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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay...
Finally i was waiting for this update and u have updated it.
I am feeling so happy...
Finally,Arjun said sorry to Riya...
Riya playing volleyball with Rathod against Shree and Chotu.
As Arjun was following her,Riya became angry and went to Shree's team.
Rathod was shocked to know after what happened between Arjun and Riya.
In the mean time,Shree ne ball ko aisa serve kia ki seedhe mere Bhai ke sirh se takraye...
Ouch!!! That hurts...
The whole gang on a walk.
Arjun ko finally sab pata lag gaya ki Roshni ne Riya ko yeh sab kaha thha...
Aakhir Roshni ki kya problem hai?
Mujhe toh doubt hai ki sacchi mein Roshni Arjun se pyaar karti ha ya nahi?
Roshni made Arjun angry.
Aaarrrggghhh...
Feeling really very bad for Ariya.
Both of them are getting hurt...
Ab toh mujhe yakeen hogaya hai ki Roshni is cooking up something in order to seperate Ariya.
Roshni ki baato ne Riya ke dil ko bohut thhes pohuchaya hai.
Aww...
Finally,Arjun made Riya smile...
Both of them imitating each other's dialogues...
That was really sweet...
Arjun...
Damn It... Why dnt u admit that u have fallen head over heals for Riya...
Riya ki smile makes him happy and smile,too...
Riya ne Shree ke devices par shaq kia...
Hahaha...
Liza fell on Shree...
Ooohhh...
That was romantic...
Chotu and Riya and Sonali teasing Shriza...
That was nice...
They returned to their home by 7pm.
Everybody is going for dinned in Roshni and Arjun's house...
What the?????
Riya is again sad...
Shree can sense her sadness...
Shree's anger is justified...
Please,jaldi se Roshni ka kissa khatam karo aur Ariya chalu karo...
Cant see them hurt anymore...
Thanks for the update and pm..
Hosake toh ek aur update de dena...
I am in LOVE with this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago

this only happen with me now


aakhir ye arjun kar kya raha hai

ek to khud clear nahi hai aur to aur riya ko confuse kar raha hai


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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg I read 2 update together it is superb,amazing,super duper hit

Ariya kiss so romantic me blushing

Picnic per Apnay fav songs Wah g kya baat hai

Arjun ' sad song ohhh

Arjunthink about Riya 's memory

Ariya convo awesome

Rathod 's thought amazing

Arjun knew tht roshni hurt Arjun

Shree Liza romance cool dr

Chotu and Riya' s song dassu boss

Thanx 4 pm me

Why roshni invite then to her house
She want to hurt Riya more???

Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late comments dr.

Loved the last 2updates.

Thy r equally amazing.

Arjun is still confused about his feelings for Riya.

Feeling really bad for Riya...

I hope tht Roshini doesnt hurt her.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.. feeling bad for riya cn understand hw she might be feeling nw... evn sam realised Arjun is falling for Riya... Roshini Grr...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww.. Poor Riya!!! I just cant believe Roshni!! GRRR!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey update soon dear...can it be possible tonight only

because tomorrow i will not able to read
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plzzz update it dr.

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

They all come inside the house..Riya come inside..& stopped in the middle of hall..she look everywhere..the house is as it is when she left it..but ofcourse the one thing is changed..last time when she was here,that time it was her house..her "Sasural" but now..she has come here as a guest..only a guest..

Sonali & liza understands her uneasiness..& starts talking to her on different subjects..Arjun & all other boys goes to get fresh..

Roshni:-hey..jab tak ye boys fresh ho jate he tab tak mein ham sab ke liye coffee banati hu..aur Arjun ke liye chai..

Arjun(who is about to leave to his room):-Rosh..mere liye bhi coffee banana..

Roshni(suprizingly as she knows he don't like coffee):-kya..?

Arjun:-aaj mera coffee pine ka mood he..(take a look to Riya & leave)

Roshni leaves to kitchen..

Sonali & liza keep Riya engage in talking..

After sometime Roshni invite all to dining table to take coffee..

Arjun sits besides Riya..Roshni gives all the coffee mug..Shree who is sitting next to Riya is busy in chatting with chotu..

Riya take a sip of coffee..she was about to throw coffee out her mouth..but somehow manage to drink that sip..her eyes become red..she almost get teary..& she cough suddenly..

Roshni:-Riya..shayad tumhe pani ki zarurat he..

Riya just look to her..& nodded silightly..

Roshni gives the water to Riya..

Shree:-Riyu..kya hua..?

Riya nodded negatively..& again take a sip of coffee..but she cant take it this time..& take again water after her..

All are busy in chatting & making planning where to go for dinner..& no one get know what she is doing..but Arjun has his full concentration to her..he get suprized by her such behavior..

Arjun:-ye kya..?coffee pi rahi he..fir pani..?

He exchange her mug with his..& take a sip of coffee from her mug..he manage to control his cough..

