Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes I agree. And yes I am surprised, so I would say Thank you Dev-NT. :).
Never mind. You should take as many comments as compliments, because ego is priceless.
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Posted: 10 years ago
This chapter 5, Christmas miracles.
This is painful. I don't want to write more because now the good times are here. Lol.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

This chapter 5, Christmas miracles.
This is painful. I don't want to write more because now the good times are here. Lol.



Good times? You've omitted a great chunk of the story from your brain 😆

P.S. You've made me read along with you.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



Good times? You've omitted a great chunk of the story from your brain 😆

P.S. You've made me read along with you.


Good times because they are on recovery path in present. And no, I haven't because I read them all but don't want to comment about them because it dilutes the good times in present. My logic :-D :-D.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Though there are few things I am curious about. Her father Dr. Perera. There was news of him not being in good health. Isn't Heer in touch with her family at all?

Then why Maan decided to leave his father, his business? Sour relations? Clearly Maan and Geet were in difficult situation that there is so much about building together without any help, almost like a mission, that they drifted apart. It was like it was more painful because they tried for it so much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
And the craziness of Heer Perera. I laugh in my head whenever I imagine her driving the car maniacally with laughter echoing. Pagal ladki.
And her Jaani Dushmani with Maan. She almost comes as a father who won't be convinced till the end that his daughter can be safe and happy when she is away from him and overprotective about her whenever something happens to her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Z, as promised i am here.
Since SnM is at its end and i need some more of your writing..
I come here.
Hope my presence fills you with same happiness that i am feeling now being at another thread of yours.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

And the craziness of Heer Perera. I laugh in my head whenever I imagine her driving the car maniacally with laughter echoing. Pagal ladki.
And her Jaani Dushmani with Maan. She almost comes as a father who won't be convinced till the end that his daughter can be safe and happy when she is away from him and overprotective about her whenever something happens to her.



Your observations about Heer have been spot on so far and they all have a link too. The way she is so fiercely protective of Geet, the way she doesn't seem to have any contact with her family - one is somewhat a result of the other, I think.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Hey Z, as promised i am here.
Since SnM is at its end and i need some more of your writing..
I come here.
Hope my presence fills you with same happiness that i am feeling now being at another thread of yours.



*Lines up heaters, fireplaces and my hot self* Is this welcome warm enough? 😆

Thanks for being here! It would have been so strange to not have you in my comments section after S&M finishes.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



*Lines up heaters, fireplaces and my hot self* Is this welcome warm enough? 😆

Thanks for being here! It would have been so strange to not have you in my comments section after S&M finishes.



Yes yes..it is enough i can feel the warmth emitting from my screen.
Those heaters and fireplaces wouldn't have been enough but then your presence my hot lady did the magic. ;)

Didn't i mention before that the pleasure is mine.
And dosti ka rule hai madam no sorry no thankyou..DDLJ ne nhi sikhaya.
Ah you make me feel special. :)

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