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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear fantastic update
loved it
shree-liza-chotu convo with riya to make her understand arjun's past and present situation was beautifully depicted
shree is really much closure and best friend of riya...can be seen through his way to make riya understand
trio plan to make riya go to arjun's cabin was great
outbrust or riya clearly shows how much hurted she was
finally arjun manage to make riya understand his feelings
arjun's way to make riya understand was amazing
loved the naughty arjun
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Gustakh Dil..

Hey guys..this is the epilogue...hope you like it..

This is my last one with this story..

After one month:-

Both Arjun & Riya are very happy with each other..their happiness more increases when Riya's mom-dad shifted to Mumbai after finishing their work in US..

The present day:-

It's a night..they all are having party in Riya's mom-dad house..

The party is given by her mom-dad to celebrate their comeback in India..

All ETF members with their families are present in the party..

Arjun who has ware 3 piece black-suit..is looking so hansome & dashing..

All are happily laughing..& chatting..

Arjun is looking here & there..

Riya's dad:-kisse dund rahe ho Arjun beta..?

Arjun:-umm..nahi..kisi ko nahi..mein toh bas aise hi..

Shree:-aur kisse dundege uncle..?hamare Riyu ko hi dund rahe honge..

All smile..while Arjun glare to Shree..

Arjun:-nahi..mein kyo usse dunduga..?

Riya's dad remain quite..

Arjun(angrily in his mind):-ab inn me se kisine ye bata diya hota ke Riyu kaha he..toh kya ho jata..par nahi..sabko muze tease karne me maza aa raha he..

All again started their ususal chatting..

Arjun(in mind):-suru ho gayi inn logo ki chatting..oh..god..pata nahi Riyu kaha he..subah se usse dekha bhi nahi he meine..

They all are now laughing on some joke done by Chotu..

Arjun(angrily):-for god sake..ye hasana band karo..aur koi muze ya batane ka kasht karo ke Riyu kaha he..

All again starts laughing..

Arjun give angry look to them..

Riya's dad:-oh..ho..bas..bas bahot ho gaya usse tease karana..(looking to Arjun,smiles)Arjun beta..tumhari Riyu..usake room me he..this way..(he shows Arjun the way to go to her room..)

Arjun just nodded looking to him..while glare to other somewhat angrily..& leaves..

Sonali:-hey bhagwan..(to Riya's dad)uncle kuch bhi kaho..par hamari Riya he badi gr8..aise angry young man..impatient husband ko sambhalana matlab koi choti baat nahi he..

All smile..

Shree:-oh..ho Sonali bhabhi..Riyu ko dekhne ke baad..Arjun sir ka gussa toh aise bhaag jata he..jaise Chotu ki body dekhkar sare gunde bhaag jate he..

All laugh again..

Arjun come to a room..& knock the door..& hear voice of Riya to giving permission to come inside..

He open the door..& come inside..& close the door..behind him immigiately...

Arjun:-Riyu..?

She is infront of mirror..

She look back to him..

Riya:-Arjun aap..?yaha..?

Arjun(coming towards her):-kaha ho tum Riyu..?kabse tumhara party me intzaar kar raha hu..

Riya:-uff..Arjun you know na..sari party ki decoration meine ki he...ussiliye bahot time lag gaya..dekho na abhi bhi mein thik se tayar nahi hui hu...

Arjun(hold her hand..& pull her in his hug..looking her top to bottom..she has ware sari,ware matching jwells with it..her hairstyle is looking just perfect to her..he smile..):-aur kitana tayar hone he sweetheart..?

She blush..

Riya:-Arjun..chodiye na..

Arjun:-ab isse jyada tayar hogi toh..fir meri heartbeats hi ruk jayegi..

Riya(in serious tone):-shut up Arjun..

Arjun:-oh..ho..mein toh mazak kar raha tha sweetheart..

Riya:-I don't like such jokes..Samaze ya Samazau..?

Arjun(laugh):-samaz gaya mam..

Riya(smile back to him..):-ab chodiye muze..warna mein aur late ho jaugi..

Arjun(he hug her):-no..aise nahi..

Riya:-Arjun..

Arjun:-shh..subah se tumhe dekhne ke liye taras raha hu..par tum ho ke kaam me itani busy ho..(kiss on her shoulder..)

Riya:-Arjun..jayeye yaha se..plz..koi aa gaya toh..

Arjun(broke off hug..& smile naughtly):-koi nahi aayega..sab ko pata he ke mein tumhare sath hu..

Riya(her mouth in o shape..):-hey bahgwan..Arjun aap bhi na..sab log kya soch rahe honge..?

Arjun:-forget it..just come to me..

Riya:-lekin..

Before she can say something..Arjun claim her lips by his..& they kiss each other passionately..after sometime they broke off to take breath properly..

She has rested her head on his shoulder..& breathing heavily..

