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VarshaLuvsArjun thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update arjun have to make a final decision whether he wants riya or rosh..hope ariya will be together soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh wow..
Jus amazing update..
Urgh.. Hating rosh..
Dis is da limit..
How could she do dis...
Bt thank God arjun replace da mugs.. Nd den da way he wakes up riya.. Lol
aww.. Arjun imagining rosh as riya...
Nd choree planning to keep ri away frm arjun..
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh!!! He's in love with her... BADLY!!
Shree... PLEASE keep Riya away from Arjun... Varna Roshni Riya ko Kabhi chain se nahi jeene degi!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
What was that??????
Roshni mixed chilli powder in Riya's coffee...
That was the limit...
How can she do this to Riya????
Aaarrrggghhh...
Feel like mixing poison in her coffee...
Arjun changed the mugs and drank Riya's coffee...
Aww...
Just to save Riya,he did that...
Why doesnt he admit to himself that,finally,HE LOVES RIYA A LOT...???
Arjun gets to know that Roshni did this...
Roshni should get a taste of her own medicine...
The way Arjun woke Riya up was really sweet and adorable...
Arjun,man...
Do I need to samjhaofy u that U have fallen in love with Riya???
Go and get ur girl,b4 its too late...
Jaldi se Roshni ka kissa khata, karo,dear.
Choree planning to keep Riya away from Arjun...
Hmm...
Sounds interesting...
Continue soon.
Cheers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gustakh Dil..
Next morning:-

Riya(crying very hard,& going backword side from Arjun):-let me go Arjun..

Arjun(yelled..):-no..no Riyu..dont go..dont leave me..

Riya:-I have to Arjun..i have to go..

Arjun wake up suddenly..& look here & there..there was no Riya..Roshni is sleeping peacefully besides him..he take a deep sigh..& starts thinking about the dream he has just seen..

Arjun:-no..no..aisa nahi ho sakta..it's just a dream..everything is fine Arjun..(he take mobile in his hand..& call to Riya..but cut it before it rings..)nahi abhi toh subah ke 6:00 hi baj rahe he..woh so rahi hogi..calm down Arjun..it's just a dream..

He get up & go for jogging..he come & get ready for office..he look Roshni is still in sleep..he turn to kitchen & make sweet corn soup for both of them..

After sometime Roshni get up..she come to hall & get suprized that Arjun had made breakfast for them..

Roshni:-gr8 Arjun..tumne breakfast banaya he..

He just nodded..& pass her the sweetcorn soup..

Roshni(somehow manage to take the soup):-omg..ye soup kyo banaya tumne..?

Arjun:-kyo..?tumhe pasand nahi he kya ye soup..?

Roshni:-pasand he..lekin..agar tumhe banana nahi aata toh kyo banaya..?

Arjun:-what do you mean..?soup accha nahi bana he kya..?

Roshni:-sorry..par bilcul bhi accha nahi he..

Arjun:-stop it Rosh..i know tum ye issliye keh rahi ho na kyo ki mein kabhi tumhare banaye hue khane ki tariff nahi karta..but its not good thing..ke tum mere banayi huyi cheez ko bura kaho..

Roshni:-are sacchi me..

Arjun:-no way..i know ke soup accha bana he..kyo ki Riyu ke liye meine ek baar banaya tha toh usse bahot pasand aaya tha..

Roshni(get angry to hearing Riya's name..but control herself):-toh..khud hi test kar ke dekh lo..

Arjun tested the soup..it is the worst soup he ever take..

Arjun(in mind):-par Riyu ne toh pichali baar kaha tha ke soup bahot accha bana he..meine abhi bhi ussi tarike se banaya..fir ..?

He remember how Riya take mashroom soup though she have allergy of it..just because Arjun made it for her..

Arjun(in mind):-OMG..this girl is really unbelievable..isaka matlab he ke meri zooti tariff kar rahi thi..balki ye soup toh mein ek sip bhi nahi le sakta..she take it just for me..& praise also me saying that she is ready to take this soup daily..oh..god..she is crazy..(he smiles remembering the incidence)

Roshni:-kya hua..?

He nodded negatively..& take a bread butter to breakfast...

Shree's house:-

Riya is sleeping and watching the same dream that Arjun proposes her & then kiss her..

She get up suddenly..

Shree enter in room with coffee mug in his hand..

Shree:-chal jaldi ready ho ja..office ke liye late ho jayege..

But she still lost in the dream.

Shree:-Riyu..?kya hua..?koi sapna dekha kya..?

Riya:-haa..

Shree(looking to worrily to her):-koi danger sapna dekha kya?

Riya:-nahi..bahot hi achha..sweet dream tha..

