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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for my late comment...
Aaarrrggghhh...
Roshni toh bohut haad se zyada barh rahi hai...
Ab toh mujhe ekdum yaqeen ho chuka hai ki puri dal hi kaali hai.
Kuch toh garbar hai...
Why does she interfere in Arjun and Riya's life???
Feeling sad for Riya...
Oh No...
Feeling really very sad for Arjun.
Hope he becomes alryt...
Hmm...
Riya ke parents' ko kuch bhi malum nahi hai.
Oh God...
Jab un dono ko pata chalega,tab kya hoga,only God knows...
Riya in rehabilitation centre...
Yay...
She is fine now...
She is living in Shree's home...
Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
The song u selected is really good.
It has perfectly portrayed the inner feelings of both Arjun and Riya...

You know something,this story of urs is really very good.I always wait for the pm of the next update of this story...
Loved it.
Superb...
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
Thumbs Up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update waiting for next part love ur story very much thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

Roshni:-bas Arjun..bas..try to control yourself..

Arjun:-I am trying..but you know..baba..(he get teary..)

Roshni hug him..

Roshni:-shant ho jao Arjun..

After sometime..she broke of hug..

Roshni:-Arjun..aaj tum office mat jao..take some rest..

Arjun:-hmm..mein bhi wahi soch raha hu ke aaj office ko chutti le leta hu..

Roshni:-hmm..mein tumhare liye chai leke aati hu..

She turn to kitchen..

Arjun's phone ring..he received it..

Rathod:-hey Arjun..tum India pahoch gaye kya..?

Arjun:-haa..bas abhi sirf ek hour hua he ghar aaye hue..

Rathod:-hmm..thik he tum aaj aaram karo..aaj office nahi aaoge toh bhi chalega..

Arjun:-mein bhi wahi soch raha tha..

Rathod:-ok then ..kal milte he..agar aaj waqt mil gaya toh tuzse milane sham ko ghar aa jauga..

Arjun:-ok..(he pause..) woh Sam..

Rathod:-haa..?

Arjun:-Riya..?

Rathod:-oh haa..batana bhul hi gaya ke woh ab bilcul thik he..aur aaj se join kar rahi he..

Arjun:-oh..

Rathod:-ok then..will meet tomorrow..

Arjun:-umm..not tomorrow..today..i m coming to office..

Rathod:-are par abhi toh keh raha tha ke nahi aauga..

Arjun:-umm..woh..aise bhi ghar me bore ho jauga..mein aata hu..thodi der me..

Rathod:-ok..(& cuts the phone..in mind)zarur Riya aaj aa rahi he ye sunakar isane apna faisala badal liya..kamal he mere dost..ACP Rawte ab sirf Riya ke liye office aa raha he..gr8..bahot badi gadbad he ye toh..Arjun se baat karni hi hogi..

Roshni comes with his chai..

Arjun(take sip of chai):-Rosh..mein thodi der me office le liye nikal raha hu..

Roshni:-lekin abhi toh tum keh rahe the..

Arjun:-nahi..woh zaruri kaam he..

He turns to bedroom to get bath..

ETF Office:-

he reach to office..& go straight to his cabin..he look from window of his cabin to conference hall..

Shree,chotu,& Riya ,liza are chatting..Riya is actually quite...Shree,chotu are making some jokes..but she is looking sad..& don't laugh or not smile on their jokes..

Arjun:-oh..god..

He turned to sofa in his cabin..& sit their abruptly..

Afer sometimes..he hears knock on door.."come in.."

Riya come inside..& look he sits on sofa in resting mood..

Riya:-oh..sorry sir..mein baad me aati hu..you take rest..

Arjun(sit straight & looking to her..):-it's ok..sit(looking to sofa)

Riya:-it's ok..i am comfortable here..

Arjun(in ordering tone):-Riya..sit..

She sits..on sofa..but maintain distance from him..

Riya:-sir..I feel really sorry when I hear about baba..

