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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks huma😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annabh

hey andy jiji
how are you ? i am fine anni
i missed you soo much so did i too
well the update was more like
a treat to the comeback thanks anni
loved the family bond here
it is really good thanks again
but last part left me thrilled
aha now manyata will get
the taste of her own medicine um, i changed my plot a bit, so...😕
as for jai
well she will never win i wont allow her to😃
please continue asap within 20 mins
hugss

thanks for the lovely comment anni😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

oh no!!!
that's bad
already manyata has suffered a lot!!! finally!!!! someone agreees with me
and more udays gonna torture her now?? not so much
I just hope he forgives her soon!!
poor manyata!!
though wat she did with him wasn't good i have to agree with that😳
but still!!
awesome update Andy!! thanks mahi😳
awesomely written
plzzz update soon in 15 minutes, updates ready

thansk for the lovely comment mahi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey Andy 😊, fabulous update👏! thanks so much navi😳

U know why? u don't 😲! no i dont, why?? Okay , I'll tell you ... it was because there was NO Arvind😆! um!!! i forgot about him...i could add him soon
Now coming to the chapter ... Awww , Uday is taking etiquette classes! How cute😳! "he is a brilliant student" ... But of-course , he is a Yuvraaj after all , it's inborne😉. it has to be, after all he is a royal na. he cant fail
Click, clang, cling, ... now why does THAT sound familiar 🤔? it has to be, "someone" gave me a quiz once to identity the sound, you know who it was navi?? any way i remembered you when i wrote it😳Uday and Unnati's sword-fight was so sweet , I love their sibling bonding😳. But did that Bitch have to interrupt😡? I hate Jai ...ho w many people do you hate?? arving, adhi, me and now jai😆😆 I wonder what she's planning now😡🤢! She mustn't take Uday's politeness as an invite for her to get close to him ! There is only 1 suitor for him ... and it's NOT her! i know who it is... its me na😳
Uday together was his family was lovely ... and so was his convo with his mother. I especially loved their part😃. I'm also glad Uday is in regular touch with his Baba😊! The press-conference was awesome👍🏼 ... Uday is a master in handling that😉! Great job on that Andy👏. the press conferrence sucked. i know it did. my imagination is not give much for speeches
"manyta , 2 of us can play the same game" This was my favourite line😳! BRILLIANT👏!!!!!!! Can't wait for him to implement it😈. I have great expectation from that Andy ... don't let me down😉! i guess you may not like it, am getting them married. am sorry😳 but i will give manyta the dose she needs soon
Thoroughly enjoyed the update ,
do continue soon , done already
thanks for the PM😊.
welcome
Bye😛! dont say bye, i will getsad

navi, you never fail to make me happy with your comment ... i love it😳 thanks for such a beautiful comment. i wont forget about adhi. just one more appearance and he will be gone for ever
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Andy 😊
So sorry for late reply no problem😳
Great, amazing update 👏 thanks sooo much😳
Love it
Hope all the misunderstandings between manveer will get cleared soon not soo soon😳
Thanks for the pm n plz continue soon 😊

thanks for such a lovely comment😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 20

Manyta was in her office , waiting for a very important call, it was a deal that she was hoping to get for about 6 months now, she wanted it badly because, it would make her company ten times more powerful than it was now, all the agreements were ok. Now just the official word of confirmation of the deal was needed. She rubbed her hands with heated anticipation.

Ring ring

She grabbed the phone with trembling hands

"hallo?"

"miss manyta? I am rahul takur of Saras industries. I was calling about the deal we had discussed earlier with your company"

"yes" and she held her breath. She waited for her reply

"we were really looking forward to do business with you , but then we received a better offer from another company, they were willing to pay 16.5% returns for our products, than your 10 % returns. The board found it attractive and signed the deal with them, I am sorry to say this means we do not have a deal"

"it is ok, I guess we were not so lucky, by the way, which was that company" she enquired.