Riya:-ab jao..jaldi..

Arjun:-nooo..sweetheart..

Riya:-Arjun..Sonali aa gayi toh..?(she smile shyly)woh hamesha hame aise pakad leti he..aur fir muze bahot tease karti he..

Arjun(laugh):-are iss baar toh Sonali bhi nahi aayegi hame disturb karne ko..ussike samane toh mein tumse milane ke liye nikala tha..

Riya:-kya..?oh..god..fir toh ab woh muze nahi chodegi..bahot tease karegi..

Arjun:-woh sab chodo..(he hold her chin..& make her to face him..)

Again claim her lips by his..they broke off after sometime..

Riya:-oh..god..(she hold his hand..& drag him upto the door of room..)ab aap jao..

Arjun:-Riyu..lekin..

Riya:-ab agar aap nahi gaye na..toh..ham party me late ho jayege..aur..aur..(she blush)aap mera sara make-up bhi kharab kar denge apne romance ke chakkar me..

She lower her gaze..& blush..

Arjun(naughtly,smile):-woh..toh mein aise bhi hamare ghar pahochne ke baad karne hi wala hu sweetheart..

Riya(blush):-plz..jao na ab..

Arjun(laugh):-ok..dear..ja raha hu..

He open the door..& leaves..

She take a sigh of relief..& blush..& then turn to get ready..

Arjun return to the party..

Chotu:-lo..Arjun sir aa gaye..

All look towards his direction..he has smrik on his face..

Shree:-dekha guys..meine kaha tha..Arjun sir ka gussa bhaag jata he Riyu ko dekhkar..

They all smile..

Arjun come to their group..

Arjun:-aise kya dekh rahe ho muze..?pehale kabhi dekha nahi he kya..?

Liza(in teasing tone):-sir..aap itana smile kyo kar rahe ho..?

Chotu:-sir..Ri..ne aapko koi joke sunaya kya..jo aap itana has rahe ho..?

Rathod(naughtly):-ha..Arjun..hame bhi sunao woh joke..ham bhi hasenge..

All laugh..

Sonali:-oh..ho..Arjun nahi batayega..par muze pata he Riya ne Arjun ko kya ..aur..

Arjun:-shut up..Sonali..

All laugh..

Rathod:-gr8..hame bhi batao yaar..

Arjun(naughtly looking to Sonali):-ha..Sonali tumhe zarur bata degi..private me..

Sonali blush..

All smile..

After sometime..Riya also come to party..

Chotu:-lo..Ri bhi aa gayi..

She is looking so cute..& beautiful..has ware this..Arjun lost in her..

Rathod(mutter in Arjun's ear):-aise kya dekh raha he..?abhi thodi der pehale toh dekha tha na usse..?

Arjun glare at him..

Rathod:-are kamal he yaar..abhi ek second pehale usse itane pyar se dekh raha tha..aur muze ab itane gusse se ghur raha he..

Arjun:-Samm..

Rathod:-what man..?sach hi kehata he Shree..tera sara gussa sirf ham logo ke liye he..baki sab ke liye he..lekin Riya ko dekh ke tera gussa bilcul ice-cream ki tarah pighal jata he..

Arjun crossed his hand near his chest..& give look to Rathod..

Rathod:-all right..dekh..jitana dekhana he.. usse utana dekh..muze koi problem nahi he..teri hi biwi he..jitana merji utana dekh..

Rathod smile naughtly..Arjun nodded his head in disbelief..& again look to Riya's direction..

Riya also look towards him..he smrik to her..she also smile back him..

Suddenly he put his hand on his earlobe..she see that..she also put her hand on her earlobe..& realized that she has not ware ear-ring..she move her hand to another earlobe..& realized that there is a ear-ring..

Riya(in mind):-oh..god..mere ek ear ke ear-rings kaha gayi..muze toh yaad he meine dono pehani thi..

She look to him..he smrik naughtly..

She realized when the ear-ring must have fallen..when he was kissing her..

She blush..& make her hair fall on her ear..so that no one could realized that she has ware only one ear-ring..

After sometime..music starts & all couple started dancing..

Rathod-Sonali,Shree-Liza..Arjun-Riya..

The song is playing..

(Arjun & Riya both are started dancing..her one hand on his shoulder while another on his waist..while Arjun's one hand on her shoulder..while another on her waist..both are looking in each other's eyes..& lost in each other..)

Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
armaan huey purhey dil ke

(he pull her more closer..)


aye meri jaan e wafa
teri meri mere teri ik jaan hai

(he take her ear-ring from his pocket..& put it in her ear as the way that no one can understand that..she looks shockingly to him..Arjun(whisper to her ear):-"mere coat me atak gaya tha..jab ham dono.." she blush..he smile naughtly..& kiss to her earlobe..)

saath tere rahenge sadha
tumse na honge juda
tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke..


