and doing it,

Smiling he walked out, and the wind along with the greenery , made him to run and then pause to take that deep breath, the sun above gave the bright light to visualize everything in his mind so clear. He walked faster looking for Ruhi and Radhika..

He stepped onto the stone where they sat before, and which unknowingly pulled him to sit, and he lifted the hem of the pants and dipped his feet in that flowing water, he remembered … her asking "will these flowing drops remember me tomorrow" don't know Radhika, but I remember them, the day it gushed hard to swallow you and the speed with which it got me closer to you, I can see your wet feet and the shining payal hugging its circle around… Radhika , it is me who seeing it, but each and every minute thing is attached to you, and I can feel you in this air, I can feel you in this wind, I can feel you when I touch this flowing water, I can see your smile with the splash of this water, I can see you dancing with the greenery as the clouds gather to rain down…. Oh Radhika, I love you so much, and with that I know only to smile now, you filled my heart with love, love for my family, my being, love this nature, and love you so much.

But now where are you? You came to me with that fighting face, then took me into the world of love, left me without my knowledge where I realized the need for love, and came back to me like an beautiful butterfly, and flapped your small wings around me, showed me the magic of love, without seeing my face or my words, you loved me deep down in your heart, you waited for me in these greenery, you waited for me with the passing of these flowing water, you were not worried about those flowing water to remember you, but worried about will your love , ever reach to me,

Maybe you wished this flowing water to come and tell me that you are waiting for me

Maybe you wished the breeze that caressed and passed you to come and circle me and to feel the fragrance that you are here somewhere waiting for me

Maybe you wished this passing cloud to take your image and pour onto me like those cold drops to make me feel that your eyes are thirsting to see me

Maybe the counts of that beating heart, drummed along the thunder, to grab my attention, asking me to look at that horizon where my love is waiting for me

And now I am here, with all this nature around me, but where are you

He walked in trance along the bank and then took few steps over the slope ground, and unknowingly stretch out his hand to hold the near by trunk enjoying the nature.

Suddenly "aaahh" sound grabbed his attention, and as a reflex he stretched his arm out to grab her safe, but instead.. the force made them to grab each other and roll down, looking into each other's eyes, they drowned into the chandenpur river.

As the gush of water circled in, and disappeared, they emerged out together holding onto each other, to take that breath to fill their lungs. She looked into his eyes, and he smiled lovingly holding her in his arms, and the unspoken words of love shared thru their smile.

Only Through...

Only thro' pain, you find beauty

Only thro' tears, you find a smile

Only thro' loss, you find love

Only thro' living, you find a life

Forever...

Wind carries the words of love

Flowers bring the fragrance of love

Rivers sing the music of love

In my heart, I feel your love...

Forever mine...Forever Yours...

Radhika5

**** Love the nature and enjoy your days****

**Subham**

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Posted: 13 years ago
Devika are you completing the story witha lovely poem.
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Posted: 13 years ago
So he finally caught her from falling,he was that prince she always waited to save her...superb idea for you end their story just as u started it, together in the river but this time he saved her and had her in his arms ,all this nature being a witness...Loved reading your story of this lovely couple coz i was able to see it thru your beautiful words...It was a painted love journey and u used nature as ur canvas...and i adore it...THANK YOU 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
What more can I say but a simple THANK YOU...
That word covers it all...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ending di liked it a lot thanks di

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