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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha ha.. LOVED it!!

Sam aur Arjun ka plan zyaada der tak nahi tik paaya na...! Phir hum ladkiyon ki programming mein hi forever winning hai!

Aw.. Ariya and Soneer are so CUTE!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really like this ff, enjoyed every single chapter!!!

Please update and pm me please
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome blossom update dr.

Poor Sam Arjun kai idea nai to phasa diya.

Wow Arjun behaved indifferently to her so as to tease her but his plan back fired as she thought he behaved like this caz Roshini is back. Arjun babu buray phasay.

Loved Ariya n Sam-Sonali romantic moments.

The way he cleared all her misconceptions was wonderful.

Loved this naughty side of Arjun.

Awww she recognised him even whn the light were off.

Wow Sonali again disturbed their sweet moments.

Loved the way she teased both of them.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahum ahum..sonu my dr kya blush ker ker ke marane ka erada hai,
lolll update is superduper romentic n lvly...
he he he poor sam becharea...
akhir kitana controled ker raha hai,
kabhi ek room se dpsare room dusare se bahar per sonaly...
hiii yr kya ker rahi ho sonu tum ,kuch to khayal rakho hamara...
bechare sam ke halat kitani kharab ho gaye lolll,
bechara arjun ko baar baar kose raha tha,lolll

finaly both spent lving night
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oh god arjun ka plan arjun per bhari pad gaya..
chalr the riya ko tease kerne lolll
ulta usse rula diya,
uff kya manaya hai riya koo
again blush blush*****
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Shree ke marrige bale din bhi arjun he he hr he he
sonali ne phir se pakal liya lolll...
both fee imbaranced uodate soon cant wait to read more..
story is going realy interesting ...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!
hmm so arjun and sameer ka plan backfired😆
ab biwi se naraz rhna itna asan nai...
loved sam sonali and ariya romance...!!!
aww riya ne kya se kya soch liya... glad arjun cleared her MU love the way he samjhofied him...!!
arjun ka romance kahinbhi chalu ho jaata h😆 love hwo sonali was teasing both...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update pls continue soon Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for my late comment..
Awesome and beautiful update.
Sam-Sonali and Ariya romantic moments were totally beautiful.
I just loved it a lot.
Especially loved Ariya romantic moments.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
At least res karo, i wanna to be first here to...lolll kitani chalak ho mein..🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
di res karo mujhe first aana hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

They all are happy for Shree & Liza..both are looking like made for each other..all rituals of marriage are performed..after sometime..the ETF team goes to meet the newly wed couple on stage..

They all congratulate the couple..

Shree:-thanks to you all..agar aap sab nahi hote..toh shayad meri aur Liza ki Shadi hoti hi nahi..

Liza:-haa..sach me..warna kuch din pehale jaise halaat the..hame toh lag raha tha ke hamari engagement hi tut jayegi..par..thanks you Rathod sir..& thank you Arjun sir..

Sonali:-wait..wait..inn dono ko kyo thanks bol rahi ho..?thanks toh muze aur Riya ko bolna chahiye..

Liza:-kya..?

Sonali:-hmm..waise ham dono ko thanks kyo bolna chahiye..isaki wajah ham tumhe baad me samazayege Liza..

Sonali & Riya look each other naughtly..while Liza don't get their attension so remain quite..

Shree:-Riyu..thank you..tu ne sach me bahot help ki..warna..

Riya:-warna kya..?

Shree:-agar tu nahi hoti toh..meri love story abhi bhi wahi pe lataki hoti..aur shayad aaj bhi mein aur Liza iss baat pe zagad rahe hote..ke woh muze specky sen kyo bulati he..?

All laugh..

Riya:-achha..?shadi hote hi bade manners sikh gaya tu...muze thanks bolega..?

Shree:-oh..ho..(he hug her..)oh..Riyu..

She also hug him back..

Riya(mutter in his ear..):-ab Liza milane ke baad muze bhul mat jana..

Shree:-never..yaar..aisa bhi kabhi ho sakta he..

They broke off the hug..

Sonali:-hmm..waise ab sirf..bechara Chotu hi tum logo me batchlor reh gaya he..

Shree(smile):-ha..ha..dont worry Chotu..ham log teri bhi setting kara denge..

