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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

awesome superb fantastic update andy!
This SS is very unique! Evil arrogant manyata and sweet cute uday!
Very nnice update! Manyata udays boss!
Pease update soon!
ThanX for the pm!

thanks dear
😃manyata is a headstrong character here
uday presenly may look silent but he wont be for long
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

andy, by far this his chap of urs is surely the best one...👏😳

no wait,,,its the bestest one👍🏼
u know y ????😲
because, here for the v first time, uday gave a glimpse of his hot headed personality to his jungli billi who could not react fr a sec nd was was left stunned nd shocked...😆
i really loved the way, uday shushed her mouth off...😳,,,muaahhh...
m eagerly waiting to seee more such scenes in the future...😳
but must say, i also liked the way manyta answered him back in her own evil style ...😉
she has trapped him from all sides such tht he has left with no other option, other thn just to follow her "COMMAND "...😉...awww...poor uday...😆
but me liking this poor,,,sweet,,,innocent nd helplless "uday"😉 in front of this evil,shrewed nd conniving "manyta"😉

heyyywait a min...andy
but this doesnt mean tht i would love to see this abla bechaara uday forever...ok😆..plz get tht out of ur head...😉
i just want tht uday gives her this ultra hot nd intense punishment time to time ,,whenever she tries to control her LOC...like the way he did to her today...😆😉

really andy...mindblowing chapter...yaar👏👍🏼

ab plz aur wait mat karao...aur jaldi se ek mast aur rapchik update dedo...
jaldi
jaldi
jaldi...


thanks nira for this long comment
very happy that you loved it
uday does know to silence his jungli billi in his style
but manyata is equally smart
dont worry uday wont be bechara for long
after all he is our uday na
manyata is arrogent and it is up to uday to tame her down
now was that scene HOT as you described it?
i dont think so
i will update soon nira
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Fantastic update Andy👍🏼.

Poor Uday ... bechara ... as it is he had so much of troubles - then u get him beaten up by the guards😡. That was NOT very nice Andy😒! Luckily mr Shanker came to his rescue.unfortunately i had to give him some beating to create the scene inside Now level your dress and comb your hair you look like a villain in a bollywood movie ... might I add : "A DAMN HOT-LOOKING VILLAIN😉!!!". yes agree with you👏. he is really hooot😳

Ah ... now the MEETING OF THE BOSS ... As he entered he saw manyata resting on the sofa, her dress was now above her knees and her cream, smooth legs was clearly visible . her eyes were closed. Her lips too desirable. The neck of the dress stopped a liitle above her breast. Uday's heart skipped a beat. He had seen manyata in college but she never was this SEXY or HOT. Or did he fail to notice ... Focus Uday , don't get side-tracked😆!!poor fellow really felt something for manyata she was too yummy if i can use that word

Their HOT ENCOUNTER in the office was excellent. Loved it. Manyata being the spoilt , rich brat who knows that she has the upper hand because Uday is trapped ... then Uday showing an aggresive side which she shouldn't have underestimated. The contract was metticulously worded. Uday has NO WAY OUT. It will be a lot longer than 5 years for him. Every day for 11 hours ; for 5 years ... I feel so bad for him 😭.yes manyata was real clever to make a cotract like that , she wanted his brains for the progress of her company, and she will surely make use of it, till the day his real identity comes out

M: and cal me mam or madam, I am your boss now ... I know what to call her : BI***🤬!my!! poor manyata😆

manyata like a spider weaved the web cunningly ... he better be very careful of her - she might turn out to be a black-widow spider. She will mate with him and kill him thereafter😭!!!no that wont happen. i wont allow it . if needed i will spray pesticide on that" spider"😉 and save uday
how is this idea?

M : so uday tomorrow 8 30 sharp😈 - I can't wait😉!!!neither can i

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how was it? Awesome!!!thanks so much navi😃

Do you like our EVIL manyata and our innocent uday? Loved it😳!and me too😉

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Great update Andy ,
do continue soon,
after the second shadow update
I'm hoping the the promo part (love me tonight) ...
yes yes but dont expect too much from that
... will be in the next chapter.
Thanks for the PM😊.

navi thanks so much for this comment😃
love you for that
i must warn you i dont know to write hot scenes
i am actually scared to write them
give me some moral support navi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

navi thanks so much for this comment😃
Welcome😛!
love you for that
... only for that 😭
i must warn you i dont know to write hot scenes
I was also like that , just have faith in yourself ...
... u will be surprised at your ability.
i am actually scared to write them
Don't be !!!
give me some moral support navi
U are a great writer Andy. I know u will do a fantastic job on it.
Just give it a start ...
If u still have difficulty ; then u can refer to my ch 3.5 ( A NIGHT TO REMEMBER) for guidance 😉😳😆.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@navi
ya navi am wicked
how else could i create mr shark
i gave u my love for being a good friend
thank you ma friend
i am still scared
who said nothing would happen
my !you gave a degree book to refer for a 1st grade child
i dont know anything abt writing it
am scared like hell
navi help me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

@navi
ya navi am wicked
how else could i create mr shark
i gave u my love for being a good friend

Hmmm ... I love you 2.
thank you ma friend
i am still scared
who said nothing would happen
my !you gave a degree book to refer for a 1st grade child
🤣
i dont know anything abt writing it
am scared like hell
navi help me
Sure Dear ... I will help, WHAT DO U NEED?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friends will post the next part by afternoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Loved both parts very much. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Awesome update. Loved both parts very much. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

thanks dear
updating soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends. today i am very happy. i have become a goldie, so its time for celebration, so its time for a double update😃
Chapter 7 – THE FIRST DAY AT OFFICE
Uday was still shocked as he left manyata's office. How could he foolishly fall into her hands, that carefully calculating bi**h. now he had no other option than join the company. But he would work hard, really hard. He would never give manyata a chance to find fault with his work. He would make sure of that

