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Thanks devika it is an amazing update👏 waiting 4 next update😍
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Hai friends...
I am sorry, somehow IF is not picking my like button anymore, ... thank you for leaving me so valuable comments... really appreciate it.
meena & Myra : when i used to see readers requesting FF writers to update ...many times, i used to think noone comes to me like that, or ever thought that someone will ask me also repeatedly like that. i used to think if i don't update, then readers may forget the story... but i feel like, um, i can get that too... thanks for waiting...
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Part 161: Mamma has a baby in her tummy...

It was around afternoon time and Ruhi was taking nap in her room. Radhika was getting some courage to come out and face others with her daily course seeing her napping child. But still she could count her beating heart easily.

Sushma was making sweet for Suchi to take, back to Delhi. Radhika went to help, and was around with stirring the boiling pot and crushing the nuts. The smell from the pot started filling the air and Radhika felt from nose down to her throat is filling with the heavy aroma of sweetness, that she felt a sudden vacuum over her tummy. She tried to ignore it and continued with her work. But soon it got intolerable to her that she ran to the washroom.

Sushma noticed Radhika running away and asked loudly : Radhika , are you ok?

Keeping the flame to low, Sushma followed her, and ended up hearing big gags from inside. Sushma kept on knocking at the door asking "are you ok?". No replies came except the gags.

Listening to Sushma's voice , Suchi and Lechu came in

They also waited patiently. Radhika tried to settle herself, she washed her face few times in that cold water, she could still feel that discomfort in her stomach, she could feel all that sweetness in her throat giving her a feel of fullness. Hearing the knock at the door, Radhika slowly opened the door. Her weak body stood holding onto the door side.

"Kya huva beta, you ok?" suchi came to hold her with concern.

"Don't know mom, still not feeling good" Radhika tried hard to hold still on her feet.

Lechu went and called surrender and he came running to the scene, but by then Radhika was falling more into Suchi's arms, and Suchi was trying to hold her still. Soon she was taken to her room, and Radhika closed her eyes to the darkness for few minutes.

Surender looked at Suchi in concern, while Suchi was trying to count on her pulse. Time ticked by. Lechu came in with a bowl of water, and Suchi sprinkled that over her face. The sense of water drops on her facial skin awaken her , and radhika slowly tried to open her eyes.

Radhika tried to sit up, but then Suchi asked everyone to go out for few minutes to get them some privacy.

Lechu: dad, can I call Bro?

Surender: ha beta, but wait, let see what mom has to say'

Lechu: but I already called Sammy and told him.

Surender: that's ok, let see

Lechu: Sammy said they are coming

Surender: Lechu, you should have waited na, now they might have scared

Lechu: let me call again

Surender: ya , tell them that Radhika is doing fine.

Lechu: ji dad

She went to call, as Suchi opened the door with a smile on her face

Surrender: kya huva? Is she alright? Do we need to go to the hospital or anything.

Suchi with a smile: no baba, she is completely fine, it's a good news

Surender: what?

Suchi: now you need to start shopping for your next grandchild too.

The smile just grow with the realization inside, and SUrender : ha, that's a happy news, how is Radhika now

Suchi: very tired, and I told her to take rest.

Lechu walking in : mom,, they are coming

Suchi: who?

Lechu: Bro and Sammy

Suchi: um, let him come

Lechu : how is bhabhi? Is she alright? Why you are smiling so wide

Sushma: because she is happy

Lechu: waht?

Suchma: come with me, let 's make the sweet but then, let me close this door, so that our Radhika rani won't puke again

Lechu: what is it Buva?

Sushma: you come with me, I will tell you.

Suchi looked at Surender,..

and Surender: don't know why, but I feel like this is happening in our life for the first time.

Suchi hugging him loosely: Ha, the news always brings a joy to our heart, and this time, I am sure she will be totally fine.

Surender: ha Suchi

Time ticked by, and the jeep just halted at the front porch with queeck sound.

Lechu was about to run , but Sushma caught her strongly saying : not that easily betiya

Lechu looked at Sushma in confusion

Sushma gave a smile

Dev was walking in with anxious face, SUshma stood on his way

Dev: buva, How is Radhika, Sammy told me that she is not feeling well, where is she? The chain of questions were gurgling out from his throat, while his eyes were trying to scan for his Radhika.

Sushma; ye ye ye.. ruko ruko ruko, where are you going in this hurry. Wait here

Sammy looked at Lechu in confusion and found her hiding her smile, he raised his brows to ask her about the situation, lechu gave a smile back.

