Gehraiyan: New Thread Link Posted Page 141 - Page 10

Well do I sound weird If i say I do not find it short. Well in quantity may be but in quality never. It was not a filler, each syllable had a story to say (I am being dramatic I know) But anyway I love love loved it. But there is something which was gnawing my mind. Did something happen which made them so detached and indifferent with each other or is it a natural process after few years of marriage? I didn't expect you to answer me. I will hope to find out myself as I read it. Hint hint: For that you need to write more😆

short...but not a filler...
an insight of their past...quite eventful...
looks like our dearie s waiting quite eagerly for the party...

well same eagerness s here too...

love


SANJH

Thank you for the wonderful feedback, everyone :) They were probably collectively longer (and better) than the chapter you were all writing about so I'm surprised I was let off so easily 😆

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Itna chotu update why ?????
But prblm yeh hai that i loved it totally,

Ha, well, I could - and will - reel off the usual (but truthful) cliche that I've been super busy lately. But thank you for loving what little words there were :) I will try and make your hint of a lamba chapter possible ;)

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Well do I sound weird If i say I do not find it short. Well in quantity may be but in quality never. It was not a filler, each syllable had a story to say (I am being dramatic I know) But anyway I love love loved it. But there is something which was gnawing my mind. Did something happen which made them so detached and indifferent with each other or is it a natural process after few years of marriage? I didn't expect you to answer me. I will hope to find out myself as I read it. Hint hint: For that you need to write more😆

This is going to chalk up to be one of my favourite comments, I just know it.

@bold: I wouldn't even if you wanted me to 😉 I've been asked many different questions about the story since its beginning, none of which I have conveniently ignored - I'd like 'Gehraiyan' to write and answer for itself :)

Both of them have beautiful memories with each other{chapter1 and 6},then what went wrong between them???

Hey guys, a quick note that I'll be sending PMs from KC.PM from now on. So if I add you on it then...yeah, just know that it's not some random person. Okay thanks :)

(And yes, Foz, I stole your PM username style 😉)

Oh okay! I just sent a PM to that account. Just ignore it. I'll accept your request. 😊

k wow i just caught it up again..

Like i already said,they have beautiful memories with each other..and this one pinched my heart slightly making me yearn more to know what went wrong in their life...

Upto when they will keep d facade that they r not affected by each other...their nostalgia about their beautiful past shows they still yearn for each other