Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
dev kya hoga iska...

nice update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Thanks for t pm

Umm dev

Very nice part

U left at t same wait
We still r in panic state
Wat happend
Why is she not wanting any treatment 😲



What did you think of the insight into Dev?
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update...so nanytara is still around...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 41 - liked bratty dev's thoughts...he really came a long way from how he was earlier and now he is thinking about new choices for his chain of hotel...how much he adores maan...maan is like his ideal & mentor..
omg...accident...so naintara don't want any treatment...why.?..dev was concerned about her..hummm...
and what about heer...?
another cliff
cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
still i've got 20 more parts aprox😔
and have an update already!

meri galti nahi hai it's all geets fault !
hai na babaji!

na wo daro peeti
na wo talli hoti
nahi wo sab... kisi ajnabiyo k saat blaber karti!

n chado i have a log list of complaints on geet!😒



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Posted: 10 years ago
Accident hui gawa. Hain.
Lol. I knew ye Dev-NT ka serious wala love story hai. So will Dev Babu get her to accept treatment...I wish she was unconscious, so no locha. But then locha is there to solve some another locha, right?

I suspect Mr. Gopal knows about Dev-NT connection and believes he has betrayed her.

Nice. Nice.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 41 - liked bratty dev's thoughts...he really came a long way from how he was earlier and now he is thinking about new choices for his chain of hotel...how much he adores maan...maan is like his ideal & mentor..

omg...accident...so naintara don't want any treatment...why.?..dev was concerned about her..hummm...
and what about heer...?
another cliff
cont soon..



Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Accident hui gawa. Hain.
Lol. I knew ye Dev-NT ka serious wala love story hai. So will Dev Babu get her to accept treatment...I wish she was unconscious, so no locha. But then locha is there to solve some another locha, right?

I suspect Mr. Gopal knows about Dev-NT connection and believes he has betrayed her.

Nice. Nice.



I don't think I articulated the end very well. Just bringing something to everyone's attention:

If he had waited a little longer, he would have known the other reason for the phone call.

"...was travelling with. She is refusing treatment despite appearing to have sustained the more serious injuries. We need her to agree to let a doctor examine her." A pause. "Hello? Hello?..."

Nayantara is not refusing treatment...


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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part...
mainly about dev...what he thought about his brother maan...how he was after maan left...how he nhis father drift apart ..
dev got the call about NT's accident but he didn't listen fully...
is the lady talking about NT or pari!!!
why she is not ready for treatment???
aahhh cliffhanger
Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



Thank you so much for your lovely words and for sharing your thoughts! They're some of the things we continue to discuss on this thread and I hope you'll join us 😊 The questions you've raised... I think it's a bit of most of them. Relationships take effort and persistence... we cannot just hope that the knowledge that love is there will tide us over. That is just my humble opinion, of course. I am beginning to suspect more and more that there is no real answer.

I am really happy that you liked the story so much. New readers always rekindle my love for the story and your comment was a big motivator for writing the next chapter.


Thanks a ton for the new chapters. I've been reading and liking them as you posted , but for some reason I can't comment from my phone. Logged in via computer after ages..
Love how the story is progressing-- the developing bond between Naina and Heer. They are total opposites, but complement each other . Maybe they can both ditch Dev and run away together!!! 😛
Bechara Dev - all alone in the haunted house !!! So , he does have feelings for Naintara -- ran to the hospital without listening to what the nurse was saying - just like a Bollywood heroine😆
Also - thank you for reviving Smokes and Mirrors. That is one intriguing story -- would love to see where it goes :-)
Edited by maancrazy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I didn't realise that I hadn't replied to comments last time but I'm so eager to post the next chapter that I'm hoping you'll forgive me 😃

Thank you to all who commented. I appreciate the time you put into your words and the love and support you give me.

- Z

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