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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi!
I am shona. And here i am with another maaneet story. That is "Pal-pal soch me aana na.."

Basically, its a sequel of my first OS "Pehle pyar ka pehla gum!!!" which was entirly geets POV...her pain of her First LOVE!
And now this OS has the other side of the story...means Maan's side of story.. His POV.. What he feels..why he behaved the way he did!
So lets start the journey with maan this time..😊

** for those who want to read geets side of story..here is the link..
Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum!!!

Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 12 years ago

Prologue:-
After much thinking.. He picked up the phone & dialed the landline number once again. He was so nervouss & uncertain that his fingers were littraly shaking. Suddenly he cut the call..even before it could be connected..just like he has been doing from last half an hour.
He was afraid..what if someone else picked it up?? What he will say then?? He was really nervouss...but at the same time..the longing to hear that sweet voice was too much to bear OR ignore.
It has been so many days that he had heared that voice. Finally making up his mind..he took a deep breath & once again dialed the number & he closed his eyes waiting for someone to pickup..wishing& praying that someone to be the one..whom he wanted.
"Hello..??" ..he snapped open his eyes...recognaising the voice & its owner. His heart started beating so fast hearing that voice af ter almost whole three weeks.. He felt so many emotions filling his heart in that one moment. He felt happy, excited & a calm setteling in his heart replacing the restlessness which he has been feeling from past few days. At the same time..there was nervousness, uncertainty.. What he was going to say now?? What excuse he will give for calling suddenly?? & most important.. The reaction.. How that person on the other side will react??..after knowing that its him on the line..!

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 12 years ago

Index

Part1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84646901?tid=3563163

Part2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88171999?tid=3563163

Part3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88325277?tid=3563163

Part4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88427312?tid=3563163

Part5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90144618?tid=3563163

Part6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91166192?tid=3563163

Part7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92133244?tid=3563163

Part8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94052774?tid=3563163

Part9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94180525?tid=3563163

Part10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94862053?tid=3563163

Part11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97183555?tid=3563163

Part12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98678090?tid=3563163

Last part

A)https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99000948?tid=3563163

B) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99001315?tid=3563163

Next OS- Keh doon unkahi..

Edited by Shonameet - 6 years ago

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

I am so glad you started it...

Maan's POV was something I was waiting for so long{may be since the first chapter of pehle pyar ka..}...

Finally we would get to know the other side of coin,specially the reason behind maan's rudeness and ignorance sometime{and I hope,it wasn't his pregnancy..😆}

Love you shona..

waiting for next very eagerly...😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago