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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

Hey andy !!!!!!! 😳hi saloni😃

Guess aaj apke post pe apna dil se likha hua comment kaun dene aaya hai ?????now who is it?
ofcourse me !!!!!!😆and i knew so😆😆
Finally, i m back dear. I knw frm last 2 nd 3 updates i dint give u a proper comment but kya karein yaar i was so busy with my college nd stuff tht i dint had time to even catch a minute glimpse of even IF...Trust me. i can understand saloni as now am in your shoes, thos college life is killing me😭, tests assignments projects, viva, and most of all pressure from the teachers, and my exams are not yet over, it will get over only in the middle of april😭

Must say andy once again u hv done mindblowing work. I really loved the update very much.👏 👏 ahh!! thanks so much saloniEmbarrassed
but mekko tumpe gussa hai, dis story is one of the most fav story of mine of all ur stories but tum hamesha is story ka ek chotu sa update deti ho...😔dont tell me that this update was small,😭😭 it was about 5 whole pages in ms word and i usually write only 4 pages for alll updates. long updates is your speciality😃
Just a req yeah, frm next update onwards , if possible, plz try to give a bit of lengthy update fr my sake.,,, I just love ur this story alot dear.. ,,,,Puppy face !!!!!saloni, till my exams get over i will be giving just normal updates, but after my exams i will surely give you long updates, happy now??

Coming to the update, do i need to say again tht the update was "A.W.E.S.O.M.E'thanks again😃

Y uday had to enter tht moment whn tht idiot Arvind was opologising to manyta by hugging her nd giving her roses ...Still, One misundertanding was not over yet nd here comes the other...😡what can i do?? they both will never ever listen to each other and before that they reach their own conclusions

HMMN,,,,, so manyta ke dil mei kuch kuch hua whn she heard Uday talking to sumone over the phone, ab vo chahey uday ki chti he kyu na ho ????...Isey kehte hai pyaar ke side effects😆how correctEmbarrassed😆

Manyta is yet again behaving rudely nd nasty with Uday coz of tht misunderstanding of lara.,,,,,😡😆poor uday. but she will know soon about lara😆
Wow !!! Uday sach mei itna handsome lag rha tha ???😳 of course he was,EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i can clearly picturise the scene whn Uday have had eneterd the party wearing a beautiful suit... He must be looking reallt droolworthy. tabhi toh manytas mouth formed a big "O" as soon as her gaze fell on him...Tht scene was really lovely ,,,yaar thanks i really wanted manyta to drool over uday whom she always cosidered to be ordinary man

nd thn Manyta feeling jealous of uday dancing with unnati ,,,,aaah tht scene was really awesome yaar👏😳 yes, she thinks unnathi is trying to steal her loveEmbarrassed

Though i really hate jay, with what she is concocting in her eveil mind but this time i really loved her fr the dare tht she had given to manyta.and she willl try to separate manveer when she knows the truth aboth uday Thanku Jay...this is fr u,,,,muahhh😆

Now waiting eagerly fr the next update to see, hw Manyta ,,,,ahem,,,,ahem,,,,,,seduces Uday nd whats gonna be his reaction☺️ it will be only in the chapter after the next as uday has to visit his family in the next one😃

Plz update soon andy nd next update better be the long update...😈 i willl try to update soon, long updates ater exams ok😃

Huggs a big one from me too😃
Saloni



thanks saloni for this lovely comment
loved it so much😃Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

lovely update
Why is this Jay against Manyata??????????
Thanks for the pm...

thanks bhumika😃
jai wants the throne of devgarh, so she hates manyta😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: edward123

WOnderful update
JAy acting as a cupid btw Manveer
So adorable
Manyata's jealous seeing Uday nd Unnati😆
thnxs 4 the pm

thanks hina😃
yes jai acts as a cupid here😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

thanks navi for this comment , loved it

😳. Even though it was short?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Andy 😊.

