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Posted: 12 years ago
Fist of all Thanx 4 pm me

I read two parts together

Parts r fantastic ,fab,awesome,extremely impressive

Riya ' s dress sooo. Beautiful hay Allah dono ka gussa Mai mar jao ik sai ik badhkr

Arjun care so much Riya

Ratior make understand to Arjun bt he didnot understand tht he love Riya

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...
ohh arjun cares for her so much... uske khilaf kuch bura nai sun sakta...phr btata kyu nai kivhe loves her... b bhi ruk gya...
dono ka gussa ek se badh kar ek hai...
omg riya again ate those mushrooms ... glad arjun had her medicine... ohh how cute he always have them with him...
hahaha shree bechare ko aiweee daant pit gai...
awww arjun took her to her home and even stayed with her...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

In morning:-

Shree:-Riyu..ab kaisa lag raha he..?

Riya(she has also awake now):-hmm..thik lag raha he ab..

Shree:-chal coffee le..

Riya:-chalo Shree jaldi chalate he warna office ke liye late ho jayege..

Shree:-are office ki fikar tu mat kar..Rathod sir ne kaha tha ke agar tuze chutti chahiye toh..

Riya:-nahi..mein thik hu..ham jaldi office chalate he..

Shree:-Riyu..lekin..tu ek din rest le legi toh accha hi hoga na..aur waise bhi Arjun sir bhi keh rahe the ke..

Riya(angrily):-woh kya keh rahe the ye sunane me muze interest nahi..

Shree:-ok..thik he baba..chal..fir ready ho ja..I am waiting for you in hall..

He leaves..

Arjun's home:-

his eyes turned red showing that he has not sleep whole night..he has ready to go to office..

Roshni:-Arjun muze tumse baat karni he..

Arjun:-hmm..

Roshni:-ye sab kab tak chalega..?I m just fed up of all this..

Arjun:-dekho..Roshni..agar tum firse Riyu ka subject start karne wali ho toh muze koi baat nahi karni he..

Roshni:-kaise baat nahi karni he tumhe..?har waqt tum usake bare me sochte rehate ho..yaha tak ki usaki medicines bhi tumhare pocket me rakhte ho..iss sab ka mein kya matlab samzu..? Arjun..tum samazte ho ke muze kuch dikhta nahi he..tumhe kya laga..ke uss picnic ke din tum aur Riya ek sath kahi gayab ho gaye the..aur ye baat muze samaz nahi aayegi..I know ke tum usike sath the..

Arjun(angrily):-isaki wajah tum hi ho..Rosh..tumne usase woh bate kahi jo tumhe nahi kehni chahiye thi..

Roshni:-par isaka matlab ye toh nahi he ke tum usake aur karib jao..

Arjun:-aur isaka ye bhi matlab nahi he ke tum usake coffee me mirch powder milao..

Roshni look suprizingly..

Arjun:-kya..?tumhe kya laga ye baat muze pata nahi chalegi..?

Roshni:-oh..zarur ye baat tumhe Riya ne batayi he..woh ham dono ke bich dooriya lana chahti he..issliye..

Arjun(angrily):-meine khud woh coffee hi he..ab bhi kuch samaz nahi aaya ya samzau..?

She remember that incident..

Roshni(unbelievably):-you exchange the cups..

Arjun gives her look..

Roshni(angrily):-I can't belive this Arjun..tum Riya ke liye..I cant belive..

Arjun(angrily):-stop it Roshni..aur ab ham iss bare me baat nahi karege..aur muze pura yakin he ke aaj ke baad tum Riyu ko firse hurt karne ki koshish nahi karogi..

He leaves..

At Office:-

Everyone asks Riya about her health..& she reply back them with smile..Arjun come to office & see that Riya also come to office..

Arjun(angrily looking to Riya & Shree):-meine kaha tha na ke aaj office mat aana..

Riya(angrily):-it's ok..I am Fine Sir..

He angrily leave to his cabin..

Rathod(come to Arjun's cabin):-dekh..usape gussa karne se kuch nahi hoga..tu ye maan kyo nahi leta ke tu usse pyar karne laga he..

Arjun(angrily,shout):-haa..hhaaa..maanta hu..mein usse pyar karta hu..now what..?what next..?

