Love to hate each other ff chap 28 pg 127 new - Page 44

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Yeah - i know , u said : "DON'T RESERVE" ... but I'm reserving😆! THIS IS MY BIRTHDAY PRESENT AFTER ALL 😳

Awesome updates Andy (all 3 of them). thanks so much navi😃

Very interesting ... I loved my presents immensely - NOW I WISH EVERYDAY WAS MY BIRTHDAY my! and i wish it was not then i would have to update everyday😲... so , that I can get gifts like this😳sp are you really happpy...

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Hey Andy you updated ch 13.1, 13.2 nd 13.3 but why is it written that chap 14 is updated??😕
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dedicated to my dearest friend navi Happy b'day Navina

Chapter 13.1:
She was jealous of a dog Her name is Lara BTW😆 and she is really faithful
: jiji, now your laughing. How rude. Your sister was insulted How can anyone resist laughing...🤣 that is what jai did to, but manyta does not have any sence of humour😭
If you want revenge I will tell you a very good idea. evil in the air I tell you...ya, where there is jai, there is evil😆
You put some love into his hear Is love some kind of a joke Jay???for her yes😆
She was attracted to him. Don't even think of denying i wont deny it, nor would you but manya would deny it
The grand price of the throne of devgarh would be then only hers- maharani jainandini, she thought. 🤬How low can anyone stoop😡jai can do even worse
and was looking really handsome As always
The last part was really emotional😳 thanks hina

Chapter 14.1
The sister and brother bonding was well written Andy👏 thanks again😃
uday beta, please call me uncle. Correction. Dad bolalo😃 abhi thak nahi, only when his identity is revealed😃
Now that's a big shame, should I speak to manyta to release you from your contract? No Manveer ko kyoo alag karne chahte hon? if giriraj does not separate them then andy will do it😆
maa, this is the 'dada' I told you of Really touchy really??

Chapter 14.2

You will come begging in front of me

And then I will snap you like a piece of useless NHow can she accept Jay's plan so easily. She'll fall for Uday's charm . Damn Sure she was to fall but, you know what happened😭 i try to bring them together and they end hating each other

She said seductivelyHilarious. i'm loving this😆 he he he

She smiled at him and left the cabin leaving behind a bewildered uday. Poor Uday...bechara confused hain😕 ya who would not be??

They both genuinely loved each other's company. No matter how much they hate each other, their love stands tall leaving anthe hate btw them but HATE is the most common feeling for manveer😃

Beep beep 😡 Isse abhi bajna tha?? ya, what to do, poor timimg

uday , it's me after your meeting , please meet me at my private suite at my hotel private suite, eh??😳 yes manyta had some romantic plans

Manyata and Jay's conversation...all the fault's Jay's😡 what do we do now with jai? you tell me😃

BAMM and here comes the blow😲😲 and a hard one too

Too long? Boring? Good? Too long yes, Boring no and good yeesss...thanks will make the next one short😃

Please do hit the like button for all the three parts No problem😉 thanks dear

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Birthday gift for me ... birthday gift for me ... birthday gift for me (JUMPING UP AND DOWN) . Okay fine ... stop rolling your eyes ok is it now better?- I'll shut-up now!!!! I know what you're thinking - IS SHE REALLY TURNING 25? , because she's acting like a 15 year old 😆! ah!! first when saw you (before we started talking) i thought you were 15, remember i was shocked to know you were 24, that time

Hailla , I forgot the main thing what??😲... I forgot to greet you.

HI ANDY😛. hi navi😃

As u have taken great pains in posting 3 seperate updates ... I shall be giving you 3 different comments. Hope , that's fine with u. Even if it's NOT FINE ... I'll still do as I initially planned😆!!!! i have nooo problem regarding it😃 thanks sooo much navi😃 thanks so much😃

This is for the first part ok!! : Great update Dear.thanks navi😃 As expected ... Manyata is raging mad after sufferring that huge humiliation by Uday. Of-course she's exaggerating excessively was she? i did not feel so, she was just angry wasnt she , because it wasn't as bad as that if you say so. Manyata definately has anger-issues.should not we then traet it? She boils to the point of no-return ; within seconds and I think that's her downfall. Her anger clouds her judgement and hampers her thinking ... that's why it becomes so easy for Jai to manipulate her.yes, she forgets to think logically , that can be a big problem in future And Jai being as crafty as she is ... Manyata is play-dough in her hands. I enjoyed the skill with which Jai convinced Manyata with ... I mean , Jai didn't have to put any major effort in getting Manyata to accept her challenge. jai is evil, and evil plans comes easily for both of us (jai and i) she is a master manupulator. as long as she is with manveer they will never be happy😭

Then Jai (as always) became over-confident - I laughed so much when Jai day-dreamed about what would happen dont laugh, it could even happen, you cant be soo sure, afterall its jai we are dealing with😆... and what Manyata would say to her actually she had guessed it right . She's such a fool , but I still like here. dont underestimate jai😆

Now , the best part of this chapter😳 ... Uday going to visit HIS OWN HOME. but he does not know about it The mini conversation with his Baba was so sweet. Upon entry into the palace ... Avantika makes her first movement in years. A twitch in the finger and the heart pumps faster ... visualising the scene gave me goose-bumps - honestly. I truly loved how u portrayed that part ... that she sensed her son's close proximity to her and her body reacted. JUST MARVELLOUS👏!!! ah! navi, you were the person who cleared my doubts regarding these matters😳

So , Andy ; that brings u to the end of this comment. i loved it😳

Brace yourself ... another 2 coming soon😉 cant wait😆

BTW - My very mini comment is on p57 😛.yes i saw and replied too😃

Originally posted by: andy.a

my dearest navi. iam soo glad that you liked your gift

I loved my gift Andy.

i was a bit worried about it, but now am soo happy

I'm happy that you're happy😃

(BTW - I haven't forgotten about the other 2 comments ... I shall do it by Saturday - hope that's fine with u? )

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: ...navina...