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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update 😆

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey so sorry for the late comment...!!!
just read the last 4 parts together
and they were superly duperly awsum...!!
gosh arjun is so naughty...!!!😆 never misses a chance to kiss riya...!!!
airport pe bhi masti soojh rhi thi...!!
loved sam and arjun's phone convo.. kitne questions the sam ke pass...!!
love shre and riya's friendship...!!
finally riya's mom dad are here...!!!
awww arjun ke manane pe bhi nai mane...
love how arjun made sameer blackmail shree so that sam and shree talk to riya's parents...!!
office wala romance was very romantic...!!1😉
yess finally they agreed for ariya's marriage...!!
hahah arjun was so much desperate to get married...!! love how everyone was teasing him...!!
those scenes were funny... aur wo last part... abhi mauka mile to abhi ready hojaaye shaddi ke liye lol...!!!
ariya kiss in the parking was hot...!!😉 they are so romantic...!!
awww abhi bhi nok jhok band ni hui.. aur ab shree ko bhi bech mai le aaye...!!!
love the way arjun was asking/ threatning shree ki if he can call her riyu...!!!😆
bechare shree liza ki convo rukwa di...!!!
wow mehndi day is here...!!!!
can't wait to see them getting married..!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
can't wait to see them getting married..!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally riya dad agree fr there marriage
arjun is so desprete
and riya meri shoppping ka kya hoga
cont soon thnx fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohye sonu kahan hai yr...
lagta hai bhul gaye nahiii
update kab milega ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

Riya was very happy looking Arjun's name on her hand..

Riya is lost in Arjun's thoughts..& smiling to herself..

She look to her father..he seems to worry..

Riya:-mom-dad..aap dono kuch pareshan lag rahe ho?

Riya's dad:-nahi toh..

Riya:-dad..?

Riya's dad:-are kuch nahi..woh zara business se related he..bas..thik ho jayega..

Riya:-oh..ho.dad..ab batayiye bhi..

Riya's dad:-nothing special..dear..you know na..ke ham log jald se jald India settle hona chahate he..bas ussi se related meri ek meeting he..i mean sab formalities complete ho jayegi..

Riya:-g8..na dad..toh.meeting kab he..

Riya's dad:-well..(hesitedly)..agar meeting attend karni he..toh muze kal hi nikalana padega..

Riya:-kal..?dad..aap bhul toh nahi gaye..kal meri shadi he..

Riya's dad(laugh):-no..dear..mein bula nahi hu..issiliye toh mein soch raha hu ke..iss meeting ko kuch dino ke liye postpone kar deta hu..

Riya:-dad..postpone..?plz..aap waha ka sara kaam khatam kar lo na ab..aap dono US chale jate he na..toh mein aapko bahot miss karti hu..

Riya's mom:-we know this dear..issiliye toh tumhare dad sara kaam jald se jald finish karna chahate he..lekin..tumhari shadi..

Riya:-ek kaam karte he..aap kal raat ki flight se chale jana dad..matlab..shadi ho jane ke baad wali flight..aur fir aap meeting bhi attend ho jayegi..

Riya's mom- dad look each other..

Riya:-what..?aap dono itana kya soch rahe he..?

Riya's mom:-beta..jis tarah tumhari aur Arjun..i mean..

Riya:-what mom..?meri kuch samaz nahi aa raha ke aap kya keh rahe ho..?

Riya's mom:-I mean..ke hame tumhari bahot fikar ho rahi he..matlab..i know ke Arjun iss baar sach me tumse dil se shadi karna chahata he lekin..

Riya:-mom..?dad..?aap ko abhi bhi aisa lag raha he ke mein Arjun ke sath khush nahi rahugi..?

Riya's dad:-beta..aisa nahi he ke ham doubt kar rahe he..par you know..jo kuch bhi past me hua he..hame darr toh he..aur fikar bhi..

Riya(take a deep sigh):-dad..aapko apni beti pe toh pura bharosa he na..?

Riya's dad:-ofcourse..

Riya:-toh..aap bilcul fikar mat kijiye..dekhana jab aap lautake wapas aayege na..muze khush dekhkar aapke sare doubts aur sari fikar bhag jayegi..