Rathod:-thank god mana toh sahi..ab yahi baat Roshni ko bhi bata de..

Arjun(angrily):-are you crazy..?kaise batau mein usse..woh seh nahi payegi..pata nahi kya kar baithe..?

Rathod:-yahi ek rasta he Arjun..

Arjun leaves from there angrily..

After sometime ETF get call from Commissioner who invite all of them to his birthday party..(the party is official party..so no invitation for family members-means sorry no Sonali..no Roshni in party..)

The whoe day passes like this..

Rathod:-guys..abhi ham log nikalate he warna..ham party ke liye late ho jayege..

They all leave..

Shree & Riya come to home to change..

Riya:-Shree..plz..mera bilcul mood nahi he..ek kaam kar na..tu hi chala ja party me..

Shree:-Riyu..plz yaar..kaisi boring bate kar rahi he..

Riya:-really..yaar..i am tired..

Shree:-ye kya Riyu..aaj toh ham dono dance karne wale the taki Liza ko..(he pause..)but thik he agar tu nahi aana chahti he toh..

Riya remember when they first hear about party,they make planned that Shree & Riya will dance with each other to jelious Liza..

Riya:-accha thik he.. ab aisa chehara mat bana..mein abhi tayar ho jati hu..

Shree:-Riyu..sach me agar tuze nahi aana..

Riya(giving him look):-Shree..shut up..mein aa rahi hu..aur tu aise kyo baate kar raha he..?tu toh muze haq se khichate hue leke ja sakta he..

She smiles..Shree also smiles..Riya leaves to get ready..

Shree:-I know Riyu..tu pareshan he Arjun sir ke wajah se..aur mein nahi chahata tha ke party me unhe dekhkar tu aur jyada pareshan ho..

They all reach to party..they wish to commissioner..after sometime they start their usual chit chat..

Riya has ware this dress..& looking very beautiful..Arjun keep looking to her from some distance..

The dance has not start yet so the trio with Liza are busy in chit chatting..

Suddenly Riya's phone rings..she make excuses & go to a corner to talk..it's Roshni's phone..

Riya:-hello..?

Roshni:-hi..Riya..kya kar rahi ho.?bahot khush hogi na tum..?aakhir tumne mere aur Arjun ke bich zagada karwa hi diya..

Riya:-meine..?ye kya keh rahi ho aap..?

Roshni:-jyada innocent banana ka drama mat karo Riya..oh..wait..wait..kahi woh kal jo allergy ka scene hua..woh bhi tumhare drame ka hissa toh nahi tha..?

Riya(angrily):-stop it..

Roshni:-why should I stop..?tum chahti ho ke tum mere husband ko muzse chin logi aur mein bas dekhti rahu..

Riya:-mein kisise kisiko chinane ki koshish nahi kar rahi hu..you are just misunderstanding..

Roshni:-no..no..misunderstanding..?bilcul nahi Riya..it's the truth...

Riya:-dekhiye..

Roshni:-& let me remind you one more truth if you have forget it.. that I am Arjun's legally wed wife..& I m giving you the final & last warning to stay away from him..warna isaka ajaam iss baar bilcul bhi thik nahi hoga..

She cuts the phone..

Riya get more upset & frustrated..

Riya(angrily,in mind):-This is too much..it's gone beyond limits..ek baar bas mein Shree aur Liza ki setting kara du fir mein aapki taraf toh kya Roshni..Arjun ke taraf bhi mud ke nahi dekhugi..

She frustatedly starts walking to take drink..she order drink for her..she almost take 4 drinks..she is now in under control of drink..Arjun who realize that Riya is not with her group..he look her everywhere & found her near drinks..he hurrily reach to her...& sits on chair beside her..

Arjun:-Riyu..ye kya kar rahi ho..?

Riya(in full talli tone):-dikh nahi raha..Drink le rahi hu..

Arjun:-lekin kyo..?are you crazy..?

Riya:-sab aapke wajah se hua he..jao yaha se..muze akela chod do..(looking to waiter..)give me one more peg..

Arjun :-Riyu..stop it..(but before he can stop her she take a glass & immigiately drink it..)

Riya:-one more plz..