Dev: Buva, vo radhika

Susha; I know , I know. Its all because of you, so only I stopped you right here, anyway Mohan bhayya and all is coming, so you wait, and you give reasoning and then only you will be allowed inside

Dev" : what ? How is Radhika? Sammy told me she got sick after eating the sweet something.

Sushma's eyes gone wide and she looked at Sammy

Sammy : not me, that's what I heard

Sushma looked at Lechu

Sammy: no Lechu did not tell me anything

Sushma: um, what a support

Sushm: Dev , do you know, all these years no one got any stomach discomfort after eating my sweet ok, hum, this is the first time something like this is happening.

Dev: see, then why you are holding me here, let me check on Radhika?

Sushma: arre bechu, you wait

Dev: where is mom, and dad

Sushma: they all are inside, waiting for Mohan bhayya and all

Dev: buva , please

Sushma with a winning smile; oh, just love it, and then Sammy if you want to go in, you got the permission, go, but sit inside only, ok

Sammy looked at Dev helplessly, and Dev just looked at him blindly

Soon Sammy showed up behind the door with a smile

Dev tried to read his smile, but Sushma caught Sammy and rolled her eyes and Sammy went in.

Mohan, Rohini , and Dadi came in with a smile on their face, and the minute Mohan saw Dev, he just gave a big hug "congratulations my dear"

Dev stood in confusion, and then tried to echo babuji's words in him

Sushma: Mohan bhayya, you are going to spoil everything, I was actually trying to scare him and you

Sushma walked in with a heavy face

Mohan went behind trying to console her. Dev stood still trying to comprehend.

Suddenly RUhi came running out into Dv's arms with a cheeek saying " babay coming, baby coming, mom has a baby in her tummy"

Dev sweeping her in his arms, felt some heaviness inside, and then soon it came out with a smile on his face, and it just grown on his lips

Dev: say one more time beta

Suchi walking out:: No need her to repeat, I am just imagining how my son will handle two kids, one is already on your shoulder

" not two, radhika rani's wish is for eight"

Sushma came in with smile

Suchi: 8!!!!!!

Sushma: remember her wish, so more happy news are on its way , just wait and see

Rohini : 8 is too many Sushma, two is fine, one baby boy, a girl and a boy , is just perfect

Sushma: ha perfect,

Suchi: I don't think it will be a big difference, both are equal.

Dadi: that's what I was also telling, see earlier we used to think after marriage girl will go away to her sasural, and the boy stay back with us. But see now Rahul is getting ready to move to Delhhi soon for his higher studies, why? I don't know, is the facility here is not enough for these kids, and then from there he wants to fly to abroad soon with his friends

Dev was trying to find a way to get in from breaking this ladies circle

Sammy: mom, let bro come in na

Suchi sorry dear, come come,

As they walked in, everyone congratulated him. Dev's eyes scanned inside for his Radhika, he was getting more impatient to see her.

Rohini: She is still sleeping, what happened?

Suchi: after that vomiting and all she felt so tired , and I am sure she will feel fine after a nap. So I only told her to take that nap.

Somehow Dev wanted to go in

Ruhi: baby baby , in mamma's tummy

Sushma: oh, atleast she is calling her mamma now, and then coming near : ha you better call her mamma, or else the baby will call her first. Um

Ruhi: chu chuma, go, baby coming

Sushma: um, I may say that now, don't know what the new one is going to call everyone.

Dev walking near Suchi: mom, can I go and see Radhika?

Suchi: ha, beta, give RUhi to me, and ha don't wake her up, ok

Dev: ji

He looked around and saw everyone's attention is on their talk on the happy news, he tried to slip into his room.

Radhika's eyes were closed and she was clinging onto the sheet that was covering her body , Silently he went and sat near her, just looking at her peaceful face.

The image just flashed in front of him, when he realized about her pregnancy for the first time with Ruhi inside. A tear drop peeked in as the pale face of Radhika came in front of him;. But now, she is just in front of his eyes when the news came out, unable to hold back, he tried to move closer to her forehead to stamp his feelings of happiness.

But then lechu appeared near the door and said: Bro, dadaji is calling you

Dev sat back quick and looked at the door corner and no one was seen there. With a smile, he looked back at Radhika and walked out, and closed the door behind.

Time ticked by. Radhika slowly woke up from her nap. She felt tired, but then tried to sit , she felt some relief as the aroma of the sweets and spices blown away from the air. She got up and went to the washroom to feel fresh.

Suddenly her eyes caught a yellow flower laying on the pillow. With a smile she picked that rose from there and tried to smell it, a shy smile appeared on her face, imagining Dev placing it near her. But then why he didn't wake me up? maybe because he didn't want to. Picking that flower in her hand she sat there for some more time.

