MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 80

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

wat... nxt part wud b d last part of dis FF😲

u cnt do dis to us Shona ...yeah yeah u were vry clear frm d start dat there wud b no pov of maan in dis story ...bt still i wnt to read his pov ...plzzz pretty plzzz
now he's gone...n here she's left wid only questions n tears 😭dats nt fair
nice bt painful update dear ...plzzz do update soon😊

i hav something in mind about maan's pov..but it depends upon the response.
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Posted: 12 years ago

@kalabhas
thank u so much for commenting & liking this story! It means alot to me.
Yes..am ending this os, as u know it was suppose to be the sad one.. And the song is suppose to be for female lead.. I cant include maan's side here..
But i hav something for u all..that i will tell u in nxt part..hope that will satisfy everyone!😊
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-23(Last part)

Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum..
Pehli baar hai aankhein num..

Present:-
It was still raining..she didnt have any clue as to how much time has passed sitting there. Tears were not stoping even after crying for hours. The clouds were still heavy without any intention to stop..just like her heavy heart!
A painful sob erupted..remembering how he was gone without giving her a chance to fix things between them. She had even went behind him...hoping to catch him in his way..but she had been late again...she had ran like a mad person searching him..but he was nowhere around!

Pehla hai tanhai ka ye mausam...

It has been more than two weeks..since they had talked last! And exactly 1day & 9hours..since she has seen him last!
For anyone else..It will be just a day&an half. But for her...it felt like ages! She was carving for his one glance. Though they were not talking to eachother from so many days..but still he used to be there in front of her..she could look at him whenever she wanted..those stolen glances were enough to console her restless heart. But now she couldnt even do that! She really missed him.

Today was the first day of their vaction..and she was already missing him so much..then how she is going to spent whole 10days without seeing him???

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5 DAYS LATER:-


Her days starts with a hope..&prayer to her babaji that she could see him once.. and ends with tears of disappointment & helplessness..& longing in her heart!
She used to be lost in his thoughts.. Will he be missing her?? Is he still mad at her?? Will he talk to her ever again?? Will he accept her friendship back??
Again so many question..and like always..she doesnt have any answers!

***

It was diwali! Everyone was busy in prepration for the evening. She also used to do everything with excitment..as diwali is her favourte festival! But..this time..she wasnt interested in anything. She was doing what ever her mom asked her to do..but there wasnt any excitment like before.
Her sister asked her to make rangoli..which she loves to do. Every year..she used to make it.. But now she denied that also!

She was just sitting in a corner..lost in her own world.. When the landline rang!
"geet..phone toh utha..!"..her mom called from the kichen.
She went to pickup the phone relucantly..
"Hello..?"..she spoke..really not interesting in talking!
But the voice on the other side made her shock!! It took her a few seconds to realise that she was still on phone..when the person on the other side.. spoke again..
Alone tear escaped her eyes & a slight smile came on her lips..
"MAAN..!!!"..she wisphered!


Aa bhi jao..
Warna..
Ro denge hum..!!!



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here is the last part of this OS. Thank u so much for ur support & encouragment!😊
I couldnt include maan's pov as the song is meant for the girl only! So this was geet's side of story till now.
And now that phone call from maan!
Why maan called her now? Did he have same or some feelings for her too?? Or he was just missing his best friend?? So many questions! uff!
I am ready to answer them all. But first tell me...how many of u are interested in knowing maan's side of story??
If got good response from readers.. I will write maans side of story as a Sequal of this OS!!
I hav everything decided..even the title!
So tell me..do u want maan's pov as another OS..???
-Shona.


Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
plzz give maan's pov...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nyc part..
N story ended... Wel i din expect it to end like this..
I badly need maans pov...
Wat to know his feelings... Y he behaved so...wat he thinks...
So yes for sequel
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Posted: 12 years ago
want a clear ending dear...diwali brought happiness in geet's life...

wonderful ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt one...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
of course wants to knw maans POV...
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Posted: 12 years ago
me raising my both hands fr second part of dis OS😛 ...btw r u planning to write a trilogy ????😉
in frst part geet's pov, second part maan's pov ...n in third part maaneet's blossoming love
so diwali brings d much awaited happiness in her lyf !!!!!!!... waise shona u r such a tease... u stopped at a vry wrong point ...kya kaha maan babu ne ????...is dat d call of happiness or ????

waiting
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waiting
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waiting
fr second part of it😳
n Congratulations fr successfully completing frst part of ur frst story 🥳🤗
i enjoyed it a lot😃 ...bt i wont leave u untill u giv d second part n thn third 😆 😆

Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updt...beautifully written...would like to know maans POV and also answers to all the questions...Why maan called her now? Did he have same or some feelings for her too?? Or he was just missing his best friend?? ...updt sooon...

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