Riya:-yes ofcourse..aur Arjun ne bhi muze promise kiya he ke woh hamari help karege..

Shree & Liza:-that's gr8..

Rathod gives wired expression to Arjun..

Sonali:-haa..aur Sam ne bhi muzse kaha he ke woh bhi hamari help karege..he na Sam..?(looking to Sameer..)

Sameer just nodded..now Arjun gives wired expression to Rathod..

Chotu:-oh..thank you guys..thank you sir..

Liza:-bas chotu..ab toh sirf teri uss 11:30 wali ko propose karne ki der he..

All laugh..

Arjun(mutters in Riya's ear..):-Chotu ki help toh karuga..par usake badle me muze kya chahiye ye yaad he na tumhe..

Riya blush..

Soanli see this..

Sonali(teasing tone..looking to Ariya..):-oye hoye..love birds..tum dono toh hamesha hi pyar me dube rehate ho..par ab ye mauka zara..newly wed couple ko bhi do..

Liza blush..

All smile..

Sonali(mutters to Sameer):-dekha..tumhara best friend kitana romantic he..apni biwi se kitana pyar karta he..aur tum..?very very unromantic..

Sameer:-Sona..jaan..kya farak padata he..mein unromantic hu isase..? tum toh bahot hi romantic ho na..aur woh toh mein uss raat dekh hi chukka hu..(she blush..)aur tumhara romantic mood dekh ke..aakhir kitani der me unromantic bana reh sakta hu..(Sonali blush more..)

Arjun (look this..):-oye..what is this..?kabse hame tease kar rahe the..ab tum dono ka kya chal raha he..?

Sameer:-shut up Arjun..

Riya(in teasing tone):-Sonali..

Sonali:-Riya..stop it yaar..

All smile..

Riya(mutter in Liza's ear..):-don't worry Liz..Shree aisa dikata he..par he woh bhi bahot romantic..waise woh toh tumhe aaj raat hi pata chal jayega..(Liza blush..)mere dost ko bahot chidaya he na tumne "specy sen " keh keh ke..ab dekho..specy sen..usaka badala kaise leta he..(Liza turned red..)

Riya smile..

Shree(mutters in Liza's ear):-kya hua..?itana blush kyo kar rahi ho..?Riyu kya keh rahi thi..?

Riya:-Shree..ab thodi der ham logo se baat kar lo..ham log abhi ghar jane hi wale he..

Shree:-woh mein..

Riya:-fir function khatam hone ke baad..tumhe aur Liza ko sari raat jitani baate karni he..kar lena..

Shree:-stop it Riyu..

Arjun(mutters in Riya's ears):-come on Riyu..suhag raat pe bhi koi baate karta he..?tum apni suhag raat bhul gayi kya..?

Riya blush..

After sometime they all leave to their respective home...

Arjun & Riya also reached to home..he turns to get fresh..

When he return back..Riya is trying to remove her jwellery..

Arjun come closer to her..

Arjun:-sweetheart..mein help kar du tumhari..?

Riya(smile):-no ways Arjun..mein khud hi kar lungi..

Arjun(she was about to leave,he hold her waist from behind,put his chin on her neck..):-kaha ja rahi ho..?

Riya:-Arjun chodiye na..ab mein aur jyada der tak ye heavy lehnga nahi pehen sakti..i want to change it first..

Arjun:-wahi toh keh raha hu..mein tumhari help kar deta hu na..plzz...

Riya push him..& run towards bathroom..but he again caught her..& pull her to him..

Arjun:-Riyu...

Riya:-Arjun chodiye na..aap bhi na bas..waha shadi pe bhi aapne..pata nahi Sonali kya soch rahi hogi jab usane ham dono ko uss room me dekha hoga..?

Arjun:-oh ho..Riyu..usse jo sochna he sochne do..(pulling her more closer)par mein kya soch raha tha..

Riya:-kya..?

Arjun:-yahi ke..aaj Shree ki suhag raat he na..?

Riya:-toh..

Arjun:-toh..kyo na ham bhi..apni suhag raat..

Riya:-stop it...stop it.. Arjun..

(she tried to push him..but he pull her closer..& hold her in his arms..& placed her on bed..)

Arjun(leaning over her..):-Riyu..my sweetheart..(kiss on her cheeks..)