Riya's dad:-par..

Riya(smile):-dad..come on..dont worry..

Riya's mom-dad also smile..

Riya:-toh..aap apne tickets book karwa lijiye..ok..?

Riya's dad:-hmm..mein soch raha hu ke sirf mein akela hi chala jata hu..tumhari mom ko yahi rehane do..

Riya:-no ways haa..dad..mom ko bhi apne sath leke jao.muze pata he..agar mom nahi hogi na toh aap apni BP ki medicines bhi time pe nahi loge..aur fir aap apne khane-pine ka bhi khayal nahi rakhte ..he na mom..?

Riya's mom:-haa..sach mein..

Riya:-toh iss liye aap aur mom dono jao..sara kaam finish kar lo..aur..jaldi se wapas aao apni princess ke pass..

Riya's dad get emotional..& hug Riya..

Riya(her eyes also get teary):-dad..?

Riya's dad(with tears):-pata nahi kaisi ajeeb reet he iss duniya ki..beti ko itana pyar karo..aur fir ek din..ek din..usse kissi aur ke ghar bhej do..(tears flows from his eyes..Riya & her mom's eyes also stared flowing with tears..)

Riya:-dad..?

Riya's dad(looking to Riya's mom):-betiya sach me kitani pyari hoti he na..just like princess..jaha jati he sab taraf pyar bhar deti he..apne maa-baap ke ghar ko itani khushiyo se bhar deti he..ke jab woh chali jati he yakin hi nahi hota ke woh chali gayi he..

Riya(wipe her tears):-dad..?aap toh aise baat kar rahe ho..ke jaise mein aap dono se bahot dur ja rahi hu..mein bhi Mumabi me hi rahugi..aur aapka US ka kaam finish hone ke baad aap bhi toh yahi rahege..

Riya's dad:-lekin fir bhi..

Riya:-fir bhi kya dad..?kuch nahi badlega..mein hamesha se aapki beti thi..aur hamesha aapki hi beti rahugi..ye fact toh koi bhi change nahi kar sakta..

Riya's mom(crying):-meri bacchi..

Riya(wipe her mom's tears):-oh..ho..had he mom-dad..aap dono toh aise ro rahe he jaise meri bidai abhi hone wali he..come on..thode aasu kal ke liye bacha ke rakhiye..

Her mom & dad remain silent & sad..

Riya:-oh..god..cancel..cancel..cancel..

Riya's mom:-kya cancel..?

Riya:-shadi..aur kya..?

Riya's mom-dad:-kya?

Riya:-toh..agar aap dono aise hi sad mood me rahe na..toh mein koi shadi nahi karne wali..

Riya's mom:-ye kya keh rahi ho..?

Riya:-bilcul thik keh rahi hu..mein abhi Arjun ko phone karke shadi se inkaar kar deti hu..

Riya's dad:-Riyaaa..?

Riya:-toh mein kya karoo..?ab aap hi batao.

Riya's dad(smile):-shadi rokne ki koi zarurat nahi he..because if you happy then we happy..& we know..your happness with Arjun..

Riya's mom(smile):-aur agar tum ne shadi se inkaar kar diya na..toh muze toh darr he ke kahi Arjun tumhe bhaga ker na le jaye..

Riya (blush..& hug her mom):-mommm..

They all smiles..

Next morning..

they perform all rituals including haldi..they getting married at evening..

Riya has ware redish colour lehnga..while Arjun has ware crimish colour sherwani..

All are seems to very happy for both of them..

Rathod & Sonali are busy in teasing Arjun..while Shree,Chotu & Liza also all the time teasing Riya..

Riya's mom-dad looks very happy when they see Arjun & Riya happy..

They perform all rituals of marriage..Arjun happily put mangalsutra in Riya's nake..then fill her maang with sindoor..they perform all 7 pheras while all others showing their blessing with flowers on them..

After marriage..they all take dinner together..& then they leave to airport as Riya's mom-dad are leaving for US..

