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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Oh, I wouldn't dare quit now! I've witnessed the wrath of IF readers enough times to know that that is never a wise option! 😆 I meant quit the faux-mystery and make it clear who the couple are.

Don't encourage me too much! The addictiveness of writing on IF is proving to be quite a distraction to my life.

Wrath? I haven't quite had the chance to witness some! 😃

Don't worry, however long you'll take it, we'll (readers) be the ones to benefit! 😉

IF is surely a distraction and it's much more addicting! Can't seem to find out a way to avoid it!

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm

Thank you, I appreciate your kind words :)

Edited by kaamchorni - 12 years ago

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

so is G M's wife, but there seems to be a stark contrast to the maan of first part and maan of this part...
IN the first part, it looked as if he was irritated with her presence, and here it looks like he wants her attention...am totally confused, or am i missing something😕

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ninand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I read the three parts all at once, Zarin. In the first part, with him reminiscing the freshness that once was, the tone was almost draining, but not completely so.. like a limp relationship is, simply hanging there.(the tone conveyed eveyrthing) I really felt bad.

and by the third chapter, when you see the contrast between how Geet is at work, and how she is with him,.. the idea that something as tender as love can go stale, and cumbersome.. it twists the knot inside.

Such stories are really painful, no? you write well.. the flow is smooth.. and I definitely would like to read more.. Do continue soon.

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wow great story plz update soon
my name is alicia pm me

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Interesting..,... I read all the three parts in one go and girl i found it lil confusing but now its clear.Your style of writing is unique and different.And finally i succeeded in figuring out dat d couple is maaneet i'm gonna enjoy d story more

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sanjh89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ninand
I read the three parts all at once, Zarin. In the first part, with him reminiscing the freshness that once was, the tone was almost draining, but not completely so.. like a limp relationship is, simply hanging there.(the tone conveyed eveyrthing) I really felt bad.

and by the third chapter, when you see the contrast between how Geet is at work, and how she is with him,.. the idea that something as tender as love can go stale, and cumbersome.. it twists the knot inside.

Such stories are really painful, no? you write well.. the flow is smooth.. and I definitely would like to read more.. Do continue soon.

I too have read all the 3 chaptrs in one go... n similar ws my reaction... seems as both r in same boat... bitter n sweet at the same tme towards ech other... getting irritated by ech othr's presence but at the same tme hvng a longing deep within...to hv evrythng sorted out btw thm...n bcm wonderful couple...ummm...no...soulmates once again...

wonderful writing... anothr sensible story on MAANEET on way...
bookmarkng...

love

SANJH