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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an amazing update :) loved it
awww arjun lost seeing riya in that dress <3
and even riya was lost in him
how sweet everyone was singing their favorite songs :)
even arjun was singing
and he was remembering his moments spent with riya <3
shree and riya dancing together and arjun liza were so jealous and angry
actually loved the part when he was kissing her ❤️
but poor riya is hurt by this :(
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Ariya lost in each other.
They all are singing song.
The song collection was awesome.
Omg arjun sing a sad song and remebering he spent time with riya.
And had teras.
Shree and riya sing together.
Lovely arjun is get angry while liza jealous.
Omg ariya romance was awesome.
But arjun hurt her.
Why he cant understand he loves her.
Please its a request please closed roshni chapter.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update yar.,...!!!
are wah riya ko dkehte hi arjun lost in dreamland...!!😉
awww arjun remembering his and riya's moments while singing...!!!
shree rii song was awsum and uspe liza aur arjun ki jealousy ka kya kehna😆
omg arjun kissed her...!!!
their scenes were hot...!!!
but riya hurt...!!! when will arjun realize ki he loves her that is why usko dekhte hi he behaves like that...!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

Riya hurrily comes to the place where the boys are playing..

Rathod:-hey..Riya..come here..& join my team..

She smile a bit..& try not to remember what just happened..& to divert her mind..she started playing on Rathod's side..while Shree & chotu on the opposite side..

Chotu:-are yaar ye kya..Ri ne toh party badal dali..Rathod sir ke team me chali gayi..

Shree:-are jane de..khelane de..office me bhale hi Rathod sir boss ho par volleyball me toh ham boss he..

They give hi5 to each other..

Arjun also come behind Riya..& started playing with Riya & Rathod's side..he try to talk to her..

Arjun:-Riyu..suno na..plz..(throw the ball to opposite side..)

She give him angry look..

Arjun:-ek baar..sun toh lo..

She angrily throw the ball..

Arjun:-Riyu..

She again gives him angry look

Riya(looking to Rathod):-sir..kya mein Shree ke team me khel sakti hu..?

Rathod just nodded..

She goes to Shree's side..now Arjun become angry..

Rathod(with playing):-kya..?kya hua..?

Arjun(hesitedly):-kuch bhi toh nahi..

Rathod:-ETF chief mein yu hi nahi bana..jab woh kahi jaa rahi thi..tu game chodake usake piche chala gaya..dono sath me wapas aaye..aur jab se tum log wapas aaye ho woh upset aur angry he..

Arjun:-woh..woh..

Rathod:-woh..kya..?tu ne firse usase kuch kaha kya..?

Arjun(hesitedly):-nahi meine kuch nahi kaha..

Rathod:-oh god..aise hesisted kar raha he ke jaise usse kiss hi kar liya ho..

Arjun:-hmm..

Rathod(shockily):-what..?

Rathod just get freezed..suddenly the ball hits on his head which is thrown by Shree..

Rathod(angrily):-Shree...?

Shree:-oh..sorry sir..

He again starts playing game..& angrily look to Arjun..

Rathod:-this is too much Arjun..why the hell you are playing with her emotions..?

Arjun:-I m sorry..yarr..i just loose my control..

Rathod:-sorry muzse nahi usse bolna chahiye tuze..

Arjun:-wahi toh karne ki koshish kar raha tha..par...woh sune toh na..

Rathod(in mind):-my dear friend..you are not only loosing your control..but loosing your heart also..dont know what will be end of all this..oh god..

he & Arjun tries to concentrate on game..

they continue playing till Sonali has not come to invite them for lunch..

they all took the lunch..as they become very hungry after playing the game..Riya remain silent for some time..but Shree & Chotu made her to talk & laugh..

they decide to take rest for some time..Riya started walking to make a call..but don't have range..so she move forward to search range for her phone..

someone pull her behind a tree..

Riya(Angrily):-what is this..?

Arjun(cup her face):-Riyu..plz..meri baat suno..I am really sorry whatever happened..

Riya:-I don't want to hear anything..

Arjun:-ok..mein kaan pakadke sorry bolta hu tumse..plz..