He had taken his father's blessings in the morning. His father was still in the ICU. He was kept in there for observation. He had still not gained his conscious. Rohan agreed to stay in the hospital to look after uday's baba as uday had to go for work,

Uday left home and took a hot water bath. It felt good. It helped him to relax all that soreness in his body. The guards did know their work, he quickly shaved, Carful enough not to hurt his cheek which was cut in yesterday's fight. He put on his best shirt, combed his hair, took up some papers and got ready

He really looked smart and hot; any girl would just drool over him. His hair combed back, his shirt kept inside, he looked like a rajkumar

"Mr. Uday sinha, you look smart" he commented to himself😆

He soon reached the office, the guard that hit him yesterday looked at him sulking, and uday just smirked at him

As he entered the office, he was taken to Mr Shanker's office.

S: ah uday good to see you. You're early by half an hour

U: sir I wanted to get used to the office atmosphere before starting my job

S: uday, now you have a lot of work to do. In the mornings you have to check all the mails that come for manyata and forward important ones for her, you should reply all letters coming to the office. You must also have a good idea of what manyata has to do, i.e. her appointments, functions and others. These are some of the jobs, rest manyata will brief you

U: ok sir

S: and one more thing, manyata's cabin is shifted to the west block. The other cabin was just temporal. Ok you better leave now

Uday was happy he finally had a job, even if manyata was the boss she sort advice from Mr. Shanker, so if he had a good relation with him, then maybe manyata won't torture him more

Uday walked towards the west wing. It was very grand and stylish. It was about 8 20 am and he waited outside her cabin. Manyata came after 2 minutes. She wore loose top and tight jeans. She looked like a college girl, rather than a business personal. As she approached uday she gave him a smile

M: ah, right at time, good uday. How is your dad? Uday?😊

Uday was sure he was dreaming, manyata was nice to him, enquired about his father's health. There was something fishy in it

M' s pov

Oh, he is right on time. He was always right from the college days

Lets not spoil his first day. I know he is a real asset to this company

My!! He looks very handsome. Stop that manyata don't think like that. Remember who he is

He is still your enemy.

Let him relax now. It won't be nice to attack when he is all alert

There are days to come when you can taunt him"

U: he is ok mam🥱

M; come to my office

Uday entered manyata's cabin. It was well furnished and really spacious

The desk was at one corner next to it was a sofa set. To the far corner was a mini bar. One side of the room was a shelf filled with books. It was like any other office but with a style.

M: so uday, mr shanker would have briefed you on your work schedule. There are some more to add to it. Let's start with

Morning I would like to have coffee at around 10 and the same at 4

When we have to attend any important functions, business deals or anything you should drive the car. Business dealings cannot be discussed freely in front of the driver, but do you know to drive

U:yes

M:And from tomorrow you would come straight to devgarh palace to pick me. You can brief me during our ride to office

Sunday would be an off day for you. Is this clear?

U: yes

m: your desk is outside my office. You can leave now

uday goes and settles in his desk. The work was indeed hectic

a young lady of about 18 years or so came to uday's desk.. she looked beautiful. Uday suddenly felt that he had some unknown relation with her

ud: can I help you mam?

Lady: yes I want to see manyata bhabi, can I see her

Ud: bhabi? I mean is she engaged or something

Lady: yes she was engaged to my dada when they were young about 3 or 4. Dada went missing when we went for a trip to haridwar. There was no news about him since then. But I and bhaabi believes that one day he will come back. I always wanted to see my dada

Ud: oh, I see. And you are?

Lady: princess unnathi singh of jaigarh. And you are?

Ud: uday. Uday sinha. Ms manyata's new PA

Un: oh, hi nice to meet to. Even my dada's name was uday

Ud: can I ask you something?

Un: sure

Ud: are there any other royal families other than devgarh and jaigarh

Un: oh yes we have raigarh, rajneth, polgush , samprath

Ud: ok ok . I thought all royal families must have vanished after independence

Un: no, there are still there, we have a mahasabha to look after the welfare of the royal families. It is like a parliament looking into the affairs of the member states

Ud: ok

Un: you look familiar. Where can I place you? eh did I see you somewhere? But where

Ud: I don't think we have met before. I never forget a face

Un: ah, now I get it(very excitedly)😆

Manyata was about to leave her cabin to ask uday about some file when she saw uday and unnathi talking very animatedly. Unnathi was talking very excitedly and uday was laughing at her talks. Uday never laughed at her talks. She felt jealous at unnathi. She returned to her cabin burning with jealousy

Back to uday- unnathi conversation

Un: yes I saw you in manyata bhabi's excursion photos. You were wearing that clown's hat that time😃

Uday was laughing

Ud: yes, yes it was really funny. It was the best time in my life. Ha ha , it was really good 😆

Un: even I am going for my college tour in 1 month

Ud: that's nice, you should go. It would be a shame if you miss this opportunity😃

Ud: oh, how time has passed. I will go and see if mam if free

Un: ok. It was nice talking to you

Uday goes into manyatas cabin and tells her that princess unnathi is waiting to see her

M: ok, send her in

M: and uday, next time when someone comes to see me don't sit to chat with them, send thnem in soon. Ok?

U: yes mam

U: muttering to himself " you're mad "

Unnathi goes to see manyata but manyata is still annoyed with her, unnati leaves the place soon as she too gets irritated by her behavior

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