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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Love rathore dialog.
Omg liza and arjun is jealous.
They all are going to picnic.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
sam more or less knows na abt arjuns feelings now
love the bonding btw the trio
poor liza
feeling happpy for riya now ...friends always play a imp part in the healing process
ab picnic maikya hoga ...bohot zyada suspense hai abhi
wil rosh behave badly??? will she do something???
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) loved it
liza jealous and arjun angry 😆
yayyy liza saw shree when she closed her eyes
awww shree ordered juice for riya
ariya scenes were lovely :)
awww arjun made him wear the earrings <3
arjun was really so angry
and riya called him sir
wow everyone went on picnic
last part was funny
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
GREAT UPDATE CONTINUE SOON THNX FOR PM😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!
lol arjun and liza ki jealousy to badti hi jaa rhi hai...!!😆
mazze aagye😉 wah kay way hai arjun ka riya se uski health ke bare mai puchne ka...!!😆
that earring wala part as very sweet...!!!
bechare arjun aur liza...!!! abhi to picnic baki hai...!!! waha pta nai kya karnge dono...!!😆
continue soon...!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update... J factor is working over time... Liza Riya convo was good... Picnic cool hope Ariya will be more close by end of this trip... Roshini also coming grr... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dr.

Wow Liza was jealous whereas Arjun was both jealous n angry caz of Shriya's closeness.

Awww Shree was a really good friend. Loved the way he was taking care of Riya.

Waaaooo thy r going for picnic but Riya was upset caz Roshini will also be there. Poor gal.

Waiting for dhamaal btwn Ariya n Shriza.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oo... Picnic... Ab aayega maza!!
Ha ha... Arjun and Lisa are SO JEALOUS!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gustakh Dil..

Arjun has ware this

while Roshni has ware this dress & looking beautifull...

but Arjun's eyes was searching someone else..

Riya entered with Shree with this dress..

Arjun's eyes get fixed on her..he just lost in her as if no one is there around them..only he & Riya are there..he keep staring her without blinking eyes..

Riya also look to Arjun..he also look so handsome today..she also keep looking him..

Shree(to Chotu):-are yaar..ye kya ho raha he..ye Riya..dekh..Arjun sir me kaise kho gayi he..

Chotu:-are yaar..Ri ke bare me toh hame acche se pata he..she is crazy for him..but ye Arjun sir ko kya ho gaya he..?mana ke Riya kuch jyada hi "dhasuu" lag rahi he..par..Roshni ji kam nahi lag rahi..par Arjun sir ki nazare toh Riya pe hi atak gayi he..

Shree:-haa..yaar..kuch karna padega..

Shree(mutter in Riya's ear):-Riyu..Riyu..plz..yaar Arjun sir ko dekh ke..hamara plan bhul mat jana..

Riya(hit him):-stop it shree..

But after that she lower her gaze..& don't look to Arjun again..but Arjun is just lost in her..

Rathod (keep his hand on Arjun's shoulder):-Arjun..mere bhai..kya kar raha he..bas kar..itana mat ghur usse..pagal ho jayega..control kar apne dil par..aur apne aakho par bhi..

Arjun broke of link to Riya..& try to concentrate on Sonali & Roshni's chatting..

They reach to their picnic spot..

After sometime..

Sonali:-kuch bore nahi ho raha guys..?

Riya:-come on Shree..tu ne guitar layi he na..suru kar na..

Shree:-yaar this is not fare..mein hi gata rahuga toh kya maza aayega..

Liza:-toh..ek kaam karte he..har koi apna favorite song gayga..ok..?

Sonali:-ok..

Riya:-toh suruwat kisase kare..?Rathod sir..?

Rathod:-hey..Riya..no way..

Shree:-sir plz..

Rathod started singing the song looking to Sonali while Sonali is blushing..(from movie-blood money)

Bas haq hai ek mera..

All claps for him..

Riya:-ab Sonali ki baari..

