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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

Arjun(suprizingly,happily,loudly):-Roshh...(& he immigiately hug her..)

Riya get shock to see the person..& she fall on floor..Sonali who is standing near her get first that she is fainted..

Sonali:-Riya..Riya(shake her..)Sam..?

Shree & Chotu run towards her..Chotu take her in his arms..& go to his room..make her rest on bed..

Arjun:-Rosh..I cant belive this..you are come back...he has hugeed her very tightly..

Roshni:-Arjun..muze khud ko hi yakin nahi ho raha ke mein apne ghar wapas aayi hu..

He break off the hug..hold her face by his both hand on her both cheeks..

Arjun:-I love you so much..& I missed you so much..

Roshni:-I love you too Arjun..& I also missed you too much..

Arjun:-tum thik toh ho na..?tum kaha thi..?meine tumhe kaha kaha nahi dunda..kitana pareshan tha mein..?

Roshni(smile):-are ha ha..sab bataugi..muze zara sas toh lene do.

He smile..& leave her..

Roshni(looking everywhere in the house):-are..ghar me party ho rahi thi kya..?

The reality hits Arjun that he has married to Riya now..& where is she..?he look everywhere her room's door is open..he just run towards her room..Roshni get suprized by his sudden reaction but she also follow him...Arjun come inside room..Riya is lying on bed..Shree is holding her hand..& shaking her so that she get conscious..chotu spray some water over her face..

She get some consciousness..she open her eyes..

Look to Shree & Chotu who are standing close to her..

Shree:-tu thik toh he na..?

Riya:-ha mein thik hu..(looking to everyone)meine ekdam ajeeb sapana dekha..meine dekha ke..(her eyes stop on Arjun & Roshni who are standing close to each other..)

Riya stops immigiately as reality hits her brain..

Shree(mutter to her):-It's not dream..that's the reality..

She somehow stops her tears to come out..

Riya:-plz..leave me alone sometime..

Arjun is standing helplessly..everyone except he & Roshni leave..Roshni's eyes were fixed on the photo frame near her bed's side table..(on the photo in which Riya has wrapped her both hand around Arjun's neck while Arjun's Hand around her waist..& they both are staring each other lovingly..)

Roshni:-Arjun..woh photo..?ye ladaki..?sab kya..?

Roshni's eyes filled with tears..she run out of the room..while Arjun also run behind her.. leaving Riya crying behind him..

Roshni come to hall with crying..Arjun also come back after her..

Arjun:-Rosh..meri baat suno..

Roshni:-kya sunu Arjun..(she started crying..)

He hold her hand & drag her to his bedroom..

He make her sit on bed..knee down before her..hold her both hand in his hands..

Arjun:-woh Riya he..mere sath ek saal se ETF me kaam karti he..aur ek mahine pehale hi ham dono ki shadi hui he..lekin..

Roshni(her eyes again filled with tears):-bas Arjun ye sunane ke baad..aur kuch sunana baki nahi reh gaya..

Arjun:-meine usase shadi sirf baba ke liye ki he..you know baba ko cancer detect hua he..last stage..agar woh US jate toh kuch hopes the..par woh Us jane ko tayar nahi the kyo ki unhe meri bahot fikar thi..aur achanak ek din Mr.Mukherji aaye..baba ke dost..aur Riya ke dad..aur fir baba chahte the ke mein aur Riya shadi kar le..aur tabhi woh US jayege warna nahi..aur fir meine majaburi me Riya se shadi kar li..baba abhi US mein hi..Riya ke parents ke sath..

Roshni:-par fir bhi Arjun..

Arjun:-I am really sorry Rosh..mein shadi nahi karana chahta tha..

Roshni:-nahi Arjun bahot der ho gayi muze aane me..mera yaha se chale jana hi thik hoga..

Arjun:-tum kahi nahi jaogi..mein tumse pyar karta hu..mein tumhe kahi nahi jane dunga..aur rahi Riya ki baat toh..Riya aur meri bedrooms tak alag he..ham dono sirf naam ke husband-wife he..samazi ya samzau..

Roshni:-tum sach keh rahe ho na..?

Arjun:-tumhe muzpar bharosa he na..?

Roshni:-sabse jyada..

Arjun hug her..they remain in hug for minute..she broke off suddenly..

Roshni:-par ab..kya ?

Arjun:-you know..Riya bahot acchi ladaki he..you just don't worry..she is in shock..give her some time..I will talk to her..I will handle this..trust me..

Roshni(smile):-I trust you..

In hall:-

All ETF members & Sonali are sitting abruptly..no one is talking..Shree is very tensed for Riya..& walking from one place to another in tension..

Finally Rathod manage to speak..

Rathod:-chalo..mere khayal se ham sab ko chalna chahiye..

They all get up & about to leave..

Rathod turn back to see Shree..he is still very tensed & standing as it is..

Rathod:-Shree..chalo..chalte he..

