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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 7.1 WHAT A NIGHT!!!!

Manyata was going through a file when uday brought her coffee. His baba always used to say that he was the best coffee maker in the world, so he confidently gave her the coffee

U: coffee🥱

Manyata takes a sip and tells

M: this is coffee? Or is it soil.😡 Don't you know how to prepare a coffee? You're an idiot

Manyata was pissed off actually because of unnathi- uday conversation, so she reacted this way even though she promised herself not to trouble him the first day

She threw that steaming coffee on him in anger

U:ahhh😭 cried uday as the hot coffee burned his skin

He wanted to hit her but three things came into his mind- contract, jail and his baba. So he controlled himself

as uday screamed manyata came to her senses.

M: oh iam so so sorry uday I did not know what I was doing, I was blinded with anger

She goes and takes the first aid box

M: uday sit here

U: its ok manyata, he says grinding his teeth in anger

M: I am not asking you. just sit down please

Uday sat on the sofa, manyata phones and ask to bring uday a new shirt as this one got spoiled due to the coffee stain

M: now remove that shirt

Uday was shocked

U: what?😲

M: I said remove your shirt so that I can apply medicine on the burn. Silly

Uday was very self conscious as he removed his shirt in front of manyata

Manyata was watching him remove his shirt. As he removed each button something was fluttering in manyata's stomach area. His chest and his 6 pack muscles were inviting her to taste it. She inhaled deeply to control herself😳

She took some antiseptic liquid from the bottle into a cotton piece and applied it on the burnt area. She touched that area softly

Uday felt goosebumps on his skin at her touch, it was so soft and caring, he really loved that feeling. His anger vanished in thin air. He looked at her face

She was really involved in her work, careful not to hurt him.her lips parted slightly and her eyes were concentrating on that area. Her cheeks had a touch of pink in it

As she applied the band aid uday continued to stare at her as if trying to imprint that face in his mind for ever

M: its over

Uday was still staring at her

M: waving her hand in front of his face , hallo

Uday got up from his thoughts

U: thanks mam , and he quickly put on the new shirt and left that cabin

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Manyata went for a party that night

She drank a lot i.e. more than her usual, as she was driving back home. She asked the driver to go to the office . she wanted to see uday that moment itself. He would be over there

Manyata walked unsteadily towards her office. Uday was typing something in the computer

As he saw her approach him, he stood up, manyata went near uday and asked drunkedlypulling his collar towards her

M:WILL YOU LOVE ME TONIGHT😳

There was a shock evident in uday's eyes. Manyata ws angry and was about to leave the place when uday pulled her back. The shock in his eyes was replaced by love, unconditional love. he pulled her closer to him and told

u: my pleasure sweetheart

The scene shifted to the cabin

Uday took her hand and entered the room. He pulled her even more closer, their chests rubbing each other. He bend down and kissed her eyes , her forehead, her cheeks, her next , her jawline but not her lips .manyata became impatient and kissed him on the lips.. he was first surprised but then began to respond positively to her. The kiss soon turned passionate, and continued till they needed air

Udays hands skillfully went under her top to massage her waist. She felt really good. She started to undo his buttons, removing each in ahurry. He removed her top and started to tease her . he was kissing her in all places and manyata mourned in joy " uday"😳

Uday smiled at her and continued his job. Her bra was obstructing his job so he hastily removed it . there was two lovely icecream scoops topped with a cherry waiting for his attention. He started to lick it like a lollypop, manyata was going crazy. He then bit the cherry a bit hard and manyata cried in pain and in pleasure, he did not stop he bit the whole area and did the same to the next 'scoop'😳

Manyata turned to action. She pushed him on the sofa and got on top of him she started kissing him on his next and then moved to his clean, spotless, muscular chest. It was lovely and she could hear him grunting and moarning, she continued her way kissing his chest bitting his nipple

When FLAAASH, a bright light filled that room😲

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Guys, that is it

So how was it?

Now what was that bright light in that room?

A special thanks to you Navi for helping me, giving me courage to write this sort of scenes

THANKS A LOT NAVI

I know it was rubbish. I really feel so

Now readers don't forget to like the update

And don't forget to comment please

Only your comments motivate me to write more

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratz dear u r a goldie now🤗🥳
OMG!!! are u insane u r calling dis update rubbish 😲 😡
Its Awesome,superb,fantastic Andy 👏 👏 👏 And i am supa angry on u fr ending it lyk dat 😆
Manveer romance ws hawt☺️
Uday: my pleasure sweetheart 😲 Iss line pe mai sadme mai chli gyi thi🤣
uday and unnati convo ws supa cute😊
And manyata ws jealous of unnati 😲 😆
Thank u Navi di fr helping her out🤗
Update ASAP 🤗
Edited by Sanarasheedroxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey update fast na
i'm waitin from past 1 hour
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

hey update fast na
i'm waitin from past 1 hour

updated dear do read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats andy..

both the chapters were just awesum. just loved uday unnati convo.
manveer romance was really hot. the last is quite scary.

cont.soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
AH OH!!!
SHIT!!
THAT LOST BRO IS UDAY!!
GOTCHIT!!
YUHOO!!
HEY THAT IDEA IS AWESUM!!
IN REAL DEK MANYATA IS LOST N HERE UDAY!!
GR8
AND WHO SWITCHED ON THE LIGHT!!
SHANKARJI??

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow
amazing both the chapters were great
hmm mayb de light is of a camera
sum1 cud b taking pics of manyata and uday
congo on bcumin a goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
😉😉 awesome update.
Congo on becoming Goldie.
Manyata is quite in command in ur story.
And bechara uday, shame he is so sweet.
And he proved his sweetness in their
" love me tonight session" lol.
I must say you wrote that part very well.
Do contine sooon andy. muuuaaah.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great Update andy!👏
i thoroughly enjoyed it! it was awesome!
i loved the uday and unnati conversation and then manyata getting jealous by that!! uday is the lost prince😉 wow!! double dhamaka! do do update!
the second update was just amazing!!👏
the coffee dropping scene and manyata cleaning the burnt part was so passionate!! and the best part the last one! manyata all drunk and asking uday!😳
will u love me tonightit was soo goood!!
loved the way u described it! ice-cream scoops with cherry🤣 very good!!
loved the updates!!😃
please please update soon!!😉
i really want to know who the hell was that😡 to turn on the light!
thanks for the pm!😳

Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome super duper update andy
i loved it so so much
haha the scoop thing was awesome
now uday is the lost yuvraj for sure
but the bright light
what was that
please update super soon please please
i loved this update
it was super duper

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