Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58

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Gehraiyan


Thread One


Chapter One - Noshtonirh

Chapter Two - Potatoes and Propositions

Chapter Three - Midnight's Children

Chapter Four - Routines

Chapter Five - Christmas Miracle

Chapter Six - The Effects of Barney Stinson

Chapter Seven - Entrances and Exits

Chapter Eight - The Fanboy

Chapter Nine - The Artist

Chapter Ten - Time Machine

Chapter Eleven - The Hunting

Chapter Twelve - Whispers in the Night

Chapter Thirteen - The Project

Chapter Fourteen - Armaano Ka Achaar

Chapter Fifteen - Rock, Paper, Scissors

Chapter Sixteen - Game Over

Chapter Seventeen - Of Sticks and Stones

Chapter Eighteen - Alone

Chapter Nineteen - The End

Chapter Twenty Four - Only For Him...

Chapter Twenty Five - Currying Favour

Chapter Twenty Six - Saawan Barse

Chapter Twenty Seven - Tethered Ends

Chapter Twenty Eight - The Hero and the Fool


Thread Two


Chapter Twenty Nine - Father, If You Only Knew (below)

Chapter Thirty - What's Past is Prologue

Chapter Thirty One - The Trade-Off

Chapter Thirty Two - Phir Kabhi

Chapter Thirty Three - Cloaks of Mischief




Geet Handa Khurana



Maan Khurana


Heer Perera


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Dev Khurana

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Father, If You Only Knew

Shivering, with clenched teeth and a body soaked entirely from head to toe, she came home again.

"Chudail!" Kaka's elated voice warmed her heart but the worried gasp she heard a second later took her back to the fall she had suffered on her way here.

"Ai! What happened to you?"

His stern question melted her annoyance; she had missed his scolding, loving ways.

Ignoring his gaze as he inspected her bedraggled hair, she pulled the old man into a hug. "Kaka!" Pulling him back, she frowned. "You've lost weight."

"I haven't had you here to boss me around. Maybe if you hadn't left this poor old man behind..."

"Oh please. Save your nautanki for someone who'll buy it." Shooing him away to an armchair, she took his place behind the front desk and began looking through the mail. "All set for the group from Mumbai? They're coming next week, right?"

When he didn't reply, she turned with an eyebrow raised to see him smiling with a gleam in his eye. "Kaka?"

"Two of them have arrived early. A Ms. Geet Handa and Mr. Maan Khurana. Another two are checking in today - Ms. Heer Perera and Mr. -"

He stopped at the sudden sound of the front door opening. They turned and watched as a tall figure stepped out of the shadow of the doorway and entered the house.

She gasped.

Kaka, too, was surprised but for a different reason altogether. Shrewdly, he observed the man's flushed face, the wet hair plastered on his forehead and the water left on the floorboards from his clothes and shoes. He narrowed his eyes and looked from the man to the Chudail.

"Eta ke?" ("Who is this?") He asked her, slipping into Bangla, as was his habit when on guard. When she didn't offer an answer and continued to stare at the man, Kaka repeated his question in agitation. "Eta ke? Tui ki ei lok ta ke janish?" ("Who is this? Do you know this man?")

She tore her eyes away from the man and made to reply when he himself stepped forward and addressed Kaka. "Hello, Sir. My name is Dev Khurana. I have a booking." When Kaka continued to look at him suspiciously, Dev offered, "It was booked by the Bulani House of Architecture, I believe."

When Kaka nodded slowly but continued to observe Dev with narrowed eyes, she decided it was time to step in. "Kaka, why don't I get Mr. Khurana checked in? You must be tired."

"Sure?" Kaka asked quietly. She nodded to reassure him and slowly, he acquiesced. With last look and a gruff "welcome" in Dev's direction, he went inside to check on lunch.

"I'm sorry for the delay, Mr. Khurana." She gave him a bright, winning smile and winced internally at the overkill. If he noticed, he didn't comment.

"Beautiful view," he noted after a while.

She faltered. "Sorry?"

"The mountains. I'm talking about the mountains. I've never been to Darjeeling before."

"It's not the most popular tourist destination."

A silence followed, punctuated only by the tapping of her keyboard. He tried to train his gaze on a painting on the wall - a moody silhouette of a woman - but his eyes were drawn to the woman before him and the long, wet hair that tumbled down one shoulder.

There was no doubt in his mind. It was her.

His thoughts were interrupted by the jangle of keys. He looked up to see her waiting patiently.

"This one is your room key," she said, pointing. "And this is a key for the front door in case it's ever locked."

She opened her hand to him and he reached forward to take the keys. For the briefest of seconds, his fingers touched her palm and a spark, sweeping and electric, took her by surprise. She looked up to see if he had noticed but he seemed as oblivious as she was aware.

"Would you like me to show you to your room?" She murmured.

"Please."

They walked in silence until he stopped and turned to face her. "I'm afraid I didn't catch your name."

His eyes held a strange intensity, as if this was the most important task in the world and her answer mattered more to him than anything he had known before.

Her throat became dry and in little more than a whisper, "Nayantara. My name is Nayantara."

Dev smiled. "It's a pleasure to meet you, Nayantara. Let's go."

"Yes. Let's."

Edited by kaamchorni - 6 years ago
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Nayantara... hmm, this is getting more and more interesting,
waiting to read more

PS. Congratulations👏
Edited by Sphinx - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sphinx

Nayantara... hmm, this is getting more and more interesting,

waiting to read more

PS. Congratulations👏



Thank you and thanks for being here, Sphinx 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations, Z! Hoping to see more and more threads of Gehraiyan! 😃

Will get back after reading the chapter but I'm sure you won't be getting any jootis from me! 😆
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Originally posted by: mayyo

Congratulations, Z! Hoping to see more and more threads of Gehraiyan! 😃

Will get back after reading the chapter but I'm sure you won't be getting any jootis from me! 😆



Hear, hear! :)

Hmm... I don't know, Mari. You strike me as a secret troublemaker 😆
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hain...and there i was kind of anticipating dev-heer love story! would it be a triangle...
as usual amazing!
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Hmm... Too early to say there would be a love triangle or even make up a pair amongst the three. The most interesting thing for me in this chapter was that all of them will be staying at the same guest house. The camaraderie is what I'm looking forward to now! 😃

Nayantara's reaction to him was quite surprising. Does this have anything to do with their past lives? I guess only time - and updates! - will tell!

I couldn't connect the title to the chapter, though. Which reminds me, I haven't checked out the titles of the previous chapters as well. I mean, after you put them up.

No jootis coming from me to you! 😆

PS: I see you just have 9 posts left to be promoted. Itna slow chal rahi ho?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So Dev and Naintara.Great.And he recognised her,though there may be slight confusion.But cud it be possible the NT is more attracted to Dev than Dev to her.

I think NT also recognised Dev.

Waiting for a new love story and may be a better future for d lovers than d previous ones.


Great part buddy.

Thanx for d update and d PM.
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 11 years ago
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Naintara ne hi Dev ko doobne ke liye chod diya tha...

chalo achcha hua bechara bach gaya...

now Maan, Geet, Heer, Dev are all in one place and Naintara also...

story is getting intense now...

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