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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#0000ff" size="2">Andy ... I had forgotten that you had an ff😲. Next time ; don't take so long to update😆. Anyway , coming back to the chapter - IT WAS GREAT 👍🏼. Happy that Uday got away from that horrible beggar😡 and where-ever he has ended up - he is content there😃. The man that has adopted him ... is taking good care of him . Meneka is a vindictive b****😡 ... can't believe how she poisoning her young daughter's mind.


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thanks dear .yes his adopted father will love him like his own son. Jai is just like her mother.
Dear i wont be able to update soon
my university exams will start next week
so wont be able to update
after my exams i will try dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

chapter 3

Jai woke up early in the morning. As she had her shower she remembered how she had almost succeeded in implementing her mother's plan she thought

When manyata was five

J:"manyata come down they have lit lamps in the puja room"

M: Wow di its beautiful"

J: If you are a true princess then I dare you to blow them off

M:Why ?

J: a true princess never gets scared to accept challenges. Are you a princess or a stupid commener?

M: ok (and she goes and blows it of)

As she was blowing the lamps ds entered the room and caught her redhanded and she was scolded for doing it

When they were ten years old jai dared manyata to bully their gardeners son and manyata was bullying that boy when komal saw it .the boy was literally in tears as manyata was taunting him .komal was very angry with her

And again yesterday she heard ds and komal saying

Ds: I think mayata is not very good in handeling the riyasat matters she is still immature and arrogant .yesterday I asked her not to go out as there was puja here and punditji asked every member to be present over here and then as usual she went out and came late night as usal

K: jai beta is more sensible she atleast listens to to us

Jai heard it and was trillied

As jai remembered this she smiled her famous evil smile as she changed into her anaekali

(here jai wears dress which manyata wore in dek and manyata wears short dresses)

After that she left down for breakfast

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Uday got ready for breakfast . dada was preparing his breakfast .he gave uday a mixture of ghee and sugar for good luck

U: dada why do you need to do this

D: beta today is your first day at day at devgarh community college .the most famous college in Mumbai . it is said that a seat at that college cost about 3.5 lakhs and you got it for full scholarship without paying even a single cent . iam proud of you

U: but I still feel that you are sad to leave haridwar then why did you make me accept the scholarship

d: beta your future will be more secured over here . but be careful its only two weeks since you have come over here you don't get lost over here

u: dada am 19 years old ill manage

at college

sir: meet ur new class mate uday .he is a brilliant student who has won full scholarship to this college . so guys welco me ur new friend .take ur seat uday

uday goes and sits next to a thin handsome boy

boy : hi am rahul welcome here

u: thanks iam uday

after five minutes a girl enters and asks

sir: again late miss anju. Next time ill send u to the principles room

girl: sorry sir

the sir continues his class and after 15 minutes a girl enters and asks permission .she wore a tight yellow t shirt and a miny skirt her skin was milky white and her lips looked so lovely and pink

her sound was like honey as she said sir can I enter

sir : o sure and he continues the class

uday: who is she and the sir didn't even warn her and allowed her to enter?(he was astonished)

rahul: ya she is his pet topper in evry subject and a very rich one too

sir tells the class to be silent and their conversation stops

Lunch time

Uday was standing in the queue waiting for his turn.finaly he reached the front of the line and was waiting for his food to be served when the rich girl he had seen in the morning came to the front and ordered a cheese burger uday got irritated by this attitude and said

U:miss if you notice you would see that there is a queue over here and everybody is waiting for their turn please go and stand in the queue.

Girl: so ur mister right eh? What if I don't leave? Will you complain?

U:oh you act as if you own the place eh? You have a disgusting attitude.

Girl: I don't act that I own this place rather I would say I am the owner of this college mister right

I am princess manyata kumari and devgarh is my riyasat iam to be crowed as the yuvarani of devgarh .do you get it?

U: wow a princess(sarcastically) I thought I lived in free india but rather iam mistaken I think. If you fail to notice this is a free country and all are equal so I suggest u stand in the line and wait your turn

A teacher approaches them and tries to stop the problem from getting worse manyata gets her order and as she left she said

M: so mr right your messing with the wrong person I ll make your life a hell do you get it?

U:oh iam now really scared(sarcastically)

Rohan: you shouldn't have messed with her she is a vengeful snake .be careful or you wont know what bit you

U: I don't get scared seeing a small rat snake .i am a cobra . I eat rat snakes . she is so overconfident .i need to break it

After one week

Sir was distributing the answer papers and said

"the topper for this paper is …

(As manyata started to raise from her seat as she was always first, sir said)

Uday….."and the second place to manyata"

Manyata was shocked she never came second ever . now the boy who dared to question her was first .how humiliating.she boiled with jeolousy

She wanted to take revenge on him

Durin the break she came to uday and said

M: congrats mr right . isee that even teachers are showing some charity nowadays

U: meaning ?

M: first the college gives you a charity in the name of a scholarship and now even then the teachers are showing you the same . giving you extra marks how cheap. Don't you feel ashamed for accepting charity or are you a shameless beggar?

U:was boiling with anger but kept his cool he knew she was purposely provoking him and his any words would lead to a scene .she was the owner and could even dismiss him so to fillful his dada's wish he kept quiet

The college years passed on eventually

There were occasional outbursts between uday and manyata but uday always went for a compromise

Uday was the university topper and manyata came second

Manyata joined devgarh group of companies as the chairman

Now udays dada had a heart attack and was admittedto the hospital .the docters told that a bypass surgery was needed and he needed to pay around 5 lakhs for the surgery

He didn't have this much money and didn't know what to do

Rohan told him there was ajob of a pa in devgarh group of company and he should attend it.

Uday reluctantly agreed

Guys I reached the end of this chapter

Pls silent readers atleast press the like button

Pls do comment pls

Guys if u feel that my ff is not worthy enough to continue do tell me pls I will stop it

Am not interested in waseting anybodies time pls do whether I should continue or not pls

It is a request

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

first to comment

Very nice chapter
well written
i like de way de story is progressing
do cont soon dear
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
wow it was awesome dear
love the whole update
i just hate jaiii
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome updates
loved it
do continue soon
please pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Very nice update. Loved it. Can't wait to see what will happen next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
That was too interesting Andy. Uday is so polite and well-mannered and intelligent 😳, while Manyata is an abnoxious brat😡. I think that the teacher's were giving her first position because of who she was ... not because of her ability. I'm so happy that Uday overthrew her from that spot . Unfortunately he needs money now ... & that need will take him back to her🤢. Very nicely written Dear👍🏼. Please update the next part soon😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: anushruthi


first to comment

Very nice chapter
well written
i like de way de story is progressing
do cont soon dear

thank you so much
willtry to update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mahilove

wow it was awesome dear

love the whole update
i just hate jaiii
continue soon

thank you dear even i hate jai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: psp.pari

awesome updates
loved it
do continue soon
please pm me if possible

thank you dear will pm you

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