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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... Ariya moments were really cute... Rathore Arjun convo was really nice... Shree Riya teasing eachother Hope Riya's parents understand them... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow...
Such a hot and lovely update...
Yeh Sam bhai bhi na...
Humesha galat time pe Arjun ko phone karke disturb karta romance karne waqt...
Haha...
Sam bhai knows that he was romancing with Riya.
Finally,Ariya together and all are happy...
Riya also happy for Shree Liza...
OMG...
Riya's parents' came to India.
Hope,that,Riya uske parents ko acche se samjhaye.
Finally,everything clear between Ariya.
OMG... The car wala kiss was hot...
*blushing*
the last part where Arjun and Riya were chatting thru text,was really nice.
Awesome update.
Cheers.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update pls continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read 2 parts together

Ariya romance just awesome,wonderful

Shree ki call wht the Riya is not interested

Mom dad coming

Shree&riya convo awesome

Chatting of Ariya super duper hit

Update is awesome,wonderful,brilliant,superb amazing

Thanx 4 pm me

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
so ariya are together now
hope riy parent accept arjun
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

Next morning:-

Riya is very happy today..the last night was like dream to her..she get ready to go office..& come to take breakfast..where her mom-dad waiting for her..

They started chatting & taking breakfast..

Riya's mom:-are Riya..beta..tumhara aadhe se jyada saman Shree ke ghar pe he na..?

Riya:-are haa mom..but don't worry...mein aaj office se aate waqt leke aaugi apna luggage..

Riya's mom:-ok..

Riya's dad:-so..how is your work going on beta..?

Riya:-very good dad..you know..abhi mein aur Chotu jis undercover operation pe gaye the na.woh hamne successful complete kiya he..Commissioner sir..aur Rathod sir toh bahot hi khush the ham logo ke kaam par..

Riya's dad:-I know..meri beti jo bhi kaam karegi..best hi karegi..we are proud of you dear..

Riya(smile):-thanks dad..

Riya(in mind):-chal Riyu..mom-dad bahot khush he..yahi waqt he Arjun sir ke bare me inhe batane ka..

Riya:-mom-dad..muze aapse kuch baat karni he..

Riya's dad:-haa..bolo beta..

Riya:- dad..woh Arjun ..

Riya's dad(angrily):-don't take his name infront of me..

Riya:-but dad..meri baat toh suniye..

Riya's dad:-kya sunana baki reh gaya he ab..?

Riya:-mom-dad..he really feeling sorry..he is really regret about whatever happened..

Riya's dad:-& you trust him..?

Riya's mom:-Riya..beta..itna sab hone ke baad bhi tu kaise usape vishwas kar sakhti he..

Riya:-mom..plz..dad..aap log jaisa samaz rahe he..woh utane bure nahi he..galti toh insaan se hi hoti he na..

Riya's dad:-no way Riya..tum mere samne usaki tarafdari mat karo..

Riya:-par dad..jab meine unhe maaf kar diya he..then

Riya's dad:-but we have not forgive him..

Riya:-lekin dad..

Riya's dad:-stop it..stop it..this subject is finished here..we wont talk about him again..is it clear to you Riya..?

He leaves from there..Riya hopefully look to her mother..

Riya's mom:-sorry beta..but I think your dad is right..

Riya get upset & leaves to office..

ETF Office:-

Shree,chotu,liza,Riya are in conference room..& teasing each other..

Riya:-but Shree..ye kuch jyada hi fast nahi ho raha..mera matlab he ke tu ne itane jaldi tere mom-dad se Liza ke bare me baat bhi kar li..

Shree:-haa..aur woh..aaj raat ko Liza ke mom-dad se milane bhi jane wale he..

Chotu:-yaar Riyu..Shree aur Liza ki life toh express ki tarah nikal padi he..minimum stop..maximum travel..

Chotu & Riya gives hi5 to each other..

They all laugh..at the same time..Arjun come to conference room..& hear their conversation..& just turn to his cabin..

After sometime..

Chotu:-are yaar..ye file muze Arjun sir ko deni he..mein abhi aata hu..

Shree:-are..chotu..kya kar raha he..?yaar ab Arjun sir ka koi bhi kaam Riyu ko diya karo..waise bhi ab usse Arjun sir ke cabin me jane ka bas bahana chahiye..aur usame ham isaki help nahi karege toh aur kyon karega..

Riya:-shut up Shree..

Chotu:-Ri..waise idea bura nahi he..(he handover her file)ja..are ja..jake de aa file..dekhte he kitani der me tu return aati he..

Riya:-shut up yaar..aur ye tera kaam he na..toh tu hi ja aur tu hi deke aa..

Chotu:-ja na Ri(he pushed her..)I promise ham tuze tease nahi karege..

She take a deep sigh..& come to his cabin..

She put the file on table..

Riya:-sir ye file..

Arjun glared at the file..

Riya(in mind):-yaar..inn Shree aur Chotu ki baat maan ke mein fas jati hu..ab zarur muze daat padegi..ke ye kaam toh Chotu ka tha..fir mein kyo kar rahi hu..blah..blah..blah..

