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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 157: The story continues...

It was late evening time, as usual little Ruhi was sitting over her papa's lap, clinging onto his neck.

'papa. Please, its story time"

Dev: finish the milk, then I will tell you a story

"u tell story , I drink milk"

Dev: ruhi

"muaaa" the instant stamp pressed over his cheek

Dev: no, that is not going to work, u need to drink milk"

"muaaa'

"aha, how long u want me to wait here, mamma ki ache bechi heina, drink the milk, mamma has to look for supper too, beta, please drink it quick" Radhika pleaded

"story time"

Dev: Radhika, u tell her a story na, I need to look into this files before calling dad today, babuji also coming, so I need to check it out Radhika, please"

Ruhi tightened her grip over his neck: no papa, radhika no story

Radhika smiled: see she knows,

Dev: but

"who is not drinking the milk, give to me, I am really feeling thirsty"

Saying that Sushma grabbed the milk from Radhika's hand and said: you go finish whatever it is, I will make her to drink this milk

"no chuchuma"

Sushma rolled her eyes and coming and sitting near Dev, looking at Ruhi: good girls won't argue

"princess" ruhi cleared

Suchma in a teasing tone: who, princess?

"Ruhi, papa's princess"

Sushma: oh, I agree , it is only your papa and his little princess exist in this haweli, ok

RUhi: my lovely papa

Sushma: ok then my ache papa's princess, drink the milk now.

RUhi: yukky

Sushma: not yukky, let me try

Saying that she took a small sip, and said: no it is sweet

Dev was into looking at the file in that gap that was laying on the side, as he wanted to make that call to surrender later that day.

The time just ticked by , and he heard Ruhi's happy smiles along with claps.

Dev looked at Ruhi: what,? Did you finish the milk?

Ruhi: um

Dev: good girl and he looked at Sushma, and found her sitting with empty glass, and the milk stain over her lips

Dev looked at her surprisingly

Sushma getting up: ha, I will get another one for her and while walking away sushma turned and said: Dev, you better control her, or mei aur moti benjavingi re.

Dev looked at Ruhi: Ruhi that's not fair

Ruhi : chu chu ma thrirsty, papa story

Dev: I will tell you before bed, ok, now let me make a call to dadaji

Ruhi: story

"Ruhi beta"

Ruhi;s eyes gone wild and jumping down from Dev's lap: mon is here, Ruhi's mon is here

And she disappeared. Dev smiled as he saw her running away calling babuji as MOhaN

Time went fast , Dev came into room after his talk with Surender

"Ruhi's papa here" she jumped on the bed.

"one minute beta" he went to freshen up and joined her in bed. She just played over him, with her giggles around. Sitting over his chest, she pulled on his cheek with the widest smile: papa, smile, smile papa

Dev tried to smile

Radhika came in seeing their play.

Dev: now sleep beta, or else mamma will scold both of us

Radhika just smiled hearing his voice, as usual before waiting for her mouth to open, she knew it is just for her ears, they are going to have their time together, before those lids close to welcome sleep. Ruhi takes that nap late afternoons, that keep her awake for long at night too.

"story time, papa promised"

Dev: Ruhi beta, papa don't know any story, it is ur mamma who knows all the stories

Ruhi climbed down from the bed and went and grabbed a book and came near, "read it"

Dev looked at it and remembered the night, and the lady giving the book, but then it got disappeared somewhere

"where did you get this beta?'

"chu chu ma"

Dev with a smile tried to open it, and tried to open the door of magic world in front of his little one, but then seeing the black letters, he closed it , saying "boring"

Ruhi: papa, please

Dev: ok come, let's go to the terrace, let see the stars

Ruhi climbed on his upper back and they both went to the terrace, loudly telling to Radhika.

Dev made that changes in haweli, he modified the structure, and now they spend nights in terrace too, enjoying the open atmosphere of chandenpur in dark.

Ruhi excitedly: " papa, twinkling stars!!!!!'

Dev looked at the sky which was spread out with velvety twinkling stars all over its circle.

Dev slowly placed Ruhi on the wooden coat, and then he sat next to her, they lay comfortably on it.

Dev: RUhi, which is the brightest one

Ruhi looked all over and then looking at one point she smiled wide: there papa

Dev: ha, isn't she beautiful

Ruhi: like RUhi

Dev: um

"papa, story"

Dev after a thought " ok baba, what story u want"

Ruhi: story of that beautiful star. She pointed her little finger

Dev with a smile: ok baba, come

Ruhi climb over his chest and wrapped her arms around him, resting her head over his chest.

Dev: once upon a time, there was a boy who lived in a beautiful village. Just like my RUhi, he also loved to watch the twinkling stars over the dark sky, and he loved the brightest one. He refused to go to bed, as he wanted to look at this brightest star all the time, but his mom divert his attention and take him in. Poor little boy felt so sad not finding the star in the morning. ...