(Mr.Mukerji(to Mrs. Mukherji..):-"Riya aur Arjun dono ek sath kitane khush he na..?mere dil me jo thoda doubt tha..woh bhi ab dur ho gaya..sach me Arjun hamari Riya ko hamesha khush rakhega.."

Mrs.mukherji nodded happily..)


Mere sanam teri kasam
chodenge ab na yeh haath

(Arjun hold her hand in his hand..& kiss her hand..)

yeh zindagi guzregi ab
hamdam tumhare hi saath..

(he kiss her forehead..with all love inside him..)


apna yeh vaada raha
tumse na honge juda..

(he hug her..& both dancing that way..)


tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke
armaan huey purhey dil ke..

aye meri jaan e wafa
teri meri mere teri ik jaan hai..

saath tere rahenge sadha
tumse na honge juda..
tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke

armaan huey purhey dil ke..

(she broke off the hug..& they started dance ususal way..her eyes get wet..remembering their past..he also get emotional to see this..)


Maine kiya hai raat din
bas tera hi intezar..

(he kiss her cheek..& try to assure her his love..)


tere bina aata nahin
ik pal mujhey ab karaar..

(he whisper to her ear.."I Love you.."she blush..)

(he started singing with the singer.. Riya also started singing with him..both are singing together..ofcourse they can only hear each other..none else can realize that they are singing..)

humdum mera mil gaya
hum-tum na honge juda...

humdum mera mil gaya
ab hum na honge juda...

(Arjun sings) tumse milke..

(Riya sings..) tumse milke..
(Riya sings) aisa laga tumse milke..
(both sing together) armaan huey purhey dil ke..
eh meri jaan e wafa..
teri meri meri teri ik jaan hai..

saath tere rahenge sadha
ab ham na honge juda..


they both are looking happily each other..

after some time..they all take dinner..& having chatting..

Shree:-hey..iss khushi ke mauke pe..atleast ek group photo toh banata he..kyon uncle..?

Mr.Mukherji:-ofcourse..

Shree set the camera..Sameer-Sonali,Liza-Shree,Arjun-Riya,Chotu,Mr.& Mrs.Mukherji..all smile to camera..the photo get clicked..which is one of the best family photo of this world..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much for supporting my story..

Thanks you For reading it..& appreciating it..& thank you for your valuable comments..

Thanks to silent reader also..

Hope you have like this story..

& sorry if you get bored..

Sorry if some part of ff you think was bore..

Thank you onece again for your support..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhj finaly my beautiful story end ho gaye..i m gonna muss this...
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but realy happy nez of happy ending n aaj main first hoon lolll🤣
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waooo sonu as always beautifuly written...
ohh ending ...
well very nice ending..
finalyy riya's mom dad shift in mumbaii..
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ihh god all try to tease arjun,n arjun impetiatly waiting to see riya...
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finaly he cant controled himself,n shouted..
kissime riya ko..🤣
He he he cant controled my laugh..
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ohh god arjun n riya scence in bedroom is realy beautiful i m blushing..
arjun such a naughty husband lolll...
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their kiss is realy cute..
danve seque is realy grate n song is to god,
lv family picture...
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grate ending realy ginna miss thattt



Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

<font size="6">Thank you so much for supporting my story..</font>


<font size="6">Thanks you For reading it..& appreciating it..& thank you for your valuable comments..</font>


<font size="6">Thanks to silent reader also..</font>


<font size="6">Hope you have like this story..</font>


<font size="6">& sorry if you get bored..</font>


<font size="6">Sorry if some part of ff you think was bore..</font>


<font size="6">Thank you onece again for your support..</font>


Oyee madam koe bhi part bore nahi tha...i lvd each n every part..sya..
i m missing this...to much..
bale bale aaj main first ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

you come first piyu😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome, blossom and mindblowing update di.
So riya parents come to mumbai and they are permanently shift in mumbai.
Arjun is very despirately to meet riya.
Everyone teasing him.
Finally he meets riya.
Love ariya romance.
Arjun is very naughty.
All couples are dancing.
The sng was amazing.
Awesome ending di.
Miss this story very much
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Thank you so much for supporting my story..

Thanks you For reading it..& appreciating it..& thank you for your valuable comments..

Thanks to silent reader also..

Hope you have like this story..

& sorry if you get bored..

Sorry if some part of ff you think was bore..

Thank you onece again for your support..


di i am angry with you😡
why are you say that its boring???
its very interesting.
i miss this story very much
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mastmegha22



you come first piyu😡


Lolll meghu..akheer main first aa gaye...🤣
My devil laugh...
aaj chhuti le hai gher per hoon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll


Lolll meghu..akheer main first aa gaye...🤣
My devil laugh...
aaj chhuti le hai gher per hoon..


very funny koi ni
tu meri sis hai isliye chal gaya😉
wow you are on holiday chal scrap pe baatein karte hain

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