Arjun:-ye file toh meine Chotu ko di thi..

Riya:-haa..par..par..woh kisi aur kaam me busy tha toh..mein leke aayi..

He don't said anything on it..

Riya(in mind):-bach gayi..

She is about to leave..

Arjun:-tumne..mom-dad se baat ki..

Riya(sadly):-hmm..woh bahot gussa ho gaye..but..but..dont worry mein aaj raat firse unse baat karugi..i hope ke woh meri baat samaz jaye..

She is about to leave..he hold her hand..

Riya :-ye aap kya kar rahe he..?

Arjun(pull her to him..started putting wet kisses on her neck..):-I missed you a lot..

Riya:-plz..aap ye kya kar rahe he..?

Arjun(don't hear her..):-Riyu..Riyu..(kisses on her cheeks..)

Riya(lost in him..):-Arjun..

He started kissing her lips..they kiss each other passionately..

They broke off after sometime..he is still holding to her waist..& her hands aroung his neck..

She flashes her dimple smile..he also gives smile to her..

Arjun(kiss lightly to her lips..):-I love you..

He hug her..

Riya(she hug him back):-I love you too..

They remain in hug for sometime..

Riya:-ab muze chodiye na..

Arjun:-no..

Riya:plz..Arjun ..pata nahi Shree aur Chotu kya soch rahe honge..woh ab muze bahot tease karege..

Arjun (broke off..& smile..):-toh karne do..

Riya:-no ways..i m going..

Arjun:-then go..meine thodi na tumhe roka he..?

Riya gives angry look to him..& started leaving..he hold her hand & stop her..

Arjun(coming closer to her):-jab tum gussa hoti ho toh aur bhi khubsurat dikati ho..my sweetheart..(he kissed her cheek..)

She blush..& hurrily leaves...

In conference room:-

Shree:-Riyu..ek file dene me itana time lagata he..?

Chotu:-are Shree zara samaza kar..

Riya:-stop it guys..

At night:-

They have finish their work..& all are about to leave..

Riya got a message from Arjun-"come to my cabin.."

She smiles..& go to his cabin..

Riya:-aapne muze bulaya..

Arjun(also ready to leave..):-hmm..chalo dinner karne chalate he..

Riya(shockingly):-kya..?

Arjun:-itana shock hone ki koi zarurat nahi he..dinner ke liye puch raha hu..kiss ke liye nahi..

Riya(blush):-nahi..muze..muze ghar jana he..

Arjun:-pata he ..dinner ke bad mein tumhe ghar pe hi drop karne wala hu..

Riya:-no..mom-dad must be waiting for me..aur fir muze unse baat bhi karni he

Arjun:-haa..lekin dinner toh mere sath..

Riya:-no..plz..Arjun..ham fir kabhi chale jayege..ok..?

Arjun( make a face..):-ok..

Riya:-bye..

He just nodded upsetly..

Riya's home:-

She took dinner with her parents..after dinner they all are chatting about his father's work in US..

Riya's dad:-Riya ..beta..tumhara dhyan kaha he..?

Riya's mom:-Riya..mein dekh rahi hu beta..jab se tum aayi ho..upset dikh rahi ho..kya baat he..?

Riya:-oh..sorry mom-dad..aap kya keh rahe the..?

Riya's dad:-mein ye keh raha tha..ke hamara business Mumbai me shift karne ka kaam almost ho chuka he..bas kuch thodi formalities baki he..toh mein ye soch raha hu..ke mein akela hi US chala jau..sara kaam finish karne me ek month hi lagega..issliye..tumhari mom India me hi rahegi tumhare sath..what you think beta..?

Riya:-muze koi problem nahi he dad..par..

Riya's dad:-par kya?

Riya:-mein chahati hu ke ek baar aap Arjun ke bare me..

Riya's dad:-Riya..hamne iss bare me subah bhi baat ki thi...aur meine tabhi tumhe kaha tha ke ham iss bare me fir se baat nahi karege..

Riya:-but dad..he really love me..

Riya's dad:-he told you that he love you..& you trust him..?

Riya:-yess..i trust him..more than myself..& I love him more than myself..

She leaves from there upseltly..

Riya's dad(to her mom):-ye sab kya ho raha he..?

Riya's mom:-woh Arjun se bahot jyada pyar karti he..

Riya's dad:-par meri samaz nahi aata..ke woh itani aasani se kaise sab kuch bhula sakti he..?

Riya's mom:-par sach me agar Arjun Riya se pyar karta he toh..

Riya's dad:-tum bhi ab Arjun ki side le rahi ho..

Riya's mom:-toh kya karu..?mein apni beti ko aise nahi dekh sakti..

Riya's dad:-aur tumhe lagata he ke mein usse aise dekh sakta hu..?mein khush hu usse iss tarah daat kar..?hamne Riya ko kabhi kisi baat ke liye roka nahi..usane hamesha usake merzi ki zindagi ji he..lekin..iss baar..

