MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
@palluu..
Miss. India, kahan gayab ho gai hai yaar?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet

@palluu..
Miss. India, kahan gayab ho gai hai yaar?

pta nahi yaar lagta hai diwali vacation par hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww frst of all thank u soo much dear, dat u dedicated dis ice cream filled yummilicious update to us 🤗
m relishing dis delicious update 😆 bas darr hai kahi itni thand mein phir se cold na ho jaye😆
vry tasty😆 n cute update dear
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Originally posted by: Shonameet

Update chahiye kya???

neki aur puch puch😲
jaldi do... me intazaar karing😃
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Goldie congratulations
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-8

After releshing their favourate Ice-creams, they resumed their walk. And again they got busy in their talks... Geet-Aaj kitna maza aaya na!
Maan-haan!
Lekin...ye maza double ho jata...agar kal school ki chhuti hoti!
Pata nahi itni-si baat...school walon ke samajh me kyun nahi aati??

Geet-Achha???
Aur aaj jo chhuti mili parhai se...wo??
Aur next week se jo exams start hone wale hai...uska kya??

Maan-arre...itna serious kyun ho rahi hai yaar!
Main toh tere liye hi bol raha hoon, waise bhi...mujhe nahi lagta ke tu kal subh time pe uthegi bhi...you are so lazy!

oh god he can never change! Even at this hour...being so tired...he still has so much energy...specially to irritate her!
But...she cant let him win...never! She didnt wanted to that...but did she had any choice??
She turned facing him...she replied while taking back step...
Geet-ahan...mujh se bada lazy toh tu hai!
Tabhi toh... Aunty ko roz khud tujhe uthana padta hai...
"MUNNA...uth na...der ho jayegi!"

and she got the desired effect on him of her comment. She knew...that she was in trouble now.
So... she truned..and ran for her life...

He was really angry with her this time...he shouted at her...
Maan-geeettt!
Rukk...
I am warning u!

he was so fast...he caught her in next few seconds... And twisted her hand at her back...his hold was firm... but not hurting her!
Maan-ab bol...kya bol rahi thi??
Geet-Sorry!...sorry!it was the best thing to do at that time...she thought!
Maan-kyun?...ab kya hua?...wo bol na jo pehle bol rahi thi??? and he pressed her hand a littlet harder...
Geet-bola na sorry..yaar!
Plz!!
he left her hand...but didnt accepted her sorry this time...and started walking...ignoring her!

She ran behind him...he was looking really upset...
Geet-maan...sorry na yaar...maaf kar de...next time aisa nahi hoga..plz..plz!
but he didnt even looked at her!
She tried again...
Geet-Plz...if u want...main bhi "special sorry" bolne ko taiyaar hoon...plz..maan ja! but no use!

She felt bad that after spending such a wonderful day & that yummy Ice-cream treat...she had made him upset.
She was busy...in thinking ways to monify him and make him accept her "Sorry"...she didnt realised when they reached near her home.

She was still going ahead...when felt, that he had stoped walking! She looked at him & then her surroundings...and realised that they were standing near her house.
She kept standing there for few minutes...waiting for him to say something...
when he still didnt said anything...
Geet-itna gussa hai??
Bye bhi nahi bolega??
she didnt wanted to go like that...
Maan-bye!...good night! she felt some relife...that atleast...he talked to her...
Geet-good night!
Bye!

She was going towards her house...when heard him calling her...
She stoped & turned facing him...
he came to her...said with in a serious tone...
Maan-mera "special sorry" bhulna mat!...aur haan...main soch ke bataaunga ke mujhe kya chahiye...
Waise bhi, tujh jaisi Kanjus se roj-roj thodi aise "gifts aur treats" milti hai!
with that he smiled at her...
And She just loved that smile so much...
She thanked god thousand times...that he was back to his teasing & mischief mood..once again.

For the first time...instead of getting irritated with his taunt... She was so happy...and she didnt mind him calling her KANJUS.
She just smiled at him sweetly...
Geet-pakka promise!
I will do watever u say!
she couldnt stop her smile & ran to her house...shouting...
Geet-Bye..bye...MAANU..you are so CUTE! she didnt looked back...stoped only at her house door.

She rang the bell...her sister opened the door.
When she truned to close the door...she saw him...he was still standing there...waiting for her to go inside.
She smiled and waved at him...he waved back...smiling...mouthing a good night!
And then, he went towards his home...she kept looking at him...untill he truned at the corner.


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this is the longest part ...of this OS.
...
Check this out...
My first maaneet ff-

Musical Maaneet...a musical love saga!!
...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69915726
do tell me...wat u feel!
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear.
continue soon .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Wonderfully written! Maan is so sweet! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Munna...!!!!😆
I am so happy finally i got to know his nick name..😈{ok only one..hope i would be aware of rest ones very soon...}..
really enjoyed this long update...
and yes everyone needs a day off after school picnic..i am unable to understand why school faculty can't understand this...
waiting for geet's special sorry..
and loved the caring gesture of maan at the end...a big hug to munna for this...
very cutely and beautifully written shona...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 8
lovely part...
cute moments...
cont soon dear...

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