Riya(blush..):-Arjun aapko nahi lagata..ke aaj aap kuch jyada hi romantic ban rahe he..

Arjun(kissing her neck):-kya karu sweetheart..?aaj tum bahot hi khubsurat lag rahi ho..

He switch off lights..& they continuing loving each other..

After some more days..

In office:-

All are waiting in conference room..they dicuss some case..

Rathod:-ok..guys..ham log ab kal milate he..i hope ke ye case ham kal solve kar lenge..

All were about to leave..

Arjun(to Riya..):-Riyu..meri commissioner sir ke sath meeting he abhi..toh tum..?

Riya:-don't worry..mein chali jati hu..Chotu muze drop kar dega..

Arjun:-ok..bye..

Riya:-bye..

Arjun leaves for meeting with Rathod..while Chotu & Riya also leaves..

At night:-

Arjun reached at home..he was talking to someone on phone..he open door with his keys..& turn to his bedroom..

Arjun:-ok..

He cuts the phone..& open the door..

Riya is talking to someone on phone..

Riya:-ok.ok..ya..ok.(she realize that Arjun has come..& looking her..)ok..mein badme call karti hu..bye..

She cuts the phone..& look to Arjun with some tensed face..

Riya:-aap..aap..kab..kab aaye..?

Arjun:-bas abhi..

He sence her tension..

Arjun:-kisaka phone tha..?

Riya:-woh..woh..Shree..Shree ka phone tha..

Arjun:-Shree..?

Riya:-haa..accha aapko bhuk lagi hogi na..?mein abhi khana laga leti hu..

She leaves..

Arjun(in mind):-Shree ka phone tha..?aise kaise ho sakta he..?room me aane se ek second pehale hi toh mein Shree se baat kar raha tha..

He fall in thinking..

He take dinner silently..

After sometime..she come to room after cleaning kitchen..& look that Arjun is sleeping..

Riya(in mind):-are..itani jaldi so bhi gaye..?shayad bahot tired he issiliye..

She lye besides him..he was sleeping & his back is facing her..

Riya:-Arjun..

she hug him from back..but he don't move..& don't give any response to her..

Riya(in mind):-perhaps he is in deep sleep..i should not disturb him..

She broke off her hug..& move somewhat away from him..& close her eyes..

Arjun(in mind):-Riyu..why you told me lie..?why you told me that you were talking to Shree..?balki ussi waqt mein Shree se baat kar raha tha..what you are hiding from me..?why you lied to me..?

(he clunch his fingers in anger..)

Next morning:-

She open her eyes..& found Arjun nowhere in house..

Riya:-kaha chale gaye..?

She make a call to his mobile..but he don't receive it..

Riya:-kahi..koi case toh nahi aa gaya..?par fir muze kyo nahi bataya..?

She make a call in office..some puon receive it..

Riya ask him about Arjun..he told her that Arjun has arrived there just before some minutes..

Riya:-ok..

She cuts the phone..

Riya(in mind):-lagata he commissioner sir ne kal ki meeting me koi naya case diya hoga..issiliye woh itani subah subah chale gaye..par muze batake kyo nahi gaye..?

She smile..

Riya:-oh..ho..tu bhi na Riya..tu toh janti he na..woh tuzse kitana pyar karte he..tuze aaram se sote hue dekh ke..tuze disturb nahi karna chahte honge..isiliye nahi jagaya hoga..(she smile..)

She decide to get ready for office..

When she reach to office..all were gathered in conference room & discussing about the case..Arjun seems to lose in thinking..she does not get any chance to talk to him lonely..

She come to his cabin at lunch time..

Riya:-Arjun..chaliye na..ham lunch kar lete he..

Arjun:-tum kar lo..mein baad me kar lunga..

Riya:-lekin..pehale hi bahot der ho gayi he..aap..

Arjun:-Riya..plz..meine kaha na mein baad me kar lunga..

Riya(in mind):-kya ho gaya he inhe..?aur kitane dino ke baad inhone ne muze Riya kehake pukara..warna toh hamesha Riyu kehte he..

She leaves from there..

At night they all leave..

Riya also take permission from Rathod to leave early to home..

She come to Arjun's cabin..

Riya:-Arjun..mein ghar ja rahi hu..