Their flight was late..so when Riya & Arjun reach to home its already 2:00 in night

Riya feels very tired..Sonali & Liza were already decorated their bedroom with flowers & candles..they both come in their room..& saw their room's decoration..Arjun gives naughty smile to Riya..she blush..

Arjun goes to get freshed..when he return he found..Riya sleeping peacefully on bed..

He come closer to her..& try to wake her up..but she was in deep sleep..

Arjun(kissed her cheeks):-hey..Riyu..uto na..

But she did not move..

Arjun(kissed her another cheek):-hey..sweetheart..get up na..

Riya(mutter in sleep):-no..sone do..

Arjun smiles..& switch off lights..& lie on bed besides her..

Arjun( come close to her):-hey sweetheart..plz..aaj ki raat sone ke liye thodi na hoti he..(he kiss her chin..)

She turn to opposite side..now her back is facing to him..

Arjun(in mind):-oh..ho Sweetheart..ok..mein tumhe baad me dekh lunga..my dear wife..

He hug her from behind..kiss her back slightly..

Arjun(whisper):-good night..my love..

& hug her tightly from back..

Next morning..

her sleep get broke when she hear her phone is ringing..

she receive the call in sleep..

Shree:-Riyu..?

Riya:-Shree..?kya hua..?

Shree:-are kya hua matlab..?meri sagai he aaj bhul gayi kya..?

Riya:-yaad he muze..lekin..(she look to watch it 7 am..)itani subah kyo phone kiya..?

Shree:-yaar badi problem ho gayi he..

Riya(worrily):-oh..god ab kya hua..?

Shree:-yaar meri ye sherwani..isame kuch..

Riya(angrily):-meine tuze paraso hi sherwani try karne ko bola tha..but I know tu ne ki nahi hogi aur ab aise time pe gadbad ho gayi na..

Shree:-ab kya karu yaar..?

Riya:-tu ruk..mein abhi tere ghar pe aati hu..fir dekhte he kya karna he..ok..

Shree:-ok..lekin ..lekin..

Riya:-lekin kya..?

Shree:-Arjun sir tuze aane denge na..?

Riya:-Arjun sir..(she open her eyes completely..& realized that she is in his house now...look to the bed..she realized he is in deep sleep..)

Shree:-Riya..

Riya:-haa..mein abhi aati hu..

She cuts the phone..she look to Arjun..he is sleeping peacefully..she kiss his forehead..& get up..

After almost one & half hour..Arjun get up..& look for Riya..but don't find her in room..

Arjun:-oh..god ye kaha chali gayi..shayad kitchen me hogi..(suddenly his gaze realized a note on table near bed..he take it & start reading..)

"good morning Arjun..

Mein Shree ke ghar ja rahi hu..

Sorry aapko batakar jana chahti thi..par aap aaram se so rahe the..isaliye disturb nahi kiya..

Ok..fir Shree ke engagement me milate..he..

Bye..

Oh..sorry most important baat toh likana bhul hi gayi..

I love you.."

Arjun( smile reading this..):-love you too..my sweetheart..

(& leave to get ready..)

At evening:-

Riya,chotu are busy in engagement preparation..

Sonali:-are..Riya..ye kya..tu ab tak tyar nahi hui..?jaldi se jaa..ab toh guest bhi aana suru ho gaye he..

Riya:-haa..bas ho gaya..ye flowers ka decoration..

Sonali:-oh..ho..woh mein aur chotu kar lenge..tum jao..

Riya:-ok.

She leaves..

Riya ware this..

she is just giving final touch up..

suddenly lights get off..

Riya(mutter):-ohh..god..lights ko bhi abhi jana tha..

Suddenly she feels someones hand around her waist..& his lips are moving on her back anxiously..

She get shocked..& within a second she take out her gun from her purse..

She turned..& hold the gun on that persons head..

Riya(shout):-how dare you..to touch me..?i wont leave you..

The man:-hey..stop it..

Riya(supersized tone):-Arjun aap..?

Arjun:-haa..mein hi hu..abhi bhi yakin nahi he..then..let me switch on lights..

He turn on lights..

Riya:-aap..?

Arjun:-haa..mein..agar mein nahi bolta..toh tum toh meri jaan hi le leti..

