MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142.

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum!!!
It was raining outside...and there was a girl siting near her balcony door, staring at the dark night with her teary eyes.

Pehle pyaar ka pehla gam...
Pehli baar hai aankhen nam...
Pehla hai tanhai ka ye mausam...
Aaa bhi jao, warna...
Ro denge hum...

At that moment, she felt that her life is also dark like this rainy night without any moonlight n twinkling stars.

Her heart was yarning for that one person who has become her life in last one n a half year. Who's simplest gesture is enough to bring a sweet smile on her face. When he smiles at her...she feels that she is special. And when he talks to her...she feels like she is the luckiest girl in the world.

But now she was missing him so much. It had been just 1 day she didnt saw him n she was missing him so much. Her heart was paining more with the thought that she cant even see him for next 10 days...whole 10
days!!!

And than, she was lost in the memorise of their first meeting!

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(this is my first attempt...forgive mistakes n please let me know if u like it or not!)

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Index:

Teaser

Part1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68342106?tid=3262141

Part2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68410701?tid=3262141

Part3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68576205?tid=3262141

Part4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68777559?tid=3262141

Part5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68861116?tid=3262141

Part6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69030389?tid=3262141

Part7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69421306?tid=3262141

Part8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69936007?tid=3262141

Part9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70313967?tid=3262141

Part10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70548946?tid=3262141

Part11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71417867?tid=3262141

Part12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71931706?tid=3262141

Part13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72428756?tid=3262141

Part14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74040327?tid=3262141

Part15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74474861?tid=3262141

Part16

(a) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75083090?tid=3262141

(B) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75124381?tid=3262141

Part17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76791761?tid=3262141

Part18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77447028?tid=3262141

Part19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78627061?tid=3262141

Part20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79044794?tid=3262141

Part21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79519881?tid=3262141

Part22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/80285818?tid=3262141

Last part

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81438598?tid=3262141

Maan's point of view

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

"pehle pyar ka pehla gham"...sounds refreshing😊

shona darling it was a brilliant frst attempt👍🏼

plz plz do continue dear

meri taraf se green signal hai😉😛

m eagerly waiting to know how they met n where he is goin fr ten days, woh bhi humari geetu ko akele chodkar

thank u dear dat u finally wrote it...luv u 🤗 🤗

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7
"pehle pyar ka pehla gham"...sounds refreshing😊
shona darling it was a brilliant frst attempt👍🏼
plz plz do continue dear
meri taraf se green signal hai😉😛
m eagerly waiting to know how they met n where he is goin fr ten days, woh bhi humari geetu ko akele chodkar
thank u dear dat u finally wrote it...luv u🤗🤗

thank u sweeti!
Per kitni der laga di yaar...mujhe laga tujhe pasand nahi aaya!
Waise, its a teenage story...light hearted.
Its possible that u might find it silly!
..ab bol...do u still want to read more??

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet
thank u sweeti!
Per kitni der laga di yaar...mujhe laga tujhe pasand nahi aaya!
Waise, its a teenage story...light hearted.
Its possible that u might find it silly!
..ab bol...do u still want to read more??

arrey yaar kya batau mera lappy freeze ho jata hai aaj kal😭

yeah somewhere i felt in ur writing dat its a young couple's story dat is y i called it( pehle pyar ka pehla gham)refreshing...see u r successful in ur frst attempt i guessed it right😛

ab kya stamp paper pe likh k du😆

YES I WANT TO READ MORE SAMJHI

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

arrey yaar kya batau
mera lappy freeze ho jata hai aaj kal😭
yeah somewhere i felt in
ur writing dat its a young couple's story dat is y i called it( pehle pyar ka pehla gham)refreshing...see u r successful in ur frst attempt i guessed it right😛
ab kya stamp paper pe likh k du😆
YES I WANT TO READ MORE SAMJHI

okk...madamji!!
As u wish...so be ready!
And thankkk u!🤗