Very , very sorry about commenting so late. As u know ; my arm was swollen at that time and I couldn't give u a detailed comment ... then , I eventually forgot all about it😆!
Now , enough of my sad story ... let's come to the matter at hand.
It was an amazing update👏.
Of-course (your favourite) ARVIND is becoming a pest😡. I loathe him to the extreme🤢! Gosh , when Manyata opened the door and she saw Arvind holding that bouquet and kneeling down on 1 knee ... MY HEART STOPPED!!! I thought he was going to propose marriage. Thank God that didn't happen ... OR U WOULD'VE BEEN IN SERIOUS TROUBLE ANDY😈! But , what really disappointed me is ... Manyata forgave him so quickly😕. I don't believe his promise of it NOT HAPPENING AGAIN.(Maybe if it does happen again , THEN UDAY CAN PUNCH HIM IN THE NOSE ... OR ; KICK HIM WHERE THE SUN DON'T SHINE😈😉). This Uday's timing is horrible ... poor guy had to witness their hug. I felt so bad for him😔!!!
Now , the journey back to Mumbai - was awesome😃. Unnati's very mysterious call to Uday BURNED Manyata (even though she made her mind not to be involved with uday).
Uday's reunion with his baba and his pet-dog was so sweet and heart-warming😳. Does Uday know that his Baba IS NOT ACTUALLY A BLOOD RELATIVE OF HIS? If not ... when is he going to find out? (I'm just curious😆).
I don't like this rude behaviour of Manyata's😡. She really did turn back the clock ... and put them back into that EMPLOYER/EMPLOYEE mode😭!!! She's slave-driving Uday to plan an anual Ball which is scheduled for 2 weeks time. Luckily ... he managed and succeeded , or I'm sure she would've humiliated him publicly for that! Also , her talks concerning his Baba ... was beyond rude😡. Doesn't she have any humanity in her😕?
Uday wanted to slap her for that nasty talk ... He should've done it😉! (TO HELL WITH THE CONTRACT - haan nai toh!!!).
I liked the way Jai spoke. Of-course , she has her hidden agendas ... but (on the surface) , she was very polite. I enjoyed her "FISHING EXPEDITION" ... the way she was asking about Manyata. That was very interesting. Uday handled himself quite nicely there!
Jai is a master-manipulator ... she brain-washed Uday & Manyata with so much of ease. That was very well done andy👍🏼.
Ahhh... the best part (for me) Uday became Unnati's date and she got him a suit to wear for the occassion😳. He was looking indeed gorgeous and handsome and cute & gorgeous & suave & sexy & dapper , like a royal prince. Mmm ... SO DROOL-WORTHY😉!!!
Manyta looked at the stranger with unnathi and then her mouth went to a 'o'. it was uday. Man!!! He looked damn handsome and cute, like some Greek god, was he really this handsome or was she dreaming about it? Damn!!! I wish we could actually see that part😉!
Arvind arrived later and stuck to manyta like a fly next to a piece of sugar. Such flies need to be killed😡!!! Spray some pesticide on him🤣 !
Manyta thinks something for some time and then says : " ok I will do it!" Now , I'm very excited about the next part , as Manyata accepts Jai's challenge! I'm sure it'll be 1 hell of a roller-coaster😉!!!
Loved the update Andy❤️.
It was fantastic👏!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
... continue soon ,
thanx 4 the pm😊.
Love you 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi guys, this chapter is dedicated to my dearest friend Navina as she has become a dazzler😃. This chapter is a bit small, but still enjoy reading it

Chapter 13

Unnathi was talking animatedly to her mother about the ball last night, on how she had forced her dada too go to the ball with her , on how they had danced together and how loving his baba was. Her mother lay there on the bed like a lifeless corpse unknown that her daughter was talking to her. Yes, unnathi's mother had fallen into coma when unnathi was 1 year old. They had gone to visit haridwar and from there her elder brother udayveer had gone missing.Her mother was too shocked hearing the news that she had lost her consciousness and slipped into coma. She had been in that state since then. For the last 16 years she was a lifeless corpse