Riya:-oh..god..sorry Arjun..par aapne lights kyo off ki..?muze laga ke koi aur..

Arjun(pull her to him):-lights off nahi karta..toh koi bhi hame disturb karne aa jata..

Riya:-chodiye..ye kya kar rahe ho..?

Arjun:-nahi..aise nahi choduga..

Riya:-plz..Arjun..koi aa gaya toh..?

Arjun:-toh kya..?apni biwi ke sath romance karna koi gunah toh nahi...

Riya:-no way..plz..

Arjun(pulling her more closer..his lips are just millimeter away from hers):-just one kiss..plz..

He is about to kiss her..

Suddenly Sonali enters in the room..

Sonali:-ohh.god..sorry.

Arjun immigiately leave Riya..

Arjun:-woh..

Sonali(smile,naughtly):-Arjun..what is this..?atleast door toh thik se close kar liya karo..

Arjun hurrily leaves from there..

Sonali gives teasing look to Riya..

Riya (blush):-sonali..plz..

Sonali (laugh..):-ok..baba..dont worry tuze tease nahi karugi..lekin chal..sab guest almost aa gaye he..

Riya just nodded..& they both leave for engagement in main hall..

The engagement occours..Shree & Liza are very happy..

& all other also very happy for them..

Riya(hug Shree):-congrats Shree..

Shree:-thanks..Riyu..agar tu nahi hoti toh..ye sab kabhi nahi hota..

Riya(smile):-Liza..plz..yaar..tu Shree ko zara kuch movies dikha..tab isse pata chalega..dosti me no thanks..& no sorry..

They all smile..

After dinner they all leave to their respective houses..

Riya get tired so she sleep in car..while Arjun is driving..

Riya's sleep get broke when she realized that car is stopped..

Riya:-kya hua..?

Arjun:-hamara ghar aa gaya..

Riya(in sleepy voice):-oh..

They both come inside house..Arjun goes to fresh-up..Riya look to the bedroom..

Riya(suprizingly):-ye kya..?kal ki tarah aaj bhi bedroom decorate ki he..?par kal toh Sonali ne sari decoration ki thi..lekin aaj..toh..woh pura waqt mere sath thi..phir ye sab kisane kiya..?

Arjun(hug her from back):-meine..sweetheart..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Yippieee me first 🥳.

Incredible update dr.

Awww she was lost in Arjun's thoughts 😉. So cute.

OMG Riya's father had to go US on her wedding night.

Convo btwn Riya n her mom-dad was very emotional 😭 😭.

Riya's mom dialogue that Arjun tumhe bhaga kay na layeh jayeh was funny 😆 😉.

Awww Rathod n Sonali teased Arjun whereas Choree n Liza teased Riya 😳 😳.

Waaaooo finally Arjun n Riya r married.

Loved Arjun's desperate attempts to woke Riya up 😉 😉.

Loved Shree n Riya's convo.

That note portion was sweet 😊 😊.

Riya's saree was beautiful.

Ariya moments were so romantic ☺️ ☺️.

Awww poor couple their sweet moments were interrupted by Sonali 😳 😳.

Loved the way Sonali teased Arjun 😉.

Waaaooo Shriza r engaged nw.

Awww Arjun again decorated their room. That's so sweet.

Loved it so much.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwh. nice and gun vaala was like ooo... nice :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely,romantic and emotional with a pinch of comedy update...haan yay sahi tha sach and every word of riya dad and mom's word...y alwAys gal leave the family behind:(yippeee they are married...dancing :Dhailaa riya toh sogayi..
.bhejr Arjun hehehe
woah riya ne toh direct gun hi nikal diya waah kya baat hai...
Yahan pe bhi interruption...sahi toh kaha sonali ne door toh theek se band karlete...
So arjun decorated the room hmmm dekhna hai aur kya hota hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update sonu.

so riya lost in arjun thought.

riya and her parents scene was awesome and heart touching.

finally ariya get married.

riya is tired so she sleep so arjun doesnt get opportunity to romance with riya.

next morning shree called her.

ariya romance was awesome in shree engagement.

arjun decorate his bedroom.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.


Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago

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