Gustakh Dil...(completed..)

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Gustakh Dil..
ACP Arjun Rawte:-handsome..dashing..supercop,inteligent,short-tempered...
Miss Riya mukherji:-ETF girl..smart,inteligent,always smile,love the music..
Mr.Sameer Rathod:-ETF,chief,young handsome..friend of Arjun
Shree:-a technical expert of ETF..& Riya's best friend from childhood..
Chotu:-commondo of ETF..friend of Shree & Riya..
Liza:-forensic expert of ETF..
Sonali Rathod:- Sameer loving wife..& later become good friend of Riya..
hello..guys..starting this new FF..hope you like it..
Chapter 1:-
Chapter 2:-
Chapter 3:-
Chapter 4:-
Chapter 5:-
Chapter 6:-
Chapter 7:-
Chapter 8:-
Chapter 9:-
Chapter 10:-
Chapter 11:-
Chapter 12:-
Chapter 13:-
Chapter 14:-
Chapter 15:-
Chapter 16:-
Chapter 17:-
Chapter 18:-
Chapter 19:-
Chapter 20:-
Chapter 21:-
Chapter 22:-
Chapter 23:-
Chapter 24:-
Chapter 25:-
Chapter 26:-
Chapter 27:-
Chapter 28:-
Chapter 29:-
Chapter 30:-
Chapter 31:-
Chapter 32:-
Chapter 33:-
Chapter 34:-
Chapter 35:-
Chapter 36:-
Chapter 37:-
Chapter 38:-
Chapter 39(last Chapter):-
Epilouge:-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing Character Sketch :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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character sketch same hai interesting plzzz post the chapter... :)
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nice cs continue soon looking forward to read it.
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interesting ...pls add the chapter soon ...Thanx for the PM
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amazing ch sketch
updt soon 1stchapter
best of luck fr new work
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Awesome cs.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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1st of all welcm back dr with nw ff
Cont soon
Thanx 4 pm me
Add me in ur pm list
Cs awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Are dear ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai...

U should order us...we, aremready to comment...lol

Dear ur ariya ff is really out of world and took us to ariya dreamland...

I love to read ariya romance...it automatically creat smile ojmmy face...


Please please update soon...

And thank you so much for the pm...im waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gustakh Dil...

Arjun is looking very lovingly to Riya..& holding her hand..

Arjun(looking to her eyes):-Riya..jabse tum meri zindgi me aayi ho..meri zindgi ko badal diya he tumne..Riya..kya issi tarah hamesha tum meri zindgi me..meri banakar rahogi..will you be mine..?I love you so much Riya..will you marry me..?

Riya is very happy & just manage to nodded positively..

He hugeed her..she also hug back to him..

He broke off..looking to her eyes..

Arjun:-Riya..

His lips come more near to her..& he started kissing her..

Riya get up suddenly..

Riya:-ohhh..

She look hear & there..he was not there..

She hit her head by her hand..

Riya:-ye toh had ho gayi Ritz..kya kya sapne dekhti rehati he..(she blush..)aaj toh sidhe kiss..(she blush again..)

Her alarm starts ringing..

Riya:-Ritz...tuze utane ke liye toh ab alarm ki bhi zarurat nahi he..Arjun sir ke dreams hi kafi he..woh tere pass aye nahi ke dream khatam aur nind bhi bhag jati he..

She smile to herself..& turn to get ready to go office..

ETF Office:-

Riya enter in the conference hall..only shree has come yet..

Riya:-hi..Shree..are ye kya Arjun sir ab tak nahi aye..

Before Shree could answer her..Chotu enters in the room..

Chotu:-ate hi Arjun sir ke bare me puchti he..kabhi kabhi ye bhi puch liya kar..ke are Chotu ab tak nahi aaya..?

Shree & Chotu laugh..while Riya also give them dimple smile..

Chotu & Riya sits on chairs of either side of Shree..

Shree look to Riya..

Shree:-Riu..aaj tu ne sapne me kya dekha..?

Riya(looking suprizingly to him):-kya..?

Shree:-dekh ye suprizing look muze mat dikha..bata na aaj tu ne sapne me kya dekha..?

Chotu:-are kya dekha hoga..?hamesha ke tarah Arjun sir ko datate hue dekha hoga..aur kya..?

Shree(to Chotu):-are..chotu..kabhi kabhi apni aakho ka istemal kiya kar..dikh nahi raha kya..aaj Riu kitani blush kar rahi he..

Chotu look to Riya..