Arjun:-what is this..?isame toh sugar ki jagah mirchi he..coffee toh Rosh ne banayi he..this is too much..

He look to Roshni..she is busy in talking to Sonali..& looking to Riya from corner of her eyes..

Arjun:-oh..god..ye toh had ho gayi..muze Roshni se baat karni padegi..

He again take a sip of coffee..

Riya understand Roshni added the mirchi in her coffee intensionally..she decide she will drink the whole coffee..

She take a mug in her hand..& take a sip of it..she suprized this time coffee is sweet..how this is possible..she seems not realize..

Arjun brush her hand slightly by his..

She look to him..he smrik..she realized his eyes has become teary & red..he again take a sip of coffee..

Riya(in mind):-ohh...no..coffee inhone le li..oh..god..aur kitane aaram se pi rahe he..no ..no..mein aisa nahi hone dungi..

She intensionally push to his hand..the coffee mug get collaps from his hand..& all coffee on him..

Riya:-oh..ohh...sorry sir..i m really sorry..

Arjun(understands her idea & smrik to her):-it's ok..

Roshni(somewhat angrily):-ye kya tumhara t-shirt pura kharab ho gaya..

Arjun:-its ok..mein change kar leta hu..

Arjun(while getting up..,mutter to Riya):-you finish your coffee..(& smrik to her..)

He goes to his room..

Roshni get wonder how Riya is drinking coffee so easily.

After sometime they decide the restaurant where they will go to dinner..& the boys goes to balcony while the girls goes to get ready..

Liza & Riya goes to the room where Riya used to live after she gets married to Arjun..

Liza:-Riya..tu ne extra dress laya tha na..

Riya:-haa..kyo..?

Liza:-toh dress change kar lete he..meine bhi extra dress layi he..tu bhi change kar lena..

Riya:-sach kahu Liz..mein ab bahot thak gayi hu..aur mera bilcul mood nahi he..

Liza:-come on yaarr..

Riya just nodded in ok..

Liza turns toward bathroom..while Riya rested herself on bed..

She was just shocked what Roshni has done before sometime..she just want to her head to stop thinking..she lye on the bed..she was very tired as they have played volleyball & then a long walk..& due to journey.. she fall in sleep immigiately..

Liza comes after sometime..& look that Riya is sleeping..

Liza(trying to awake her):-Riya..Riya..?

But Riya don't open her eyes..

Liza(in mind):-hmm..ye toh bahot thak gayi he..ab kya karu..?Rathod sir ne kaha tha ke ham 9:00 baje dinner ke liye nikalege..abhi toh 8:15 baj rahe he..thodi der isse sone deti hu..15-20 minutes ke baad usse uta dungi..

She leaves..& turns to the room where Roshni & Sonali goes to get freshed..Arjun also look to liza in going to that room..

He keep looking to the room where Riya is sleeping..waiting for her when she will come out..

After sometime..

Rathod:-kya hua..?

Arjun(looking to Riya's room):-kuch nahi..

Rathod:-oh..god..Arjun..tuze usake bagair ek minute bhi chain nahi aata..

Arjun:-shut up Sam..

Rathod:-toh..usaka itana intzaar kyo kar raha he..?

Arjun:-woh..aise hi..(he paused..)mein abhi aata hu..

He goes to the room..where Riya is there..

He knock the door..but she don't reply..he open the door..& close behind him..smile crept on his face when he saw her sleeping peacefully like a small child..

He come near to her..put his palm on her cheek & try to wake her up..

Arjun:-Riyu..Riyu..uto..

Riya(in sleep):-no..sone do na..

Arjun:-Riyu..hey..Riyu..

Riya(still in sleep,somewhat angrily):-sone de na Shree..bas thodi der aur..

Arjun get angry hearing name of Shree from her in sleep also..

Arjun(in mind):-itani nind me bhi Shree..Shree..Shree..the hell with this Shree..

He try to control his anger..

Arjun(in mind):-ok..sweetheart abhi tumhe utata hu..

Arjun(starts moving his finger..softly & slowly..from her forehead..then eyes,then nose..then lips..then her chin..& trying to wake her):-sweetheart...uto na..tumhe dinner pe nahi jana..come on sweetheart..

Riya is in sleep..but her sleep get vanished when she hear the word "sweetheart.."no..noo..Shree can never call her like this..

She suddenly open her eyes..& look Arjun is bending over her..& his finger is in the portion between her lips & her chin..

Arjun(smiles at her reaction):-don't you want to go for dinner..

She just keep looking him as if she is seeing a dream..

Arjun(moves his finger in upword direction,on her lips..& move his thumb over her lip smoothly..):-uto sweetheart..

She get up suddenly..& looking to him as if she has seen some ghost..he brust in laugh..

Arjun:-what Riyu..come on get ready..we are leaving for dinner..

She come to reality..but just nodded her head in positively..

Arjun(comes near her,& mutters in her ear):-I hope meri zooti(his tested) coffee tumhe mitthi(sweet )lagi ho..sweetheart..