Arjun:-hmm..

Riya:-aapka dinner..?

Arjun:-mein thoda late ho jauga..office me hi dinner kar lunga..

Riya(smile):-ok..(come closer to him..kiss on his forehead)par jaldi ghar aana..

She smiles & leave..

Rathod was also about to leave..he saw Arjun in his cabin..he come to Arjun's cabin..

Rathod:-Arjun..tum abhi tak office me kya kar rahe ho..?

Arjun:-kuch nahi..bas aise hi..

Rathod wiredly look him..

Rathod:-kya hua..?ab toh koi kaam bhi nahi he..fir ghar kyo nahi gaye..?

Arjun does not give him answer..

Rathod:-samaz gaya..Riya se zagada hua he kya..?

Arjun:-nahi..

Rathod:-oh..ho..Arjun..aise chote-mote zagade toh hote hi rehate he..chalo..chalte he..

Arjun:-tum jao..

Rathod:-Arjun..kya hua he..?koi bahot bada zagada hua he kya tum dono ka..?

Arjun:-zagada..?agar zagada hua hota toh accha hua hota..lekin..

Rathod:-lekin kya..?

Arjun:-she lied to me..

Rathod:-what..?

Arjun told him whatever happened..

Rathod:-come on Arjun..woh kisi aur Shree se baat kar rahi hogi..

Arjun:-matlab..?

Rathod:-are shree naam ke kya ek hi insaan he iss duniya me..?aur tum toh jante ho na..usaka friend circle kitana bada he..ho sakta he koi aur Shree naam ka dost ho..

Arjun:-nahi..i know..Shree naam ka sirf ek hi friend he usaka..

Rathod:-ho sakta he tuze pata na ho..

Arjun:-maan lo woh Shree naam ke usake kisi aise dost se baat kar rahi thi..jise me nahi janta..lekin..kya woh apne uss dost ka phone number bhi apne mobile me save nahi kar sakti thi...jab woh kal raat ko so gayi..tab meine usaka phone check kiya tha..woh number usake mobile me save bhi nahi tha..woh kisi unknown number se baat kar rahi thi..

Rathod:-come on Arjun..woh save karna bhul gayi hogi..

Arjun:-ya fir..woh kisi aur se baat kar rahi thi..jisake bare me woh muze batana nahi chahati ho..

Rathod:-what do you mean..?

Arjun:-matlab koi ladka..i mean..

Rathod(angrily):-ek minute Arjun..tum usape shaq kar rahe ho..?you are doubting her..?are you carzy..?

Arjun:-yes..i am crazy..agar aisa nahi he..toh fir usane muzse zoot kyo bola..?

Rathod(angrily):-stop it..Arjun..tumhe ho kya gaya he..?

Arjun:-jis tarah Roshni ne muze dhoka diya..kahi Riya bhi..?

Rathod(angrily):-enough..enough..Arjun..tum pagal toh nahi ho gaye ho..?tum Riya ko Roshni se compare kar rahe ho..?

Arjun:-nahi..mein usse compare nahi kar raha hu..mein toh bas..

Rathod:-Arjun..Riya ki aakho me meine hamesha tumhare liye pyar dekha he..tab bhi jab tum dono ki shadi nahi hui thi..aur tum Roshni ko dund rahe the..aur hamesha Riya ko ignore karte the..tab se woh tumse pyar karti he..aur tum..?

Arjun:-par fir usane muzse zoot kyo bola..?

Rathod:-ho sakta he woh sach keh rahi ho..Shree naam ka usaka koi aur friend ho jisaka number usane save nahi kiya ho..ya save karna bhul gayi ho..aur agar woh zoot bol rahi he..toh..ho sakta he usaki koi mazboori ho..

Arjun:-aur agar jo mein soch raha hu..woh sach nikla toh..?

Rathod(take a deep sigh):-aisa kuch nahi he Arjun..

Arjun just keep looking him..

Rathod:-yaha par ruk kar apne dimaag mein aisi bate sochne se toh accha he..ke tum usase jake puch lo ke usane tumse zoot kyo bola..?

Rathod leaves from there..

Arjun:-you are right..Sam..muze pata lagana hi hoga..ye matter aakhir kya he..?

He also leaves to home..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago

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