But this time before she take the glass..Arjun take it...& drink it..

Riya(angrily to Arjun):-how dare you..take my glass..(to waiter)one peg..

Waiter gives but this time also Arjun drink it..she continue to give order for drink..& Arjun continue to take her peg & drink it..this continue 5-6 times..

Riya(angrily):-waiter pass the whole bottle to me..I am not going to tolerate this Arjun..this is too much.

She take the bottle in hand..& starts walking to party..upto this moment Arjun has also drink 5-6 pegs..he is also under control of drink now..

Arjun:-Riyu..waha kaha ja rahi ho..(he hold her hand & take her with him..)mere sath chalo..

Riya:-nahi..muze nahi jana aapke sath..(starts drinking from the bottle..Arjun snatch the bottle from her hand..he drink almost half..Riya try to snach it from him..during this the bottle falls on floor..)

Arjun(laugh):-gr8..ab na tum piogi..aur na mein..

Riya(innocently):-toh ab ham kya karege..?

Arjun hold her in his arm..

Arjun(romatically):-come with me sweetheart..

Arjun take her to parking..& make her sit in his car's co-driver sit..

Riya(innocently):-ye kisaki car he..?

Arjun:-meri..aur kisaki hogi..sweetheart..

Riya:-lekin ham kaha ja rahe he..?

Arjun:-ghar..

Riya:-nahi..nahi..muze nahi jana..

Arjun:-Riyu meri jaan..zid mat karo na..(he also come to car..close the door..& come near to Riya..)

Riya:-nahi par muze dance karna he..

Arjun:-toh chalo..ham dance karege..

Riya's phone rings..it's Shree..Arjun take her phone & disconnect it..

Riya(childishly):-ahhmmm..ye kya kiya..mera phone..?

Arjun:-tumhe dance karna he na dear..?

Riya:-hmm..lekin muze.. muze toh Shree ke sath dance karna he..

Arjun(childishly):-no..no..tum mere sath hi dance karogi..

Riya:-nahi..nahi..muze na sirf.. Shree ke sath hi dance karna he..kyo ki..woh..woh..liz(she was about to tell about their plan to make Liza jelious)

Arjun(in talli tone):-no..no..no..mere sath..matlab sirf mere sath..

Riya:-ye toh zabardasti he..muze jane do..muze party me jana he..muze dance karna he..

Riya tries to get up but cant control her balance & again fall on sit again..

Arjun leaned over her..& hold her tightly by his hand on her shoulder..

Riya:-no..i want to go..muze jana he..

Arjun(coming closer to her,childishly):-tum hamesha jane ki baat kyo karti ho..tum hamesha muzse dur chali jati ho..

Riya:-lekin..mein..

Arjun(put his finger on her lips):-shhh..ab mein tumhe kabhi apne se dur nahi jane dunga..(he comes more closer to her he face is just inch away from her) tumhare bagair ek pal bhi nahi reh sakhta me ab..(he kissed her forehead)..plz..Riyu..muze chodke mat jao..(he placed wet kisses on her both cheeks)plz..sweetheart..(she blush..) tum jab blush karti ho na tab bahot khubsurat lagti ho..Riyu..(he kiss her earlobe..keep moving his lips on her face..)hmm..Riyu..

In party Shree & Chotu realized that Riya is not there..while they also realize that Arjun is also not there..Rathod also realize this..& he starts making call to Arjun..

Riya:-phone..phone..aapka phone..(he has just shifted his lips to her chin..& then he was about to kiss her lips..suddenly his phone rings..)

He look to the caller..

Arjun:-uff..sweetheart..you know..ye Sam he na hamesha wrong time pe phone karta he..

Riya laugh..

Arjun(pick the phone):-Kya he Sam..?kyo phone kar rahe ho..?

Rathod:-tum kaha ho..?

Arjun:-isase tumhe kya karna he..?

Rathod:-dekho..(paused)ek minute..ek minute..kahi tu ne drink toh nahi liya na..?

Arjun:-nahi..mein kabhi drink leta hu..?bilcul nahi..drink toh Riyu ne kiya he..

Rathod:-Riya..?woh kaha he..

Arjun(sweetly):-meri Riyu..mere sath he..