Arjun hold his ears by his fingers..

Riya get shocked see him like this..the most khadoos ACP she ever met..is saying her sorry..in such a childish & sweet way..

Smile automatically crept on her face..

Riya:-it's ok..forget it..

She is about to leave..he pull her to himself.

Arjun:-tumne sach me muze maaf kar diya na..?

Riya:-haa..now you forget that incident & let me also forget it..

Arjun:-Riyu..

Riya:-you must stay away from me..sir..i don't want to take any blame to myself..ab mein apne aap pe koi blame nahi lena chahati..mein ab aur seh nahi sakhti..mein nahi chahati ke mein ye sunu ke meine kisiki zindagi kharab kar di he..ya fir..meine kisika basa basaya ghar ujad diya he..so.it's better for me & you also to stay away from each other..

Arjun(get shocked after hearing this..his griph on her get loosen):-ye tum kya keh rahi ho..wait..ye sari baate kisine tumse kahi he..?

Riya(telling him lie,she knows when she meet Roshni,though Roshni had not used the exact same wards but it has the same meaning):-nahi..aisa kuch nahi he..

Arjun:-sach me..?

Riya:-haa...aur aapne muzse maafi maang li aur meine aapko maaf kar diya..now this chapter must be closed..

She leaves from there hurrily..

Arjun(in mind):-no..Riyu..you are telling me lie..zarur kisine tumse kuch kaha he..jisake wajah se tum hurt hui ho..

He also leave & come where all are discussing their next planning..

Shree:-well muze lagata he ke hame iss spot pe jana chahiye..jyada dur bhi nahi he..haa rasta thoda danger he..hame walk karke jaana padega..shortcut jangle se he..waha se gadi nahi jaa sakti na..

They all decide to go to the spot..they start walking to there..

Arjun (lost in thinking):-kyon Riyu ko aisa bol sakta he..?kisi ko kya lena dena he..?koi aisa toh he nahi jo Riyu ko hurt karna chahe..sabko usaki kitani fikar rehati he.. Sam,Sonali, Liza, Shree ,Chotu..inake sivay aur koi usake itane karib toh nahi jo usse..kuch kahe..

Roshni(who is walking besides him):-Arjun kya soch rahe ho..?

His chain of thoughts get break..& he look to Roshni..suddenly his brain struk a thought..

Arjun(in mind):-oh..shit..kahi Roshni ne toh gusse me Riyu ko kuch bol nahi diya na..?agar aisa he toh Riyu kabhi muze nahi batayegi..Rosh se hi puchna padega..

He hold her hand & take her where noone can see them..

Roshni(suprizingly):-ye kya Arjun..?

Arjun:-tumne..Riya se kuch kaha he kya..?

Roshni(somewhat angrily):-kya..?mein usase kyo kuch kahugi..?

Arjun(angrily):-tell me the truth..you know very well I hate lie..

Roshni(angrily):-haa..kaha tha ussse meine tumse dur rehane ko..ok..

Arjun:-par kyo..?

Roshni:-toh kya chahate ho tum Arjun..ke mein usse tumhe muzse chinate hue dekhti rahu..?

Arjun:-Stop it Rosh..bahot ho gaya..

Roshni:-tumne kabhi socha bhi he Arjun..ke muze kaisa laga hoga jab meine der raat ko tumhe usake ghar pe dekha woh bhi uss waqt jab tum almost usse kiss kar rahe the..

Arjun:-stop it Roshni..mein ussi din tumhe sab explain kar chukka hu..tumhe koi zarurat nahi thi Riyu se kuch kehane ki..

Roshni:-Riyu..haa..gr8..ab toh woh Riya se Riyu bhi ban gayi he..

Arjun(trying to control his anger):-Rosh..dekho..uss din tumne jo bhi dekha usame Riyu..Riya ki koi galati nahi thi..ok..I think you must say sorry to her..tumhari bato se woh bahot hurt ho gayi he..

Roshni:-sorry dear..par mein usse sorry nahi bolne wali..

Arjun:-Rosh..this is too much..