"jaigarh group of companies"

"ok, thanks "

She kept the phone down and now she knew, udayveer, he knew how well she wanted the deal, he helped her draft the points of agreement. This was the fourth deal that they had lost this month because of udayveer. What was he doing now? Why?

The answer struck her, he was trying to take revenge on her, this deal stole her company of 40 crores which was such a great blow. He was a smart business man, so was she, it was time she met him face to face.

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Udayveer was happy, he had managed to give another blow to manyta, the fourth in the month since he had taken the reigns of his company. It was just warming up for him, business was a game where you win and lose millions. It was not a major matter, he just wanted manyta to fell the sense of defeat . it was just tester doses for manyta, what would she do when the games really began. He smirked.

Manyat stood outside uday's office talking to his secretary

M: I would like to meet mr udayveer now

S: miss, do you have an appointment?

M: I don't have, but I want to meet him now, moreover I don't think, I need an appointment to see him.

S: sorry miss, I have strict orders not to allow anybody in without an appointment.

M: do you know who I am? Oh!!! What is happening here?

S: miss, you need to leave the premises if you don't have an appointment

M: oh!!! Are you ordering me now?

S: no miss, but I will have to call the security if you linger over here.

M: I would dare you to do it

Udayveer who was aware of the commotion outside his office came out.

"is there a problem over here, miss reetha? " asked uday

Manyta who was having her back turned, looked around to see uday

He looked breathtaking, dressed in a simple shirt and black pants he looked like a model, manyta's mouth popped open, he was more handsome than he was 6 months ago

"uday" mouthed manyta

U: miss manyta. He acknowledged

M: uday , I want to talk to you

U: miss manyta, do you have an appointment?

M: no, but, i'., I mean you know'.

U: miss manyta , let me make things clear, no appointment means no meeting, take an appointment and then we can talk

M: uday, I just need 5 minutes

Uday who was turning around to his office stopped, he looked at manyta.

U: um, I think, I could spare a 5 minutes

M: ah, thanks uday, said manyta and stated to walk towards his office

U: not now miss manyta, I will spare you 5 minutes around 12 45, my lunch time.

M: but now its only 9 45, uday, you must be joking

U: miss manyta, unlike some people, I don't have any time to waste, miss reetha my appointment book please

He goes through it and says,

U: miss manyta if you are not taking this offer, I suggest you come back on the 29 th, that is 2 weeks from now. Because only then will I be free

M: fine, ok, I will wait.. she said very frustrated

She went and sat on a chair in the waiting area, uday looked pleased. As he rested in his office sitting a cup of steaming tea, he chucked. He was free , yet he wanted her to wait' he chuckled ' he wanted her to feel thr frustration and he was sure that she was very frustrated .

Manyta felt humiliated. But she sat there, waiting. Time moved very slow when you needed it to go fast. She had to wait for 3 hours, the nerve of that bas**d . she felt that she had waited for 3 years, than for 3 hours, when she was finally allowed to enter uday's office.

U: so miss manyta, what do you want from me?

M: uday'.

Uday cut her and said," mr singh. Call me mr singh. I allow only close friends and relatives to call me uday"

M: mr singh. (she said through her clenched teeth)why are you doing all this? Why are you personally attacking me?

U: miss manyta, its called business. You win. You lose, it is all a part of business. Don't take it to heart.

m: you know how much I was counting on those deals, you knew it. then why?

U: to put it in simple terms, you got all what you wanted till date, so its time you learnt to earn what you get. It is nice to have a taste of defeat once in a while, don't you think so?

M: uday, you cant do this,

u: and why is that so?
m: after all both companies are going to be one soon
U: what!!! What are you talking about?? Are you out of your mind? Why should we have A JOINT COMPANY??

M: uday, the companies will need to be made into one, as we are getting married soon

U: what!!! Married!!!

M: uday don't you know I am your fianc?