"Ruhi too"

Dev smiled listening to RUhi's prompt, and he continued..." one day his mom told that if he wants the star to be near him all the time, then he has to marry her'

" the boy went to bed , and the next day when he got up , you know what happened?"

Dev didn't get any reply

"as usual, you escaped tonight too, she slept"

Dev turned his face to see Radhika coming near

Radhika: I know it, you maybe planning to tell the same story, and when it comes to this part, she always sleeps, , right

Dev with smile: isn't that the best part, because I don't know what I will tell her after that.

Radhika smiled again and sat near him and rubbed over her little ones head.

Dev: Radhika, don't wake her up

Radhika: who she? She is sleeping in such comfy way, you think she is going to wake up with my touch, no way.

Dev smiled

Radhika: so did you talk to papa?

Dev: oh ha, forgot to tell you. Ha, he is taking over that project work, and I discussed my plan so far, and he said they are coming this weekend, to discuss it in detail, and most probably he is bringing an engineer and also his financial head. I never thought papa will be interested in vinery business, and I told him that I can handle it, but it seems like he started liking it here too.

Radhika: but then how he will manage both there and here.

Dev: here we are there na, so he may come and go

Radhika: um

Dev: but Radhika, did you notice how happy Dadaji is? and ha we decided the name too, secret ok. Don't tell dadaji

Radhika looked at him curiously

Dev: we are going to have dadi's name for it "Padma's vinery'

Radhika smiled again: good

Dev: ha, let's go down, if I sleep here tonight, I won'be waking up early morning.

Radhika tried to take Ruhi in her arms

Dev while getting up and walking down with her: Radhika, now you also need to start giving your time for all these too. I was expecting it, so only I denied that request from college people to send you as lecturer there. I know it will be good, but now we have taken more responsibility here, so you also need to know how everything goes. Especially when dad comes, be with him and try to get all those info whatever he need here, so that we can facilitate it without delay ok. Reason is last season also we had so much left out that it all got spoiled, so it not only helps us, it helps the villagers too. We can buy the products from them. So there is no question of loss for them, and for us it will benefit too. So I want this project to be done as quick as possible.

Radhika: ji, so what time you will be back tomorrow

Dev: day after tomorrow.

Radhika: sudev coming too, right?

RAdika: ha

Radhika; he is going to drive the car, right

Dev holding her shoulder; what is this Radhika, now also you don't trust me, that was an accident Radhika, and maybe my mind set up was not right ta thta moment. so

Radhika: um, who else is coming

Dev: Radhikaaa please

Their voice got lowered as Dev closed the door behind.

Ruhi was running around the house looking for her papa. Finally Radhika satisfied her with a stuffed animal toy, saying papa left that for her to hold till he comes back. She made her to eat and drink with the word "papa will be coming soon, he may feel sad if you don't eat, if you don't take bath, if you don't sleep"

The next day by afternoon, Dev and the gang came back. Everyone in chandenpur gathered around the land near the haweli, which he built newly for the dreams to come true. Dev came out from the car, and looked around. Ruhi came running to her papa

Dev grabbed her up in his arms and gave a sweet kiss over her cheek

"papa, ruhi 's sweeet papa"

Dev: how are you beta

"papa, what you brought for Ruhi?'"

Dev with his sparkling eyes: you want to see!

Ruhi just nodded her head in agreement

Dev went near a big van, one man came and opened the rear door. And went in, and came out with a white little pony.

Ruhi cling onto her dad's neck in fear

Dev: don't worry beta, it is not going to hurt you, he is going to be your friend, do you like papa's gift?

Ruhi clinging more just watched the animal as it was coming more near

" PAPA"

She called loud in fear

Dev walking near, touched its head, and the little pony stood silently, being in a strange place

Dev: see, how cute it is? see the pony likes RUhi

Ruhi tried to peek at the animal

In the background , three big horses made its way out too

The boy who left behind in the crowd, struggled to get to the front and his eyes widened and his lips parted saying 'black beauty"

Dev heard that little whisper and turned to look at his face, who bribed him for the guava once and who always run around that muddy path along with his friends howling out reminding Dev "I want to ride on black beauty".

He slowly walked towards him, and touched his shoulder, his eyes were still trying to take that image in of that big tall animal in.

Dev: do you want to name him?

The boy whispered in trance: black beauty

Dev looked back at the black horse, and then with a smile called out: black beauty

The surrounding was filled with talks and smiles. Mohan , ROhini, Rahul. Dadi, everyone came in to see the horses.

Sushma: dev, it is my dream too, I want to ride on this too

Dev: buva, just tell me when, they all are well behaved ones, anytime

Sushma in doubt: why you said like that, well behaved

Dev: oh ya, I was reading about them and you know some are hard to get in line

Sushma; oh really, I am fine then

Dev; no buva, these ones are good ones, very human friendly

Sushma: ha ha, I heard it.