Roshni:-nahi Arjun..meine jo kuch bhi kiya bilcul sahi kiya..tum apne aap ko meri jagah rakh kar dekhoge toh tumhe bhi meri baat sahi lagegi..

She leaves from there angrily..& goes to the direction of Chotu & liza..

Arjun(in mind):-you are right..Rosh..har koi apni jagah pe sahi he..tum muze khona nahi chahti..Riyu muze chahkar bhi paa nahi sakhti..aur mein tumhe pakar bhi adura mehsoos karta hu..

He look everywhere..

Shree:-Riyu..kitane dheere dheere chal rahi he..jaldi chal na..(he goes forward..while Riya continue walking slowly..)

Arjun take the chance..& pull her to him..

Riya:-hey..what is this..?

Arjun(put his hand on her lips):-ssshhh..chup chap meri baat suno..tumhe kya lgata he ke tum muze nahi bataogi toh muze pata nahi chalega..ke Roshni ki aur tumhari baat hui thi..

Riya(removing his hand):-nahi..hamari koi baat nahi hui..

Arjun:-zoot mat bolo..abhi meri Roshni se baat hui he..aur usane muze sach bataya he..

Riya:-thik he..thik he..hui thi ham dono ki baat..par muze unase koi shikayat nahi..

Arjun(emotionally):-zoot mat bolo Riyu..kya usaki baato se tum hurt nahi hui..? I am sorry Riyu..ye sab meri wajah se hua he..sorry..

Riya:-nahi..aapko sorry bolne ki zarurat nahi..aur mein hurt nahi hui thi..

Arjun:-fir se zoot..

Riya:-no..koi zoot nahi bol rahi hu mein..usase bhi badi badi bate hui he meri zindagi me jisase mein hurt hui..ye toh badi hi mamuli baat he usake samne..(she remember how she leave his house..then Sikandar's behavior to her..the drugs addiction..)

Arjun(hug her):-tumhe sab se jyada meri wajah se hi hurt hona pada he Riyu..

Riya(broke of his hug):-nahi..shayad mein hi kuch jyada emotional hu..issiliye jaldi hurt ho jati hu..

She about to leave..

Arjun:-Riyu..wait..(he hold her hand)I am sorry..for hurting you..

Riya :-forget it..(try to get ride of his hands griph)

Arjun(pull her to him):-no I cant forget that I hurt you..& I also cant forget that you lie to me..jab ki tumhe acche se pata he ke muze zoot se nafarat he..

Riya(somewhat irritedly):-haa...ha..pata he..aapko zoot se nafarat he aur sach ugalwane ka aapka tarika logo ko pasand nahi..(she speak whole his dialog in one breath..he is suprizingly looking to her..)muze aapke sare dialog yaad ho gaye he..samaze ya samzau..

He laugh..

Arjun:-gr8..muze bhi tumhare sare dialog yaad ho gaye he..(she gives him questioning look),jaise ki..(he mimicry of her ) "why you are calling me Riyu..? kitani baar bola he..only Shree can call me Riyu..

She started laugh..

Riya(laughing):-omg..aapne kitani acchi mimicry ki..

She leaves from there..

Arjun(he also smiles..in mind):-jab tum hasti ho toh bahot cute lagti ho Riyu..

He also leaves behind her..

Riya joins Shree & Chotu,while Arjun joins Roshni & walked besides her silently..

Riya get tired of walking..

Riya:-Shree..aur kitana chalna he..?

Shree:-sirf 1 km dear..

Riya:-oh..god..accha tera ye device sahi location toh dikha raha he na..warna..

Shree:-tu mere device pe shak kar rahi he..?cant belive this..

Riya:-are nahi mein toh bas aise hi..

Chotu:-Shree mere ek sawal ka jawab de..tu tera ye jo "tab" he na atleast teri shadi ke din toh isse off karga na..

Shree(angrily):-chotu..motu..

Riya:-shadi ke din toh thik he..todi der use kar bhi sakhata he tera "tab"..par..atleast apne honeymoon pe...warna bechari liza..

Shree:-stop it riyu..

