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VarshaLuvsArjun thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update riya sonali blackmailing arjun and sam..arjun ab kya karne wale hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update pls continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part 😆

was laughing reading dis update...

guys are hooked up... riya and sona had tied dem and controlling dem as dey are puppets... lvd it

wait & watch haan 😆 waiting...

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late.
Awsm updt
ria kya tareeka tha un dono ko mananeka.
Just lv it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update loveit thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Super cool update dr.

Ariya moments in the beginning was super cute.

Wow Shriza engagement was in trouble caz of their parents fight.

Loved the way Shree comforted Liza.

Loved the way Riya n Chotu supported thm.

Wow Riya nai kya idea nikala hai.

Loved the way Riya was buttering Arjun n thn persuaded him to talk to Shriza's parents.

Awww Rathod laugh on poor Arjun's condition.

OMG even Sonali do the same with Rathod.

Waaaooo thy coxed Shriza's parents for their marriage. That's great.

Awww Riya kissed him n thank him for his help.

Wht r thy both planning to do with their wives for blackmailing thm???????

Eager to read more.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey so sorry for the late comment...!!
just read last two parts...!!
superb updates...!!wow arjun is getting too naughtier 😆😉
kya ariya romance tha... mazza aagya...!! it was very hot...!!!😉
sam arjun convo was lovely... the way sam was teasing him😆
ohh no shriza ki engagement problem...
love the way riya and sonali blackmailed their husbands into helping them😆
sam arjun pe has rha tha na ab uski baari...😆
ye kya plan ki hai samjun ne?
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry dear.
Net mein probz tha,isiliye comment nai karpayi.
Wokay.
Ariya romance was,as always good and hot.
OMG...
Shree aur Liza ki engagement tootne ke kagar par thhi,but,Riya aur Sonali aise blackmail kia Arjun aur Sam bhai ko...
Hahaha...
Loved the SamJun convo and their teaching each other,as well.
Manna parega Riya aur Sonali ke blackmailing powers ko.
Suppera,Suppera and Yanna Suppera.
Loved it...
Ya Allah...
They got to knw that their wives' blackmailed them and now,they r going to take their sweet revenge.
Lovely.
Yay...
Shriza ka parents' maan gaye.
Woo hoo...
Congo fr completing 100 pages.
Waiting for ur update,very soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Sorry dear.
Net mein probz tha,isiliye comment nai karpayi.
Wokay.
Ariya romance was,as always good and hot.
OMG...
Shree aur Liza ki engagement tootne ke kagar par thhi,but,Riya aur Sonali aise blackmail kia Arjun aur Sam bhai ko...
Hahaha...
Loved the SamJun convo and their teaching each other,as well.
Manna parega Riya aur Sonali ke blackmailing powers ko.
Suppera,Suppera and Yanna Suppera.
Loved it...
Ya Allah...
They got to knw that their wives' blackmailed them and now,they r going to take their sweet revenge.
Lovely.
Yay...
Shriza ka parents' maan gaye.
Woo hoo...
Congo fr completing 100 pages.
Waiting for ur update,very soon.

thanks zebbie..
will try to update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

At night:-

They all leave for the day..

Rathod's home:-

Sameer come to home..& go to another bedroom to get fresh..

Sonali:-isse kya hua..?hamari bedroom me jane ke bajay ye dusare bedroom me kyo chala gaya..?

After sometime he comes to hall..

Sonali:-Sam..chalo na..dinner kar lete he..

Rathod:-meine office me hi kar liya he..tum kar lo..

She make a face..& do her dinner..

After sometime..Rathod is busy in some file..she smile..& goes to bedroom..come with wearing violet color short nighty..

She sit near Sameer on sofa..

Sonali:-Sam..aur kitana time he..chalo na..so jate he..

Rathod(look her from top to bottom,in mind):-OMG..ye kya..?no..no..Sam..dont forget tuze usse avoid karna he..

Sonali(stretch her arms..romatically):-OMG..Sam..mein aaj bahot tired hu..chalo na..jaan..

Rathod(trying to control him):-muze bahot kaam he..tum jao..so jao..

Sonali(make face):-kya..?

Rathod:-oh..ho..dont disturb me Sonali..you go & sleep..this is urgent work..i have to complete it today..

Sonali(moves her hand over his face,romantically):-uff..Sam..chodo na ye sab..bahot ho gaya kaam..

Rathod(trying to show angry expression on his face):-Sonali...kitani baar bolu don't disturb me..tum jao yaha se..

Sonali(in loving voice):-no..mein nahi jaugi..

