MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to "world of writing" shona...
very good and promising start...
😊
Lets see how our hero had met heroine and how he had made her love him so much that she could not bear to stay away from him even for 10 days..
continue soon...
ps-sorry for commenting so late..
whole day power cut here...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
KOI SHAK MY LORD😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: palindrome

Welcome to "world of writing" shona...

very good and promising start...
😊
Lets see how our hero had met heroine and how he had made her love him so much that she could not bear to stay away from him even for 10 days..
continue soon...
ps-sorry for commenting so late..
whole day power cut here...

thank u so much palin!
As u already know i hav never tried this...its my first story...
But I will try my best!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Diva7


KOI SHAK MY LORD😆

not at all!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
part 1
nice...
though very short one...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Part-2

After that day, they started sharing notes and helping eachother in studies. As time passed, they become good friends. They used to hav fun playing pranks on others, they were like a team! They liked eachothers company... Even in break times, they will be together most of the time. And after school, they will meet at tution class.

Tum jo nahi toh...
Duniyaa humko...
Achhi nahi lagati hai...
Tum jo nahi toh...
Baat koi ho...
Sachhi nahi lagati hai...
Humne dil ko samjhaya..
Humne dil ko samjhaya..
Sau baton se behlaya...
Lekin dil ka dard nahi hota kam...

All this was new for geet. Whenever, she talkd to him, she felt sum diffrent feelings. She used to like spending time with him. She was not able to understand that wat was happening to her.
But she just knew only one thing that she liked it when he would talk to her, when he would tease her, when he would spent his time with her, when he would take her side n team up with her. She just luvd the thought that she is the one who is so close to him in the whole class nd his best friend!

And he also used to irritate her to get her attention. Like, when she would be lost solvings problems if they had any free class...he would hit her with chalks nd when she would turn around, he would pretend to be busy... And if she would catch him aiming at her with that chalk in his hand...he would just smile at her...and would say, "time pass kar raha tha yaar...bahut bore ho raha hai!"
And when she will be sucessful to solve some toughest or hard sums n broblems...he would tease her by saying.."arre ab bas kar yaar..pehle hi Computer dimaag hai..aur padh k kya karegi!"

He was always up for his "mission irritate geet" and she just luvd it! She loved it when he would try to irritate her...tease her.
She luvd it more,when he would snatch her book to get her attention nd then they would fight for that book. It was all normal for them.

She was unware of all these feelings that time. She was changing..but she didnt even realised it.
She will be so excited to go to school just with the thought that she would meet him n can be with him. And than after school...she would rush to tutions a little early to share that walk with him to the class nd then back home!

She even started to hate Sundays...coz that day she couldnt meet or see him. And Monday become her fav...as she would get to see him, meet him nd spent time with him ...after that "one long day" (sunday).
But to her relif...there would be tutions even on Sundays... In exam times.
And thats why she now luv exams so much!

Aaa bhi jao..warna..
Ro denge hum...


Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
That was really cute..
Geet is in love with him head over heels..If properly said,"pagal ho chuki hai pyar mein.."otherwise no sane mind would hate "Sundays" and love "exams"..😆
Anyways loved their bonding as "school friends"..😛..
Good going girl..
eagerly waiting for more..😊

PS- a kind suggestion cum request for you..
Try to avoid using short forms or SMS language while "writing"..I mean like luved instead of loved..hav instead of have..It lessen the fun of "reading" for me...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
it was so sweet n luvly 😛
maan is a naughty boy😉
remind me my ishcoool days😆...so geet is all gaga over our munda😳😉...
now m curious to know maan's pov
cute update dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: palindrome

That was really cute..

Geet is in love with him head over heels..If properly said,"pagal ho chuki hai pyar mein.."otherwise no sane mind would hate "Sundays" and love "exams"..😆
Anyways loved their bonding as "school friends"..😛..
Good going girl..
eagerly waiting for more..😊

PS- a kind suggestion cum request for you..
Try to avoid using short forms or SMS language while "writing"..I mean like luved instead of loved..hav instead of have..It lessen the fun of "reading" for me...

thank u so much palin for liking it! And yes, geet pehle pyaar me pagal hai...its a totally diffrent n new feeling for her!
And i already had that "sms language" thing in mind but wat to do yaar??...its hell a lot difficult to type on cell...thats why the updates r short!
Btw, if u hav any more suggetions or there is any mistake...plz do tell me...it will help me improve!
Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Diva7

it was so sweet n luvly😛

maan is a naughty boy😉
remind me my ishcoool days😆...so geet is all gaga over our munda😳😉...
now m curious to know maan's pov
cute update dear😊

ohh...so who was the naughty one in ur school.?? Jiski yaad, maan ne dila di??
..dekho diva sharmao mat...🤣 doston se kya shupana yaar!
..
Ps:wat will u say, agar main kahoon that their wont be maans side or point of view in this OS.
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago

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