Unnathi was looked after by her father, maharaj giriraj since then. He was a totally nice fellow, who was a good businessman, but always made sure that the welfare of his people came first. He was like a mother to unnathi. Every evening, since her childhood he would spend some time to hear about her school life, and then later her college life.he was her teacher and taught her about their history, their values and on how a king should be faithful to his subjects. He knew all about her friends and enemies (she did have a few) there was not a single thing which unnathi hid from her dad. But she did not tell him about uday

Unnathi made it a point to talk to her mother daily about her life as she did not want her mother to misss anything of her life. The home nurse would remain outside as unnathi spoke to her mother

Giriraj was passing by, when he heard his daughter talk to her mother. He just stood outside. Unnathi was talling about uday.

" umm, now who is this 'dada' 😕of unnathi, she never had hid anything from him. then who is this guy?" he thought

He entered the room and told unnathi

G: unnathi, once you finish taking to maa, come and meet me in my office

Un: ok, dad

Giriraj went and sat in his office. There were many pictures of of unnathi and giriraj in that room taken for any silly occasion. But the prominent photo was their family photo taken on udayveer's fourth birthday. Giriraj and his wife, avantika were sitting. Unnathi was just 2 months old resting on avantika's hand. Uday was sitting on giriraj's lap and was laughing as his father was tickling him from behind. He missed his son very much but now he lived for his daughter and her happiness was really important for him.

Unnathi entered the room and went and sat on the chair in front of giriraj

Un: dad, she called to wake him up from his chain of thoughts

Un: dreaming as always,😆 eh?

G: no unnathi, so how was the ball last night?

Un: really dad, it was simply super and lovely. The settings, decorations, the music and everything were simply perfect. I really enjoyed my time dad

G: who is this 'dada' unnathi. You never told me anything about such a character

Un: eh, dad, eh I wanted to tell you but I think I forgot

G: unnathi, there is never a thing that you forget to tell me, so don't lie to me

Un: dad, 'dada' is uday. He was a college mate of bhabhi and now he works as a bhabhi's pa. I met him when I went to meet bhabhi ,he was really a nice person. Then once when I went for a shopping, a group of boys tried to eave tease me. It was uday dada who rescued me. Then he was my date last night at the ball.

G: so is he my daughter's 'new' boyfriend?

Un: what!!! Dad, how could you think like that? He is just like a brother to me

G: unnathi, he may be a brother to you, but what about for him? How do you know what is in his mind?

Un: dad, he is not such a person, he is really a nice fellow. If you once meet him you would know what a nice fellow he is

G: ok, then I would like to meet him. invite him for a lunch here this Sunday

Un: ok dad

G: and why did you not tell me?

Un: actually I felt you may not like that friendship as he belongs to the middle class family

G: unnathi , is this what you understood of your father, don't worry I never will come in between your friendship

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Un: so dada, you must surely come this Sunday to my house

U: what! I should come to jaigarh palace?

Un: yes, and that is my home. please please dada

U: should I come

Un: you must come or I wont talk to you

U: is there no second option

Un: no, so Sunday 10 am ok

U: ok

" oh, this chothi" thought uday" she can be really stubborn"

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Uday was in office when his baba called him. lara was not feeling well and did not even eat since morning. She was simply lying down with her eyes closed. He asked uday to take her to the doctor as his feet was swollen. Uday went to manyata's cabin to ask her permission

U: mam, can I take a half day leave? Please

M: why?

