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Posted: 12 years ago
Aw... VERY happy to see Ri like this!!!
Go Riya!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE THNX FOR THE PM😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow yaar sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ...shre aur itani mature baate...wow

shree u r true friend...i happy aakhir kuch to hai riya ke pass jo sirf aur sirf usaka hai...she belongs to that...friendship of shree..


their bonding for each other is so strong that even one look riya recognise that shree has some feeling for liza...

isse kehate hai dosti...

i am happy that now my riya is moved on in her life...pheww...

kitane dino ke baad i love to see riya like this...she is angel ...

and only happiness is belongs to her...

love you dimple doll
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice im very happy to see our ald riya ariya ko milado plz thanks for pm cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope she will amile rosh ka kya chakar hai vo duplicate kyu nhi hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice n emotional update dr.

Awww Arjun cme to office just to meet her.

Loved Shree for the way he supported her so far. He is a gem of a friend.

Only caz of him Riya is back in her usual self.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...!!
awww arjun went to office just to see riya... how cute...
arjun does feel something for riya... but ye roshni kyu aagyi bech mai :(
the way she comforted him was lovely...!!!
glad shree was able to make riya smile and come out of sadness and depression...!!
their scenes were a treat to read...
wow now riya back to her old self...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Guatakh Dil..
Arjun's home:-

Roshni(trying to wake up Arjun):-come on Arjun..uto na..get up yaar..

Arjun(open his eyes..):-uff..Rosh ye kya..?abhi toh 6:30 hi baje he..itani jaldi kyo uta rahi ho..

Roshni:-chalo bhi..jaldi karo..hame mandir jana he..

Arjun:-muze kisi mandir nahi jana..

Roshni:-tum nahi jaoge toh puja kaise hogi jo meine baba ki aatma ki shanti ke liye rakhi he..

Arjun:-puja..?baba ke liye..?

Roshni:-ha..kal raat hi tumhe batane wali thi par tum itane late aaye the ghar.. ke tab tak mein so gayi thi..ab jaldi uto..

He get up..& get ready for puja..they both leave to mandir..perform puja & 'havan' there..& after finishing they leave..when they reach to outside of mandir,

Roshni:-are..Arjun dekho ham log bhul gaye na..?

Arjun:-kya?

Roshni:-baba ke naam se ham log mandir ke liye donation dene wale the na..

Arjun:-oh..shit..accha tum yahi ruko..mein abhi cheque dekar aata hu..

Roshni:-ok..

Arjun leaves & again goes inside mandir ..

Shree & Riya both are going to office on Shree's bike..Shree suddenly stops the bike infront of mandir..(same mandir where Arjun is there..)

Riya:-ham log yaha kyo ruke he..Shree?

Shree:-kuch nahi..chal bas mandir chalate he..

Riya:-aaj achanak tuze mandir jane ka khayal kaise aaya..?

Shree:-aaj se tu ek nayi suruwat karane ja rahi he na..toh bas issiliye..

Riya:-oye..hoye..

Shree(smile):-ab chale..

They both goes inside the mandir..perform the pooja of god..& close their eyes..& joined hands to pray god..

Arjun who is coming after giving donation..see both of them..praying..

Shree(joining hands,closed his hands,in mind praying.):-oh..god..meri friend aaj se nayi suruwat karne ja rahi he..usaki help karo..mein chahata hu ke woh bahot khush rahe..(he open his eyes & look to Riya who is also busy in praying..Shree smiles looking to her..& again close his eyes)hey bhagawan..usse shakti do ke woh har mushkil se ladh sakhe..aur muze bhi shakti do taki mein har mushkil me usaka sath de sakhu..

Riya(closing her eyes,& praying in mind):-oh..god..samaz nahi aa raha ke kya mangu..aaj se mein fir se jine ki koshish karne ja rahi hu..aur ye sab Shree ke wajah se..god..usse hamesha khush rakhana..(she open her eyes..& look to Shree,he has also closed his eyes & praying..she smile looking him & again close her eyes) Thank you so much..bhagawanji..aisa dost muze dene ke liye..thank you so much..

Shree open his eyes first..& look to her..

Shree:-chale..

They both leave..Arjun who look the whole scene(Shree praying..then suddenly looking to Riya..smiling..Riya praying..looking to Shree & smiling..) also goes behind them somewhat angrily..

They both don't know that Arjun is also there..

Shree:-accha tu itani der tak bhagawan se kya maang rahi thi..?

Riya(innocently):-kuch nahi..mein unako thanks bol rahi thi..

Shree:-thanks..?

Riya:-hamm..musibat ke waqt bhi bhagawanji ne mera sath dene ke liye tuze mere liye bhej diya..issliye..aur tere jaisa dost muze dene ke liye..(Shree smiles..) par tu ne kya maanga..?