He leaves with smriking..

She change the dress quickly..& come to hall..where everyone is ready to go for dinner..

Shree:-Riyu..tu bahot beautiful lag rahi he..woh..Chotu ki language me-ekdam "dassu" lag rahi he..

She smiles..

Arjun who & Rathod is standing in balcony..hears this conversation..& Arjun turns to see her..

She has ware this & really he cant take his eyes off her..

He keep looking to her..

Finally he come to reality when Rathod says..

Rathod:-bas kar usse ghurna..hame dinner pe jana he..woh yaad he..?ya fir woh bhi bhul gaya...?

They all leave..they reach to restaurant..Arjun make sure that he will sit besides Riya..as he don't want to give Roshni any chance to do anything with Riya now..

After finishing the dinner they all leave to go their houses..Arjun first drop Roshni..& then turn his car to drop Shree & Riya..

Shree is sitting in co-driver sit..while Riya lonely sit on back side..she was tired so fall in sleep immigiately..

When they reach to Shree's home..

Shree get down first..& look that Riya is sleeping..

Shree(trying to wake her up):-Riyu..Riyu..ham log ghar pahoch gaye he..chal..jaldi..

Arjun also get down from car..

Arjun(to Shree):-ye kya kar rahe ho..?

Shree:-sir..ye toh so gayi he..usse jaga raha hu..

Arjun:-koi zarurat nahi he..dekh nahi rahe woh kitni shanti se soyi he..

Arjun hold her in his arms..& starts walking to Shree's home..

They entered in house..Arjun still holding her in his arms..walked to Riya's room..

Placed her gentely on bed..pull blanket over her..& kiss her forehead..

Arjun:-good night Riyu..have a sweet dreams..

He smiles & leave from there..

Shree who is looking all this from the door of Riya's room..get shocked to see Arjun's behavior..

He call immigiately to Chotu after Arjun leaves..& told Chotu whatever happened..

Chotu:-yaar..ye toh bada hi ulaza hua mamla he..

Shree:-muze toh kuch samaz nahi aa raha Arjun sir ke dimag me chal kya raha he..?

Chotu:-oh..shit..

Shree:-kya hua..?

Chotu:-are kahi aisa toh nahi na..ke tere liye waha ham Liza ko jelious feel karane ke chakkar me kahi yaha Arjun sir bhi toh jelious nahi ho rahe..?

Shree:-OMG..haa yaar..ye baat toh mere dhyan me hi nahi aayi..issiliye Arjun sir ka behavior Riyu ki taraf bahot badal gaya he..

Chotu:-yaar muze toh kabse aisa lag raha he ke Arjun sir ko Ri se pyar ho gaya he..jabse woh sikandar ne Ri ka kidnap kiya tha..kitane pareshan the woh..raat bhar office me hi jagate rehate the..aur baadme woh Ri ka drug ka addiction..tab toh muze pura doubt ho gaya tha..

Shree:-dekh..Chotu..woh Riyu se pyar karte ho ya.. na karte ho isase koi jyada farak toh nahi padata he..kyo ki tu janata he Roshni jab tak he tab tak kuch nahi ho sakta..

Chotu:-lekin agar woh Ri se saccha pyar karate he toh woh..Roshni ko divorce bhi toh de sakte he..

Shree:-well..muze nahi lagata ke woh Roshni ko divorce denge..aur Roshni bhi nahi dengi..agar divorce hi dena hota toh woh ussi din ho gaya hota jis din Roshni wapas aagayi thi..ya fir uss waqt jab Riyu ka unaki bahot jyada zarurat thi..par aisa kuch nahi hua..

Chotu:-hm..sach kehata he..

Shree:-par..samaz nahi aa raha ke ab ham kya kare..?

Chotu:-simple..Ri ko Arjun sir se dur rakhna hoga..

Shree:-yes..you are right..kahi Arjun sir ka ye changed behavoiur usake dil me fir se koi hope na jaga de..aur agar woh hope fir se tut gayi toh Riyu kahi firse woh drugs..aur..depression me na chali jaye..

Chotu:-no..no..this should not be happened..

Shree:-no..Chotu we don't let this happened..we will try our best to stick Riyu all the time..& to keep her away from Arjun sir..iss baar ham Arjun sir ko Riyu ko hurt nahi karne denge..

Chotu:-yes..

He cuts the phone..

In Arjun's house:-

He come to home..he also feeling very tired..& fall in sleep immigiately..

Roshni come to bedroom..& sleep besides him..look to him..he has a smile on his face..Roshni also smiles..& kiss his cheek..

He also kiss her cheek slightly in sleep..

Arjun(mutters in sleep):-sweetheart..dont go..

Roshni get suprized he never call her sweetheart until now..she smile...& hug him..(Roshni thinks it's for her..but guys you know na..to whom he calls "sweetheart")

He also hug back her..

Arjun(muttering in sleep):-I wont let you go away from me..(kiss her earlobe & fall in deep sleep)

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago

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