Shree:-ab bata bhi Riu..

Riya:-Shree..ab tu chup bait ha..warna..me tuze ..

Shree:-muze kya..?

Suddenly the door get open..Arjun enters in conference hall in his own style..he has ware this dress..

She is lost in him..& looking to him without blinking her eyelids..

He gives look to the trio..

Shree immigiately hit Riya's leg..she come to present & lower her gaze..& look to Shree from corner of her eyes..

Shree is smirking to her..

Riya(mutter in Shree's ear):-lagata he..aaj toh meri sasse hi ruk jayegi..

Shree (gives her naughty smile..& mutter in her ears..):-You are just crazy for him..

Arjun sits on his usual chair..look to the trio..who are still looking to him from their corner of eyes..

Arjun:-what..?kuch kaam nahi he kya tum logo ko..?

Shree hurrily starts his tab..Chotu take a file in his hand..

But Riya seems to still lost in him..Arjun look her..

Arjun(loudly):-what Riya..?tumhe kuch special invitation dena padega kam suru karne ke liye..

She come to reality..& starts reading the file infront of her..

Rathod comes to the room..look the trio..& then Arjun..

Rathod(in mind):-itani jaldi inn logo ne kaam suru kar diya..jarur Arjun ne data hoga..(looking to arjun)ye Arjun bhi na..bechare tino ko hamesha datata rehata he..(he smrik & then sit to his usual chair...)

After sometime..they starts discussing about the case they solved last night..

Rathods phone started ringing..

After 5 minutes..

Rathod:-guys..we have a case..Mr.Mehta jo ke ek bade businessman he unaki lash mili he..Shree unaki call details aur bank transaction ki details nikalo..Chotu aur mein jakar unaki family se milte he..aur Arjun aur Riya tum dono jakar crime spot pe dekho ke kuch sabut milta he ya nahi...

They all leave to their respective work..

Arjun & Riya are sitting in SUV..Arjun is driving..& Riya is sitting beside to him..

Riya(in mind):-uff..kitane hansome lag rahe he yaar Arjun sir aaj..par ye aur inaka gussa..ate hi kaise gussa ho gaye the..inhe toh bas bahana chahiye hamper chillane ka..(looking to Arjun from corner of her eyes..)aur ham tino se toh inaki jaise koi dushmni he..ek saal ho gaya he inhe hamare sath kam karte hue..par aaj tak kabhi pyar se baat nahi ki..inhe sirf Rathod sir hi control kar lete he..woh bhi isliye ke woh dono best friends he..bas rathod sir ke sath hi accha behave karte he..aur hamare sath..?umm..Riu..tera spana toh sapna hi banake reh jayega..

Arjun(looking to her):-agar tum mere bare me jo bhi soch rahi ho woh ho sochana ho gaya ho toh...muze jara crime spot ka address fir se bataogi..

She broke of from her thinking..& told him the address..

She look out of window..

Riya(in mind):-ohh.Riya..jara bachke..he is simply gr8..aaj inhe ye pata chal gaya ke tu inake bare me soch rahi he..kal ko ye bhi pata chal jayega ke kya sochti he..

They reach to crime spot..Riya still lost in thinking..& remembering her dream..there is slight smile on her face..

Arjun:-Riya..tumhari tabiyat thik he na..?

Riya(suprized..):-kya..?

Arjun:-tumhari tabiyat thik he na..?

Riya:-haa sir..

Arjun:-toh lash ko dekhkar muskura kya rahi ho..?

Riya:-kya..?oh no..mein toh kuch aur hi soch rahi thi..

Arjun(angrily):-toh ab jara case ke bare me socho..

They make investigation at the crime spot..then reach to again office.. after lunch,all discuss evidences they got..

After sometime Rathod is in his cabin while Arjun is reading some file in conference room..Chotu is talking to someone on phone related to the case..while Shree & Riya are looking to Shree's tab..Shree is telling something to her..Liza enters in the room..

Liza(looking to Shree):-hey specky..tum hamesha iss tab me kya dekhte rehata ho..?

Shree(in irrited tone):-isse tumhe kya..?aur kitani bar bola he.. don't call me specky..

Liza smiles..& winked yo Riya..

Arjun:-kya kar rahe ho tum log..?shati se kam nahi kar sakte ho kya..?aur tum Liza..kya tumhe yad dilana padega ke abhi tak Mr.Mehata ki postmartum report baki he aur jo muze jald se jald chahiye..smaze ya samazau..

Liza make a face & leave from there..