Shree:-meine unase tere liye aur apne liye shakti mangi ke tu apne zindagi me har musibat ka samna kar sake..aur mein hamesha tera sath de saku..

They both smile..& leaves..

Arjun hears their conversation & clunch his fingers in palm in anger..

Flashback:-

He remember when one time he save Riya from goons..he was very angry at that time..

Arjun:-gr8..jis bhagwan ki itani puja karti rehati ho..aaj woh tumhe bachane kyo nahi aaya..?

Riya:-sir..kya keh rahe he aap..?bhagawanji aise thodi na har baar hamari help karne aayege..lekin woh hamesha hamara sath dete he..jaise ke aaj woh khud toh nahi..par unhone aapko bhej diya meri help ke liye..

Flashback Ends

He remember this..& angrily come out of mandir..

In ETF office:-

Riya(teasing Shree):-bata na Shree..?

Shree:-Riyu..bas yaar..subah se dekh raha hu..tum chup hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi he..

Chotu:-are yaar par hua kya he..?

Riya:-gr8..accha hua Chotu tu aa gaya...ab tu hi meri help kar..

Chotu:-haa bol na..

Shree:-chup kar Riyu..

Riya(ignoring Shree):-are mein woh Shree aur Liza ke baar me..

Chotu(excitedly):-oye..Shree aur Liza..wow..kya baat he..

Shree:-stop it you both..

Chotu:-tu chup kar Shree..ham dono ko baat karne de..haa Ri tu bol..muze toh kabse doubt tha..

Riya:-sachhi me..?par dekh na ye Shree mu hi nahi khol raha..

Chotu:-are me tuze batata hu..dekh ye dono aise bhi ek dusare ko college se janate he...aur jab tu..kidnap ho gayi thi na..you know Shree kitana pareshan tha..aur strange baat toh ye he..ke Liza har waqt usako himmat deti thi..usaka khayal bhi rakhti thi..

Riya(suprizingly):-really..?(hit Shree..)tu ne muze bataya nahi..?

Shree:-are kya batau..?accha thik he..ham dono acche dost ban gaye he..par tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa kuch nahi he..

Riya(in mind):-ye aise nahi manega..(decide to emotional blackmail him..make her eyes teary..& in sad voice)Shree..tuzse ye umeed nahi thi yaar..mein har baat tuzse share karti hu..aur tu..?tu ne muze ab baate chupane lag gaya he..tu apne friend ko itani aassani se bhul gaya..hey bhagwan..aur aaj hi mein bhagawan se pray kar rahi thi ke tum hamesha khush raho..

Chotu(winking her & giving her thumb up,in mind):-wahh..kya acting karati he yaar ye..ab toh Shree ko batani hi padegi apne dil ki baat..

Riya:-oh..no..i don't think in my dream also..my best friend..my best buddy..will hide something from me..(she wipe her eyes..)

Shree(who really get emotional):-hey..Riyu..plz..yaar..dont cry..tu janati he na..mein tuze rote hue nahi dekh sakta..Riya(he hugged her slightly,she is still pretending to cry)accha baba..ok..jo puchana he puch le..iss baar sach jawab dunga..ok..

Riya(become happy & smile):-really..?toh bata you love her..?hmm..?hmm?

Shree(hesitedly):-well..wel..i ..think so..

Chotu:-you think..?means?

Shree:-means..damm..it..i love her ok..?

Chotu & Riya give hi5 to each other..

Shree:-itana khush hone ki zarurat nahi he..i know she don't love me..

Riya(shockingly):-you proposed her..?

Chotu(superizingly):-kya..?kab?

Shree:-nahi yaar..lekin..lekin..bas muze aisa lagata he..

Riya:-oh..ho..(hit on his head..)usake bina kuch kahe hi tuze kaise pata chal gaya..?

Shree:-well..woh toh muze hamesha avoid karti he..?muze hamesha specky bulati he..which I don't like..but..

Chotu:-are haa..aur Shree hamesha usase club me dance ke liye puchta he..toh woh mana kar deti he..aur kisi aur ke sath dance karti he..

Shree:-hmm..no chance for me Riyu..

Riya:-oh...ho..ye tu muzpe chod de..

Shree:-kya..?

Riya:-hmm..aur tuze accha nahi lagata na ke woh tuze specky bulaye..toh ab jab bhi woh tuze specky bulaye..toh tu usapar gussa mat karana balki..aise dikha ke tuze kuch farak hi nahi padta he..

Shree:-lekin..

Riya:-uff..tu bas wahi kar jo mein keh rahi hu..

Chotu:-oh..got..it..tera plan thoda thoda meri samaz me aa raha he..Ri..

Riya(give him hi5):-case teri bhale hi samaz me na aati ho...par aisi baate tu badi jaldi samaz jata he..