Arjun's heart get filled with his father's memories..he hold his head by his hand & try to control that memories..

Riya hesitedly put her hand on his shoulder..

Riya:-I know you are missing him badly but..

Before she could continue..he come close to her & hug her tightly..

Arjun:-whats going on this Riyu..?first 'Aai' left me & now..'baba' also..he also..

Riya:-no..they are not gone anywhere..they are still here & watching to you from somewhere..they loves you..(she broke off hug)they always want to see you happy..if you loose yourself like this..they wont be happy..they also become sad..

He is looking to her..his both hands on her shoulder while her both hands on her's shoulders..

Riya:-I know..how much you are missing them..mere mom dad sirf US gaye he..mein toh unase phone pe baat kar sakti hu..baad me unase mil bhi sakti hu..lekin fir bhi mein unhe bahot miss karti hu..fir aap apne parents ko kitana miss karate honge..mein samaz sakti hu..

Arjun(with teary eyes):-Riyu..

Riya(looking to his eyes):-but..you must move on..they also wanted the same thing..

He take a deep sigh..

Riya(She get up..& said):-take care..(& was about to leave..)

He hold her hand..

Arjun:-Riyu..Are you ok now..?

Riya:-ya..i am fine..doctor ne kaha he ke ab bilcul thik hu..

He nodded..

Riya:-shree told me about baba..i want to call you but..

Arjun:-I know..Rehabiltation center me phone use karane ki permission nahi thi..

Riya(suprizingly):-aapko kaise pata..?

Arjun:-woh meine tumse baat karane ke liye 1-2 baar phone kiya tha..

Riya:-aapne muze kyo call kiya tha..?

Arjun(hesitedly):-woh..tumhare mom-dad baat karana chahate the..

(Actually he was worried for Riya..hence he make call to rehabitation center not only 1-2 times..but more than that..but they don't allow him to talk to her..so he call almost everyday to Rathod to know about her health..as Rathod can easily take information about her from Shree..)

Riya:-oh..meri aaj subah hi unase baat hui he..

Arjun:-tumne unhe kuch bhi kyo nahi bataya Riya..?

Riya:-mein unako pershan nahi karana chahati..agar unhe bata diya toh woh sab chodakar wapas aa jayege..jo mein nahi chahti..aur sahi waqt aane par mein unhe sab bata dungi..

Arjun:-Riyu..mein chahta hu ke tum inn sab pareshanio se bahar nikalo..mein bas tumhe pehale ki tarah hasate hue dekhna chahta hu..the Riyu..i meet to whom first time ..that Riyu who always smile & make smile to others..to even her both khadoos boss also..

Riya:-I am trying..but ..

She suddenly realize he still holding her hand..he also realize..& leave her hand..

She come to the door of his cabin...

Riya(looking back):-I know ke aapne muzse shadi sirf baba ki khushi ke liye ki thi..lekin ab jab woh nahi rahe..toh ab aap iss shadi se puri tarah se aazad ho chuke he..now you don't have any responsibility to me..not need to care about me...we are just collegues now..nothing more..

She leaves from his cabin..

Arjun(in mind):-why Riyu..?why..?you are so sweet..why you are so nice..?why the hell you are so selfless person..?i know you are doing all this so that there will be no difference between me & Rosh..but if staying away from me will return smile on your face..then I don't make any excuses ..

After 3 days:-

Riya still in sad mode..Arjun also feel bad looking to her..

Arjun:-kitana samzaya iss ladki ko fir bhi..?

Rathod:-don't worry Arjun..meine Shree ko issi bare me baat karane ke liye bulaya he..

Shree come inside cabin of Rathod..

Shree:-sir aapne muze bulaya..?

Rathod:-hmm..baitho(shree sits)..Riya ki tabiyat ab kaisi he..?

Shree:-sir usaki tabiyat bilcul thik he..lekin aap aise kyo puch rahe he..?

Rathod:-woh itani sad aur depressed dikh rahi he..

