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Posted: 12 years ago
SHE GETS A SENSE OF FOREBODING WHILE GETTING IN THE BUS
IS HER INTUITION RIGHT
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys, missed me? I'm going to take those frantic head shakes as enthusiastic nods, okay? 😉 I certainly missed you guys, as well as writing. Bits and pieces on napkins is not at all satisfying until you put it all together.

A belated Merry Christmas, hope you all took advantage of the good food and better than average Christmas TV! Also, a very happy new year to everyone. Here's hoping for a brilliant year ahead and also that London's fireworks kicks everyone else's ass! 😆

- Zarin
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back, Z! 🤗
I wasn't actually expecting an update this soon! 😳

I was a little confused about who the 'she' was at the start of the chapter, tossing between Geet and Heer. (Yes, I conveniently forgot Geet was on a bus! 😆) But when she started writing on the window, I thought this should be Heer. She was going to write Papa, haina? She was close to her father, right?

Very often we realise the value of someone or something after it's gone. And we feel the need to know where exactly they are... Maan seems to be wallowing in a bit of guilt over something. I think he's partially worried about where his wife is and partially angry or hurt that she didn't inform him before leaving.

When we feel wretched and gloomy inside, nothing can lift up our spirit. At least not until we are not willing to let our spirit high! 😛 So Geet isn't enjoying the adventures life is throwing at her. Anyone else in her place wouldn't either! I wouldn't, for sure! Even under normal circumstances, if something like a tyre puncture and an unplanned stay at a cottage comes up with me, my knee jerk reaction is a whining 'oh no!' 😆

Thanks for the PM! And all the best for your exams! 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Does Geet know that Maan is searching for her?? ls Maan missing her or his ego bruised thinking that she left him though his physical appearance doesn't relate to second option. To get my answers, l need to wait😊
Nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHY IS MAAN SEARCHING FOR HER NOW
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back zarin...🤗..
After 15 chapters,Finally I am little "adapted" to your writing style,because this time I could guess that the "She" at the starting of chapter is "Heer"...that too before maan called heer by her name..😆
So maan is searching for her now...Well I was expecting Geet would have told him about her darjeeling trip...Remember these lines from chapter 13..
"She stood in the elevator and pressed the dial button once again.

She wasn't running away and she wasn't leaving him. She was, however, choosing herself. And she needed him to know that."

I thought,Geet had dialled Maan's number here...Anyways,I am glad she had not told him..His "search" kind of conveyed what he actually feels for his wife,after his useless and rude denial of " presence of Love" between them...!!!! Love is still there...

However,I am confused why he was throwing pebbles at Heer's window???He could have pressed the doorbell and ask her little politely or mannerly..Well their "Interaction" from the window clearly told about their "little less likeness" towards each other...and this line brought a silly grin on my face...

"Not a rat but a bas***d of a different variety..."😆😆So Bas***ds have varieties too...🤣I was expecting Heer to tell him geet's whereabouts at last but she chose to talk about more important matter.."Hair cut"...😛Why did she ask him to get a haircut???I am sure his dishevelled appearance had affected her little and she was not letting herself accept that this man{who belongs to a certain variety of bas***ds} could miss his wife..."

No comments for our sleeping passenger...

I have no idea why the bus got two punctures and why GOD{zarin basically} is making her stay at this cottage..I am sure God has some big plans for her...Hope she would have great time with cracked budhiya and love sick puppies and lappy guy...😆

Waiting for more from you in 2013...

ps-1)just like mariam,i was also wondering what heer was writing on window surface..i think our mayonnaise has guessed it right..Was it "PAPA"???

2)Tracing a water droplet in the corner with her eyes, she watched as it too slid down into the smallpool the other droplets had created. A pity, she thought.

A tight hug to you for this line🤗...It feel "blessed" to get to read such a beauty of words..You are awesome zarin...👏!!!You are going to get alot of breath chocking hugs from me in 2013 too..so be ready...😉

Happy 2013...🥳




Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Z, tell me something, does that cool dude busy with his laptop handsome?😆
Ignore my silly ramblings but it's just that I am curious. Bus break down, cottage, irritatingly romantic dumb head of a couple, very chilled out old woman, and a *ahem* stranger. Wooh, sounds damned interesting. Let me go fetch some popcorn.😆
Don't mind me I am in one of those moods. You know Heer intrigues me. The way she's shows she faced a lot in life, and a small intuition it has her father involved was gnawing my mind.
Something stuck me weird by the way. In one of the previous update, where these are the closing lines.

She wasn't running away and she wasn't leaving him. She was, however, choosing herself. And she needed him to know that.

If she really had let him know, he wouldn't have been standing outside Heer's apartment and would've got a free advice of hair cut now. Is it?🤣

Yes, I loved the hair cut line, so much so that I wanted to give a hug to Heer. Heer definitely is a person who wouldn't disclose anything she isn't supposed to, even if she's breathing her last, and so I was surprised when he called him back, only to have a good laugh later.

Maan, be a man, go behind her Dammit!

Ah, some painfully romantic ghost might have possessed me!😆

Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think those lines that Palin and Shika mentioned here from the last update 'she needed him to know that' have a different context than her calling him and letting him know about her trip. If it isn't a typo, then it probably has a meaning on the lines of she making her choices obvious by not giving him priority. By making her own decisions without his involvement in them. I might be wrong in this count. Only you, Z, can clarify this! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok basically(not actually; just basically) this is what happened...

Mr Zaalim Singh Khurana says he does not love his wife anymore.
Mrs Geet no less zaalim khurana decides to take a vacation without as much as dropping a note to her dear hubby.

He finds she has gone missing and becomes Devdas. 😆
And she ends up with Junglee Toofan Tyre Puncture 🤣 👏

And Heer is having the most fun in all this. 👏

Anyone who thinks otherwise let me tell you from personal experience, it is a law of nature that guys with lappy on buses can never be handsome.

Huhaha. Mogambo khush hua...

New year Mubaarak Zarin ji 😳

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