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Posted: 13 years ago
Devika i was really missing this FF thanks for updating 😃...

In this update Dev ,Radhika and Ruhi were more . In Dev and Surender talk Dev indicated something...Dev and Ruhi these two are amazing as always...
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Posted: 13 years ago
What is this CRAZY feeling of Dev now ?? Is Sammy going to ditch Lechu on the wedding day, just as Surender was ditched or is it just coz Dev heard all this in the village and so is not able to voice out properly to his father or anybody ??
I want a next conversation of Surender and Suchi as the lil lines which Dev uttered is enough for any persons inner turmoil to begin coz of his past actions. He may not show it to the world that he is upset and the words hav caught him but definitely in his lone times feels guilty, so i want that talk now..
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for next update plzzz post it soon di
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi chechi.. haven't been active on the forum for a long time now.. read 15 of ur updates in a single go today..It was very emotional.. do add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much 😃

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jeffin, ,
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Myra.Nelly
friends... I will be sending out PM to the above list only... Now i feel much better, as i won't be bugging all in list.. poor them , they had to tolerate me all these time. SHould have done it earlier. Now I really feel a big relief.. thank you so much.
Thank you so much, even the lines are very few, or just 'me.'... I really appreciate it... THANK YOU.
Devika
Edited by Devika. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
We thank u devika,u make our days better with these updates,thanks for including me too!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you and please check one's to make sure i have ur name up there, or please bug me one more time... really thankful to you..
Abhi: Dev and Surender talk on real thing will come in next or the next chapter. So happiness of marriage will be around along with solving this issue.
Part 146: Dev/Ruhi and Surender
Dev was sitting near Ruhi, and watching her playing with her legs. She with a smile was trying to hold onto her tiny feet, and the minute she gets that in her hand , it just dropped down. But then finally she was successful to get them safe in her hands. Slowly she brought them near to her mouth, and tiny RUhi's very careful slow movement to catch on it. Dev smield wide as he saw her opening her mouth to get that in.

"look at her what she is doing!!!!!?"

"that's nothing Dev, you should wacth her playing, the time just fly" Suchi said with a happy smile on her face.

Ruhi's efforts continued while Dev went and got the camera

"oh! so now you got the model in front of you, i think now we all will get some relief'" saying that suchi got up and went to kitchen.

The photo session was going on in the backgroud, suddenly Ruhi rolled over and settled on her tummy.

Moving the camera away, Dev came near: oh ho

"she is fine Bro, now she only will adjust back, it is very funny to watch her doing it, sometimes she won't make it back and you should see her face, and her irritation, all her face will turn red". Lechu said while packing her books in her backpack.


"where are you going?" asked dev in a surprising tone

"college" said Lechu very casually

radhika: but we need to go for shopping, remember what papa told

lechu: I will be back soon, don't worry bhabhi

"are you going to college or soemwhere else?"

lechu looked at Suchi surprisingly

Suchi: no , you said you will be back soon as if you are going for some shopping

Lehcu: oh that, have one important class which i don't want to miss, so

Suchi: so still it is there in your head!

lechu: what, mom or i only will suffer at the end, it will be difficult to catch up with everything"

suchi stood with keeping her finger over her lips and looked at her daughter in wonderment.

Lechu noticed it: what is it mom?

suchi: no , I am just wondering is it my Lechu only!!!

lechu; what, i was thinking of taking a break, but Sammy will kill me, he already told me not to worry about the marriage thing, he said all are there, i have to only care about my studies as he stricly said that i should not be behind with my college work,

suchi with a relief tone: aha, I also thought what happened to my Lechu

Lechu just watched her mom's expression and then coming near Dev: all becasue of you only

dev: what did i do?

lechu: see i was nicely enjoying my life, and now the marriage thing came and on the top my studies..

Dev: who told you to agree with marriage ?

lechu: who has to agree, it was the order from dad... sammy says its all becuase of you

De: what did i do?

Lechu: i don't know, but sammy said its all because of you.

Dev: what did i do? to self

Dev took Ruhi in his arms and went out to the garden

Radhika was noticing all his abscent mind behaviour and his avoidance of situations by talking to Ruhi and holding her tight in his arms. when everyone joined back at home, Dev went out with an excuse to meet Sammy. HE came back very late and then went to bed stright away saying "I am tired"

The night passed quietly and the same actions repeated on next day and the next day too.

At the breakfast table

Surender: dev, you seem to be very busy , what is happeneing around you?

Radhika looked at Dev, who still was trying to catch the best smile of RUhi in his camera

Surender continued: So are you planning to join back with Mr. Patil, or ready to move into my rooms? Becasue you need to decide on it before you join back tomorrow, right?

Dev didn't say anything

Radhika went near and gave a shake on his elbow in an unknowing way, and then went and took Ruhi in her arms

Dev: Radhika I am taking pictures

Radhika: you talk to papa, i need to change her nappy

Dev just watched her as she walked away with Ruhi. He looked back at Surender who is still looking into some files seriously.

Dev looked around once and then try to walk away.