They all laugh..& suddenly stops when Rathod enters in conference hall..the trio wish him..he just nodded & leave to his cabin..

Chotu:-are ye sir ko kya ho gaya..?aaj toh hame return wish bhi nahi kiya hamesha ki tarah..

Shree:-lagata he Sonali bhabhi se zagada hua hoga..

Chotu:-yaar..zagada unase hua..?aur gussa ham par..?bahot hi galat he yaar ye..

Shree:-don't worry..jab agali baar Sonali bhabhi se milege na toh..unhe bolege ke sir jab ghar se office ke liye nikalte he na..tab unase thodi romantic baate kiya kare..ho sake toh ek romantic kiss de diya kare..fir sir bhi khush..aur ham bhi..

They all laugh..

Riya:-teri shadi hone ke baad na..ye salah mein Liza ko bhi de dungi..

Shree(imagine Liza as his wife..& suddenly come to reality..)shut up guys..

Riya & Chotu laugh..& give hi5 to each other..

Suddenly Arjun enters in room..& look all them laughing..specially Riya..he also become very happy to her like that..& a smile also crept on his face..

Chotu realize that Arjun is come..he signal the other two..& all get silent..& starts doing their work..

He sit on his usaual chair..that is infront of Riya..& look her..she is still smiling..& trying to concentrate on file..he also feel happiness filling his whole heart..

Meanwhile Rathod also come..& order them to complete their work..

Liza also come..wish to all other..

Liza(looking to Shree):-hi..specky..

Shree(first get angry..but Riya..hit his leg..& signal him to be cool..):-hi..Liza..good morning..

Liza(sit near Chotu..):-isse kya ho gaya..?aaj meine specy bulaya toh gussa bhi nahi hua..?

Chotu:-woh kya he..ke aaj Riya..badi khush he na..issiliye..woh bhi bahot khush he..aaj tu usse kuch bhi kahegi..toh woh bura nahi manega..

Arjun clunch his fingers in anger..while Liza look to Shree upsetly..

Riya(mutter in Shree's ear):-dekh meine bola tha na..usako farak padega..

Shree smrik to her..

Arjun (looking all this,angrily):-kya chal raha he..?kaam pe concentrate karo..

After sometime..liza come from her lab..

Liza:-hey..specky..(she had decided to call him Shree,but as usual habit she call him Speky)..woh..mera lab ka printer kharab ho gaya he..kya tum..?muze abhi urgent report ki print nikalani he..

Before Shree can speak anything Riya signal him..

Shree:-ohh..Liza..muze zara kaam he..Riyu he na..woh teri help kar degi..

Liza(feeling something odd):-ok..(in mind-"hamesha toh meri help karne ko ek second me tayar ho jata he fir usse kitana bhi kaam kyo na ho..aur aaj iss kya ho gaya..")

Riya & liza leave to her lab..

Liza:-kya baat he Riya..aaj tum kafi khush dikh rahi ho..?

Riya:-kuch nahi bas aise hi..

Liza(trying to be in casual tone):-aur Shree..woh kuch ..?

Riya(smrik):-Shree..?are..usse khush rahene ke liye koi bahana thodi chahiye.woh toh bas mein happy diku..toh woh bhi happy..you know na..how much he cares for me..

Liza(uneasily):-yaa..

Riya(in mind):-OMG..ye kahi 'J' for Jelious to nahi na ho rahi..?agar aisa he..toh isaka fayada utana hi hoga..

Riya:-well..i am really sorry..kal Shree tumhare sath club nahi aa sakha na..

Liza:-toh tum kyo sorry bol rahi ho..?

Riya(trying to jelious her):-are woh meri wajah se nahi aa sakha na..issliye..

Liza feels something is aching her heart..

Riya(starting printer):-ye lo..tumhara printer start ho gaya..

Liza try to give her smile..

One man(ofcource..our hero guys..Arjun..) standing near to the lab also hearing this conversation..& he angrily move from there..

In Rathod's Cabin:-

Rathod(somewhat angrily):-dekh..tu muze ek baat bata..tuze problem exactly kis baat se he..Riya firse normal ho gayi he iss baat se..? ya fir woh Shree ke wajah se normal behave kar rahi he iss baat se..?

Arjun:-what do you mean..?mein khud hi chahata tha ke woh pehale ki tarah ho jaye..

Rathod:-toh gussa kyo he..?

Arjun(yelled )I don't know..muze itana gussa kyo aa raha he..?(he remember the mandir scene again & hit his hand on table & angrily leaves)

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... So Arjun dnt lik Shree Riya's closeness... is he being jealous that his wife is happy coz of someone else??? aww Poor Liza
Roshini she is being extra sweet defo she is planning something... continue soon

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