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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

They all take dinner together..After that they all leave..Riya come with them upto parking to say bye to them..

Rathod:-Chotu..chalo..mein tumhe drop kar deta hu..

Chotu:-ok sir..

He hug Riya..& says bye to her..both Rathod & Chotu leaves..

Shree move towards his bike..while Arjun towards his car..

Shree:-ok..Riyu..now happy..?

Riya winked at him..

Riya:-are haa..Shree..tuze yaad diladu..ke ghar pe jake firse ek baar teri sherwani try karna jo aaj hamne li he teri sagai ke liye..

Shree:-haa..baba..haa..try kar lunga..

Riya:-aur haa..aunti ko bol dena jo kaam unhone muze diya tha woh sab meine kar liya he..

Shree:-kyon sa kaam..?

Riya:-dekh..teri aur Liza ki shopping jo most important thi..woh meine karwa di he..decoration ka sab arrangement ho chukka he..aur meine sab uss decorator ko samaza diya he..aur flowers ki arrangement ho gayi he..lekin flowers ofcourse sagai ke din hi aayege..aur catering ka sab order de diya he..

Shree:-uff..my god Riyu..itani tension me bhi tu ne meri sagai ki preparation ki..you are unbelievable yaar..

Here Arjun is waiting near to his car when Riya will get free..

Arjun(in mind):-oh..god..kya karu mein iss ladki ka..?bas Shree mil jaye toh isse aur kisiki zarurat nahi..kitana bolti he..aur ye dekh bhi nahi rahi ke mein usake liye wait kar raha hu..

Riya:-shut up Shree..teri sagai ki preparation me nahi karugi toh aur kyon karega..?aur haa yaad aaya..tere friends jinhe invite karna he na..woh list ek baar check kar lena..waise meine check ki thi par fir bhi koi reh gaya ho toh..?

Shree:-tu toh rahegi na..?fir kisi aur ki zarurat nahi muze..(look to Arjun from croner of his eyes)lekin lagata he..kisi aur ko muzse jyada tumhari zaruarat he..?

Riya(also look to Arjun..& see that he is waiting for her):-shut up Shree..

Shree:-sacchi me yaar..waise uncle thik hi keh rahe the..agar Arjun sir ko aaj..bilcul abhi shadi karne ko bola hota na toh woh bhi kar lete..

Riya:-shreee..

Shree:-jaldi se muze yaha se nikalne de warna..unhe dekhkar lagata he ke agar aur thodi der tu muzse baat karegi na toh woh muze khaa jayege..

Riya(laugh):-stop it Shree..

Shree move his bike near to Arjun..

Shree:-good night sir..

Arjun just nodded..

Shree(winked to Riya..):-bye Riyu..

Riya(smile):-bye..

Shree leaves..

Riya(looking to Arjun):-ok bye..good night..(& try to leave hurrily from there..)

But Arjun hold her hand from behind..& pull her to him..put both his hand on her waist..& pull her more closer..

Riya:-ye aap kya kar rahe he..?kisine dekh liya toh..?

Arjun:-sweetheart thoda sa waqt apne fiance ke liye bhi nikala karo..thodi si baate usase bhi kar liya karo..

Riya(blush):-pehale aap muze chodiye..fir mein aap se dher sari baate karugi..

Arjun:-nahi..aise hi mere paas reh kar muzse baat karo..

Riya:-no..plz..na..

Arjun(his face coming closer to her):-so..ab tumhe kaisa lag raha he..?ab hamari shadi fix ho gayi he na..?

Riya blush & don't say anything..

Arjun(his lips are so close to her):-Riyu..

Riya blush & lower her face..he make her see to him..& started kissing her lips..

He broke off after sometime..& taking breath heavily..

Riya:-Arjun..aap bhi na..now leave me..

Arjun:-no..

he again starts kissing her passionately..& this time make her response back to him also..

they broke after sometime & trying to take breath..

Riya was about to leave..but he again pull her to him..she hit on his chest..

Riya:-Arjun..plz..kya kar rahe ho aap..?muze jane do na..ham parking me he..koi aa gaya toh..?

Arjun:-toh aane do..you are my fiance..

Riya:-lekin..

Arjun:-woh sab chodo..come to me..sweetheart..

Riya:-no way..Arjun..OMG..kitani der ho gayi..mom-dad kya soch rahe honge..ke mein..?

Arjun:-tum itana kyo pareshan hoti ho..?(his lips again come closer to her)

Riya(push him):-no way..bye..& good night..

Arjun:-hey..Riyu..atleast good night kiss toh de do..

Riya(stop walking..& look back to him..):-stop it Arjun..kab se kya kar rahe the fir aap..(she blush..& want to leave hurrily from there...)

Arjun:-hey..wait..

Riya(she again stop & look back):-message me when you reach to home..

Arjun:-no..no way..i wont..

Riya look him..she thinks perhaps he get angry on her..

Arjun(smile looking to her..& winked to her):-I will call you..

She smile..& leaves from there..

He also smile naughtly..& turn towards his car..

After almost 1 hour..

He reach to home..& make call to Riya..

Arjun:-so rahi thi..?

Riya:-no..abhi mein Liza se thodi der pehale baat kar rahi thi..

Arjun:-Liza se..?kya..?

Riya:-yahi ke hamari shadi ke liye mein shopping kaha se karugi..kya pehanugi..& all that..

