Love to hate each other ff chap 28 pg 127 new

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi everyone our forum is so active and we have the best writers here .taking inspiration from u guys i decided to write an ff on manveer.its not a fresh idea i just got an idea reading ur ff ss oswhich iam putting down. first only i must say it wont have the standard our writers over here have .and this is the first time i am writing any thing online or offline only though ur encouragement can i proceed this .if u feel i should give it a try pls tell me or ignore it

flashback

it was early morning .the sun was just rising .the royal families of daivgarh and jaigarhhad come to haridwar to offerprayers in the temple.uday a small boy of 5 years was holding the hand of his best friend and fiance(he doesn't know its meaning) manyata a 4 year old girl .both of them where busy plannning how to escape from the sight of the guards as they were getting bored of all this prayers they wanted to play

uday 'its so boring over here come lets play hide and seek'

manyatha'ok you hide ill count till fifty

uday but do u know to count till fifty

manyatha yes 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 15 30 50

uday my god ok u count but dont cheat

as manyata started counting uday went and hid behind the mandir .there was a beggar over there

.he looked at uday ' what a cute little boy if i make him blind in one eye by pouring hotoil and burn his body with a heatedrod and break his legs then ill get more money i get now from begging .people ara so sympathetic here"

he got up and looked around .no one was there .he caught uday and hit his head with his stick .uday fell unconscious.he took uday from there and ran though the road leading to a jungle<

meanwhile their parents came out and saw manyatha they asked where uday was .she told he was hiding .the guards went to searh for uday they searched the whole temple and its surrounding but the prince was not found..

thanks for reading till here.plz ignore the grammatical and spelling errors .if u feel i should continue plz tell me otherwise ignore

Index

prologue- page 1

chapter 1- page 2

story sketch- page 3

chapter 2- page4

chapter 3- page 5

chapter 4- pg 8

chapter 5- pg 11

chapter 6- pg 11

chapter 7- pg 17

chapter 7.1- pg 17

chapter 8- pg 22

chapter 9 - pg 27

chapter 10- pg 30

chapter 11- pg 38

chapter 12- pg 44

chap 13 -pg 47

chap 14, 14.1, 14.2 pg 56

chap 15 pg 64

chap 16 pg 70

chap 17 pg 74

chap 18 pg 78

chap 19 pg 84

chap 20 pg 86

chap 21 pg 91

chap 22 pg 945

chap 23 pg 98

chap 24 pg104

chap 25 pg 110

chap 26 pg 117
chap 27 pg 121
Chap28 pg 127

Edited by andy.a - 11 years ago

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Futbol_queen

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Posted: 13 years ago

WOW! You should continue! Sounds extremely interesting!

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Sonam

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Posted: 13 years ago

A different one n sounds really interesting.😊 You should continue with it.😉

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chitra_rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

Do continue I really liked it so far, its very intriguing and thrilling😊

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

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Posted: 13 years ago

Continue continue continue Plzz it was really good
And hey i am andy you andy too oh wow

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roze Chaudhry

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sounds interesting plzz cont soon dear

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Rubaa Rana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sounds really interesting and nice...do continue👍🏼

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Fekta Holic

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Posted: 13 years ago

Intresting...ye utla ho gaya manyata ki jagah uday kidnep ho gaya...
Oui...maa...ab manyaat ki jagah uday halakt yedi vedi...aisa sab bolega...haila i m supe excited...update soon and do PM.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Andy ... That was a very interesting start...I can't wait to read further. Please (in future) don't call your own work "a pathetic try" . It was a good attempt and from the comments u received... ...I can tell u that it's already a success!

I just have 1 request:

That person that kidnapped Uday was planning to do some really cruel things to him,😡

...MAKE HIM CHANGE HIS MIND!!!

I don't think a crippled, blind and disfigured Uday will go down well with our forum-members.