Shree(in mind):-OMG..Arjun sir me dam he ye toh mein janata tha..unake punch me kitana dam he ye toh pura department janta he..par muze ye nahi pata tha ke unake wish me bhi itana "Dam" he ke Riyu ko kal raat "Sweet Dream " wish kiya nahi ke Riyu ko sweet dream aana suru ho gaye..Arjun sir toh wakhi me kamal he..

Riya:-ab tuze kya hua..?

Shree:-kuch nahi..chale der ho jayegi..

The next 3 days..Shree & Chotu's plan to keep Riya away from Arjun get perfectly successful as Riya also herself decide to stay away from him..so she keep distance him..this made Arjun more & more angry..

Arjun:-what is this..?why she is avoiding me..?& that Shree & Chotu also all the time sticking to her..

Rathod(calmly):-toh..?

Arjun:-toh..?meine 3 din se usase thik se baat bhi nahi ki..

Rathod:-tuze exactly problem kis baat se ho rahi he ke tu ne usase baat nahi ki..?ya fir woh tuze avoid kar rahi he..?ya fir Shree aur Chotu ke sath woh har pal rehati he iss baat se..?

Arjun(angrily):-inn sab bato se muze problem he samze ya samzau..?

Rathod:-muze samzane ki zarurat nahi..zarurat tuze samazne ki he..

Arjun give him questioning look..

Rathod:-maan kyo nahi leta tu..ke tuze Riya se pyar ho gaya he..

Arjun(frustrated tone):-plz..sam..

Rathod:-what Arjun..?apne dil se kab tak zoot bologe tum..?usse baat kiye bagir reh nahi sakte tum..woh tuze avoid kare toh tuze bura lagata he..usse Shree ke sath dekhar tuze jelious feel hota he..usse dekhe bagir tuze chain nahi aata..jab bhi usse dekhta he usame kho jata he..jab woh tere paas hoti he toh tu apna control kho deta he..why you not understand..you love her madly..man..aur agar woh tuze avoid kar rahi he na..toh accha hi kar rahi he..picnic ke din tere behavior ke baad usaki jagah koi bhi ladki hoti toh aisa hi karti..issliye isake pehale ke bahot der ho jaye..tu apne dil ki baat sun le..samaze ya aur samzau..?

Arjun frustatedly leave the Rathod's cabin..

After sometime all in conference hall..

Rathod invites all of them to party on his home for Sonali's birthday..

The trio decide to work on plan for Liza & Shree..

At night:-

Shree & Chotu have already reach to party early to help in party preparation..Arjun & Roshni also reached at party..all guest from Rathod's family are also arrived..Liza also come..she is looking very beautiful..& shree get memerized looking her..chotu make him come to reality..

Chotu:-bhul gaya kya..?Riyu ka plan..?

Shree:-nahi..bhula mein..par ye Riyu kitna time laga rahi he..

Chotu:-yaar ye ladkiya..tayar hone me itana time kyo lagati he..?

The whole ETF group (Arjun, Rosh, Sameer, sonali, Shree, chotu, liza ) stands together & starts their usaual chatting..

Chotu(looking to door):-uff..ab muze pata chala..inn ladkiyo ko tayar hone me itana time kyo lgata he..

All look to the direction where he is looking..

Riya enters from the door..& her eyes are searching for their group in party..finally she found them..& give her dimple smile..& come to them..during all this all are just keep looking her..specially Arjun..

Shree:-you are looking too beautiful Riyu..i don't mind agar tu aur ek hour bhi late aati toh..

She smiles with all her heart..

Liza(in mind):-har baar sirf usaki tariff karta he meri taraf kam se kam dekha toh hota..

Arjun gets angry..

They do the cake cutting ceremony..

After that the dj starts playing songs for dance..

The ETF group is busy in chatting..after sometime Shree goes to dj..& ask him to play the songs..

He come to Riya..& hold his hand infront of her..

She also gives her hand in his hand..they goes to dance floor..all others also goes to dance floor..Roshni suprized that how Arjun easily get ready to dance as she knows he don't like to dance..

Ho ho ho o o wo...
Wo oo wo..
(they starts dancing on music Shree-Riya,Rathod-Sonali,Chotu-Liza,Arjun-Roshni..)
Karta hoon tujh mein din guzar main
Karta hoon tujh mein shab basar
Karta hoon tujh mein hi sehar main
Jeeta hoon tujh ko dekh kar
Dil tere bin thehra sa hai
Tu dhadkano ka hai safar
Kaanton bhara har raasta
Phoolon ki hai tu rehguzar

(they exchanged partners as Shree-Roshni,Rathod-Riya,Chotu-Sonali,Arjun-Liza)
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan
(they again changed-Shree-liza,Rathod-Roshni,Chotu-Riya,Arjun-Sonali..Shree & liza lost in each other..)
Ho ho ho o o wo...
(Shree-Sonali,Rathod-Liza,Chotu-Roshni,Arjun-Riya dancing now..)
Saath tera jab se hai mujhko mila

