Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
First of all, I love the title of this one! What's past is prologue - of the future. How do you think of such titles?

And I now understand what the previous chapter's title meant.

There are quite a few things in this chapter which have piqued my curiosity.

The first and foremost is why Nayantara so aware of Dev Khurana. And if she is, why is she running away from accepting that? I somehow don't feel it's only her guilt of leaving him to drown like that. It has to be something more...

What about Gopal Kaka? A manager. Is that all he is? Nayantara never bothered knowing about him but there certainly has to be something.

Oh, and where has Dev returned from? The US? Nayantara has returned from the US... Okay, I am probably just over-speculating things at this stage. 😆

Nayantara believes that in the process of running, running to find herself, she has "made some mistakes and lost valuable things"... Do those valuable things only include her aunt and the time with her or is there more to it?

Definitely over-speculating! 😆

Questions, questions and questions to be answered to,
And the key to all those answers is you!

Thanks for updating, Z! Hope you can update the next one soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
This Nayantara I like her story...I can relate to her. Though I dont know how it feels to really go back to roots. Mast narration! :-D

Last line waah !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
an amazing update...tara seems very nice...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Beautiful
NT s mixed past & present was interesting very deep
She seem to have a left lot behind
Nt & dev's part interesting
Thanks for t pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Not sure if I commented for t previous part

Her gasp in recognition was interesting
May be interguing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
So its a lil biograghy of Naintara Rathode.Interesting one to read about her self confidence and independence,her thrill from winning when ppl said she cudnt.But even after achieving her goal she might not have felt peace so when she heard about her aunts death she decided to cm bk home,to India for good.

"Sadesher prem jato
she-i matro abogato
Bideshete odhibaas jaar
Bhabo-tooli dhan dhore
chitto pote chitro kore
sadesher shakol bepar..."

-Ishwarchandra Vidyasagar.

This home coming topic touched my heart and then we have Dev bothering our Tara's thots that too without her permission😆How dare he!!!!


Another great part buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: kaamchorni


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Picture abhi baki hai, mere dost 😃Anything could happen... we're no longer in even numbers, right? ;)



Are why do you keep on scaring us??? 😭
Dil behlane ke liye tera khayal hi kaafi hai
Ghalib

Khayaalon mein hi khush rahne do hamein!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mayyo

First of all, I love the title of this one! What's past is prologue - of the future. How do you think of such titles?

And I now understand what the previous chapter's title meant.

There are quite a few things in this chapter which have piqued my curiosity.

The first and foremost is why Nayantara so aware of Dev Khurana. And if she is, why is she running away from accepting that? I somehow don't feel it's only her guilt of leaving him to drown like that. It has to be something more...

What about Gopal Kaka? A manager. Is that all he is? Nayantara never bothered knowing about him but there certainly has to be something.

Oh, and where has Dev returned from? The US? Nayantara has returned from the US... Okay, I am probably just over-speculating things at this stage. 😆

Nayantara believes that in the process of running, running to find herself, she has "made some mistakes and lost valuable things"... Do those valuable things only include her aunt and the time with her or is there more to it?

Definitely over-speculating! 😆

Questions, questions and questions to be answered to,
And the key to all those answers is you!

Thanks for updating, Z! Hope you can update the next one soon! 😊

Wish I could take credit for the title but it's actually a quote from Shakespeare's The Tempest. Don't really care much for the guy but he came up with some good stuff.
Wouldn't say over-speculating, just lots of speculating happening. I like ;)
I don't think I clarified it properly in my narrative - Gopal Kaka used to be just a manager to Nayantara when she was young and living with her aunt. After the US and her aunt's death, he grew to become something of the father figure he is to her today.
That's all I'll say! Zip lock! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

So its a lil biograghy of Naintara Rathode.Interesting one to read about her self confidence and independence,her thrill from winning when ppl said she cudnt.But even after achieving her goal she might not have felt peace so when she heard about her aunts death she decided to cm bk home,to India for good.

"Sadesher prem jato
she-i matro abogato
Bideshete odhibaas jaar
Bhabo-tooli dhan dhore
chitto pote chitro kore
sadesher shakol bepar..."

-Ishwarchandra Vidyasagar.

This home coming topic touched my heart and then we have Dev bothering our Tara's thots that too without her permission😆How dare he!!!!


Another great part buddy.

Wow, that's really beautiful. I won't even pretend I can appreciate and understand it in its entirety, yet it still touched my heart.
Dev is nothing if not gutsy but our Nayantara imagines herself to have a will of steel 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
I have heard about an incident today, not something extraordinary but yes it is to some extent and I thought about this fic.
What I heard today was a family forgetting societial norms and expectations and taking a step back to go back to their basics. It was then I remembered her, Nainatara and came back to read her.

Back then when I read this update I questioned myself had I been in her place, would I have left the life and come back to my roots?

Now I know the answer.

Thank you Z for sketching characters which stays with us and makes us learn

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