Sonali also starts singing..(from movie agent vinod)

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta ...

(shree is playing guitar on every song)

Shree:-wooo..gr8..ab Chotu..teri bari..

First he hesisted but then starts..(from movie- om shanti om)

Aankhon mein teri'
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hai..

All started teasing him..

Riya(hit him on his shoulder):-Chotu..motu..pehale ye bata..ye gana tu ne kisake liye gaya..?

Chotu:-are ye toh bas aise hi..

Shree:-ye muze pata he..woh 11:30 wali he na..

Liza:-chotu..hame bhi toh usase milao yaar..

Riya:-hey chotu..bol na..

Chotu:-yaar,..plz..yaar..mera picha chodo...

They all laugh..

Sonali:-hey..now it's Rosh's turn..

All stared to Roshni..

She started singing..(from movie-Student of the year)

Ishq wala love

(She singing the song looking to Arjun...)

Shree realized that Riya get upset by this song..

Shree:-hey Liza..ab tu..

Hulcul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri aor hua

(she look to Shree from corner of her eyes..)
aisi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua
(Riya winks to Shree..& signal to Liza..)
Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai
Gujare na wahan se yeh teri galti hai
Palko Se hoton tak jo rah nikalti hai
Rehte hain abb hum wahan
Ishq hua hi hua..

aisi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua..


they all claps for her..

Sonali:-now..Arjun..it's yours..

all thinks that he wont sing..but he starts singing(o meri jaan-from movie -tum mile)

Hairan hai hum huwe kyun tum ghaero se.
kaise hai gham bolo na tum honthoo se,,

(he remember when Riya leaves his house..)
Na tum hoo bewafa.
Na mein bhi hun.
Phir bhi hai hum juda.
Mein kya kahoo.
Na jane waqt ki marzi hai kya.
Kyun hai meli ye dooriyan...
O meri jannn.


Tera bin jo din aaya.
kaate na wo katt paya.
Kami teri ghal se jati hai.
Tera bin jo sham aayi.
Bharhi dil ki tanhai.
Meri aankhen bharh si jati hai.

(he starts remembering all her memories..Arjun has closed his eyes..all others are wondered that why he is singing such sad song..Roshni looking to him surprisingly..)
kuch tum mujh se kafa.
kuch mein bhi hun..
Hai kya is ki wajah.
Mein kya kahoo.
(he remember their fights..)


Na jane waqt ki marzi hai kya.
Kyun hai meli ye dooriyan...
O meri jannn.

tujhe dil se tha chahah.
Tuuhe to na mil paya.

(he remember their marriage..)
Khushi mujh ko chahal se jati hai.
Mera tu tha sermaya.
Tujhe paake na paya.
Yaahi batein Chupbh se jati hai.
Tanha teri tarha.
Han mein bhi hun.
Donu hai gham zada.
Mein kya kahoo.
Na jane waqt ki marzi hai kya.
Kyun hai meli ye dooriyan...
O meri jannn.

Arjun gets teary but look to window..& while Riya also get teary..

Shree(to cheer up Riya..):-now it's your & mine turn Riyu..come on..tuze yaad he..hame college me best singing couple ka award mila tha..?

She smile a bit..

Shree:-come on..

She take a deep sigh..& starts singing..

Kissa tera, teri daastan,

(Riya starts teasing Shree..& smile..)
Chehra tera khud kare bayan,
Kisi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya,

(she touches his nose..& wink at him)
Tu maan jaa,Haan maan jaa'

(Shree starts singing looking to Riya)

Kahin naa laage mann,
Kya hai yeh sunapan
Mujhe tum bata do,
Koi to wajah do,
Har ghadi ab khayalon mein,
Keh raha hai koi,
Har ghadi mere khwabon mein,
Aa raha hai koi..