Shree(looking to Arjun from corner of his eyes):-haa..woh zara depressed toh he ..

Rathod:-tumne usse baat nahi ki he iss bare me..?

Shree:-woh mein..koshish kar raha hu..usse hasane..usase baat karane ki..lekin..woh..

Rathod:-Shree..isase pehale ke usse depression ki wajah se..

Shree:-no..sir..aap aisa mat kaho..usse kuch nahi hoga..I promise you sir..kal jab aap office aayge toh aapko wahi Riyu milegi..jise ham sab miss kar rahe he..I promise you sir..

Rathod:-I know you will fulfill this promise..you can go shree..

Shree goes..

Rathod(looking to arjun):-I hope..Shree sab thik karde..

Arjun:-I hope too..

In Shree's Home:-

Riya is standing in balcony of hall in his house after taking dinner..& listening some sad song..

Shree comes from behind..stop the song..& put his hand on her shoulder..

Shree:-ye kya Riyu..?ho kya gaya he tuze..?ye kaisa sad song sun rahi thi?

Riya:-bas aise hi..

Shree:-aise hi..?come on Riyu..tu ne thik se khana bhi nahi khaya..aaj toh meine sab tera favorite food order kiya tha..

Riya:-mera mann nahi tha Shree..

Shree:-khana nahi khana he..kisise baat nahi karani he..hasana nahi..bate nahi..chup chap baithi rehati he..aise kitane dino tak chalega Riyu..?

Riya:-I don't know..

Shree:-come on..dekh uss Sikandar..aur usake ghatiya harakato ko tu bhul ja..

Riya:-usse toh mein bhula bhi du..lekin..

Shree:-lekin..Arjun sir he na..?teri sari baate unhi pe atak jati he..kyo Riyu..?kyo..?why you cant understand you have to move on.?

Riya:-I am trying Shree..but..

Shree:-Riyu..look to youself..what you have become..look to you once..jis Riyu ko dekhke mein apne sare gam..sari pareshaniya bhul jata tha..jo hamesha kisi bhi situation me muze hasane pe mazbor kar deti thi..kaha he woh Riyu..?kaha he woh..?

Riya:-woh toh kab ki marr gayi Shree..

Shree:-nahi..meri dost itane aasani se haar nahi maan sakti..woh toh bahot strong he..woh aise nahi tut sakti..aise nahi marne dunaga mein usse..

Riya:-ab tum toh kya..koi bhi kuch nahi kar sakta..

Shree:-for god sake Riyu..ye depressed bate band karo..muze meri wahi Riyu wapas chahiye..muze woh wapas chahiye..tumhare mom-dad ko woh chahiye..

Riya looking to him with teary eyes..

Shree:-bas..ek hi insaan ke aas-paas tumne apni zindgi samet li he..Arjun sir..Arjun sir..enough..enough about him..if you really love him na..Riyu..then you cant broke like this..kyo ki agar tum unase saccha pyar karti ho na toh woh pyar tumhe kabhi tutne nahi dega..woh tumhe jine pe mazboor kar dega..tu ne hi toh ek baar kaha tha na ke saccha pyar aapko kabhi harane nahi deta..kya hua agar tuze unaka pyar nahi mila..par tu ye kyo nahi dekh rahi..ke aur bhi kayi log he..jo shayad tuzse usase bhi jyada pyar karte he jitana tu Arjun sir se karti he...tere mom-dad..jo tuzse bahot pyar karte he..ham sab tumhare dost..mein,chotu,liza..sab tere liye din-raat pershan he..kyo..kyo ki ham log bhi tuzse utana hi pyar karte he..kya inn sab ke pyar ki koi kimat nahi tere life me..?kya hamari dosti kisi kaam ki nahi tumhare liye..?kya ham log pagal he jo tuze khush..tuze smile karate dekhna chahate he..?kitani badi zindgi padi he Riyu..kitana kuch karana he tuze zindgi me..?kya woh sare sapne bhul jayegi..sirf ek sapna tut gaya toh..kya sare sapne apne hato se tod degi..?kya hua tere uss sapne ka..jo tu best police officer banana chahti thi..ke tere mom-dad ko tuzpe proud ho..?kya bhul jayegi woh..?