Shree:-nahi sir..mein aise Riyu ko chod ke nahi ja sakata..muze usake sath rukana hoga..

Rathod take a deep sigh..& before he could say anything Arjun & Roshni come to hall...

They both sit on sofa..Rathod placed his hand on Arjun's shoulder..

Arjun look him..

Arjun:-I want to talk to Riya..

Rathod:-but you know she want to leave sometime alone..

Arjun:-ya..I know..but..

In Riya's Room:-

She is crying very hardly..from since Arjun leave behind Roshni.

Riya(in mind):-enough..enough Riya..dont cry..(she wipe her tears..) isase pehale ke tu selfish ban jaye..tu ne jo faisala kiya he usse anjaam de..(she get up suddenly..& started packing her stuff..she take the photoframe of Arjun & her..& put it in bag..again tears started flowing from her eyes..)bas Riya..tu kamzor nahi banegi..you always know..he always love her..he always love Roshni..& you cant be selfish to come between them..you have to leave..aur haa..tu unake samne nahi royegi..bilcul ek aasu bhi nahi..

She take her both bag in her hands & open the door to face everyone..

In hall:-

Everyone get shocked looking her holding bags in her hand..

Arjun suddenly get up..

Arjun:-Riya..

Riya(before he can say anything):-I am leaving this home..I am going...

Arjun:-no..wait..I want to..

Riya(without giving chance to him):-aapko yaad diladu Arjun..par law ke hisab se first wife ke zinda hote hue.. ki hui dusari shadi illegal hoti he..issliye aapka aur mera koi rista nahi..you are free from our "so called "marriage..

Arjun:-dekho Riya..tum thodi shanti se meri baat..

Riya:-no Arjun..ye kaam toh muze ussi din kar dena chahiye tha jab aapne muzse ye kaha tha ke aapne muze shadi sirf baba ke liye ki he..(she started walking to door..)

Arjun:-no Riya..

Riya(trying to hold her tears):-yahi faisala bilcul sahi he Arjun..good luck to both of you..

She leaves without looking back..

Arjun collaps on the sofa..

Shree(who first come out of the shock..that Riya had leave,shout to Arjun):-how you can do this..?

Arjun(helplessly looking to Shree):-shree..

Shree(shout):-why..?how could you do this to her..?why the hell you marry her if you want to leave her like this?

Arjun:-shree..I..

Shree:-I didn't expect this from you sir..how can you let her leave..?disgusting..

Rathod:-Shree..?

Shree(loudly):-no..I know..you will also take his side..afterall you are his friend..

Sonali:-Shree..plz..

Shree:-what Sonali bhabhi..?cant you see..how Arjun sir forget Riya..after Roshni has come..how can he leave her like that..?

Arjun:-Shree..plz..

Shree(loudly):-no..you are a selfish person..i don't want to hear you.."Sir"

Shree leaves hurrily to catch Riya..Chotu & Liza also run behind him..

Rathod:-Arjun..ham log chalate he..

Roshni:-nahi..aap dinner kar lo..

Sonali:-lekin..

Roshni:-agar aap rukenge to Arjun kam se kam kuch kahyega toh..warna woh..

Rathod just nodded..Sonali & Roshni leaves to kitchen..

Rathod sit near to Arjun..

Rathod:-Arjun..Riya ne jo bhi faisala kiya he..muze lagata he woh bilcul sahi he..

Arjun:-lekin..kam se kam muze kuch bolne ka mauka toh deti..

Rathod:-dekho arjun..jis ristey ka koi future na ho..usse jitani jaldi khatam kar do utana hi accha he..aur waise bhi tum toh abhi bhi Roshni se hi pyar karte ho na..?

Arjun (look Rathod):-par..

Rathod:-aur Shree ki bato ka tum bura mat mano..I know ke usane gusse me kuch jyada hi bol diya..lekin..you know na ke woh aur Riya kitane close he..

Arjun just nodded..

Sonali:-Sam..dinner..?

Rathod get up..while Arjun don't..Rathod looking to him..finally Arjun manage to get up..they take dinner..while Arjun just manage to eat half roti..& get up..

In outside of Arjun's Home:-

The three Shree,chotu & liza are looking for Riya in all direction..

Shree(rubbing his head):-oh..god..kaha chali gayi ye..

Chotu:-ho sakta he ke usake mom-dad ke ghar gayi ho..

Shree(worrily):-ha..Chotu tu jaldi se usake ghar ja..aur pata laga ke woh waha pahoch gayi ya nahi..

Liza:-waise agar woh usake ghar gayi hogi toh ab tak toh pahoch hi chuki hogi..

Shree just nodded..Chotu leave..Shree & liza decide to go in two different directions to search her..After almost half hour..Shree get Chotu's call..that Riya has not reached to her perents home..

Shree get more worried..he call liza..

Liza:-oh..god Shree..meri toh kuch samaz nahi aa raha ke kya kare..