Riya run..& Shree runs behind her..during this she almost hit to liza..& liza to whom this was just unexpetable..cant balance herself..& fall on someone..(oh..guys..dont worry..it's our boy..Shree..)

Shree fall on ground while Liza on him..they share a eyelock..

Riya & Chotu cough loudly..but they lossed in each other..

Rathod saw the whole scene..

Rathod(loudly):-Shreee..?

They broke off their eyes link..& get up..liza who is blushing so much hurrily move forward..Rathod & Sonali also follow her..sonali wink to Shree.

Riya & Chotu come to Shree..

Riya & Chotu(starts singing together):-aakho me teri..ajab si ajab si aadaye he..ho...dil ko bana de jo patang sase ye teri..woh hawaye he..

Shree(smiles):-stop it guys..(& leave hurrily from there..)

Riya & chotu gives hi5 to each other..

They soon reach to the spot..it's was so beautifull..

Riya:-omg..it's so beautifull..

Arjun(in mind):-no..not more than you..Riyu..(& smrik to himself)

They catch photos there..after sometime they leave from there..almost all are tired now..they reach to their mini bus..& decide to go back to home..

In whole journey..they told each other jokes..& keep laughing..

After sometime..

Rathod:-guys..now it's 7:00 pm toh kyo na ham log sath me hi dinner kare..ghar jake fresh ho jate he fir 9:00 baje dinner ke liye milege..

All get agreed..

Roshni:-par Sameer..aise karte toh bahot der ho jayegi..mera matlab he ke sab log apne apne ghar me jayge fir..wapas ham log kisi common point pe milege..upar se traffic jam..isse achha toh ye he..ke hamara ghar toh pass hi me he..sab wahi chalke fresh ho lena aur fir sab sath me hi dinner pe chalege..

All get agreed..but Riya get upset to go to that home..Shree realize it..

When they reach infront of Arjun's home..all get ready to go inside..

Shree:-Arjun sir..mein aur Riyu..ham log ghar jake aate he..ham sidhe aap logo ko restaurant me milege..

Riya also uneasily nodded..

Arjun(somewhat angrily):-chup chap chalo..i don't want to hear anything..

Riya look to Shree worrily..

Shree(in mind):-ye Roshni ko ye idea dene ki kya zarurat thi..kitana accha mood tha Riyu ka subah se sab kharab na kar de woh..?

They all come inside the house..Riya come inside..& stopped in the middle of hall..she look everywhere..the house is as it is when she left it..but ofcourse the one thing is changed..last time when she was here,that time it was her house..her "Sasural",but now..she has come here as a guest..only a guest..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am crying for ariya
more for riya ...
i feel bad for arjun too as he is torn btw the women that he loved and the women he has fallen in love now
awww wat will happen
wat solution is der now???
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such a lovely update :) loved it
riya was playing the game with rathore opposite choree :)
even arjun was on sam and riya's side
riya went to shree's team and arjun was angry
shree hit rathore with ball 😆
love the way arjun said sorry to her
arjun is sure riya is lying and that someone said something to her
finally arjun knows it was roshni who said all that to riya
hate roshni so much 😡
awww finally both riya and arjun were laughing together <3
riya fell on top of shree :)
love the way riya and chotu were teasing shree 😆
wow everyone is staying at arjun's house :)
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!
glad arjun said sorry to her,...!! awww and even made her laugh...!!! shoo cutee
but feeling bad for both of them.. dono hi kitna hurt ho rhe h andar hi andar...!!
ye roshni ka kuch to gadnad hai pkka...!!!
shriza eye lock was cute...!!! and the way chottu and riya teased him afterwards 😆
glad arjun came to know ki roshni ne kya kuch kaha riya ko...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar trriangle kab khtm hoga muje laga tha rosh duplicate hogi mgr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..
Nice updates..
Aww.. Picnic scenes wre gud..
Nd especially ariya copyng each othr dialogue nd jus lovd arjun dialogue dat har koi apni jagah thk hai...
Aww.. Poor riya... Nw how will goin to meet??
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear.
Plsss closed roshni chapter.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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