Riya's mom:-iss baar kya..?agar woh dono sach me ek dusare se pyar karte he..toh fir..ye toh accha hi hoga na ke woh sara past bhulakar firse nayi koshish kare..

Riya's dad:-koshish karna aur sach me waisa hona isame bahot farak he..

Riya's mom:-koshish karna hi jyada important he..ye aap bhi jante he..(she paused)muze lagata he ke hame Arjun ko ek mauka dena chahiye..baki ab sab aap pe depend karta he..mana ke Riya ne apni zindgi ke faisale khud liye he..par kabhi bhi ham dono ke faisale ke against jakar nahi..aur muze apni beti pe bilcul yakin he..iss baar bhi woh hamare against nahi jayegi..iss liye ye faisala ab aapko lena he..

She leaves..Riya's dad fall in thinking..

Riya is in her room..she is very upset..& thinking how to persue her parents..suddenly her phone rings..it's Shree's..who told her that his & Liza's engagement get fixed..

Riya(happily):-OMG..itani jaldi engagement..isaka matlab ab sirf 3 din hi baki he...tuze itani kya jaldi he..?

Shree:-are tu toh janti he na..ham dono ki families ko..?bahot sare isues he yaar..matlab you know..hamara cluture different,parents ki thinking bhi different..isase accha koi problem create ho..jald se jald shadi ho jaye toh accha he..warna pata nahi kis baat pe kyon naraz ho jaye..

Riya:-haa..woh toh he..(she paused)lekin..wow..Shree..teri sagai hogi..gr8..congrats...

Shree:-thanks..Riyu..ye sab tere hi full planning ka natija he..ke mein aur Liza sath he..

Riya:-come on Shree..dosti me..no thanks..no sorry.

They have laugh..

Shree:-meine kal se chutti le li he..Rathod sir se abhi baat ki..yaar..bahot sari tayari karni he..aur Shopping bhi..haa..shopping se yaad aaya..tu ne muze promise kiya tha ke tu shopping me meri help karogi..

Riya:-are..ofcourse karugi..ye bhi koi kehni ki baat he..ham kal jayege shopping pe..

Shree:-are haa..Riyu..tu ne tere parents se baat ki..Arjun sir aur tere bare me..?

Riya:-ki..lekin woh nahi maan rahe..

Shree:-don't worry..agar kuch jyada hi problem ho gayi..toh ham milake usako solve karege..i m with you..as always..

Riya:-I know..

She cuts the phone..

After sometime she get a call from Arjun..

Riya(looking to mobile screen,in mind):-oh..god..Arjun ka phone..fir se muzse puchege ke mom-dad ne kya kaha..?lekin kya batau unhe..woh fir se upset ho jayege..meine unhe dinner ke liye mana kiya..tabhi woh kitane upset lag rahe the..ab kya karu..?

her phone get disconnected..but he again call her..this time she received it..

Riya:-haa..Arjun..

Arjun:-Riyu..tum so rahi thi kya..?meine pehale bhi phone kiya tha..par tumne utaya nahi..

Riya:-woh..mein bas..woh..

Arjun:-kya hua..?tum pareshan lag rahi ho..?mom-dad ne kuch kaha kya..?

Riya:-Arjun..meine unhe samazane ki puri koshish ki..lekin woh..

Arjun:-don't worry..Riyu..iss baar mein unase baat karuga..

Riya:-nahi..aap..nahi..

Arjun:-mein kal subah hi unase milane aauga..

Riya:-lekin Arjun..?

Arjun:-Riyu..ye sab jo bhi gadbad hui he woh sab mere wajah se hui he..toh solve bhi muze hi karni padegi na..

Riya:-lekin dad nahi mane toh..?

Arjun:-don't worry sab thik ho jayega..ok..?

Riya:-hmm..

Arjun(smile):-now sleep my sweetheart..good night..

Riya:-good night..

Arjun:-& I love you..

Riya:-love you too Arjun..

She cuts the phone..

Arjun(in mind):-don't worry Riyu..itani mushiko se hamara pyar guzara he..ham iss mushkil se bhi nikal lenge..hamara pyar nahi harega..i m sure ke tumhare mom-dad ko mein mana lunga..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update :) loved it
riya's parents are really so angry on arjun
hope riya's parents forgive arjun soon
love the way choree were teasing riya 😆 they are too good 😆
loved arjun ad riya's romantic moments ❤️
so riya's parents are shifting to india nice
wow shree is getting engaged awesome
loved ariya's conversation on phone
really hope riya's dad gives arjun another chance
cant wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue very soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Wow Shree and Liza are getting engaged 😊
Hope Riya's dad forgives Arjun and accepts Ariya's relationship.
Thanks for the PM 😊
Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
hope riya's dad gets convinced
n give ariya's relation a second chance
cabin's romance was nice
loved ariya moments
n shree-chotu teasing her
wow shree-liza getting engaged
thanks a lot for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was nice and cute luved it hope riya's parents agrree kar jaaye...

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