After sometime she submit the report to Arjun..Mr.Mehta was killed by a very rare poison..

Rathod gives work to Shree & Riya to collect all information related to that poison..& he leaves to his cabin..while Arjun also leaves from there.

Shree:-uff..ek kam khatam hua nahi ke dusara mil gaya..

Riya also nodded to him in disbelief..

Liza:-ye Arjun sir..kitane khadoos he..inaki exactly problem kya he..?jab dekho tab kisi na kisi ko datate rehate he..

The trio look to her..Liza has joined the ETF just before 1 month..& she don't know anything about Arjun's Past..

Chotu:-dekho Liza..woh aise hi he..

Liza:-I can't belive ke koi itana rude ho sakta he..

Riya(sadly):-ha ho sakta he..tum aisa keh rahi he kyo ki tum unake bare me kuch nahi janati..

Liza:-ohh..god..Riya..tum har bar unaki side leti ho..

Shree:-liza..Riu..thik keh rahi he..

Liza:-what do you mean..?

Chotu:-are..isse toh kuch bhi pata nahi..sun..Arjun sir ki wife he na..Roshni..woh unhe chodkar chali gayi he..

Liza:-kya..?chodkar chli gayi..?haa..kyo na koi aisa kare..itane khadoos insaan ke sath koi kitane dino tak reh sakta he..?

Riya(angrily):-stop it..what the hell you are talking about him..?aur Chotu..tu thik se words use nahi kar sakta..Arjun sir ke bare me kuch bhi rumors mat bata..

Liza:-rumors..?

Riya:-haa..actually his wife is missing from almost 1 & half year..noone knows where she is..

Liza:-toh isaka matalab yahi he na..ke woh sir ko chodake..

Riya:-nahi..isaka matlab ye nahi he..woh toh sir se bahot pyar karti thi..aur sir bhi unase bahot..

Liza:-toh fir..?

Riya:-sir ko shak he ke unake kisi dusman ne unhe gayab kiya he..

Chotu:-aur ye sari bate tuze kaise pata..?

Riya:-sonali ne batayi thi..jab 1 mahine pehale ham sab Rathod sir ke ghar party me gaye the..sonali ka birthday tha tab..

Chotu:-oh..

Liza:-ye toh bahot bura hua unake sath..par..isaka matlab ye toh nahi ke sara gussa hamper utar de..

Shree:-ya..you are right..he is really all the time bursted on us..

They all started their work again..

Rathod who hears the four's conversation..

Rathod(in mind):-pata nahi ye Arjun kab sambhalega..1 & half years ho chuke he..sari koshish kar li he Roshni ko dundne ki par koi pata nahi chala usaka..par Arjun kitane dino tak aise hi rahe ga..woh tum logo par gussa nahi he Shree..actually woh khud pe hi gussa he..

Arjun in his cabin:-

His phone started ringing..he look to mobile screen..it's his home's number..he worrily take the phone..& he come to know that his father has seriously ill..& has to admit to hospital..

Arjun hurrily walked out of office..he reach to the home..upto that ambulance also has came..

He admit his father to hospital..after sometime his father get somewhat out of danger..he goes to see his father..

Arjun:-baba..kya he ye..?dekha meine kha tha na ke aap ko aage ki treatment ke liye US jana chahiye..par aap he ke manate hi nahi..(his father has detected a cancer..)

Mr.Rawte:-kaise chala jau Arjun..?agar mein chala jauga toh tum pure akele pad jaoge..

Arjun:-mein thik hu..baba..aur mein koi chota baccha toh nahi ke aap ko meri fikar karni pade..

Mr.Rawte(weakly):-janata hu..par fir bhi yaha tumhare pas koi nahi..tumhari aai toh kabki ja chuki he(Arjun's mother has died almost before 5 years..)agar Roshni hoti toh mein aaram se duniya ke kisi bhi kone me ja sakta tha..woh tumhare sath hoti toh muze koi tension nahi hoti..

Arjun(sadly):-mein usse dund lunga..I promise..woh jaldi hi hamare sath hogi..

Mr.Rawte:-itane din bit chuke he..tumhe abhi bhi aisa lagata he ke tum usse dund loge..

Arjun:-ofcourse..baba..

Mr.Rawte(take a deep sigh):-thik he jab tak tum usse dund nahi lete..mein bhi US nahi jauga..

Arjun(angrily):-baba..

Mr.Rawte:-aur ye mera aakhri faisala he..

Mr.Rawte closed his eyes..

Arjun looking him sadly & helplessly..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago

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