MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142. - Page 48

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

oh shona u r doin full justice wid dis teenage luv story dearšŸ˜›{thank u so much divz 😊 i was really nervous yaara!}

u know dear i was all in action šŸ˜† n mentally chillaying buck up geetu ...jst IGNORE himšŸ˜†{šŸ˜† and see ur geetu did listened u... but only for few seconds šŸ˜†}
bt alas !!!!!!all gone in drain as she started missing him n panicking over dat gadhašŸ˜† { šŸ˜† gadha hai... ullu hai jaisa bhi hai... she loves him na sweety! toh fiker toh hogi na! 😊}..n in last she gav him a smile...then i thought ... dats exactly how a teenage heart will react{ bilkul...aakhir its ISHQ WALA LOVE and masoom + naadaan dil šŸ˜‰} ...good job šŸ‘{love you sooo much! šŸ¤— }
waiting fr nxt part eagerly dear 😳 {aaye haaye..."main waari jaawan" itna kyun lal ho rahi hai tu. kahin kuch yaad toh nahi aa gaya?šŸ˜‰}

{next part is coming in few hours. ahbi am going for pooja dear!😊}

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

awesum story...sumthing so different and so real...beautifully written...love the way u r portraying maneet frndship, then geets changing feelings fr maan...simply superb...jst read it in one go...continue soo...awesum romantic teaser...will it be maneet or maan with sumbody else?????????updt soon...plzzz do pm me...


thank you so much for the comment dear. and welcome to my thread...hope u will like the coming parts as well.😊
and about the teaser... u will get ur answer very soon šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Get restless bt happy wen she sees Maan! update soon! wonderfully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-16(B)
And then they were back to their old self.. As if last day's fight never happened. And she also didnt mentioned anything about his last days behaviour.
Thats how, it was between them. She was unable to show any anger on him. She was helpless..as her heart was not in her control.
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Things were looking normal once again. Everything was going smooth. And then she realised that its her own feelings which were complicating things for her & was affecting her friendship with him. So..to avoid any more problems..she decided to control her emotions..as may be she was the only one, who was feeling their friendship to be something more special..more deep! Whereas for him...it was just friendship..nothing more!

It was difficul..but still she was trying to control her heart...saying that "he doesnt feel like that for you!"
But her heart would some times argue back that he does feel something about her..if not the same!
And she would be unable to say anything more..as she also had felt it many times. His gesture had made her to think like that.

It was rainy season. But that day, the sky was clear and it didnt looked that it will rain. So, she didnt took the umbrella while going for tution. She had walked more than half distance, when suddenly it started to rain slightly. She walked with fast steps and managed to reached the tution class, just before the rain become heavy. All the while there class was going on, it was raining continously.

When the class ended, it was still raining. Like her, meera also hadnt brought her umbrella..so they decided to wait for rain to stop or slow down..as all three cant go in pinky's umbrella!
When he saw her standing there, he asked her as to why she was still standing there?? And after knowing the reason, he offered, "toh..tu mere sath chal na!!" she denied first, but he was not listening & then the rain was also not stoping. she agreed..as meera & pinky also told the same. And she went with him!

She didnt wanted to think on that line again, but she did felt good that he cared about her. And her heart was excited with this realisation.
She was not able to say anything...coz of the way her heart was beating so fast. It was him...talking occassionaly and she answering when needed. She just wanted to feel that moment..with him, walking in that rain, under the same umbrella.
When they reached at the point, where from both had to go in different directions, she told him that she will manage from there, as the rain had slow down then. But he did not agreed. Inteasd he suggested that she should take the umbrella and he can go as his home wasnt that far. After arguing for few minutes, he said with finalty, "Maine bola na..tu leke jaa.. Toh bas!" And then he gave that umbrella in her hand.
Saying a bye, he went away...with fast steps.

May be it was nothing so big for him to do that. But for her, it was! His that caring gesture had touched her heart deeply! She kept standing there for few seconds, looking in the direction he went..with that smiling face.
Then started walking towards her home...smiling to herself.
She was happy...her heart was happy. And the excitment was so much that she wasnt able to control. So when she saw that little puddle in the middle of the road...she just once looked around to see if anyone was there. After confirming that the road was empty...she just jumped in that puddle...splashing that muddy water on the road & on herself . And then laughed freely...like a carefree kid!

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first again 😃
This is not fair. Galat waqt par full stop lagaya Still waiting fro this.
I love everything about the rain. Garam chai, pakode, sochke bhi muh mein pani aa raha rain. Cloudy weather and rain are the best for romancešŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
R
edited ...
aww jumping in muddy water was jst awsm ...n specially after checking if nobody's watching šŸ˜‰
she's so cute ...luv her ...bada haq jamate hain maan babu šŸ˜‰...kya baat hai feeling something something honey bunny toko toko...aah dats hell irritating song šŸ˜†
yaar dis heart n mind talk is making our kudi's lyf miserable ...kuch hint de na maanu ki taraf se ...all dis caring nature of his is jst a sign of beautiful frndship or there's something more to it????
liked d update so much dear😊




Edited by Diva7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

May be it was nothing so big for him to do that. But for her, it was!

"This one line said it all..."

She is in love with him head over heels...!!

When geet was jumping in that muddy water,I could easily visualize the happiness on her face..In love if "smallest and silliest"of things hurts,then "smallest and silliest" things can make you happiest person on the earth too..!!!

His one gesture of care towards her made her day..!!!

On the other hand,my mind is stuck at one point..Why maan was late in the class in the previous chapter...

Call me silly but the reason that my heart gave me was may be he was busy shedding tears whole night after his fight with geetu...and then he got up very late next morning...šŸ˜›

yahi reason tha kya shona????

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 16 A
nice lovely part dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
add me to ur pm list dear
pm me too when u update
super one
is it OS or converted into FF or SS?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

And his one smile solved everything...

aww...
Can i get any cuter???
Your geet is such a darling..
i so much can relate with her..Her decision of ignoring him and then restlessness of her heart at not finding him on his seat..
when he arrived finally,his one smile and all her resolutions of not speaking to him and ignoring him went in to drain...!!!
Love makes you "helpless" in true sense ...


u know...mujhe tujhe marne ka mann kar raha hai!
Uff...kitna dara diya tune mujhe..pata hai?
I was all ready so nervous..aur uper se ye "ress"...kal se... i was so restless!
Ab tujhe iska punishment milega..for making me wait!

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