Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: dqno1

Discussion karne ke liye, update bhi toh chahiye..
kuch aisa likho jo discuss kar sakein...
controversy pe discussions ho sakte hai
but yaha toh controversy nahi hai
everyone agrees you write awesome..😳
nakhre uthana padega😲
hello! earth to Z... laut aao.. 😆



Shika ki kami thi. Woh main poori kar rahi hoon 😆

Ek taraf se nakhre mat karo aur doosri taraf se I write awesome (thank you, thank you, ji)? Iss Saazish Ko Kya Naam Doon? 😕

Update coming on the story's most mysterious lady. 101 theories can be made but a hint: the clues are all in the text 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hoovering and tadaping... 👏
Waah!
Yeh kaisi tadap hai...😆😆
clean carpets ki 😆
somehow I don't think the lyricist had that in mind when he wrote the song...🤣



😆 Kya kahoon? Art is interpretation, baby!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



Shika ki kami thi. Woh main poori kar rahi hoon 😆

Ek taraf se nakhre mat karo aur doosri taraf se I write awesome (thank you, thank you, ji)? Iss Saazish Ko Kya Naam Doon? 😕

Update coming on the story's most mysterious lady. 101 theories can be made but a hint: the clues are all in the text 😉

Nahi nahi
Nakhre karo na... BF ke samne...
Hum ladies hai.. nakhre uthati nahi kissi aur ke...😆 We are all busy doing our own...😆 Hence the name DQ😃
SHika ki baat mat karo... Shocked
Usne mujhe dump kiya hai.. jhutti pyar kii kasme uski...😭
Dil ke tukde tukde kar ke, muskura ke chal diye...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: dqno1

Nahi nahi
Nakhre karo na... BF ke samne...
Hum ladies hai.. nakhre uthati nahi kissi aur ke...😆 We are all busy doing our own...😆 Hence the name DQ😃
SHika ki baat mat karo... 😲
Usne mujhe dump kiya hai.. jhutti pyar kii kasme uski...😭
Dil ke tukde tukde kar ke, muskura ke chal diye...😭



Dump kiya hai, yeh pata hai... kiske liye, yeh nahi?

Muahahahahaha! 😈

(Lovely song. Off topic but I was just thinking of my fave The Locket chapter the other day... the Jhuki Jhuki Si Nazar one You write so beautifully, Avi ji)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



Dump kiya hai, yeh pata hai... kiske liye, yeh nahi?

Muahahahahaha! 😈

(Lovely song. Off topic but I was just thinking of my fave The Locket chapter the other day... the Jhuki Jhuki Si Nazar one You write so beautifully, Avi ji)

I hate my writing I wish I knew how to write..
But alas those of you who write well are not updating so am doing TP..
The only chapter I did like very slightly was "Priyasi" chapter 27 or so.. Maybe that too only because I love that song.. u must have heard it, Hariharan.. from the movie Taal.
Thanks for the compliment.😃. As you can tell, I am not so good with that😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: dqno1

I hate my writing I wish I knew how to write..
But alas those of you who write well are not updating so am doing TP..
The only chapter I did like very slightly was "Priyasi" chapter 27 or so.. Maybe that too only because I love that song.. u must have heard it, Hariharan.. from the movie Taal.
Thanks for the compliment.😃. As you can tell, I am not so good with that😆



Oh shush, I don't want to hear another word against your writing. Nahi toh main gussa ho jaoonga... soch lijiye, Avi ji. Bhaari keemat hai.

What, Nahi Saamne?? Heard it? It's my favourite from the soundtrack and one of my overall faves! Your taste in music 👏

Haha, who is? I always feel awkward and say thank you, but it sounds mechanical and a bit insincere 😆

Acha, I'll update but don't kill me: it's a shorty.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
short and sweet... waiting 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Apologies to Mari and anyone else who can't access Youtube. I'll work on changing the format as soon as I can.

Disclaimer: It looked a lot longer on Word! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
[Music Selection]

Chapter 32 - Phir Kabhi

A cool mist of rain hit her as she rolled down the window. She wished she was driving but the way her hands were shaking made taking a taxi the most sensible option.

She wondered whether the driver would drive over the limit if asked.

Oh, how she wished she had said no when she had been approached for this project.

In the early days, she and Geet had worked together on projects within the city. Back then, Geet headed a design company and during the day, she worked for her to keep her creativity alive and her back clothed. She liked the work and she quickly found that she was very good at it but it wasn't what she had set out to do.

In the evenings, weekends and any seconds in between, she had worked towards making the de Broglie Dance Academy into something more than a pipe dream. And when that dream finally came together, Geet had began freelancing and she worked for her as a scenic designer, transforming her stage into another world - utopia, at times and at others, hell.

The company they were working for now had loved Geet's work at one of Heer's shows and they set out to pester the dancer into arranging the designer to work for them.

At first, selfishly, Heer had wanted to say no. But she had watched her best friend turn slowly from a person - skin, bones, flesh, blood - into a mere shadow and she'd be damned if she didn't keep her from disappearing altogether.

The opportunity will be good for her, Heer had thought. A chance to get out of the space she was in and another feather in her cap, too.

But now... God, she really wished she had said no.

The trees - tall and menacing - blurred past her as they rounded a hairpin bend. She shivered as the breeze became a chill but preferred it to the suffocation she felt inside the car.

There was still time. Perhaps she should...

Her purse vibrated and pulling out her phone, she saw that Geet was calling her.

Saved by the bell, she forced herself to think and yet, the creeping sense of disappointment she felt was hard to ignore.

She picked up the call. "Geet? Hello?"

"Yes, I'm, uh, sightseeing but the weather's terrible. Oh yeah, I'm already on my way back. About two hours. No, no, not far but I'm planning on doing some shopping first. No, I haven't. I'll eat outside. No, I will. Yes, I swear. Okay, bye."

She cut the call and slumped against the vinyl seat. On days like today, it was exhausting to pretend.

Closing her eyes, she called out to the driver. "Any chance we can turn this thing around?"

Edited by kaamchorni - 6 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
I loved this...when I saw it.. Rehna tu...😳
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