Ruhi was still holding onto Dev. Time passed by, the horses got their fresh air after the long journey and they all got fed well, the people were still standing around watching them and the up front were the kids

Dev went near Radhika: come, lets go for a ride

Radhika moved back , to be near her mom: no , I am fine, you go

Dev: no, come with me

Radhika looked around and embarrassingly: I am fine, you go

Dev gave RUhi in Rohini's arms, and called Radhika again, and Radhika refused again.

Dev: ok then

He went near the black beauty and got over it and he heard few claps in background, and slowly getting comfortable on it, he direct him towards Radhika and stopped right in front.

"Come on Radhika"

Mohan came forward and helped his daughter and Dev gave space for to be comfortable in front.

Radhika cling to its armor tight as the uneven steps made her body to shake unevenly. Dev held her closer to him and made a small round inside that fensed yard and as her eyes were concentrated on its ups and downs, he whispered "one day I will take you like this and we ride on it the whole chandenpur."

Radhika shivered hearing his voice so close, but then embarrassingly looked around.

Radhika climbed down slowly and then washing her hands, she went near Rohini. Dev went near the boy, and asked him "come on, because I promised you one day"

The boy made his unbelievable steps towards the animal, he looked at him closer, and then slowly touched its body with his hand, his head leveled with its body and soon he was lifted up to sit next to Dev.

His eyes were still dreaming, it was difficult to distinguish his happiness, his surprise, his fluttery beats, his dreamy eyes, his parted lips, he ride on it as if he is in a dream. Yes I saw him when I was so little, may be as upto the level of its knee and now, I can ride over him, with the prince

As if reading his mind: no beta, I am not the prince, now you are the prince, see you are riding it

Saying that he gave the yarn slowly into that boy's hands. And he ride on it softly holding onto it and said self: yes I am a prince

Rahul was riding on another one, and was having fun.

Dadi: Rahul think one more time, before moving to cities for your studies, see you are going to miss all these fun

Rahul gave that usual smile and said: dadi, but I am coning back soon too, to enjoy It completely.

"nothing can hold back the thirst of one's mind, his mind is flying now, and one day he also will settle back with lot of dreams, just like my Dev. I never thought Radhika will bring this much joy into my life, at one point I lost that hope, but she brought it back in its fullest form, which I am unable to contain self now"

Yeshpal's words made dadi to look at Dev and Radhika, who were trying to pet the little pony, encouraging Ruhi to touch him without fear.

********************************************* thanks for stopping by.. Devika
part 158: wings of imagination
Edited by Devika. - 13 years ago
masumasrilanka thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
for the pm. mind blowing part miss my childhood days,so dev n co r well settled in cp.tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks di thankyou very much.
how i tell u,how precious this update was at this time.dev-ruhi elation is so enjoyable so sweet.i knew it that story will be same and then radhika will come for sure.oh god so cute dev here and there.

but i am back to topics of cb and again angered so much.
oh di,can we have one more of any owise i don't know what will happen to me .

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Posted: 13 years ago
You have a knack in developing relationships..and now we have a new one between Dev and Ruhi---delightful, heart warming cute moments...

So the black beauty has finally arrived and the prince will take her princess on to enjoy the beauty of Chandenpur, with rolling hills, feisty river, blowing winds and the fragrance of the orchards in the air and grape vines as far as the eye can see...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Now black beauty is on Haweli and DEv will be taking his princess for a ride...

Everybody is happy in chandenpur ...Devika , you know well how to write such kind of scenes...

Dev looked at Ruhi: what,? Did you finish the milk?

Ruhi: um

Dev: good girl and he looked at Sushma, and found her sitting with empty glass, and the milk stain over her lips

Dev looked at her surprisingl

Sushma getting up: ha, I will get another one for her and while walking away sushma turned and said: Dev, you better control her, or mei aur moti benjavingi re. Dev looked at Ruhi: Ruhi that's not fair

Ruhi : chu chu ma thrirsty, papa story

this part was amazing Devika loved it a lot ..Ruhi and her Chuchuma 😆...


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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks di jut imaginig my dreay couple riding on horse i wonder wether it may come into my dreams too but no matter i oved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo sweettt ...the story book n black buty..new turn of d story ...luv dev ruhi intrction luv swit cute naughty ruhi


thnx vry vry much for continuing...


MUHAAA

Edited by tukli - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME DI ... like the way you are taking story forward 🤗 👏 GREAT WORK 👍🏼 .
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have internet after 4 days and i am super glad to see ur updates,thank you devika!its a real pleasure to read how radev got to touch their dreams,dadaji's dreams,their parents dreams and those kids dreams...Its simply gorgeous how u pen down these beautiful scenes and tie the loose knots...thanks alot devika!
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Posted: 13 years ago
ASOME DEVIKA U DESCRIBE SO WELL.JUST ROCKING ALL U FF.PLS DO GIVE MORE SOON,TC

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