(Arjun pull Riya more closer to her holding her to waist..)
Waqt ki shaakhon pe hai har pal khila
Zindagi se ab nahi koi gila

(he comes more near to her..so close that he can smell her deo..he can feel her breath..)
Jitna hai tu utna hoon main
Naa kuch zyada naa hoon kam

(his cheeks slightly rub on her cheeks..)
Tujhse shuru hota hoon main
Hota hoon tujhpe hi khatam
(they have to again change the partners..Arjun feels not to realese her from his arms..but Riya free herself..they starts dancing in pairs-Shree-Riya,Rathod-Sonali,Chotu-Liza,Arjun-Roshni)
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai
Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan
(on music they again moves,Shree-Roshni,Rathod-Riya,Chotu-Sonali,Arjun-Liza)


Maine tujhko is tarah se hai jiya

(again they moves,Shree-Liza,Rathod-Roshni,Chotu-Riya,Arjun-Sonali)
Aandhiyon me jaise jalta hai diya
Ishq se har faasle ko tay kiya

(Shree & Liza are loss in each other while Arjun is lossed in Riya & Roshni fuming in anger looking this..)


Jo the juda humse khafa lamhe wo saare kat gaye
Tum mil gaye banke subah jo the andhere hat gaye
(they again exchanged Shree-Sonali,Rathod-Liza,Chotu-Roshni,Arjun-Riya)
Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai

(Arjun pull her to him..she hit on his chest..& hold his shirt tightly..)

Jaan o dil ke darmiyaan hai, darmiyaan tu haan

(he purposely move his hand over her back..& want to feel her soft touch..she get shivered due to this & lower her gaze..)

Jaavedaan hai ishq tujh se jaavedaan hai

(hold her chin & force her to face him..)


Tujh mein hi dil ud raha hai aasmaan tu haan

(he release her after some seconds later than others..)

(they return to their original place Shree-Riya,Rathod-Sonali,Chotu-Liza,Arjun-Roshni..& danced on music at the end of this song..)

(I know guys it is difficult to understand how they are dancing with changing partner..but I have tried my best to explain..)

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweetie ...tension mai pagal hojavungi ki age kya hoga
i logged to iF to check if u hve updated
man maine na abhi addicted to this story
Pls pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
poor arjun had a bad dream
arjun made soup and roshni didn't like it
but how sweet when arjun made it for riya she drank it without saying that its bad :)
loved shree's mind voice :)
love the way rathore was making arjun understand that he loves riya
party at rathore's house
shree lost seeing liza <3
riya's dress is so pretty <3
loved their dance :)
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG..Arjun sir me
dam he ye toh mein janata
tha..unake punch me kitana dam he
ye toh pura department janta
he..par muze ye nahi pata tha ke
unake wish me bhi itana "Dam" he
ke Riyu ko kal raat "Sweet Dream "
wish kiya nahi ke Riyu ko sweet
dream aana suru ho gaye..Arjun sit
oh wakhi me kamal he..


I like the description mast tha update b hope roshni vaala angle todha toh suljhe...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update... why do i hv a feeling that both of their drmz are some way connected?? Arjun made soup for Roshini nd she only found fault in it whereas Riya saw his love nd effort... loved the way Rathore tried to put some sense on Arjun... party @ Rathores... Riyas dress ws beautiful... roshini jealous that Arjun is lost in Riya hope she do sumtn nd Arjun kicks her out forever... ah ha Shree nd Liza lost in eachother... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Blockbuster update dr.

Wow Arjun's morning started with a bad dream tht Riya was going away frm him n its true in some sence.

Awww he wanted to call her but drop the idea caz its only 6 in the morng.

Waaooo he made the same soup for which Riya praised him for himself n Roshini but she hated it.

Riya really loved…. him so…. so…. much….

Awww Riya had a dream tht Arjun proposed her. I hope tht dream comes true soon.

Shree's MV about Arjun was really funny.

Wow Choree tried their best to kept Riya away frm Arjun whereas he was vry angry caz of all this.

Loved the way tried to make him realised him his love for Riya but he the great sadu n akdu avoided him.

Arjun hv to admit his feelings for Riya before its too late n tht dream of his comes true.

Waaaooo trio made a plan for Shriza. I hope their plan works n Liza realize her feelings for Shree.

Riya's dress was really beautiful.

Awww Arjun mesmerised by seeing her.

Arjun n Liza got jealous when Shree praised her. That's great.

Loved the song n their dancing pattern.

Awww Arjun again lost in Riya while dancing but due to tht Roshini got vry angry.

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

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