Rathod(frustatedly):-gr8..aur tum dono kaha ho..ye batoge..?

Arjun(in talli tone):-nahi..nahi..mein tumhe bilcul nahi batauga..ke ham dono mere car me he..

Rathod(smrik):-thik he mat bata..toh ab mein phone rakhu..?

Arjun:-jaldi rakh..aur firse disturb mat karna hame..

Rathod cut the phone..Shree & Chotu worrily looking to him..

Rathod:-Arjun ki gadi dundate he..pata nahi kaha park ki he..puri parking me search karna padega..

They leave to search Arjun's car..

In car:-

Riya has closed her eyes..

Arjun:-Riyu..Riyu..uto..na..uto..(she open her eyes..he smiles..)sweetheart..(he come closer to her again..& starts kissing her neck..placed his hot kisses on her neck..)

Riya:-no..no..Arjun..this is not good..ussse achha nahi lagega(she is talking about Roshni..)

Arjun(still Kissing her neck..):-usse..?kise..?

Riya:-woh..he na..woh..(she don't remember Roshni's name)..woh..

Arjun:-koi nahi he sweetheart..koi nahi..bas tum aur mein..aur koi nahi he..

Riya:-nahi..woh..

Arjun put his finger on her lips..she looking to him lovingly with her puppy eyes..he smiles..& remove her dupatta which is at her neck..he starts kissing her neck..then move to her shoulder..he slide down strip of her dress from her shoulder..& kiss her everywhere on her shoulder..they suddenly hear knock on the car's window..

Rathod(loudly):-Arjun..Arjun.

But Arjun don't pay any attension to him..he continue kissing her he move to her another shoulder..slides the strip from that shoulder..& keep kissing her with his wet kisses..

Riya hug him tightly..he also hug her tightly..& move his hand to backword side of sit..pull her to him..& starts moving his hand on her bare back..

Riya:-ahh..Arjun..

Arjun:-Riyu..my sweetheart..i want to say you something..

Again they hear Rathod's bang on window..

Arjun:-oh..ho..it's not good..(but his eyes turned to see her lips..)

he cup her face..his lips are just a inch away from her lips..

Arjun:-Riyu..i want to say something to you..(when he talks his lips keep brushing her lips..it's not exactly the kiss just brushing lips to one another..)

Riya(blush):-kya..?

They again hear Rathod's voice..

Arjun:-oh ho..wait..mein pehale iss Sam ki problem solve karke aata hu..fir mein tumhe batauga..(he kiss her cheek..& get up from over her..& about to open the door of car..he again look back to her..give her smile..)

Arjun:-sweetheart..plz..ware your dupatta..

She blush..& take her dupatta..make neat her dress..

He open the door of car..& get outside..

Arjun(in talli tone):-what wrong with you Sam..?

All get suprized looking Arjun like this..

Rathod:-Arjun..tumne kitani sharab pi he..ke thik se khade nahi ho paa rahe ho..

Shree open the another door of car worrily..& look Riya..& take sigh of relief..

Shree:-Riyu..come on get down..

Riya get deliated to see him..she get down from car..& hug him..

Riya:-Shree..Shree..

Shree:-tu ne drink kiya he..?oh..god..chalo ghar chalate he..

Riya:-nahi ..muze dance karna he..

Shree:-haa..thik he mein tuze leke chalta hu..

Arjun(angrily):-no..no..where you are going Riyu..?you cant dance with him..no..never..

Riya:-nahi muze Shree ke sath dance..

Arjun:-shut up..(he hold her hand)come with me..

Riya(childishly):-no..Arjun..

He free her hand..& look her lovingly..

Arjun(romantically):-oh..come on sweetheart..(all are just about to faint looking all this)

Rathod hold his hand..& make him sit in car..& lock the door immigiately..

Rathod:-Shree..tum Riya ko leke jao meri car me..mein Arjun ko usake ghar drop kar dunga..Chotu tum badme car mere ghar pe chod dena..

The two just manage to nod in shock..

Rathod starts the car..

Arjun(angrily):-what the hell with you Sam..?tum..muze kaha lekar ja rahe ho..?muze Riyu ke paas jana he..abhi..issi waqt..