U: mam, lara is not well and I want to take her to the doctor. She hasn't eaten since morning

Manyata remembered the conversation uday had with lara. She wanted to see how beautiful lara was and why uday was attracted to her,' that bitch' she thought, 'can't be more beautiful than her', but curiosity got better than her. So she said

M: umm, ok I too want to meet a friend in about an hour, so I think I will drop you home

U: ok thanks mam

Both uday and manyta left in the car. Manyata was imagining a lot of things about lara. She would be around 5 8" and would be very thin wearing a small mini skirt and a tight top exposing her neckline. Her hair would be slightly brown and wavy and she would be always drooling over uday. And why can't she visit the doctor alone? Why does uday need to go with her?

M: um, uday cant your lara go to the doctor by herself

Uday was like what!!! Then he thought there was some serious misunderstanding about lara's identity and he would fuel it,😆 it would be fun

U: actually she is new to the city so she does not know the way

M: so how long is she there with you?

U: we meet about a year ago (when he had bought her, he thought) it was actually love at first sight. 😆She saw me and then since then we were together

M: so does your dad know about this relation?

U: yes, he knows. In fact she stays at my home; they share a good understanding with each other

M: so does that mean you are in a live in relation?

U: ( he was about to burst, controlling his laughter but he put forward a straight face )😆 yes, if you call it so

M: then can't you marry her?

U: we still are trying to understand each other, if we find each other adjustable then we would proceed with the plans, but presently marriage is not on the cards

M: does she know to cook?

U: no, she doesn't. In fact she is scared of fire

M: what? How ridiculous

U: ya I know. She wants me to cook her food and sometimes she wants me to feed her. At night she wants me to hold her tightly to sleep

They had reached his home. uday invited manyta to visit his house. Manyta agreed as she wanted to see that bitch. Maybe she should offer her some cash to get her out of uday's life. About 50 lakhs should do the job

Uday knocked and baba opened the door

U: baba, this is manyta mam, my boss

Manyta held her hands in pranam and baba blessed her

B: kush raho beti

U: where is lara?

Manyata became alert

B: beta she is in your room

M: can I see her too? A girl will be able to help another girl

Baba was shocked and looked at uday, uday winked at him. He understood the meaning.

B: (suppressing a laugh) yes beti, but let uday go in first, she does not like outsiders much

Uday opened the room and lara came running towards him and started to lick him. manyta entered the room and looked around but did not see any lady except for uday and a dog

Lara sensed an outsider and growled at her. Uday asked her to be silent and looked at manyta and said

U: manyta this is lara, my 1 year old German shepherd

M: what!! Lara is a dog😲

U: yes she is and isn't she cute, give shake hand to aunty, lara

Manyta remembered her conversation with uday and how the talk had gone. She had asked why he did not marry his dog. She felt really embarrassed and excused herself

M: I think I should leave now

U: ok mam

She stormed outside and uday burst out laughing . this was really a wonderful day. He looked at lara and asked

U: lara darling will you marry me? And laughed 😆

L: woof woof she said in reply

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So how is this chapter? I know it is short😳

Navi, I am not sure if chap was good enough or not

The part you wanted comes in the next chapter

Do tell me your opinion😃

Do hit the like button and please do comment

Waiting for your feedback

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! How could he do dat??? Poor manyata 😆
bechari kya kya soch rhi thi or uday kamina bechari manyata ki masoomiyat ka fayda utha rha tha 😉
bt it ws hilarious 🤣
so uday or giriraj k dusre se milne vle hain🥳
damn excited fr d nxt update 😃
manyata ka uday ko seduce krne vle challenge vo kb pura kregi 😳
cont soon 😊
thanxx fr dis amazing update
Edited by Sanarasheedroxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb amzing update!!!!

manyata thought that lara was a girl... lol... and when uday teased her it was damn hilarious ... brilliant update jiji
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bahahahahahah!!!!!! I was on the floor laughing literally. Really a funny chapter with uday playing along to Manyata's misunderstanding!!! Can't wait for the next chapter where giriraj will meet uday and maybe uday might get a flashback. thnx for the pm u made my day cause i was depressed from morning and now i m in a very happy mood. THANK YOU!!!!
continue soon and please pm me again when u have completed next chapter.

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