MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

PART 18...finally geet realise that she LOVESA maan

beautifully written update shona

PART 19...
poor GEET...
yeh MAAN ko kya hua hai
why he's behaving like this
eagerly waiting for next update yar<img src="http://yoursmiles.org/bsmile/love/b0325.gif" alt="" />

update will be tomorrow!
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL LVLY INNOCENT LV STORY..READ ALL PARTS TOGETHER
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL LVLY INNOCENT LV STORY..READ ALL PARTS TOGETHER

thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-20

Though she was successful in hiding her tears..still that pain & hurt which her heart was feeling, wasnt in her control. She was helpless..didnt knew how to ease that pain..how to console her heart..which used to cry & complain about his indifference!
She had cried whole day and even whole night! But somewhere, her heart tried to reason that he was already so upset on something and she was also teasing him..so it wasnt his fault entirely. There was a hope that everything will be fine.

She had expected him to talk to her the next day.. But he wasnt even looking at her! She waited..& waited..hoping that he will come to her..but it seems that he didnt care! It continued for 3days! Whole 3days he didnt talked to her. That was the first time, that any of their fight had last this long. Each moment of those 3days was painful for her.

It was hard for her to hide her emotions, each time she saw him..she felt choked, helpless..she wanted to talk to him & asked him the reason for his behaviour..his indifference towards her. She even tried ..but he wasnt even ready to look at her..he was avoiding her. She felt meisrable..she didnt even know, what was her fault??
Though she really wished to talk to him..but she cant force him for that..when he wasnt interested!
She tried to distract herself from him & his thoughts..which was not a easy task..still she tried..she really did!

It was time for Economics class & their teacher was on leave..so some other teacher came in the class and asked them to do their assignments.. while the teacher got busy in his own work.
Few students started doing their work..while few were busy..chating with their friends.
She thought to complete her computer assignment which she had to submit after two days.
Seeing that computer book..she remembered how he had completed her assignmemt & had brought her fav chocolates to monify her. That memory brought a smile on her lips. For a moment, she forgot about his behaviour..she forgot that he wasnt talking to her..and she truned to look at him.

He was already looking at her! When their eyes met..he smiled at her sweetly..probably returning her smile which was still there on her lips!
She didnt knew how to react?? Should she feel happy that he returned her smile?? OR she should be angery that he behaved rudely with her & had ignored her all this time??

She truned away and started doing her assignment. After few minutes..she again looked at him..he was still looking at her...may be wanting to say something..but she looked away immediatly. She tried to ignore..but couldnt!
Then she noticed that he was mimiking her actions! Whatever she was doing...he was doing exactly the same!
If she put the pen in her mouth while thinking some points..he did the same..pretending to think seriously. And when she saw that..she pulled it back...again he copied her! If she tried to write..he would too pretend to write.
Then She thought to read something instead of writing. She took out her notes to read.. He too took his textbook and started reading. All the while there was a teasing smile..playing on his lips.
She was getting irritated by his mimiking...but she couldnt deny the excitment & happiness which was there in her heart..on seeing his mischef & naughty self..after a long time.
Nothing else mattered to her at that moment..except the fact..that he wasnt ignoring her anymore..that she was getting her friend back!
His antics were amusing & funny.. She had to try hard to stop her smile... But eventually.. She did smile!



Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb lovely update! Well written! Geet eventually smiles at his antics!

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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc part...
bt wat had happened to maan...
y he was behaving so...
. geet u shuld nt melt so soon...
u shuld teach him lesson n also ask him y he did so...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
loved it...
like is not working...
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Posted: 12 years ago
isiko hi pyar kehte hai...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome 😊 loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
bt y he was angry on her...y he was avoiding her...nw wht happened that he is again in his naughty self...

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