Shree:-tum Arjun sir ke ghar ke samne aao..phir ham dekhte he..

Liza cuts the phone & decide to take taxi to go so that she will reach as soon as possible..before she catch taxi..her attension get shifted to something behind her..she call immigiately to Shree..

Liza:-Shree..abhi yaha aao..muze kuch gadbad lag rahi he..

Shree:-matlab..? kya hua..?

Liza:-tum jaldi aao..aur Rathod sir ko bhi inform karo..it's urgent..

Shree (make call to rathod):-sir..kya aap plz..aa sakte he..?

Rathod:-Shree,kya hua..?tum bahot parshan lag rahe ho..tell me what happened..?

Shree:-sir plz..aap aa jao..

Rathod & Sonali who were about to leave from Arjun's home..Arjun get more worried after hearing Rathod's conversation on phone..

Arjun(worrily):-kya hua..?

Rathod:-tum mere sath chalo..aur Sonali..tum yahi ruko..we will right back..(he leaves..& Arjun also leave behind him hurily)

They reach to the place where Shree told them..they see the bags Riya was carrying when she leaves from Arjun's house are on the road side..

Arjun:-what is this..?aur Riya kaha he..?

Liza:-ye bags aise yaha padi he jaise kisi ne inhe fek diya ho..

Arjun:-OMG..

Rathod:-Riya..woh kaha he..?

Shree(frustrated tone):-pata nahi sir..ye saman yaha pe mila..chotu usake parents ke ghar gaya par woh waha nahi pohachi..

Arjun(worrily):-usse toh ab tak waha pahoch jana chahiye tha..

Rathod:-ho sakta he woh apne kisi relative ya friend ke ghar gayi ho..?

Shree:-usaka mumbai mein koi relative nahi he..aur jana hi hota toh bags leke jati na..

Arjun:-ho sakta he kisi hotel..ya club me..

Shree(angrily):-usake liye paise toh usake pass nahi he..kyo ki usaki purse bhi yahi he..aur usame sare paise aur credit card bhi..

Rathod:-usaka phone..?

Shree(sadly):-purse me hi he..

Arjun(holding his head ):-oh..shit..kaha chali gayi ye..?

Liza:-kahi..koi accident toh..

Rathod:-oh..shit..

they ran to SUV..withtin next 4 hours they check almost each & every hospital..check railway station,bus stop..everyplace where she can go..finally they all reached to Arjun's home when it was almost morning..Sonali & Roshni ask them more questions..Rathod tell the both girl what happened..while Arjun remain quite & very tensed..

Liza:-Shree..muze darr lag raha he..kahi usane kuch kar toh nahi liya na..

Arjun (get up suddenly):-oh..god..

Shree:-nahi..I know her..woh socide nahi kar sakti..I know her very well..

Arjun hears Shree..& collaps on sofa..Shree was making call to all her friends..but no one knows about her..

Rathod:-Arjun..ham ab office me milte he..we will find her soon..

Arjun just nodded..all leaves..Shree also leaves in angry way..only Roshni & Arjun remain in the house..it's almost 6:00 in morning..Roshni knows Arjun is feeling guilty for whatever happened..she knows Arjun is thinking that because of him Riya has gone..she keep her hand on Arjun's shoulder..he immigiately hug her..

Roshni(trying to consol him):-woh thik hi hogi Arjun..sab thik ho jayega..everything will be fine soon..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
where is riya,...mmhope arjun finds her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Why arjun is doing that?
Why he forget about riya?
Riya is such a nice girl.
She left arjun.
And i like shree's outbrust.
Omg riya is missing.
Continue soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat a shocking twist ...ab kya hoga ? any connection btw roshni coming bck and riya leaving arjun
is she kidnapped ...yaar too much suspense ...jaldi se update karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Fish...
What the hell????
Roshni ko bhi abhi ana thha????
Riya ko hi kyun itna dukh sehna parta hai???
OMG...
Riya kahaan hai?
Shree's anger was totally justified.
I am with Shree...
Oh No...
Riya kahaan gayi???
Mujhe dal mein kuch kala lag raha hai...
I am scared...
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Riya where she is?
Rosh Arjun mil gay
My Riya ?
Shree u r superb
I love the update plzzz update soon me want to read more
Thanx 4 pm me such wonderful,amazing,fab update
Love u
Riya safe ho...
Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think roshni nakli hai... Please hope riya sahi ho nice going...
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor riya.. she is the one affected in this whole situation! don't know where riya is... poor thing... all are so worried abt riya... hopefully she didn't do anything wrong to herself... i rather she come back stronger than cry for something that is not her fault... i just can't wait to know what is going to happen next... please update soon! i really don't think i can wait for the next update... too excited to know what is going to happen next and where is riya... please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm updt...
hope ria jaldi mil jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
what the... omg where is riya gone yaar?
how can arjun do this to her???
poor riya what happened to her???
liked shree's outburst so much
cont soon!!!

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