Arjun:-oh..god..tum aur tumhari shopping..

Riya:-kyo..?kya hua..?

Arjun:-are..tumhari iss shopping ke wajah se muze lag raha tha ke kahi hamari shadi 6 months ke liye postpone na ho jaye..tumne toh uss waqt meri jaan hi nikal di thi..kya keh rahi thi..(making her mimicry)"meri shopping reh jayegi.."

Riya(laugh):-aur suppose sach me postpone ho gayi hoti toh..?

Arjun:-has lo..has lo..bahot hasi aa rahi he na tumhe muz par..ek baar shadi ho jane do..fir dekhna..

Riya:-kya dekhu..?

Arjun:-mera pyar..sweetheart..

Riya(blush):-shut up Arjun..

Arjun(laugh):-uff..Riyu..kitana blush kar rahi ho..parking me bhi kitana blush kar rahi thi..

Riya:-Arjun..

Arjun:-yes..Riyu..my sweetheart..

Riya(want to tease him):-Arjun..kitani baar bola he aapko..muze Riyu mat bulayiye..sirf Shree hi..

Arjun(get angry):-ha ha..pata he..sirf wahi tumhe Riyu bula sakta he..but now I m your fiance..your husband cant also call you Riyu..?

Riya:-no..no one other cant..?

Arjun(angrily):-what..?

Riya(want to tease him more..):-yes..but if you still want to call me Riyu..then you have to take permission from him..

Arjun:-what the hell..?mein permission lu..?aur woh bhi Shree se..?

Riya:-yes..Mr.Arjun Rawte..dekhte he.. can you do it or not..?

Arjun:-you are challenging me..?

Riya:-no..no..i m not challenging you..actually I know..you wont do it..

Arjun:-oh..you want to see..haa..look now..

He make a conference call to Shree..Shree who was talking to Liza..put her call on waiting & get connected to Arjun & Riya's call..

Shree:-Arjun sir..kya hua..?

Arjun:-agar mein Riya ko "Riyu" bulau toh tumhe kuch problem he..?

Shree:-nahi sir..muze kya..

Riya(yelled):-Shree..?

Shree:-no..i mean ..Riyu..

Arjun(angrily):-Shree agar tumhe kuch problem he na..toh mein aisa kuch karuga ke fir zindagi bhar tumhe koi problem nahi hogi..

Shree:-I don't mind at all..you can call her anything..

Riya(angrily):-aap usase permission maang rahe he ya usse dhamaka rahe he..?

Arjun:-ye meri style he..

Riya(angrily):-what is this..?aap hamesha mere friends ko datate rehate ho..?

Arjun(angrily):-dekho ...

Shree:-ek minutes..aap dono suno..Arjun sir..muze koi problem nahi he ke aap Riya ko Riyu bulao..ya fir jaan,sweetheat(he says it more loudly)..ya fir aur kuch bulao..i don't mind at all..

Arjun(to Riya):-gr8..sun liya tumne..aur Shree..meine tumhe sirf Riyu bulane ke bare me pucha he..usake baad usako kya bualne he ye mein khud decide karuga..Samaze ya Samazau..?

Riya:-aap firse usse dhamaka rahe he..?

Arjun:-dehkho ..tum ..

Shree:-ek minutes..plz..aap dono..apne zagade me muze mat lao..ek toh meine Liza ka phone waiting pe rakhkar aapka phone receive kiya he..kahi ab ham dono me na zagada ho jaye..

Arjun & Riya started laugh..

Arjun:-ok..Shree..tum Liza ko sambhalo..

He cuts the conference call..

Now Arjun & Riya are speaking to each other..

Arjun:-so..what..?

Riya:-what..?

Arjun:-so..Miss..Riya Mukherji..& would be Mrs.Riya Rawte..can I call you now Riyu..

Riya:-ofcource..Mr.Arjun Rawte..& my would be husband..

They both smile..& keep talking each other for long time..

Next morning..

The whole day passes in wedding preparation..at night they have mehandi ceremony..

Riya was very happy looking Arjun's name on her hand..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super update plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
super duper updt...
just lv it...
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the arjun riya convo
like to see more romantic side of arjun
please update soon
waiting waitin ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an amazing update :) loved it
how feet riya did whole preparation of shree's engagement
love the way shree was teasing riya
ariya scenes were beautiful <3
loved their kiss ❤️
loved arjun and riya's phone conversation
awww riya was blushing :)
riyu part was funny
loved the way arjun asked shree for permission to call riya as riyu 😆
finally the wedding is near
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
loved ariya's parking romance
n their convo on phone was nice
poor shree caught between their cute nok-jhok😆
thanks a lot for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
red...but seriously loved Arjun shree riya combo more like Arjun dhamkee...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwh... They going to get married again nice and loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll


Again first fatii ye raaj kya hai???

what to do piya i am a stalker when in it comes to ariya stories 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb and beautiful update.
Arjun and Riya romance...
Uff...
Hot and romantic...
*blush*
shree ka engagement ka sara intezaam hogaya.
Loved their convo at night thru mobile.
Especially,conference wala convo was superb.
Arjun and asking permission from Shree whether to call Riya Riyu or not?
That was lovely.
Aww...
Loved the mehndi ceremony.
She was looking at her mehndi.
That was lovely.
Loved the whole update.update soon.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 12 years ago

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