Gehraiyan: New Thread Link Posted Page 141- Page 39

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Rofl, let us do something. We'll try our love bite lessons on him one by one, and see who has more jalwa🤣

He will have heart attack man 💔 .

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NapGAjs2nXE


This would be our BG music when we do our Jalwa. Man, this is fun. At 11 in the night I sit alone before PC and laugh to myself. Hope no one thinks I've gone mad🤣

Poor boy. A Bhootni, a Zarin and a Vampire...mujhe taras aa raha hai uss par.

(Off to finish the chapter. Back in around 20 mins - half an hour.)

Yay. I am dancing.
Ek update ke liye taras gayi Z! Heer, Maan, Geet, Lappy guy, I missed you😭

Sorry, ladies, bear with me. Ten to fifteen minutes.

Yes me first ! res 😆

EDIT ~~

May be Shiku and me need to make asses of ourselves more often on your thread. For you have outdone yourself this time. I bow down to you mademoiselle. Aapke jalwe ke saamne hamaara tho kuch bhi nahi hai.

This update was stunning. I cannot begin to describe how stunning it is.

The last time I played 'truth and dare' was...hmm..let me think...never. And this is the precise reason. It always goes wrong I feel.

The entire mood setting was superb. I felt like I was inside a cluedo game and I am the killer with the wrench.

The wedding ring part was 👏. Oh so true. The moment she heard that clang she lost it, didn't she? Sometimes small things trigger people to extremes.

The game was a disaster waiting to happen. One can so picture Geet looking at the newly weds almost mocking at them. She has turned so cynical about life. It is heartbreaking. 😭. How is she ever going to come back from this place Zarin ji, HOW ?

Geet is such a private person seems like. Does not share her frustrations with probably many. May be her deepest fears have not even been shared with Heer.

It is all so complicated and depicted so wonderfully.

She did leave him a letter. And she knows he has not read it. He has not read it. It is so I don't know prosaic almost? Like her last pitch to save her marriage? That even though she felt cynical about the letter, she was hopeful for one last time. One last chance she was going to give him. Is this the point of no return for her?

Or am I just being too melodramatic. May be I am but I cannot help myself.

That last dialogue from lappy guy was epic. 'Game over I think'. How apt.

Zarin ji, how can you be this good. It is just so awesome. 🤗

P.S. I was going to hit the like button and I had. But then I took a step back. I don't want it to be game over. 😭

res...

I don't know what to comment here, Z. I'm seriously short on words after reading this terrific update! Hats off to you for putting it together! 👏

Sometimes the tiniest of things can trigger you off. They can make you do something which you wouldn't have otherwise done. They make you apprehensive, they make you superstitious, they make you angry, they make you sad. So many feelings from just a single thing. Like the button breaking episode earlier which made her think the way she did, the ring clinking also brought forward her otherwise suppressed side... The line 'routines become forgotten' is deeper than it's shown here, isn't it? Perhaps that's what happened with Maan and Geet. Their life, their differences, their arguments became routine. And routines become forgotten. Maybe this is the reason that they say 'change is the spice of life'. By tweaking with routines at intervals, we can probably avoid a lot more!

Geet's pain is so evident in the way she laughed at 'forever'. Her mocking the word told a tale of forgotten promises to and from Maan at a time when they were probably just like Seth and Raina: deeply in love and enjoying the togetherness..!

I feel even sadder now for Geet after her call to Maan. Even in that state of being drunk, she can't let go of her sorrows and she can't suppress her love. That is why she left a letter for him in a place that she knows he won't check until late and that is why she called herself 'his Geet'!

This chapter is one of those which leave a pinch in your heart thinking 'why is reality so far from dreams?' Again Zarin, hats off to you for writing it to perfection! 👏

Oh I forgot! Your exams are done? I hope they went well! Thanks for the PM. 😊

Really Yaar,these truth and dare games give sm real nasty results.And Geet's pain is truly evident from her call to Maan or to his voice mail box.

Each and every word how hurt she is.

Late but gr8 update.