Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chingaming

Super super super awesome updates!!

Loved each one of them!!

Xoxxo



Thank you! Welcome to the story :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

It is so easy to think that we know other people's relationships, we have all the answers.

Heer dismisses Maan because she is closer to Geet. That is just her perspective.

The only people who know what happens between them is Maan and Geet.

Though in some circumstances, it is easier not to know or not to acknowledge certain facts, they are present within them.

The good bad and ugly has to be brought to the forefront of consciousness and spoken of, if there is to be a solution.

Nice way of presenting it

NT and Heer doing the work this time.



Perfect.

You make me feel like the kind of writer I wish I was, Avi. Thank you for being here.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Hay

I'm your new reader!😳
haven't read the whole story yet but the latest update was enough to get me hooked!!

Will read the previous parts n comment😊

Oh yes and not to forget waiting for the next!!



Wow, thank you! It is so heartwarming to see new readers, especially at this stage of the story. Welcome! I hope to see you around soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is one hell of interesting story
yet to read all parts
but just wanted to tell ya i am loving it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Avenging_Angel

This is one hell of interesting story
yet to read all parts
but just wanted to tell ya i am loving it



Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too. Let me know what you think :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
The maan singh Khurana annoyed with his tie😆
maan seriously!!
Bewi ki frustration tie pe😆
chup k se Bewi bhi doing takajhaki kya yaar khud ka hi pati hai openly drool karne ka licence hai phir bhi

Ok shayad patiji se jhagda ho gaya😲

Koi baat nahi writer hai na sab thek kar degi😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mai ne cheating ki😛
actually after first part I had a doubt if geet n maan are married to eachother or I'm coming to conclusions. ..
n by chance second thread khulgaya
n uss me CS Tha😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



Perfect.

You make me feel like the kind of writer I wish I was, Avi. Thank you for being here.



you are the best as it is Z 😃

🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
When u read something like this .. all of a sudden u feel so heavy...u feel something akin... u dont know how to express it...
As if something u know... but never realized it...

You just cannot put in words.. its just a realization..and a fact.. a well known fact.

We all knew that in love one takes other for granted... but we dont realize until we experience it... feel it ... and witness it thru your own eyes...

It is so easy to think that we know other people's relationships, we have all the answers.

galll my agnes 🤗 🤗 you are sooo good at words and relationships... u just put it in such a simple way 🤗 loved it

The good bad and ugly has to be brought to the forefront of consciousness and spoken of, if there is to be a solution.

i love the way zarin is weaving her love tale 😊


"Indifference and neglect often do much more damage than outright dislike."

"Every couple needs to argue now and then. Just to prove that the relationship is strong enough to survive. Long-term relationships, the ones that matter, are all about weathering the peaks and the valleys."


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Posted: 10 years ago
Re-read it...found it more romantic hahaha...Was it just my thinking or not, but I realised the difference in Geet when Maan appeared in Darjeeling...like him being there was enough for her to feel things...to realise...she started seeing things differently though you didn't say it was due to him but on her way and when she landed there , she was carrying baggage of her past, in turmoil, cranky and all..
Maan finds it difficult to express his deep emotions somehow, especially when it comes to her...

Superb.
I like Tara's story.

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