MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 26

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Hi thanks 4 da awesum teaser...update soon
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Part-11

Strangly, even after spending a long sleepless night, she didnt felt any tiredness next morning... Instead, she was filled with a new energy & excitment. As if, all the tiredness was gone...just with the thought of seeing him again. And that caused a sweet smile to appear on her lips.
She hurriedly got ready for school. She didnt wanted to be late...and miss even a second of being with him. Wishing a "bye" to her mum...she rushed out of the house!

She was never this much excited for school...all that she could think was... only about him. And with each step she took...the excitment was increasing. Every thing felt different...&...beautiful! ...her surrounding felt diffrent...suddenly this morning felt more good... na..not just good...it felt better and soothing. All the while her lips were carring that smile...didnt even know why?... but she felt that everything was smiling back to her!

She was walking lost in her own thoughts...she came out of their locality & was going towards the main road...as she turned at the next corner which connects to the main road...
.. Suddenly her step become slow on their own accord...she felt as if she couldnt move ahead... Till now she was so excited... But now..there was a nervousness in her heart along with that excitment.
Her heart was beating so fast...she couldnt explain! She was confused...wat to do? How to react? She was not able to think anything that time.

All the time from last night...she was restless... She had wished only one thing... waited for this moment so egarly... But she didnt thought that she will be nervouss like this... ..With just seeing him from far!
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Yes!...
He was coming from the other side!
She didnt knew that her Babaji will grant her wish so soon and that too like this.
She was not prepare for this "Surprise"...she felt nervous suddenly...for the first time she felt nervous to face him!

He smiled at her...as soon as he noticed her. She did return that smile...trying to hide her nervousness...while her heart was running at jet speed..with all this strange nervousness mixed with excitment.
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As he took fast steps to cover the distance between them... She felt that the nervousness was taking over the excitment!
She didnt had any idea..that why was she getting nervous at the first plcae??
He was not any stranger... Nor she was meeting him for the first time!!
He is "maan" ...her best friend!
.. Than why?? Why this strange nervousness sudenly??

She kept looking at him..with these questions in her heart...untill he reached her!
Maan-Good morning!! ...he wished her!
Geet-Good morning! ...she replied with her racing heart... She wanted to say "Best morning" insted... Coz she really felt that!

They were walking towards their destination(school)...
.. It was not the first time that they were walking together like this... But again it felt diffrent...it felt like it was the very first time...actully it felt good!
They were talking about studies & upcoming exams...and for the first time she was not so intrested in that topic...
... Instead, she was busy in a more intresting task...of stealing glances at him every now & then.
And whenever he would turned look at her...she would pretened to look at the road ahead.

It was a totally new feeling...she did felt that it was all silly & stupid things...she was doing...
But it felt so good...she was liking that feeling...that nervousness mixed excitment!!!


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Hi!!
Sorry for disappearing like that...without any notice!
Coz of sum personal issue...i was unable. And now also...i wont be regular for few more days... But i will surely try to update.
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I dont know...if this part will be upto ur expectations or not...even am feeling nervous like geet...
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Fingers crossed!
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Do tell...wat u feel about this one!
- Shona.
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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nice part
thanks for the pm
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only love can make you like the nervousness...
wonderful part shona..
hope everything is fine in your personal life now..waiting for your regular updates..
love
palin...
Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Geet is nervous to face Maan because she realized her feelings towards him...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Originally posted by: palindrome

only love can make you like the nervousness...hmm...Shayad!!

wonderful part shona..{thank u dearu😃}
hope everything is fine in your personal life now..waiting for your regular updates..haan..yaar! Things are little better now! Will try to be regular...lets see!
lovelove u too!🤗
palin...

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Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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part 11
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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kya geet abhi tak saajh nehi paye yeh pyar hai...magar kya maan bhi aisa hi mehsoos karta hai...

beautiful update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Geet restless ! Well written! update soon

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