As she came out, everyone was getting ready to leave. Radhika stood on a corner listening to the family talk all around, and her eyes scanned for Dev around

Lechu: Bhabhi: are you looking for Bro, he went out with Ruhi to pluck some fruits for us to take.

Radhika just smiled, and went with helping Suchi. Suchi just generally gave her reminders. Soon Dev and Ruhi came back. Dev glanced at Radhika as he was coming in placing the fruit basket outside.

Radhika's gaze fell down, with little shyness and colored cheeks.

Dev felt like holding her tight in his embrace, but then the voice of his family , brought him back to reality, that he went with getting things in car for them.

Soon the party drove away. Time flew by and the light gave way to the darkness

Sushma : Dev, Ruhi slept in my room already, so don't wake her up ok. I will take care of her.

Dev : Ji, buva

Dev went and sat near Dadaji and they were having a good chat around.

Everyone retired to their room, and Dev also walked into their room. Radhika was waiting for him, standing near the open window side, holding the yellow flower.

Soon she felt the circling arms around her, and unable to hold back, she just turned and hugged him tight, and with a smile Dev held her closer. Didn't speak for a while, and slowly the silence broke with Radhika's soft voice: happy?

Dev: um

Radhika: me too

Saying that she hugged him more tight.

" feeling tired?" Dev asked in concern

:umhum, not at all, I am fine, just hold me like this"

Dev with a smile, moved his face slightly back to look at her face, and then loosening his grip, he just lifted her up in his arms

Radhika looked at him surprisingly

Dev: shhh

Slowly he walked out and Radhika just cling to his neck more tight.

The night was calm and quiet, and the gentle breeze was blowing by. Dev placed his Radhika on that manchal slowly and then sat nearby.

Radhika looked into his eyes and so did he. His hand went behind her neck and slowly untied those braids. Her hair made its wavy movements with the wind, and she looked at him more lovingly. Gazing deep into her eyes his lips mumbled: I love you Radhika

Radhika 's eyes just smiled along with him, and with more of enthusiasm to hear from him more, her eyeballs moved corner to corner. Seeing her impatience, Dev slowly placed a soft kiss over her forehead, and then on her both eyes lids.

Dev said: Don't know whatelse to give you than those yellow flowers from the garden. I met you many times looking at them,thought you may like them than anything else.

Radhika sat silently , waiting for him to talk more

Dev pointing at the moon: look at that smiley moon, this moonlighted night and the serene nature , the breeze and the beauty, giving me the feel that I am that full moon, and looking at my princess, who is just beautiful as a white lily in a beautiful pond, in a beautiful garden, where the flowers are blinking seeing us from above the sky... Dev's hand just moved over her neck skin , up to behind her ears, giving a shiver to her body.

...Radhika , I wish this night to never end, give us time to be together like this, I just want to see the smile on your face, which came back to your face after a long struggle, and now we are going to have another baby, and in this journey we two are together, and then after a pause : you know who told me about the happy news?

Radhika looked at him in ?

Dev with a smile: ruhi

Radhika tightened her forehead in ?

Dev with a smile: she said mamma has a baby in her tummy.

Radhika gazed down

Dev lifting her chin up: now what happened, he sensed the tearful past behind

Dev: Radhika, we did overcome all those difficulties, and Ruhi is with us, and she is such a darling, and I am sure everything will go just fine. Just be near my eyes, and keep that smile on your lips. Nothing else I need.

Radhika tried to bring back the smile on her face, and his nearing face made her heart to go fluttery. She looked at his face lovingly, and soon his lips fused with hers.

The gentle breeze was circling around, the night still was looking serene in her black suit, the full moon smiled above the sky giving its reflection in that flowing water of chanderpur river, and the white lily flickered her lashes shyly to see him near her...
' credits to radhika5!!!
************************************************ thanks and take care Devika
Part 162: um um um
Edited by Devika. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Devika,thank you soo much for updating today dear... Very very nice part... I enjoyed reading it... Thank you soo much 😛 Waiting eagerly for the next part dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice devika waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Your writing is an inspiration to many and certainly to me...
In FF #1, it was the jasmine flower and in this it was the lily---
You take the beautiful things in nature and weave it into your story, reminding us of the beauty around us, which we many times, we forget to enjoy and appreciate...

Just like Dev connected to nature because of his Radhika, we connected to it through your FF...
Lily and the moon...an apt symbolism for RaDev love...
Edited by radhika5 - 13 years ago
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nice di waiting for ur next 1

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