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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#991

EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PRT BUDDY

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#992

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PRT BUDDY

😊

Trying to work on it but mind is coming up blank.

Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#993

Me in line for next one :)

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#994

woah,,..you updated ...i found it very late phir bhi , glad that you updated...😃

coming to the part...it was awesome n very beautifully written..

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#995

Originally posted by: honeygrape
woah,,..you updated ...i found it very late phir bhi , glad that you updated...😃

coming to the part...it was awesome n very beautifully written..

😲 Didn't I send you a PM? I thought you were on the list...

Thank you :) Just sitting down to write the next chapter now.

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#996

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

😲 Didn't I send you a PM? I thought you were on the list...

Thank you :) Just sitting down to write the next chapter now.

nope , you dint...phir bhi i found it ...😃😃

writing the next one...wowiee...thats great...then let me not distract you with my blabbering...carry on 😃😃 will wait for the update😃

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maanugeetu

@maanugeetu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#997

beautiful update.

geet's loneliness, restlessness, everything has been beautifully portrayed.👏

at first i didn't get the second part so i read it again and then i understood it was maan and geet and maan was drawing her picture. this whole second part is dreamlike state means as if this thing has not really happened, its a dream not a reality. awesome.

waiting for the next update.

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#998

Lovely music selection...

Dil mein jaage bholi bhali Manmarziyan.

Fits Geet exactly..

The beginning described perfectly .. herself In coordination with nature.. cold seeking warmth

It was just nice to feel...

This sentence made me think of how much she shuts herself from things and here she finally feels a sense of home.

It was amazing how many things you can survive and yet fall trap to inconsequential things...👏👏

Wonderful depth in that statement. The things that we survive are mostly outside us and the things that bring us down are mostly within, I have always thought.

She misses him.. a life without him is not possible but with him it is difficult too.

I love the frustration Maan had with the drawing.. every thing going smoothly until it came to the eyes. The eyes.. windows to the soul... without her, he does not get them. Once she was there, it all fell into place for him.

The hurt is deep on both ends. A place away from the "inconsequential" is what they both needed.

Do continue soon...

Thanks for updating

P.S.

The update you said you wanted to read... it is stand alone so you can read it without following the rest..

With or without you...and a little Phantom added to the mix😉

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88427448

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#999

Oopsy missed t update
Beautiful
Loneliness of geet is put down so intensely just feel like drowning standing with that woman
Strong yet fragile
So haunting

Him drawing & her wondering
👏

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1000

It was so nice to just...feel...
in your words :)

After the sleep, at the window, sketching, the eyes, the two of them, and he was gone! Created a spell, left an impact and I think this one was the best :).