(he hold her hand..& take her to center..& play guitar..& move around her )
Is this love?Maine naa jaana
Is this love?Tu hi bata naa

(Riya Sings..she placed her both hand around his neck& starts dancing)

Tune chuna ishq ka raasta,
Hum safar iss safar mein dudhta hai tu,
Haan baat yeh maan bhi le zara,
Tut kar ab kisi ko chahta hai tu,

(Shree Sings..)
Raat din meri needon mein,
Jag raha hai kio
(he put some of her hairs back to her ear..)

Raat din meri aankhon mein,
Bass raha hai koi
Is this love?Maine naa jaana..
Is this love?Tu hi bata naa

(Both sings together..)

I need you,You need me,
You are with me
Is this feeling of love?
Inside our hearts
..

(Riya sings.Shree put guitar a side & also hold her to her waist & starts dancing..liza is very much jelious & Arjun is fuming in anger.)

Tune tera dil kisi ko diya,
Baat yeh sach hai gar tu maan le isse,
Dil ka sukun tune hi kho diya,
Ab haqeeqat hai yeh tu jaane le isse,
Aajkal meri chahon mein,
Dhal raha hai koi,
Aajkal meri saason mein,
Chal raha hai koi..
Is this love?Maine naa jaana..
Is this love?Tu hi bata naa

They all claps from Shree & Riya except Arjun & liza..

After sometime..the boys starts playing volleyball..& the girls starts their chatting..Riya don't want to participating in girls as Roshni is there..suddenly her phone rings..it's of her parents..she get happy..& talk with them..while talking on phone she keep walking in a direction..& when she cut the phone..she realize that she has come far away from all others even no one is visible to her..she look here & there..

Suddenly someone grab her hand & pull her to him..&pin her to a tree..

Riya(fearly):-aap..?aapne toh muze..

Arjun:-meine kya..?dara diya yahi na..(he take her strand of hair & put it in behind her ear..)

Riya:-nahi..

Arjun:-yaha kya kar rahi ho tum..agar kho gayi hoti toh..?

Riya(somewhat angrily):-excuse me..?kho gayi hoti toh..?mein kya koi choti bacchi hu jo kho jaugi..?ETF officer hu..apna rasta khud dund sakti hu..

Arjun(coming closer to her):-oh..ho..really..waise muze pata he ke tum choti bacchi nahi ho(looking to her lips intensly..)

Riya(try to get from his griph):-leave me..

Arjun:-aise nahi..(he kiss her right kiss..she get shocked by this..)

Riya:-plz..let me go..

Arjun does not seems to hear her..he hold her tightly to her waist..& remove her jacket..now her bare shoulder & bare back is visible to him..he starts kissing her neck..Riya just get lost..her knees get collaps..but Arjun has hold her to her waist..he starts moving his hand to her waist..he still kissing her neck..then his lips shifted to her shoulder..he kissed her shoulder..he pull her top from her shorts..& get entered his hand over her bare waist..he places wet kisses to her shoulder..& try to remove strip of her top..

Riya (gasped loudly..):-no..no..Arjun..

He look to her..her pinky lips inviting him..

Arjun(in mind):-no..i cant control now..

Arjun(kissing her chin..):-Riyu..riyu..my swwetheart..plz...

He was now about to kiss her lips..her phone suddenly starts ringing..& she come to reality..& look Arjun is so close to her..she pushed him..

Arjun(shockingly):-Riyu..?

Riya:-what the hell..you are doing..?

She take her jacket which is fell on ground..ware it..&leave from there..

Arjun:-Riyu..plz..meri baat toh suno..

But she don't listen him..& leave hurrily from there..

Arjun:-oh..god ye kya kar diya meine..?pata nahi muze kya ho jata he usse dekhkar..?

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey, fab update! 😃

Awww.. Arjun was lost in Riya 😳

And they all sang their fav songs.. Wow!
Ahaan! Arjun was imagining his & Riya's moments while singing!

Yeh kya? He kissed her 😲
Loved that bit. 😉

Waiting for the bext update ... 😊

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