Rathod:-mein tumhe usake pass hi leke ja raha hu..lekin ek shart pe..agar tum pure raste bhar me chup rahoge toh..

Arjun childishly crossed his hand to chest..& put his finger on his mouth..Rathod smrik..

Here Shree is driving the car..Chotu is sitting near Riya on back side of Rathod's car..Riya is continuously taking Arjun's name..& talking in between that she want to go with Shree for dance..

Chotu:-isaki ye "Arjun Chalisa" kab khatam hogi..?

Shree:-pata nahi..meri toh ye samaz nahi aa raha ke mein iss situation me hasu ya rou..

Chotu gives him a look..& they both boys brusted into laugh..

Shree:-cant belive Arjun sir..aur Riyu..?ab tak Riyu ko hi crazy kehate the ham..par ab toh Arjun sir bhi..(they smile..Shree again become serious..)hey bhagwan..kuch karo..inn dono ka..

They reach to Shree's home..Shree make her sleep on her bed..pull blancket over her..she is still muttering something..but now in sleep..so they cant hear what she is saying..Chotu leaves from there..Shree also turn to his bedroom..when he look Riya is fall in sleep..

Rathod bring Arjun to his home..Roshni opens the door..& suprized looking Arjun's situation..he is still crossed his hand & putting finger on his lips like small child..Roshni gives Rathod questioning look..

Rathod:-umm..usane drink le liya he.. kuch jyada hi..isse lekar jao..dont worry..mein kal subah usase baat karuga..(looking to Arjun):-go Arjun..go with her..

Roshni somehow manage to take him to bedroom..make her sleep on bed..lye beside him..& hug him..

Roshni:-sorry Arjun..subah hamara zagada hua issliye tumne drink kiya na..I am really sorry..

Arjun (hug her back..):-why you are saying me sorry sweetheart..? (kiss her cheeks)my dear..now don't go anywhere..(he starts kissing her neck & then shoulder..)

Roshni(hug him tightly):-uhmm..Arjun...

Arjun(mutters while kissing her):-love you..sweetheart..i love you so much..sweetheart..

Roshni(mutters):-love you too..Arjun..

Arjun(mutters while kissing her chin):-I love you Riyu..I love you so much..Riyu..my sweetheart..dont go away from me..Riyu..Riyu..i love you Riyu..

Roshni hears this..& get angry..she push him..& get up..& loudly brusted on him.."I am Not Riyu..I am Roshni.." but he is not in condition to hear all this..as he has already fall in sleep due to excess drinking..

Roshni angrily leaves from room..& close the door behind her harshly..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
awww poor arjun didn't sleep whole night
god hating roshni so much now 😡
omg finally arjun realized that he loves riya <3
wow party at commissioner's hosue
thank god roshni is not invited
love riya's dress
and arjun lost in her <3
omg roshnia again called riya 😡
omg riya was drunk
even arjun was drunk
loved ariya scenes in car <3
sam always comes on wrong time
arjun chalisa 🤣
omg arjun said i love you riya to roshni
and roshni was so angry hearing it 😆 good job arjun
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!
arghhh hate roshni so much...!!!😡
abhi arjun ne usse smjhaya,.. and again she called riya...!!!!
something is defo wrong with her...!!
ariya scenes at the party were very cute...!!
awww riya drunk and wo aur na pee sake isliye arjun ne uski drink pee and he is also drunk...
car scenes were very romantic...!!! but ye sameer ko bhi abhi bech mai aane tha...
love how they were behaving like children in talli mode...!!!😆😆
yesss finally arjun realized that he loves riya...!!!!
glad ye baat ab roshni ko bhi pat chal gyi...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome,amazing,fantastic ,fab dr

Chotu said Arjun chalisa hehehehehe

Roshni knw tht she is nt swthrt waooo

Grt car romance awesome

Thanx 4 pm me

Update soon

Love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES...will fill in later pacca...sorry like button not working:(
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Posted: 12 years ago
atlast todha triangle toh hatta but i m afraid aage roshni kya karegi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
woah! loved this talli ariya
sam always wrong timing
hehe arjun said i love u riya to roshini gr8
finally roshini came to know taht arjun loves riya & calls her sweetheart
what next???
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Love it.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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