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Originally posted by: Cloud9.

I feel too dumb to comment on something so tremendous right now. May be I would wait to read other comments and would add all of them to say something smart and witty😆

Phew...,wat a nightmare for waking up Maan's conscience.

And d symbolisms u've used,jst perfect.

At first Maan is irritated at d chirping of Cicadas(May be d chirping of geet) and gets angry.like

"It looked angry,as if it had lashed out in a sudden burst of violence,only to find that it has lost d ability to pick itself up again"

This line seems jst "the" line for Maan.

And suddenly d chirping stops and He observes that smthng is coming.

And d beast,to me,seemed like Maan's own darknesses haunting him which he himself is trying to escape from.

Finally he wakes up after having his own image in d beast's eyes.

Wat can i say Zarina,u r an exceptional playes of words.

Hats off to u buddy.Love ur work.

awesoome upd.
loved it fab.
tfd pm...

How do I thank thee? Let me count the ways... 🤗

I am so so so so so so so happy right now, you guys have no idea. I think this time I really do have all your comments memorised! There is nothing more gratifying for me than knowing that you all enjoyed the chapter, that it made you feel something. That you've read between the lines and derived your own brilliant interpretations is a bonus I could have only dreamed of. Discussions and debates are always encouraged on this thread. :)

I don't know how else to convey my feelings - you guys always accomplish the impossible task of rendering me speechless!

Thank you once again!

P.S. While we're on the topic of discussing and Maan, I think I'll add a little fuel to the fire: Did anybody pick up on how in Chapter Ten, Maan says that he is always forced to pick up the pieces of Geet's mess for her while the both times we've had a literal mess in the story (one broken mug, one broken glass) , it was Geet doing the cleaning...

Originally posted by: punam2712

WHAT A NIGHTMARE

WHOSE EYES WAS HE SEEING

The eyes of the beast in his dream.

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Phew...,wat a nightmare for waking up Maan's conscience. Perfectly put, Sampa.

And d symbolisms u've used,jst perfect.

At first Maan is irritated at d chirping of Cicadas(May be d chirping of geet) and gets angry.like

"It looked angry,as if it had lashed out in a sudden burst of violence,only to find that it has lost d ability to pick itself up again"

This line seems jst "the" line for Maan.

And suddenly d chirping stops and He observes that smthng is coming.

And d beast,to me,seemed like Maan's own darknesses haunting him which he himself is trying to escape from.

Finally he wakes up after having his own image in d beast's eyes.

Wat can i say Zarina,u r an exceptional playes of words.

Hats off to u buddy.Love ur work.

I will be completely honest: it wasn't until I'd written, posted and then re-read the chapter multiple times that I myself could identify what symbolised what. And even now, I keep changing my mind. The line about the root was completely accidental but I think you're right. It is exactly the line for Maan and what has happened with him in the past few chapters.

Thank you, Sampa. I love reading your analyses; they always make me think even more.

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I will be completely honest: it wasn't until I'd written, posted and then re-read the chapter multiple times that I myself could identify what symbolised what. And even now, I keep changing my mind. The line about the root was completely accidental but I think you're right. It is exactly the line for Maan and what has happened with him in the past few chapters.

Thank you, Sampa. I love reading your analyses; they always make me think even more.

I'm absolutely delighted to make a thinker like u to think.

And buddy if ur accidental lines are so perfect,then i wud never want u to plan ur updates. 😉

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

I feel too dumb to comment on something so tremendous right now. May be I would wait to read other comments and would add all of them to say something smart and witty😆

Shikha, you loca woman, you have the wisdom of a thousand minds! Even your sleep talk is smart and witty 😆 I am humbled to have made you speechless.

Originally posted by: palindrome

I am so happy that you picked up on the word 'bruised' as it was the only intentional thing in this chapter. I read that you really like the tree and root part. I'll be honest - I do too! 😊 Hey, what came first - the tree or the root? 😉 Question's been making me think since it popped into my head.

As for your second sentence...Wow. Thank you. We'll have to agree to disagree, of course, because I've come across some serious talent on this forum but thank you all the same, pal. (Sorry, my puns still leave a little to be desired 😆)