Surender: Dev, I am asking you somehting, why you are trying to avoid my questions.

Dev stopped and looked at his dad's face

Surender slowly lifted his head up and looked at his son's face

Dev stood unable to move front or back

Surender getting up form the seat : come to my office, let's talk

Dev: vo mei

Surender: I said, come to my office

Dev with little hesitation followed his dad.

as they entered into the office room

Surender: tell me what is happening with you?

Dev: nothing , i am fine dad. he tried hard to bring his voice out

Surender: no, you are not, there is something that is bothering you, is there is any issue between you two?

Dev looked at his dad in doubt?

Surender: I mean between radhika and you?

Dev: no, nothing

Surender: then what is it? why you are behaving so differently, if there is anything then i don't want that to get escalated, just solve it now itself, as we are here with you.

Dev: no dad, we don't have any issue

Surender: then what is it?

Dev:" vo, I was thinking when are we going to bring dadaji and buva, anyway marriage prep is going on, so if they can also join us early, then it should have been better

Surender : for this you were worrying!!, oh Dev, yes, marriage is going to happen in two three weeks, and we can go and bring them next weekend

Dev: why next weekend, why don't we do it tomorrow itself? anyway they are alone there na

Surender: what? i didn't get you

Dev: why you are not worried about them, always thinking about your business or us, what about them?

Surender looked at him surprisingly as he felt the change of tone

Dev saw the color change on his dad's face, he felt bad that he toned down little: dad, i mean, they are sick, and don't know how they are managing themselves, you know what i mean

Surender walking near to his son and holding onto his shoulder with one arm: I know what you are saying son, but they won't come this early, they may make so many excuses, you know

Dev: but it never hurts to call and ask them.

Surender paused for a minute and then said: ok I will make a call tomorrow

Dev: now dad, now , please

Surender: but beta

Dev extended his phone and gave in surender's hand: please dad, i can't imagine them living all alone there especially in this situation, please

Surender took the phone and dialed the number and he spoke to his babuji and asked them to come. Dev kind of understood the word of hesitation from the other side as they cannot leave their place for this long...

Suddenly he took the phone from surender and said: dadaji i will be there around noon, get ready , both of you. I will talk to sudev, he will take care of the rest ok. and don't worry i know what all you need to take care there. so get ready, tell buava too. I will be calling babuji and will update everything, so he can also chack on things. ok.

he didn't wait to listen to his dadaji's talk, hanging it up , he looked at his dad's face and said : thank you dad, I will go and get them tomorrow

Surender was about to ask: but then office?

As walking out Dev: anyway here we are busy with marriage prep right, so let me think about it after all these.

surender looked at his son's face unbelievably: what is he telling that he will be joining after Lechu's marriage only!

The night was extremly dark surender was still awake

Suchi: why you are keep on thinking about it, he said right only. i feel a bg relief, now he will take care of everything. otherwise how can I rely on you with everything, atleast he will be available at a call distance... that's good. i think the decision is very appropriate at this time.

surender: um

Turning to the other side, Surender was keep on recollecting Dev's actions and reactions, he thought inside: Dev has changed, this is not the old Dev who left to chandenpur, somehting is bothering him, he is talking strangly as if he is asking something seriously, as if he needs an answer from me, he keep that eye contact when he make that serious statements, and then lose it when i look at him, ... what is it?

I really need to check back with him... maybe in the morning..., we need to talk, i need to talk to him, he cannot simply say that he will rejoin after Lechu's marriage, i thought of giving him responsibility of the office, not completly but still, ... i can take care of the marriage... he is telling babuji that he will take care of everything back there, how do he know about all that!! and was very much worried about babuji and sushma dn even not given time for babuji to respond back to him, it was more of a decision that he told that he is going to pick them up. How can he say like that, he needs to ask babuji's permission first, right?

Surender's thoughts went with plus and minuses , but still he couldn't come to any conclusion.

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Thank you for stopping by,
Take care
Devika

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Edited by Devika. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks friends... and the mood of this part should be like Dev's avoidance of his interaction with his dad, in case if you are nable to feel it in my words... so i put this short one, so that i can move easily with theit talk... so now it will be different Dev form next update.,,, let see the smile and fun back with the marriage... i need that reasoning, so wrote this...
thanks in advance
Devika
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

We thank u devika,u make our days better with these updates,thanks for including me too!

Its my pleasure as ur signature sayscan't click the like button..."
😛
and for making the day better, will post the destiny one soon... there it will be light.. so... will match the heaviness with light moments... let see
Edited by Devika. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok,so dev is avoiding his dad cause from my point of view doesnt want to burst his anger and disapointment seein his idiol in life,his dad so cold to dadaji and bua...as a son maybe he looked up to him,i understand his silence smtimes u need to help ursel f to understand things!! I realy like the way u picture his feelings!!
Glad that he brought the camera bk,i am sure the way u described ruhi's play she must have looked so cute!!
Very sweet scene,love the way u show every stage of childhood...thank u devika,it was a pleasure to read!

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