MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Teaser:-
That was one of the most beautiful day of her life...
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That was the day, she first time got the hint of her own feelings!
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And She will cherish it all her life.

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hi!
Here is the trailor of next part...Anyone intrested for the "poori picture"???❓
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do tell me haan!
😊

I am ready😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Pehla nasha pehla khumar naya pyar hai naya intzar 😉
m more dan ready where is update dear????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Part-3
Present:-

Remebring all those beautiful moments spent with him...a sweet smile appeared on her teary face. She loves all those moments, she had spent with him! That was the best time of her life.

As she recalled each and every moment, they were together...their friendship...the fun & masti they had...their comfert level... She now wonder that how could she not realise all this?? She was sach a fool that she never realised her changed behaviour, her own feelings!
She never realised that what they shared was not just friendship only! It was more than just friendship...atleast for her! She didnt know about him...but for her...there relation was special. There bonding was special from starting...there was no hesitation in their friendship...how he used to order her to complete his assignments...he even used to warn her not to talk with those boys whom he disliked.
And she always accepted his orders and agreed to his will. Its Strange...she was not the one who will follow someone's orders that easily. Even her mom says that she is so stubborn and always does what she wanted. But when it comes to him...she can never say no. Its simply not in her to deny him.

Its not like, that they never had any fight. Infect they used to have these little and silly fights very often. They always had their nok-jhok, as if it was their faviorat time pass!
But it never affected their friendship coz no matter how much they would be angry on eachother...they couldnt stay without talking to eachother for long. So, it wouldnt take much time for them to forget their anger and start their plan " monify the buddy". And with little bit of monifying and some more 'sharaarat'...they will be back to their masti & fun.

Just as, once she was searching for her Computer book in her bag...as the next class was of Computer. Then she remebered that it was with maan...so she went to him to get that book.
At first, he tried to prentened that he didnt know about anybook. And then he said that he had forgot it at home.
From that extra sweet smile of his and that glint in his eyes...she was sure that he was lieing. She was getting irritated, as Teacher may come anytime. So she warned him..
Geet-maan mazak mat kar...meri book wapas de! but he was enjoying her irritation and anger...
Maan-arre..maine kaha na main bhul gaya yaar...infact main apni book bhi nahi laya...sachii!
And before she could say anything more to him... The teacher came and she went back to her seat. She was angery on him, that coz of him.. her book will be incomplete.
After that maan tried a lot to get her attention and to return her book...but she just egnored him all the while as she was really angry. She didnt talk to him for rest of the day.

And then next day she was all ready to finish this so called fight of theirs...as she missed talking to him yesterday, so much. And she entered her class... He was already there. As soon as he saw her, he came to her and returned her book...but with two choclates..that too her favourate choclates!
Not only that, he even had completed her book...yesterdays notes and assignments were nicely done in his beautiful handwriting!

Now how can anyone not melt at his sweet monifying? She couldnt help smiling. And she thanked him.
But he was maan na...he replied in his own style...
Maan-ye thank u, tu apne paas rakh...mujhe bas ye chahiye...
and with that he just snached one choclate from her hand!
She was not surprised with this. neither she mind it...but she thought of having some fun...so she faked anger and asked...
Geet-per ye toh tu mere liye laya tha naa??
Maan-haan, toh tujhe de toh di..teri wali. Ab kya main apne hisse ki bhi nahi kha sakta?

She didnt know what to say. He was just impossible.
And he went to his seat...as the class was about to start. But all the while that teasing smile was playing on his lips.





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Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Maan is damn naughty in your story...😆..Why did he give her one extra chocolate at first place when he was going to relish that himself???very bad...😡
You started with a sad note but geet's memories brought a wide smile on my face while reading it..At the end ,i was little sad thinking it all had occurred in past and maaneet are not together at present..anyways loved today's update...very eager to know maan's feelings about geet now...How does he feel for her..
update soon dear..
good going..😛

ps-is this story outcome of your personal experience????😃
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Aha long update kya baat hai... modem thik ho gaya kya????

hm now coming to d update it was beautifully written dear

"Remebring all those beautiful moments spent with him...a sweet smile appeared on her teary face"...dats d beauty of memories they gv u both tears n smile at d same time...isn't it amazing

their fights, anger, care all comes under shade of colorful umbrella called friendship ...agar compensatory miley toh main toh kahun book do char din aur rakh lo yaar😉

luvely update dear😛



Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
lovely update
maan is so naughty...
so sweetly maan malaofy geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
hi dear...superb sweet update! Maan teasing Geet! Well written!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
part 3
lovely part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: palindrome

Maan is damn naughty in your story...😆..Why did he give her one extra chocolate at first place when he was going to relish that himself???very bad...😡

You started with a sad note but geet's memories brought a wide smile on my face while reading it..At the end ,i was little sad thinking it all had occurred in past and maaneet are not together at present..anyways loved today's update...very eager to know maan's feelings about geet now...How does he feel for her..
update soon dear..
good going..😛

ps-is this story outcome of your personal experience????😃

i am glad that u liked this part. I thought that u all may find it silly?
And as for maans feelings for geet...there is little twist!
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And for ps...wat made u to think like that??
Did u find this story that much close to reality that u think k it can be my personal experience??
...and haan, ans honestly dena...okk?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Diva7

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Aha long update kya
baat hai... modem thik ho gaya kya????</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">hm now coming to d
update it was beautifully written dear</font>


"Remebring
all those beautiful moments spent with him...a sweet smile appeared on her
teary face"...
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">dats d beauty of memories they gv u both
tears n smile at d same time...isn't it amazing</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">their
fights, anger, care all comes under shade of colorful umbrella called
friendship ...agarcompensatory miley toh main toh kahun book
do char din aur rakh lo yaar😉


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">luvely
update dear😛

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nahi yaar...ab toh main umeed hi chhod di hai...aur jahan tak long update ki baat hai...the part was like that na, couldnt split in two...feel nahi aati!
And trust me...it was so difficult to type it!
...
... Compansetary chahiye??🤣
but there is no garanty that the one will be compansating u, would be as sweet & cute as maan!🤣

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