Rathod(in mind):-oh..god..kya bakwas idea he Arjun ki..?

Rathod:-ok..tum nahi jaogi toh mein hi chala jata hu..

He turns to another bedroom..

Sonali:-oh..Mr.Rathod..trying to avoid me..hmm..dekhte he aur kitane der reh sakte ho..(she smile)

She also come in that room..& sit on bed near him..

Rathod:-Sonali..tum ab yaha kyo aayi ho..?

Sonali:-mein wait karti hu tumhara kaam khatam hone ka..

Rathod:-dekho..Sona..muze bahot kaam he..shayad raat bhar jagana pade..you are tired na..then go to our bedroom..& sleep there..mein aaj raat yahi so jauga..

Sonali:-ok..koi baat nahi..you do your work..mein yahi so jati hu..

She lie down on the bed..near to him..where he sits & trying to do his work..

Rathod take a deep sigh..& try to concentrate on his work..but again his attension is snatch by her..she is looking too good in that dress..which is just covering her thigh..showing her sleemy tender legs..

Rathod(in mind):-stop it..Sam..concentrate on file..

She take a pillow & hug it tightly..

Rathod(see this..& in mind):-hey bhagawan..damm it..

Rathod(pull blancket over her):-sona..ye kya kar rahi ho..thik se so jao..

She throw the blancket..

Rathod:-what..?

Sonali:-muze blancket nahi chahiye..muze garmi ho rahi he..

Rathod:-itane thandi ke mausam me tumhe garmi ho rahi he.. woh bhi itani short nighty pehenane ke baad..

Sonali(romatically):-woh kya he..tum itane mere paas ho na..issliye..

Rathod:-stop it sona..

He leave from the room..& again come to hall..

Rathod(in mind):-oh..god..iss Arjun ko toh mein..kya bakawas idea diya he..usse kya pata Sona ko avoid karna mere bas ki baat nahi he..aur ab toh bilcul bhi nahi..

Sonali also come to hall..he is sitting on sofa..she come near to him..& sit on his lap..

Rathod(trying for the last time):-sona..why you are trying to distract me..?

Sonali don't say anything..just come closer to him..& kiss on his lips..gentely..pull him closer to her..

Rathod hold her in his arm..& take her to their bedroom..placed her on bed..lean over her..

Rathod(in mind):-badh me jaye..Arjun ki idea..

He started kissing her lips..& she also response back to him..they broke off after some time..

Rathod:-Sona..tum iss dress me bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho..

He switch off lights.

After sometime..both are sleeping in each others hug..

Rathod:-Sona..

Sonali:-hmm..

Rathod:-agar firse tumne muze kisi bhi baat ke liye aise blackmail karne ki koshish ki na..toh iss baar toh mein maan gaya hu..lekin next time ye itana aasan nahi hoga..

Sonali:-don't worry Mr.Sameer Rathod..tumhe manana muze acche se aata he..aur chahe kuch bhi kar lo..last me jeet toh meri hi hogi..(she smile)

Rathod(kiss her forehead):-ok..baba..maan gaya tumhe..you are amazing..ab itani tarif kar raha hu tumahri..isake badle me muze kuch toh milna chahiye na..

She blush..& hide her face in his bare chest..

Rathod smile..& started kissing her..

Arjun's home:-

Riya is talking on phone with Shree..about his & Liza'a wedding preparation..while Arjun is driving silently..

They reach to home..

Riya(excitedly):-Arjun..batayiye..aapko dinner me kya khana he..?aaj mein aapki favorite dishes banaugi..

Arjun:-muze itani bhi bhuk nahi he..aur meine..pizza order kar diya he..

Riya:-Pizza..?par..par..aapko pizza pasand nahi he na..

Arjun(somewhat rudly):-its ok..

He turn to bedroom..& go to get freshed..

Riya(in mind):-inhe kya ho gaya..?lagata he ke bahot thak gaye he..

They take dinner silently..

After dinner..he come to hall..& sit on sofa..& starts reading a file..

Riya(sits near to him..):-Arjun..ye kya kar rahe ho aap..?

Arjun(somewhat angrily):-dikh nahi raha..?kaam kar raha hu..

Riya:-par ye toh Mr.Mehata ke murder ki file he..ye case solve karna itana urgent bhi nahi he..toh fir aap..?

Arjun(angrily):-case solve karna urgent ho ya na ho..case solve karna hamara kaam he..

Riya:-aap gussa kyo ho rahe he..?mein toh bas ye keh rahi thi..you look tired..so take rest..

Arjun(angrily):-muze kya karna he aur kya nahi..ye tum muze mat sikhao..agar tumhe sona he toh jake so jao..mera dimaag mat khao..