Tears rolled down from her eyes..Shree hug her..

Shree:-stop it..Riyu..bas bahot ro liya ab tu ne..

He wipe her tears..suddenly his phone buzz..

Riya:-kisaka he..?

Shree(reading message):-woh liza ka he..aaj ham log club jane wale the na.. lekin mein nahi aane wala hu ye usse batana bul hi gaya..abhi usse message kar deta hu..

Riya(in mind,looking to Shree):-oh god..liza ka message aaya he toh..isaki aakhe kaise chamak rahi he..shut..mere ye baat pehale kyo dyan nahi aayi..jab liza muzse milanae hospital..ya Shree ke ghar pe aati thi..tab Shree ki nazar me jo changes ho the..mein kaise nahi samaz payi..kaise nahi samaz payi ke mere best friend ke dil me koi ladki bas gayi he..(she smile)aur usane bhi muze nahi bataya..kaise batayega..mein khud ki pareshaniyo me aise kho gayi thi..ke oh..shit..kitani pagal hu mein..mere best friend ko usaki life ki itani badi baat bhi share karne ke liye mein available nahi thi..(she wipe her tears..)bas bahot ho gaya Riya..this is enough now..

Shree has finished the sending message..he look to Riya..she is smiling..he suprized by it..

Shree:-kya hua..?smile kyo kar rahi he..?

Riya:-kyo..?smile karana koi gunah toh nahi..accha ek baat bata..ye sab kab se chal raha he..

Shree:-kya..?kya kab se chal raha he..?

Riya(teasing mood):-yahi..tera aur liza ka..?

Shree(smile & blush somewhat):-stop it..Riyu..aisa kuch nahi..we are just friends..

Riya:-kya..?zoot..woh bhi muzse..?Shree..?

Shree:-nahi..sach..tu galat samaz rahi he

Riya(push him to his bedroom,smiling naughtly):-anhh..muze jo samazna tha woh mein samaz gayi..

She turn to her room with smile on her face..

In morning:-

She get up early..& smile to herself..

Riya:-wow Riya..aaj ka din khass he..aaj se tu ek nayi suruwat karne ja rahi he..(she smile..& turn to bathroom..)

She get ready for office..& make breakfast for both of her..

Shree coming to dinning table..

Shree:-hey..tu ne breakfast banaya..?

Riya(smile):-Shree..ye kya..good morning nahi.. "hi" nahi..sidhe breakfast pe..?tuzpe bhi Chotu ka asar hone laga he..jab dekho tab khana..aur khane ki bate..(she laugh..)

Shree also laugh..& become very happy that their talk on last night has affected her..& she is smiling..

They both finishes breakfast with laughing & joking..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya horaha hai...i am happy for riya yaar ...sometimes its hard ...but u gotta move on
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

awsum yar...
but feeling bad for riya... poor girl is suffering so much...
arjun surely has feelings for riya...
and that roshni😡 why is she behaving like that... she even told riya to staw away from arjun... pkka something is fishy...
omg riya in rehablitation... glad she improved there and has joined back...
ohh no arjun's father :( feeling bad for him...
continue soon...


hey love the made for each other collage ...can i use i???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part... Happy to see Riya back on her old self... Shree Riya convo ws nice... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
awww arjun went to office just for riya <3
arjun hugged her <3
love the way riya was consoling him :)
how sweet arjun use to call for riya everyday
love the way shree was making riya understand everything
finally riya smiled
love the way riya was teasing shree and awww shree was blushing :)
good to see old riya back :)
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..
Lovd da wya shree realized riya..
Nd finallie nw riya is nt more on depressing state..
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
arjun went to offoice for riya gr8
ariya convo in arjun cabin was nice
shree riya convo was nice
glad to see our old riya back
cont soon

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