U: but I don't agree to this marriage

M: there is nothing you can do about it uday. It all settled, done even before we were 5 years. It is not in our hands. We are engaged since the age of 5

Uday remembered that unnathi called manyta' bhabhi', oh god, this is too much for him to process, he needed to meet his parents about what manyta told him now.

U: no one told me about this

M: why should anyone tell you, you should have known

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Uday rushed to the dining room where his parents were having their lunch, he did not know how he had reached home, all that bothered him was he wanted his parents to tell him what manyta told him was a lie

Avantika saw uday and was surprised, he never returned home before 5 in the evening

A: uday beta, you are early

U: dad and maa, I want to know the truth, am I engaged to manyta?

Both of them looked at each other not knowing what to speak

Giriraj finally spoke: uday beta, we were planning to tell you this soon, but as you know it now'

U:so it is true' I cant believe that you all took such an important decision of my life without my consent. How could you do this to me

G: beta, listen to me, our riyasat had a major setback when you were around 2, it was devgarh who saved us from bankruptcy. They had given it in the form of dowry for us. We wanted this relation to end in a happy note, you and manyta were inseparatble when you where young, so it was a wise decision then.

U: we could settle them monetarily

G: beta, its no longer about money, it is about our pride too, we cant go back of our word now, it would be too insulting for us

A: yes uday, you are old enough to understand it, being a royal is not an easy task. You cant live your life as you wish. I hope you understand, your misunderstandings '

U: misunderstandings???

A: yes misunderstandings, beta, I know things are not good between you and manyta, but you will need to work it between your selves. She is a good girl, who is bit stubborn, you can correct it na once you are married.

U: don't I get a saying in this matter

G: beta, you need to agree. Think about it. the pride of our riysat lies on your shoulder.

U: I will think dad

Uday sad totally broken. He was going to get married with a girl whom he would like to strangle with his own hands. Life is so unfair. But he could make it the way he pleased na. he would give manyta a hard time . forgiveness was not one of his good points

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That's all for today. Hope you like it

I am speeding the story a bit because I want manveer together soon

Hope you all agree with me😳

and i am not sending pms for this ss, till i get a good response
i am sure i will give some manveer moments after their marriage
Do like and comment'

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey andi jiji
how are you
yah i am first to comment
this was totally awesome
loved the way uday treated manyata
she deserve such hatred
awn such a looser
but at a point dunno why
i do pity her afterall
the truth was she loved him
well glad you pushed arvind away
waiting eagerly to see a MARRIED MANVEER
update asap
hugzz
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think sppeding up the story is a great IDEA!! Good to know we have really intelligent writers on this forum, hehehehe😆 no but jokes apart a great update. Short but effective. Loved it. Continue soon and wish you luck. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was awesome!
It was fabulous.
Loved it loads!!
Good uday is teaching manayata a lesson.
But don't know I am feeling bad for manyata.
Because manyata use to love him once upon a time.
She must be somehow hurt because when your loved one ignores or opposes you, you heart breaks.
Can't wait to see manveer married and together.
They will be some intresting fights between manveer after marriage but please soften uday a bit towards manyata.
Want to see them fall in love again.
Plzzz tell me when are you planning to get them married??
It was beautifully written
Can't wait for the next update.
Do continue asap.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aaaha DAT WAS REALLY NEEDED FOR MANYATA.NOW SHE WILL KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO B HUMILIATED.SHE DESERVES HIS HATRED.WoooW MANYATA LOST D DEAL. UDAY WON.LOVED IT

SO NOW ITZ TIME FOR WEDDING BELLS FOR MANVEER.GONE TO B HATE MARRIAGE.HOPE GET SOME KNOK JOK n FIGHTS.POOR UV GOT D BIGGEST SHOCK WEN HE CAME TO KNOW MANYATA WAS HIS FIANCE.

ENJOYED D CHAPPT A LOT.NOW EAGERLY LUKING FORWARD WAT TWIST STORY TAKES. CONTINUE SOON
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