Riya make a face..he hold file infront of him..& started reading it..

Arjun(in mind):-sweetheart ye toh suruwat he..

Riya switch on TV..

Arjun(angrily):-ye kya..?why you ON TV..?

Riya:-aap kaam kar rahe ho..muze bahot bore ho raha he..issliye meine..

Arjun(angrily,shout):-muze shanti se kaam karne do..leave me alone..

Riya:-par Arjun..

Arjun(yelled at her):-mera gussa mat badao..tum yaha se jao..

Riya switch off the TV..& look to Arjun..he again started reading the file..

Riya(in mind):-inhe aaj ho kya gaya he..?office me bhi muzse thik se baat nahi kar rahe the..meine kitana sweetly inko kiss kiya..par inhone muze respond bhi nahi kiya..aur ab muzpe aise chilla rahe he..gussa kar rahe he..kahi..no..no..aisa nahi ho sakta..

Riya(to Arjun):-aap muzse naraz ho kya Arjun..?

Arjun(rudly,without looking her):-nahi..

Riya:-meine aapko Shree ki help karne ke liye force kiya issliye aap muzse naaraz ho kya..?

Arjun(angrily):-nahi..mein tumse naraz nahi hu..

Riya:-toh meine office me aapko kiss kiya woh aapko accha nahi laga issliye..aap..

Arjun(smile in his mind..but don't show it to Riya..& angrily yelled to her):-stop it..muze akela chod do..kitani baar bolu mein..jao yaha se..

Riya(get up suddenly):-samaz gayi mein ke aap muzse aisa behave kyo kar rahe he..(her eyes get filled with tears..)woh..woh..wapas aa gayi he na..?

Arjun(don't get her):-kya..?kyon..?

Riya(tears flow from her eyes):-I know..woh wapas aa gayi he..issiliye aap muze apne se dur karna chahate ho na..?

Arjun(get more frustrated looking that she is crying..):-kis ki baat kar rahi ho tum..?

Riya:-Roshni..woh..wapas aa gayi he na aapki life me..issliye aap muze chodna chahate ho na..?you still love her..i know..you still love her..

She run towards bedroom..with crying hard..& close the door behind her..

Arjun(shockingly):-Roshni..?what the hell..?kya ladaki he yaar ye..?kuch bhi kya sochti he..?hey bhagawan ..

He come to room..& knock on the door..

Arjun:-Riyu..Riyu..open the door..door kholo..Riyu..

She don't open the door..he can hear voice of her crying outside room also..

He cursed himself..search the keys of bedroom..& open the door..

She is crying hardly..lying on bed..& hugging the pillow..

Arjun comes close to her..he make her sit..& hug her..she push him..& get down of bed..

Riya:-don't touch me..i am leaving..mein abhi ja rahi hu..

Arjun(hold her hand & pull her to him..):-hey Riyu..kya ho gaya he tumhe..?kya kya sochti rehati ho..?tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa kuch nahi he..tumne Shree ki help karne ke liye jis tarah muze blackmail kiya na..usliye mein tumhe bas thoda sa tease kar raha tha bas..

She just keep looking him..

Arjun:-tumhe yakin nahi ho raha muzpe..?sach me yaar..mein toh bas gussa hone ka drama kar raha tha..

Riya:-sach me..?

Arjun:-Sach me..sweetheart..(he wipe her tears..& kiss her both cheeks..)aur aisa kyon sa husband hoga jise accha nahi lagega..jab usaki itani sweet,beautiful,cute wife..usse kiss kare..meine to iss liye tumhe respond nahi kiya..because I just want to enjoy your kiss..afterall you were kissing me first time like that..

Riya blush..Arjun(he pull her more closer..& put series of kisses on her neckline..)

Riya:-Arjun..

Arjun:-hmm..

Riya(worrily,with teary eyes):-agar kabhi sach me Roshni wapas aa gayi..toh aap usse maaf kar denge..?aur kya..firse usse apnayege..?

Arjun:-haa..mein usse maaf kar dunga..Riyu..kyo ki..ho na ho..par usake jane se hi tum aur mein ek hue he na..aur..aur..rahi baat usse firse apnane ki(Riya looking him..he smile)..toh..sirf tum..aur tum hi ab mera pyar ho..jo tum ho toh mein hu..jo tum nahi..toh mein bhi nahi..

She smile..

Arjun:-aur..aisa kabhi sochna bhi mat..ke mein tumhe chod dunga..(he winked naughtly to her)tum chahogi toh bhi nahi choduga..

She smile shyly..

He take her in his arm...& placed her to bed..lye beside her..

Pull her in his hug..

Arjun:-Riyu..

Riya:-hmm..

Arjun:-office me jaise kiss kiya tha..waise firse karo na..

Riya(blush):-shut up Arjun..(she hide her face in his hug..)

Arjun laugh..& pull her more closer..

They spend another passionate night with each other..

After sometime..

Arjun:-Riyu..?

Riya:-hmm..

Arjun:-so gayi kya..?

Riya(in sleepy tone):-hmm..

Arjun:-open your eyes na..sweetheart..

She open her eyes..

Arjun:-sweetheart..waise muze pata nahi tha..ke tum muze aise bhi blackmail kar sakti ho..

She blush..

Arjun:-lekin..sweetheart..aage se muze aise blackmail karne se pehale soch lena..blackmail tum kar logi..aur mein tumhari baat maan ke tumhara kaam bhi kar dunga..lekin..

Riya:-lekin..?

Arjun:-lekin..usake badle me muze..aaj raat ki tarah hi..

Riya(blush..):-stop it Arjun..

Arjun(laugh):-Riyu..agar tumhara kaam karne ke badale me muze aisa romance karne ko milega..toh..i sware..tumahre liye mein..Chotu..aur tumhare baki sare friends ki shadi karwauga..tum kahogi toh marriage beauro hi khol lunga..

Riya:-Arjun..

Arjun:-are sach me..lekin..har friend ki setting karwane ke baad..tumhe waise hi muze kiss dena padega jaise aaj office me kiya tha..

Riya(she blush):-stop it Arjun..(& hug him tightly..)

They days goes on..after almost 20 days..finally..its a day of Shree & Liza's marriage..

All are busy in marriage preparation..Shree & Liza both are very happy..

While others are also really happy for them..

Shree's mom:-Riya..beta..woh pandit ji ko kuch saman chahiye..plz woh zara dekho..

Riya:-haa..aunty..

She goes to pandit ji...he ask her to bring some things..

Riya:-are..ye sab kaha rakha he..haa..yaad aaya..woh..uss room me he..

She turn to the room..where all things related to puja are kept..

She take the things in her hand..& about to leave..suddenly..lights get off..

Riya:-oh..god..ye light bhi..

Suddenly she feels..someones hand around her waist..& his lips are moving on her back..

Riya(moaned):-Arjun...

He continue kissing her back..

Riya turn..& push him..switch on battery of her mobile..

Riya:-what is this Arjun..?aap bhi na..

Arjun(trying to pull her to him..):-Riyu..ek minute na..plz..?

Riya goes towards switch..& switch on lights in room..

Riya:-Arjun..aap bahot naughty hote ja rahe ho..rooms ki lights bhi off kar di..aur door bhi band kar diya..(she open door of room)

Arjun:-Riyu..why you are opening the door..?

She take the things which she want to give pandit in her hand..& about to leave..

Arjun(hold her another free hand,& pull her to him..):-Riyu..wait na..bas thodi der..

Riya:-Arjun..woh pandit ji kabse chilla rahe he..muhurat nikala jar aha he..der ho jayegi..plz..chodiye mera hath..

Arjun:-isame galti tumhari hi he..tum aaj itani khubsurat lag rahi ho na..that I cant take off my eyes from you..

She blush..

Arjun(in loving voice):-just one kiss..plz..?

His face come closer to her..

Suddenly Sonali comes there..

Sonali:-oh..god..Arjun..

Arjun leave her immigiately..

Sonali:-Riya..pandit ji saman ke liye wait kar rahe he..aur tum..yaha..?

Riya(turn red):-woh..woh..

Sonali(teasing tone):-aur Arjun..tum ne toh had hi kar di..mana ke tumhari biwi itani khubsurat lag rahi he..ke tum jab se aaye ho..usse hi ghur rahe ho..lekin..thoda sa toh..

Arjun:-Sonali..woh..

Sonali(teasing him):-what..?Shree aur Liza ki shadi ho jane do..dinner kar lena..fir apni biwi ko ghar hi leke jana he..(looking to Riya..)ab chale..?

Riya hurrily leave from there..

Sonali(she & Riya walking outside the room):-waise..Riya..tumhe agar wapas jana he toh chali jao..ye saman mein pandit ji ko de deti hu..

Riya:-plz..Sonali..

Sonali:-Riya..kya baat he..?Arjun toh bade hi romantic mood me tha..Sam ko bol ke tum dono ko kuch dino ki chutti dilwadu kya..?

Riya:-shut up Sonali..

Sonali laugh..& Riya smile with blushing..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago

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